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Lily's Just Fine (Galloway Girls, #1)

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Thought this was a great young adult read with good characters even though I didn’t necessarily like the main character. The storyline was predictable but cute and I would read book 2

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3⭐

I really tried to enjoy this book but I just couldn't love it. It was okay, but that's the best I can say about it.

I found the characters to be quite annoying to be honest. I also don't feel like the romance worked between the main couple, they just fought and deeply hated certain traits about the other and it just felt like them being together was so forced. I also found it extremely unfair of Lily's family to leave her a lot of the time to look after her mom and then not respect that she's having to deal with it alone while they barely visit and do their own thing. I just found it really difficultly to like the characters, other than Sarah.

The author does however address some issues such as depression, anxiety, need for control, illness and diversity.

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A sweet and emotionally moving novel, which has really well developed and likeable characters that make you root for and believe in them. It's a really nice read.

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DNF at 21%. The writing is good, however the plot is slow and it's just not for me. I put one star just for the netgalley requirements, I don't rate anything I haven't finished.

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This book was pretty meh for me.
I was hoping for a little but more. But it was not terrible .................... ..........

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This book is very much in the genre I love to dive into the rain is pouring outside. It was such a gorgeous romance novel (which I adored) but it also tackled some pretty challenging themes.

Lily was such a fun character to read! You could feel how strong-willed and determined she was to have the best summer ever. The fact that she was focused the town event with her friends and fighting to have her voice heard. She was a teeny bit overpowering at times but I felt almost realistic to be annoyed. We’ve all had a friend like Lily!

I felt so sorry for Tom. As someone who has cared for a family member in the past, I know what it’s like to put everything on hold. Your entire world revolves around them and that seems to be the case with Tom and his sister. My heart went out to him! I think any reader who has a family life like this will find no trouble in relating to what happens to Tom.

Overall I thoroughly enjoyed this book and will be reading it all over again after finishing this review! Thank you for allowing me to review this!

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I love finding books where a character, or like here, the book itself, has my name on it.
It was what first attracted me to it, and the resume seemed interesting. But this Lily is my total opposite, picking and inserting herself in every activity she can, which makes her a bit annoying- she's the girl I used to be friends with but always needed a breather after a few hours with her.
The representation of mental health issues is an important conversation to have in books and I loved that LJF talked about them and the fight for inclusivity, and it brought more development to Lily, making her redeemable instead of just annoying,
It may seem like your typical romantic read, but Lily's Just Fine brings important topics to the table, talking about the importance of mental health and how it affects us, if you give Lily a discount in the beginning.

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3.5 stars

I definitely enjoyed reading this book, but the plot wasn’t anything special. I must say that the mental health rep and the fight for inclusivity earned the book half a star. Overall, I just found Lily to be a tad bit on the annoying side but I can definitely see why she was acting the way she did. I think the ending was satisfying, as the loose strands have been tied up well.

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Unfortunately at first I didn't finish the book because I wasn't liking Lily's as a character, but then I decided to just finish it because having an unfinished book was stressing me out. I has happened to me before, the not liking a character. It's just a personal opinion. Sometimes a character isn't just for you and you can't keep on reading without everything they do irking you in some way. The story was promising and cute, even if it was obvious how it was going to end, and the book was written very well, not hard to read at all. I will definitely give this author another chance.

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I really didn't like the beginning of the book, but as the story continued, I got really interested. I loved how different issues on mental health were represented in the book! The main character really annoyed me at times, but her character development was one of the highlights of the book for me.
I thought Lily's Just Fine will be a cheesy, romantic read, but it ended up being so much more! It dealt with really important topics, and I'm so glad that I got to read it!

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Starting off with the overachiever, the girl that can't seem to stand still for too long. She's bossy and demanding, and quite frankly, I didn't really like her at the beginning. She did grow on me, evolving from this bossy and forceful girl to someone who learns to stop and understand others. It's a story that kept me thinking long after it was over. I was truly heartbroken when I reached that final page of the story, wishing that there was just one more chapter.

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I was sent this book from NetGalley in exhange for an honest review, and honestly I am so impressed by it!

It's a classic YA easy read which follows a mismatched group of friends through the summer. The book in set in a small Scottish village (instant interest for me!) and so the fact the friends don't really seem to go together seems more believable as I know from growing up in a small town you often become friends with people who in a bigger place you wouldn't simply because you're the same age and there isn't much choice!

It's written from the point of view of two main characters, Lily who is super popular and seems to have everything she could ever wish for and Tom, who's quiet and just trying to get by. As the story goes on you see all is not well with Lily, she has recently broken up with her super popular boyfriend and so is trying to do what she can to stay busy. All is not well with her family either as her father works away a lot and spends a lot of time in his London flat. This leaves Lily alone with her Mum who is becoming more and more withdrawn. Although Lily notices this she doesn't think much of it as she is able to do what she wants without much intrusion from Mum!

However it was Tom's family that really interested me. Toms sister has been ill for ages now "at first they talked about post-viral fatigue. But not they say maybe it's chronic fatigue syndrome, but they don't really know. They've done tests for every illness...and found nothing definite... She doesn't look ill." Chronic Fatigue Syndrome is something that I have suffered with for the best part of ten years and it literally could have been me writing some of the stuff about Sarah, Tom's sister. I've never read a book before with a character with CFS so it was super interesting and really nice (?) to see "someone like me" in a book? It was also interesting to read this from Toms point of view, as he is worried about his sister and wants her to be better but also has slight resentment for her as her illness means he misses out on things like going on holiday. 

Initially Tom and Lily aren't friends, just in the same year at school with Lilys best friend living next door to Tom and so being friendly there. However, when Lily decides to help revamp the Village Gala Tom gets roped in and so their friendship starts to develop. 

The story mostly goes how you would expect but with a few unexpected turns along the way! It is a really good YA book and tackles some important themes, I'm interested to see if these are fleshed out more in future books in this series!

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Definitely a beautifully written book and a good fluffy read when you are feeling like a little lovely pick me up definitely will re read when I need a pick me up again other than that I could connect with Lily we are bother different but I still liked it none the less

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Lily is a go-getter. If she's not involved, she's not awake! Her mom sleeps a lot and doesn't seem very invested, her dad travels a lot, and her older siblings have moved out, leaving her in charge of herself and her mom. She has a good friend, Gemma who is usually willing to go along with whatever scheme Lily comes up with. Gemma's neighbor, Tom eventually gets roped into the latest endeavor- the town Gala. What ensues is drama, teenage love, and a look at inclusivity/closed-mindedness.

I didn't particularly like this one. I didn't like the relationship with Lily and Gemma. I never really felt like Gemma liked Lily all that much. The relationship with Lily and Tom is also not very believable. I felt like Tom mostly endured Lily, not actually liked her. The look at mental illness and "hidden" physical illness was fine, but never fully fleshed out.

Overall just an ok read. Not interested in reading any more in the series.

Thank you NetGalley for an ARC of this book for my honest review.

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Didn't enjoy this book had to dnf. I will not be reviewing.

Thank you netgalley and publisher for the free E-arc of the book.

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I received a copy of this book from publisher via Net Galley in exchange for an honest review

There were a couple of things I liked about this book.
1. The main character, Lily – I loved her attitude and the fact that she would just go ahead and do stuff fearlessly. She did go a bit too far on occasion but she was still a pretty good character. Tom on the other hand was so shy and as much as I wanted to love him, what bugged me the most was that he just didn’t want to let himself enjoy life because he felt the need to be an adult and be overly responsible.
2. The writing was great and the characters in general were pretty fun.
3. This was a nice, light read

Although I liked the book, it wasn’t really mind-blowing. The story covered a lot of important themes and I liked the way the author handled them but it was just very….(I’m not sure how to phrase it but I guess what I mean is that I probably would have loved it more had I been younger). Ugh, it feels hard to admit that I’m too old for this, haha. This would appeal to younger teenagers and they would definitely be able to connect with the characters better.

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I, unfortunately, had to DNF it after a couple of pages (I read 20% of the book)

It's not that it's bad, I just think the book targets people that are younger and not as old as me; I think 13 years old me would probably have loved this book while adult me couldn't even finish it.

My first problem was that I didn't like the way it was written, I'm not a fan of like long metaphorical descriptions, but in this book they were almost none of if they were they were written very matter-of-factly. Judging a writing style is very subjective, while one might love it, the other not so much, and in this case I belong to the latter. I just couldn't get engrossed with the story, I had the feeling I was like watching a scene from far away instead of being engulfed in it.

The second problem was the characters and how they are depicted. I felt like the author stayed on the surface and never went too deep into the characters life, history or emotions. Because of that, I couldn't really identify to either one of the characters and was left pretty much indifferent to their fate the whole time.
The themes she tackled are important and need more representation in YA literature but the end result was disappointing, not depicted well enough, not detailed or "emotional" (in a way that I felt like the writing was too cold or to matter of factly) enough.

I couldn't relate to any of these characters. While I adore strong female characters that take shit from nobody, I found Lily to be extremely tiring. She was controlling, manipulative (especially with Gemma, like I just didn't understand their friendship, they were supposedly best friends, but I felt like Gemma was closer to Tom and that Lily exasperated her most of the time) and overall just sometimes infuriating? To me she was cold, she was not someone I could relate to. Like Tom, I just didn't care for him. Like their romance was shoved in the middle of this whole gala thing, and I was just ? Hm no thank you.

All in all, I believe the story was rushed, the way it was written was to me only scratching the surface and not going enough into the details. I felt detached and not invested in the story, and that's why i had to drop it. Like I said it's not necessarily a bad book, I just think I'm too old for it at this point.

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This oh so fluffy and sweet book was a great read with hidden depths. Lily is the girl who on the surface has it all, she is involved with everything and knows how to improve any event. However under the surface she has a mother who spends all day sleeping, a father who is too busy working to see his family, and siblings who only come home for the holidays. But she is fine.

Tom Owen on the other hand has enough on his plate, without being roped into Lily Hildebrand's schemes, what with his sister and her mysterious condition.

This book does deal with serious issues such as depression and LGBTQ rights in small communities. Although how the issues dealt with by the characters is sometimes negative, that is part of the reason that this book is realistic because the author didn't glaze over the issues and make them a fairytale - she also showed then negative ways that people can react as well as the positive.

The character development was done very well and in a way that you don't notice it all at once. Until the end and you realize how much the characters have changed and developed over the course of the book.

There is obviously romance in this book! But the relationship had ups and downs, there was no insta happy relationship here! Which was so refreshingly real and I really loved it.

So overall, I really enjoyed this book, Lily has so much energy and so many ideas - I envy her in that way. But the plot was easy and fun to read, I flew through the book and I really enjoyed it.

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I really enjoyed reading this book and look forward to continuing the series. The characters were really well written.

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Lily Hildebrand has everything she could ever want at 16. The popular boyfriend, a loyal best friend, a wealthy lifestyle, lives in a beautiful big house overlooking the river, but most importantly, she knows want she wants and doesn’t let anyone hold her back. Some might call her arrogant or opinionated, but Lily simply doesn’t like to hide away from the spotlit if she’s able to push her ideas onto various events and clubs around school to help improve them. Her mum could be a bit more supportive of her decisions and ideas but that’s just something Lily has come to accept and move on from. Once she has her mind on something, it isn’t easy for her to back down from it. As long as there is a way to make it work, Lily will make it work. Even when Jamie decides to break up, it doesn’t stop her from pushing through instead wasting time and dwelling on it, her summer schedule is going to be constructive and productive with or without a boyfriend, and the Newton St Cuthbert’s annual gala is just the thing!

Tom Owen couldn’t be any further away from Lily in social status if he tried, he’s happy to observe the crowd from a distance, keeping his thoughts to himself and his lifestyle quiet and content, looking after his sick homebound sister. His main social interactions lie with Gemma, his neighbour who he’s know since they were young, who happens to be Lily’s best friend. Not that they every do anything as a group. Gemma’s friendship is a quiet one that suits their personality much better. But when Tom gets pulled along to the Newton St Cuthbert’s annual gala meeting with Lily leading the charge for change and a young persons perspective that can’t be ignored, he knows it isn’t going to end well. He isn’t surprised when she suggests that he takes charge of a mini regatta for the gala week since he sails boats as a hobby. Organising a regatta isn’t going to be easy, especially when part of his obligation is teaching Lily how to sail. Unfortunately, saying no doesn’t exactly come easy for him, particularly to Lily who is very convincing.

*SPOILERS*
I wasn’t sure what to think with this story. It wasn’t a typical teenage love story by any means although whether it was supposed to be, I’m not sure since there was a love interest with the main protagonists but it didn’t feel very passionate or emotional like you would expect. I found that the characters were slightly undeveloped so you didn’t feel or relate to them as much as you probably would have liked.
The story was told in two perspectives, Lily and Tom. Lily was a strange character, she was intense and very enthusiastic which whilst this was refreshing for a teenage protagonist in a young adult book, you felt there wasn’t much more to describe her and her personality so the author gave up trying to refine her further. The only time she felt anything different is when her mum became sick, but even then she’s just in a state of shock and doesn’t know what to do. For the first time ever, Lily feels useless and doesn’t want to do anything productive. It doesn’t last long though so you question whether she actually came out of the experience any differently.

‘”It’s not up to you to do anything, Lily. You don’t have to take charge all the time.”
“Hmmph,” I say. I know he’s trying to be helpful. “But I want to make things better.” He doesn’t say anything. A thought occurs to me. What if he feels like this about Sarah, but he knows there’s nothing he can do?’

The story does include some serious issues with mental illness, but the author doesn’t capture the true emotions behind it which I felt could have been more refined. Lily’s mum suffers from depression which escalates into a difficult situation for the family. Tom’s sister has been back and forth from hospital consistently weak and fragile for years without anyone knowing why. It’s the illnesses in their families that give Lily and Tom something to relate too by the end, but besides that, I found that there isn’t much chemistry between the two characters. They share a kiss which they were both surprised about, they go on a date, but besides the want to be around each other which they are struggling to admit subtly, you don’t feel much more which is disappointing.
I thought the storyline was good and the settings were great, you were able to put yourself into the scene clearly, but besides that I’m sorry to say I wasn’t too impressed.

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