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Secrets of the Starcrossed

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Sadly this book wasn’t for me. Couldn’t keep up with all the different elements. I’d also heard nothing but bad things from others who read this so this could’ve also affected my own thoughts.

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*Thank you to NetGalley and One More Chapter for this ARC*

I initially was so excited for this book as it had keywords that I got excited for such as Celtic mythology, Arthurian Legend and the Roman Empire. However, I was warry as to how the author was going to combine them all because it needed to be done well when combining all the elements. Unfortunately, I think the author has failed to do this. The elements of the story were all over the place as it was not explained thoroughly and the story didn't know what it wanted to be. It had sci-fi elements, historical fiction elements and of course high fantasy elements. These are all good things to have in a story but it was not combined seamlessly but haphazardly. I had to DNF this book at 40% just because I couldn't keep up with the story and I was very confused. I also did not connect to the characters and did not like romance because it read very young. Overall, the concepts were very ambitious but the follow-through and the construction of the world were not done well.

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3⭐
I really struggled to get into this one mostly due to the world building being so complex I spent the entire book not really knowing what the hell was going on - I still don't.
I didn't really care for the characters throughout the majority of the book, although this did start to change right at the very end. I found the main character particularly infuriating when she'd ask herself a million and one questions and have answers to none of them.
I feel like the plot didn't really go anywhere and was pretty one note, when things did happen they fizzled out just as quickly, I didn't like the flip flop of emotions throughout, it ended up being overused and quickly became boring.
However, I feel like this one was very much a set up for something that could become a really good series, the ending is intreiging so I'll be interested to pick up the sequel to see if things get going a bit more.

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Thank you to the publishers, author and NetGalley for the free copy of this book!

This book had SO MUCH good to it- loved the premise, and seeing the development of the main character Cassandra from an insipid society girl to someone who is truly looking at her life and the society she lives in and recognizing its faults. At time same times, I felt a definite case of whiplash following her journey. I wasn't completely opposed to this, but it did put me off at times to the point where I felt this might be a dnf. Ended in a cliffhanger though so now I have to see what happens!

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Please note that this book is not for me - I have read the book, However I had to DNF and because i do not like to give negative reviews I will not review this book fully - there is no specific reason for not liking this book. I found it a struggle to read and did not enjoy trying to force myself to read this book.

Apologies for any inconvenience caused and thank you for the opportunity to read this book

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Absolutely love this book! I cant wait for the second book to be released. Review being posted on my website.

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I have received this ARC from Netgalley in exchange for an honest review.

Secrets of the Starcrossed was one of those books that had it's boring moments but I also couldn't look away or put it down. I just feel like it had potential to be a lot better though. Don't get me wrong, I was entertained for most of this book but the whole love triangle thing just threw me off. They never really work for me anymore and I honestly didn't really care who she ended up with or without.

Plus the whole push/pull thing for romances is completely overrated for me and it's just annoying as well.

Then there's the pace and the world building. Eh, they were okay but also had potential to be better. I feel like if the pace was more consistent then I probably would've devoured this all in one sitting without little breaks here and there. As for the world building, I definitely needed more in this one so I'm hoping that the second book might have it? Just to redeem itself (in a way)

In the end, I already have the next book so I might as well dive into it and see if things get better. Especially after that little cliffhanger..

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Secrets of the Starcrossed is a story of forbidden attraction, ancient magic and duty. Cassandra Shelton has never questioned her place in Londinium as the donna matched with Marcus Courtenay, society's favorite son. That is, until she hides a piece of forbidden tech for her classmate Devyn, a broody boy searching for a girl with magic in her blood. Devyn awakens something inside of Cassandra, something magical and ancient that makes her question everything she has ever known about Londinium and herself. As a mysterious illness sweeps through the city, Cassandra realizes a plot afoot set in motion by Londinium's elite to use her latent power for their own devious ends, and Cassandra must make a choice between the boy she was always meant to marry and her duty to Londinium, or the boy whose magic calls to her own.
I enjoyed this book a lot. The premise of this book is really fascinating: set in an alternate version of London where the Roman Empire never fell. The world-building in this book was masterclass, and I loved delving deep into the world of Brittania and the Celts. I really enjoyed all the magic in this book and how the author employs elements of Celtic and British myth and magic. I also really liked the plot itself, and watching Cassandra as she wrestles with the truth of who she is and her feelings for Devyn, although I think I like Marcus more than Devyn and kind of ship her with Marcus more, but I enjoy the way the author set up this triangle of sorts. This book has a similar feel to The Selection and Divergent but stood on its own two feet well enough. I will say that this book gets a little history and detail dense in spots that made parts of the book drag a little. While I really enjoyed some of this as a historian by trade, for the common reader this could get to be a little difficult to get through. Secrets of the Starcrossed draws upon fascinating history to create a brand new world, one where one girl must choose between conformity and destiny, and love and duty.

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In Londinium, the last Roman stronghold in Britannia, Cassandra is betrothed to Marcus, the most eligible bachelor in the city. But then she meets Devyn, a boy who has been on her periphery for years but she’s never taken notice of before, who ignites something in her and gives her reason to doubt everything she has ever known.

This is one of those books that are difficult to review because I did enjoy reading it, but when I try to think about what was good about it, I can come up with very little. In fact, it’s much easier to come up with what was bad. The writing style is engaging enough and the world-building is almost really good, but it never quite gets there. I struggled with the premise of a modern Roman Empire – it sounded like sort of a good idea but then also felt quite jarring at times. Unfortunately the author trashed all over her possibly good idea with her lazy writing: One example is that the characters use the phrase “to Hades” as a sort of curse… Hades the Greek god of the underworld… GREEK. Not Roman. Mistakes like this are pure laziness.

Another feature of the story which felt lazy to me was the romance between Cassandra and Devyn, and the love triangle introduced by Marcus. The whole thing is a will-they-won’t-they teen drama, to an excessive extent, and all Cassandra seems to think about is sex, despite the actually quite serious events unfolding around her and threatening to completely derail her life. I know this is a teen novel, but COME ON.

I think that the plot was actually probably quite good, and the world had a lot of potential, but it got lost in the teenage angst and O’Connor definitely didn’t do a good enough job of explaining the universe that she has created.

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Secrets of the Starcrossed follows Cassandra in an alternate world where the Roman Empire never fell. She's betrothed to Marcus, the most eligible bachelor in the city, but then she meets Devyn, a boy searching for a girl with magic in her blood who will make her believe in soulmates. These two starcrossed lovers will fight to ignite the spark of rebellion.

I loved the setting of this book, it takes place in Londinium, the last stronghold of the Romans in Britannia protected by the walls that keep out the ancient Kingdoms surrounding it. I liked the alternate history and mythology that created this world, and I liked that the countries were all called by their name in their original language, Scotland is Alba, Wales is Cymru etc.

I loved Cassandra, she's thrown into a whole new world when the truth of her identity is revealed to her and she handles it really well. She's a privileged elite citizen and we see her grow to realise that she is really privileged and soon she wants to help those who aren't. Her relationship with Devyn is really sweet, they have their ups and downs and apart from the fact it's instalove I think it's a realistic relationship.

The plot revolves around a mysterious illness that appears to effect those with Celtic magic lying dormant in their blood. I really liked the story, it was maybe a little repetitive at some points with them trying and failing at something multiple times, but these events still allowed us to learn new information that I assume is going to be important later on. I think it was a good introduction to the trilogy and the ending has set up the next book well! A tiny issue is that Hades is referenced a lot when he's a Greek God not a Roman one which was a little annoying but the author has blended together a lot of different mythologies so maybe Greek will be one of them later on.

Overall I think fans of mythology, romance and magic will love it!

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I really enjoyed the world and the characters in Secrets of the Starcrossed.

It is set in the Roman Empire where it never collapsed which was definitely interesting to explore but was annoying when there was inaccuracies in phrases that was said in relation to the world and the period it is set.

The characters Devyn and Cassandra built an interesting relationship one which changes quiet a bit. I am interested in seeing how it plays out in the next book.

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Thank you to One More Chapter for my copy of this book via Netgalley. This is only the second audiobook I have listened to on Netgalley shelf. The app has come a long way since the first one I tried and I will definitely be requesting more.

Our main character is Cassandra. She's not the most likeable of characters if I'm honest. She's a bit winy and has only really just noticed the world she lives in is not the same as those of the poor. Then there's Marcus, her intended and Devyn, the bad boy.

The dating seems to be in the dark ages with chaperons and scandals when two characters merely kiss but then you have the code and the technology of the future.

This book is set in a world like ours but it's not quite right. The places and the names are the same or similar but it is very much not the London we know and love. This sort of thing. I love working out the differences between our world and theirs. Working out things like the code and who is controlling everyone. And of course why, This book is big on intrigue and secrets. There's a much bigger plan than just what we see on the surface.

The non-world building parts were really easy to read. I was very interested in this sickness. Why were these people getting sick? Could anyone help them? Would anyone help them or did they simply not care?

I liked the world but some of the world-building was a bit clunky. It wasn't easy to follow for someone like me who isn't a history buff. I hope we get to see more of the Britons as the series progresses as I think there will be some interesting characters there. I am excited to see more of their powers and what the hell is going to happen next!

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The unique concept and magical world O'Connor has created is what makes this book different and unlike anything I've ever read.

Our adventure is based in a futuristic world where the Roman Empire never fell. Cassandra, the only daughter of a powerful merchant in Londinium, is betrothed to Marcus, the most eligible bachelor in town. Cassandra has always been the perfect daughter, the perfect citizen, the perfect follower of the Code - that is until she begins to grow closer to Devyn, a mysterious boy looking for a girl with magic.

It's fair to say that the world-building is intense, especially with the combination of magic and technology and sometimes I felt overwhelmed. But nevertheless, it's was wonderfully creative and full of potential.

As for our main character, Cassandra, I could help but find her a little annoying at times as she constantly changed her mind and complained about the smallest of things. I understand she's sheltered but I expected a bit more maturity. But I'm curious to see where her path leads her next!

Overall this was an enjoyable read full of clever twists and an ending that will have readers wanting more.

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A slow start which built to a great story. The amount of information needed to set the scene initially was rather bewildering, but as I became more engaged in Cassandra's and Devyn's lives, it started to make more sense. The pace of the story definitely quickened in the second half and I'm intrigued to find out what happens in the next part of their stories.

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Part historical fiction, part dystopia, Secrets of the Starcrossed appealed to me on so many levels. Clara O’Connor has created a series that presents a clever twist on history, entwining hints of real British history with a reimaged world where the Roman Empire still reigned supreme. From a history perspective, I particularly enjoyed the inclusion of familiar names such as Owain Glyndwr, Elizabeth Twdwr, and the Plantagenets, and how their stories had shifted in this alternate world.

As we follow Cassandra to her classes, I found myself picturing ultra modern monorails whizzing around the Colosseum in Rome and the amphitheatre in Verona. The landscape of Londinium with its street and area names that I have walked many times was easily recognisable, but at the same time strange and unknown, and I found this intriguing. The concept of taking something so familiar, both in terms of geography and history, and twisting it into something so very different made this book absolutely fascinating to me right from the start.

As soon as I finished reading I had to dash to Amazon to pre-order the next two books, and I am very interested to find out what happens next and hopefully learn more about the people of Britannia.

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Intense, intricate and exciting tale.

I absolutely loved how the author interwove Roman history, crossed with alternative reality, alternate futuristic, dystopian YA.

So much happened in this book that I’m left demanding more and, rather thankfully, don’t have too much longer to wait for the 2nd instalment!

The tale of Cassandra, Devyn and Marcus is not one to be missed.

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This was AMAZING! Strong world-building, realistic character development, intriguing premise, steady pacing. It has all the hallmarks of just a fantastic YA fantasy book. The cliffhanger made me so upset! I need the next book now!

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This book has a lot of potential as far as story telling and character development. I really liked Cassandra's character and her plight. Unfortunately, I couldn't connect with the story as a whole.

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DNF at 9% - Unfortunately, this book was not for me and I was finding I was not gripped for it - I don't think I am the intended audience for this.

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I can't say that this is my favourite book, the pacing was a bit slow but the actual plot was interesting

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