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Four Moons: A Romantic Comedy

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I was really looking forward to reading a romantic comedy. Four Moons fell way short in the comedy department as well as character development, and editing. Very disappointed.

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Not really a book of my liking. If I want to read sci-fi - I want to know it is scifi and would like more fantasy in the story. This one kind fell inn between. The comedy wasnt really funny and I wanted the heroine to be a better person and not play games or be manipulative. I thought this would be a fun, enjoyable easy read, but was disappointed.

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I thought it was a cute read, and kept wondering if these two will ever get together, because if something can mess up it did......I give it 3 1/2

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I'm not convinced where the comedy was in this short story. Patty is a generally silly little girl, playing games and wondering why she gets hurt all the time, who's pining after her best (male) friend, whilst never bring honest with him.
I was honestly actively rooting against her by the time they were in Iceland, I am, who acts like that ?? (By the pool, I mean) nevermind all the other stupid stuff she does.
I just plain disliked this story. Women aren't really this stupid. Except for the (very occasional) minority. Thank heavens !!

I was grateful to receive this ARC from Netgalley in exchange for my honest opinion #netgalley

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Four Moons has potential but needs some editing. Disappointed

I received an Advanced Reader Copy of this book from the publisher and am voluntarily reviewing it.

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With some editing and some added character, plot and settings development this book might show some promise. The heroine is not very relatable nor are her friends. The comedy never quite left the ground. The out of the ordinary settings for honeymoons did not lend themselves to comedic value.. Or if they could, this book didn't find it. I would suggest a lot more work before releasing it.

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I did not care for this book at all. I didn't find it funny in the least. The characters lie constantly to each other and the storyline is incoherent and boring. I did finish it in order to fulfill my commitment of reviewing it. I received an advance copy from Netgalley in exchange for my honest review.

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I received a copy of this book from Net Galley in exchange for an honest review. I can honestly say this was the worst book I have ever read. The multiple incomplete sentences went along with the lack of a story line. This was described as a humorous book. Not once did I find humor. Maybe this was written with a younger reader in mind. If you are used to reading a book with a good story line and good character development, please choose another book. If I could I would give this book zero stars.

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Where do I start? Despite the fact that the author bio states that he is American, this story reads like it was written by a non-native speaker. The dialog is stilted and not at all i keeping with the settings or even the cadence of communication in the modern era. The lies told and situations the characters find themselves in are ludicrous at best. I'm sorry to be harsh,but I only read to the end of this book to honor the efforts of the author and give an honest review.

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It started off well enough but then bogged down fairly quickly at which point I lost interest. It could also use a good editor.

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