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This book was interesting but reminded me of the work of a novice author. Thank you for letting me read it.

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Horrible. No editing, numerous misspellings, and just horrible writing in general.

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A married couple gives in to their sexual urges, which sends her in the arms of other men while her husband waits at home, alternately turned on by what he imagines is being done to her and yet none-too-thrilled, especially when the guy in question is his archrival at work.
Not exactly a new story: be careful what you wish for—as far as sexy wives are concerned—has been around for centuries, and everyone knows what’s going to happen.
The writing isn’t that great, though it’s probably helped by being first person. Unfortunately that first person is the husband, so we don’t get the first-hand account of the sex scenes. Couldn’t help but think this should have been better, or at least put a twist on the same old story.
2.5 pushed up to 3/5

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Yuck. No. I have to write 50 words for this review. May I say no fifty different times? The disjointed writing made this painful to try to read. Abandon ship. Trying to skip ahead did not work either because this was a yuck story. Who imagines this stuff? This book was definitely not enjoyable.

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I wish the description of this book came with a warning about the themes in this book. It was not my cup of tea at all. What was good about the book: 1. The actual writing wasn't bad. 2. It was short (I don't think I could have read a full length novel about this subject matter). What was bad about this book: 1. Cuckolding...just no. 2. Our "hero" was a pussy.

I just don't understand the appeal of these kinds of stories but then again that's why there is chocolate and vanilla. So, to each his own and if that's your thing this short story is for you!

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