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This book was decent. I was very intrigued by the first half of it. However, as the book moved on I lost a little bit of my drive to read it. 1) I think the formatting of the ARC really took me out of it. Every couple pages there would be a "STRICTLY NOT FOR SALE" or a "FOR ADDRESSEE ONLY". These inputs kind of ruined the flow of reading. They would mess up the formatting of the text around it and really take you out of being able to fully immerse yourself in the story. 2) I think that the book moved at a strange rate of really fast and then random spots would be detailed and drag on and then move really fast again and brush over things. It was just a touch confusing. 3) I think the story lost me. I love the business plan / aspect of it. I thought it was equally entertaining and fun. however, the whole plot with Dallas lost me. That was the part where all the sudden it moved so fast and skimmed over stuff. By the time we got to the climax of that plot line, I was over it. I just honestly didn't really care.

All this being said, it was an enjoyable story. I thought it was clever and fun and a decent read for a few days.

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this was wonderfully written pacey and twisty devilish comedy. It had a great mystery setting and did what I was hoping for, the plot does a good job in telling the story. I was invested in the characters and getting through this interesting world..

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