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The Crowns of Croswald

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This is a cute read.
I liked the magic and what it can do, the pun names, and the element of friendship throughout the story. It definitely had Harry Potter vibes and I'm sure it's been compared a lot. The story centers around a mistreated girl who learns she has magic and gets sent off to a magical school, sound familiar? There's also a villain who killed the girl's parents and now wants to kill her. Pretty similar stuff.

The worlds within a bottle were really cool and I love that scriveners leave their findings in a tome that others can read so the knowledge they accumulate doesn't disappear. Ivy and Fyn's friendship that may turn into romance was sweet and I hope that develops more in the other books.

Easy and fun middle grade read, worth checking out!

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I was offered a free digital copy of this book in exchange for an honest review.

Right from the beginning this book had the whimsical feeling of Alice In Wonderland. I LOVED that there are dragons and other magical creatures. AND a school of magic! The first scene with Mr. Munson reminded me so much of Harry going to Ollivander’s for the first time.
The plot moved along quickly enough and I didn’t feel like there were many slow parts and the ending was done pretty well but, I just couldn’t get into it as a whole. I wanted to like this book more but, there was just something missing for me.
I did feel like this book was geared towards a younger audience as the writing did have a juvenile tone and simplicity to it. I think if I was younger I would have loved this book and enjoyed it more. It wasn’t a bad book, just not the book for me personally. As I said,I feel like middle grade readers will love this one. Thank you to the author and Netgalley for providing me a free copy.

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While The Crowns of Croswald is reminiscent of books like Harry Potter and Septimus Heap, the author manages to give it a fresh punch and creates a mystical atmosphere with lots of fun, magic and mysteries.

Ivy Lovely is a well-rounded character that steps out of the young-orphan-destined-for-a-better-life stereotype and battles against some many real-world issues.

While this is aimed for middle grade readers, this series is definitely reccomended for older readers who miss reading some other famous fantasy series for the first time and younger readers looking to introduce some magic in their lives.

Thanks to NetGalley and D.E. Night for allowing me to read this e-book.

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The world of Croswald was preparing for the night of the Double Moons as it does every year. Yet, we will find out that this year the night of the Double Moons changes everything just as it did 16 years ago. As everyone is preparing for the Double Moons Ivy Lovely’s simple, ordinary life is thrown into a magical life that she could never have imagined.

This fast paced, magical, middle grade book completely captured me from the start! The magic and mystery had me wanting more! The author, D.E. Night created a completely magical world of Croswald that I quickly became a part of. The story had a Harry Potter feel but was completely its own. We were given just the right amount of character development at the right time but were left with questions about some characters that didn’t leave me frustrated but hoping to learning more in other books. I’m so looking forward to the next books in the series. A wonderful start to a enchanting tale!

Thank you D.E. Night, Stories Untold, and Netgalley for the ARC of this book. All opinions are my own.

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I am afraid this book is not for me. I can see it will be brilliant for kids getting into all things magical and fantastical. For me it’s all a bit old. It’s not new and I can see a lot of hints to other series which have gone before. It is good and fun and the characterisations are believable and funny.

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The premise of this book really intrigued me. It seemed like the perfect mixture of fantasy, adventure, and an all around good time. For the most part that's what we were given and there were a lot of enjoyable parts to this story. I thought there were some really clever world building and creative magical elements (e.g. scaldrons, hairies). I found all the trouble the main character, Ivy, got into to be fun and adventurous. While there were all these great elements to the story, I don't think it was put together in the best way. At times the story felt rushed and jumped around too much. There were some great characters introduced, but they were underdeveloped and often introduced once to never be heard from again. There were also a lot of similarities to Harry Potter, which in and of itself isn't a bad thing, but in this case made some of the ideas seem unoriginal. Overall, I enjoyed the creativity and I see a lot of potential for this series. I will for sure give the second book a go!

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( I got this copy free of charge, from the publisher and Netgalley. All my opinions are honest )

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I loved how the book showed Ivy getting accustomed to the magical school, and learning her place in the magical world. I really loved following Ivy in her journey. She's a brave and curious MC, which is refreshing to see in lighthearted books. However, even after being constantly repeated that she's 16, I can't help but feel that her tone is more child-like? I feel that this was based on the fact that the book was Middle Grade, but I can't help that the MC should have been a younger age.

I would say the magic system was fun to learn about, I loved the interesting wind down of the magic system and what surrounds it. I got to learn about the different practices of magic and the magic that stands within the kingdom.

Howeverr, the pacing seems to either be extremely slow, or everything rushing by. ( The transitions clashed against the story, and I felt that they were just too harsh )

I would say that this book is much like an AU of Harry Potter. They're not entirely the same. but I see a lot of themes and patterns happening between the two. I can tell that this book was defiantly influenced by the series.

Because this book was geared towards younger audiences, I do understand that the issues I talked about wouldn't really matter, to young kids. This book was more of a light, interesting, and entertaining read. Overall, this book was a fun read, and I'd recommend to any Harry Potter fans.


( Thanks to Netgalley and D.E. Night for sending me this copy )

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This story was described to me as "Harry Potter meets Alice in Wonderland" and I think that description wonderfully fits the atmosphere of the magical world of Croswald.

Ivy Lovely, scaldrony maid at Castle Plum where magic is dampened by slurry fields, feels like nothing special. With only the books of her dwarf friend Rimbrick to keep her company, she is terrorised by head cook Helga. After a certain accident involving Moonberry delicacies and the flue flem, she leaves the castle and discovers she has magic running through her veins and is going to be a scrivenist at The Halls of Ivy, a boarding school for royals who wield magical gems and scrivenists who guide their magic through quills.

In the Halls, Ivy goes on countless adventures. She makes friends, learns how to control her magic and slowly finds answers to the weird things that keep happening around her.

This timeless middle-grade novel had a truly unique magic system. The brilliant world-building made me fall in love with every new chapter, just like the mystery kept me turning page after page. From otherwordly creatures to a thrilling fight, there was never a dull or boring moment. I'd highly recommend this book to anyone who loves a good whimsical story.

I'd like to thank Stories Untold and NetGalley for the opportunity to read and review this book.

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Thanks to NetGalley and the author for sending me the ebook to review 💕

In this story we follow Ivy Lovelace, a 16 year old girl who has lived her entire life trapped in a castle as a servant without knowing the magic inside her or who she really is. Her only friend is a dwarf that talks to her when she gets out to the gardens to sketch. Lately she's been having strange dreams where she sees another castle, and she's able to draw it perfectly.

What she does'n expect it's that over night everything's going to change, one day they come and whisk her away to the Halls of Ivy, a magical school por "sqwinches" like her, and for "royals" who use the magical stones on their crowns, each with a different power. They are quite elitist but she makes a good friend called Rebecca who doesn't even want to be a royal in the first place.

And so her adventures begin, every chapter something exciting happens, the action never stops! I almost wished it slowed down a bit, I wanted more explanations, more world building... the magic system was quite confusing at first. However, I do understand that being a middle grade it has to be really entertaining in that way.

There were many (perhaps too many) things that reminded me of Harry Potter hahaha. Which is actually a compliment, I love that series, but if I wanted something like that I would just reread it you know? Now I'm looking for new and original stories. Nevertheless, towards the end I was pleasantly surprised and there were some awesome ideas. For example, when scrivenists die in this world, all their life is written in a tome, they basically become books!

As for the characters, I liked Ivy, we have her perspective and she's so brave, she wold most definitely be a Gryffindor! I'm eager to continue the series to see her development. Even though the characters are 16 they seem quite childish to me compared to other same age characters on other YA books.

In addition, I feel like the secondary characters are not properly introduced until the last part of the book, I would have like the relationships to be established earlier so they would have more evolution. Fyn is the love interest and he's so cute, but we barely know him, he just shows up randomly on the scenes to save Ivy.

The mystery element is really well done, everything start making sense at the end with the big reveal of Ivy's past.

To sum up, The Crowns of Croswald it's a middle grade (maybe kind of YA even) with very interesting elements that I enjoy. I will of course read the next books. I gave it 3,5/5🌟

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The Crowns of Croswald
Rating: 4/5 🌟

- this is a really interesting middle grade fantasy and I enjoyed it a lot. For some reason, it reminds me of the movie Barbie and the Princess Charms school. But with in a different world, with more magic.
- My favourite part of the story is definitely the magic system. It is Super unique and I don’t think I have ever read a fantasy title with similar magic systems...and I read a lot of fantasy. It’s super whimsical and imaginative - it’s honestly a joy to read and learn about the system and the creatures. I do wish there was a little more world building but I think that is to come in sequel
- I love the setting of the story. It takes place in a magical school that used to be an old castle. Like seriously, how much better can it get. I love the concept of royalty and scrivenist and the magical lessons they have. Honestly, the best way I can describe it is so unique and imaginative.
- The plot and the pace of it is definitely suited to middle grade. For me, I would have liked it to be more intense but I imagine that if I had read this when I was younger, it would be perfect for me.
- Like most middle grade stories, this has great friendship. And even a little hint of romance, just a tiny hint, which is surprising because most middle grade do not have romances. It’s a wholesome fluffy innocent romance that just makes you smile.
- I really like our main character. She is kinda your typical female protagonist that is just likeable overall. I can’t say I related or connected to her super well, but I did like her.
- Overall, I would say this is a really interesting and great middle grade novel. I would definitely recommend this to younger audiences who love fantasy and even if you are considered an “older audience”, I would say give this book a try because the magic system in this book deserve more attention and it is a likeable book.

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This was an enjoyable read! The story sets off rather quickly, introducing us to the main character Ivy and the sad life she’s stuck in. But we don’t see her there for very long, as events take place and she is forced to leave her home behind. Ivy is then whisked away to a world of magic and adventure she never would’ve imagined she’d be a part of.
The main character’s journey through the book was captivating enough to keep me reading. The setting of her going to a magical school gave me Harry Potter vibes, and at first it almost seemed too much like Harry Potter and it had me a little worried. But the author really made the world her own and the magic system was very intriguing. I definitely need my own collection of glanagerie bottles. Lol
My one big flaw with this book, however, is how bland the main character was. While the plot progressed well, and big things happened to and around Ivy, she seemed to have no major reactions and very little emotion to those things. I found her lack of feelings toward everything made it really hard for me to sympathize and relate with the character. I want to see characters struggle; I want to read about their anger or their happiness towards unexpected events. I understand that if a book is labeled as “Middle Grade,” you don’t want to spend too much time talking about feelings or minor details the younger reader might not care about. But even a little bit would’ve fleshed out the character more and would’ve made her feel more real.
The last quarter of this book really made it for me. It was packed with well-places twists and action, and the setup for the next book was very well-done. I look forward to continuing this series!

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Wow, I knew I was going to enjoy this story because of the magical boarding school aspect but I didn’t know how much I was going to love it!

Ivy Lovely is a maid at a castle for 16 years, but dreams of adventure and magic on her free time. One day she is forced to leave the grounds, where her power awakens and finds herself being whisked away to a magical school where trouble seems to find her every step of the way! But something is off in the halls of her school and she’s determined to figure out what it is. Mystery and intrigue surrounds Ivy and soon trouble will find her.

I love love love this book! Honestly, if you’re a fan of Harry Potter, I feel like this book definitely was influenced by the magical world we all love BUT it was still very unique and undeniably original! This story was very magical, whimsical and just completely took me out of my world, which is what I needed at this point in my life!

I loved the way the magic system worked in this book and all the little creatures, ESPECIALLY the scaldron Humboldt! I also really loved the characters and the mystery that revolves around Derwin Edgar Night (he conveniently has the same initials as the author 😉). There are just so many aspects I love about this book, along with Ivy’s bravery and her friends never letting her adventure alone!

Even though this is a middle grade, I would highly recommend it, especially if you want to just get lost in a magical little world!


Final thoughts: if you love magical, whimsical and sometimes silly stories that will take you right out of your world, with brave characters and adorable creatures, this is for you!

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4.3✨

This book was promising from the start, it has this very enthralling je ne sais quoi that makes me wanna keep on reading. The establishment of the world, the introduction to Ivy’s story, and the unfolding of magic were all amazing. And I also loved all of Ivy’s adventures as she tries to get to know more about herself and the mystery of the school.

However, there were some parts that were familiar especially now that I’m rereading Harry Potter (a curious student who gets into a lot of trouble). But anyone who’s a fan of that trope will especially love this book!

Overall, this was a great combination of fantasy and fairytale, an unputdownable read, and I definitely want more of Croswald!

Thank you Stories Untold LLC and author DE Night for sending me a copy in exchange for an honest review.

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Thank you to the publisher and the author for providing me a digital copy of The Crowns Of Croswald!

Ivy Lovely has been hidden away all of her life, but she isn't aware of it yet. She also doesn't know about the magical world that awaits her outside of the House of Plum's enchantment boundaries. One thing is for sure; Ivy is destined for better and magical things.

As soon as I began reading, I was immersed in the beautiful world that has been created by the author. The story kept my imagination running and there was so much to learn from the beauty of Croswald. I was definitely entertained all along the book and also curious by all the mysteries it contained. It is filled with magic, creatures and so many wonderful scenes that truly deserve to be discovered by everyone.

The Crowns Of Croswald is the first book of a series and I can't wait to read the next ones!

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This is a fun, whimsical, and imaginative fantasy book for young readers. It has a lot of similarities to Harry Potter, but it wasn't bad. The school and magic definitely has enough uniqueness to set it apart from Harry Potter. The characters were fun and I liked how each of them had their own unique voice. The only thing I had a hard time with was how slow the book was. I couldn't immerse myself well into it or care for any of the characters. Maybe because I'm not the target audience? Not sure exactly, but I'd still recommend this book to a young, middle grade reader, even though the main character is 16.

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Join Ivy's enchanted adventure against the Dark Queen to find out her history! Magic, fantasty and sci-fi fans will love this series!!

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This book was sent to me in exchange for an honest review. I'd like to thank Zack for getting in touch with me, I am very grateful.

The Crowns of Croswald is perfect for fans of Harry Potter. Fantastical and entertaining, D.E. Night sweeps readers up into her whimsical world, full of forgotten faces and magical creatures. 

As the first book in The Crowns of Croswald series, it was a quick, easy, and fun read. I can definitely see the appeal to middle grade readers, and I would've adored this book when I was younger. I recommend it for ages eight to twelve. In the first section of the book, there are strong connections to Harry Potter and the Philosopher's Stone, with the vibrant magic, mystical stores and magical shopping lists. The book has enough twists to hold its ground. It's full of adventure.

We follow Ivy, a sixteen year old girl who is whisked away to the Halls of Ivy, a school for magic. Ivy is a strong female lead, who inspires readers to fight for what they believe in. Ivy is the only one who remembers Derwin Edgar Night, and she will stop at nothing to find out why they are connected. She dreams of him, but never stays long enough to speak to him. From the prologue, this tale is woven in mystery, and I found it very intriguing. 

The magic was my favourite element of this book. I loved the talking books, the Hollow Shaft, and the concept of a placing an object in the Forgotten room to remove someone from memory. 

"The Hollow Shaft contains 179 floors, 989,322 tomes, and only one Norman Wrinkles. Of course, keep your talking to a minimum."

Reflecting back, I would have loved more details. I feel as though Ivy's acceptance of her place in the Halls of Ivy, a school of magic, happened rather fast. With all the action, I would have loved some long scenes of Ivy's lessons, learning more about spells and potions. The monologue, at times, felt awkward, and I would have rather had that dialogue come from Ivy's thoughts. With reveals and revelations, there's questions left unanswered, leaving the reader wanting more. Overall, a really well rounded middle grade fantasy, and a very enjoyable read.

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This was a fun and adventurous romp through a refreshingly original take on the magical boarding school premise! It recalled the wonder and warm comfort of 'Harry Potter', and it was like I got to experience the magic all over again in a different world.

The prologue, set years before our protagonist (Ivy) appears, builds up an intriguing mystery that the book gradually unravels. There were several really nice hints and exposition scenes - I particularly liked the allusions to shifting portraits (evoked a bit of Dahl's 'The Witches') and the entire Hollow Shaft segment was excellent.

Having lived her whole life slaving away as a scaldonry maid (basically a kitchen maid who tends to adorable little mini-oven dragons), Ivy is ostensibly ordinary, but there's certainly more to her than meets the eye. Side note: I found it utterly hilarious that I spent 97% (NINETY-SEVEN PERCENT!) of this book thinking Ivy was 11, like Harry Potter. She is, in fact, 16. Oops!

Ivy has hidden powers, might even be the 'Chosen One' - but the real questions are how and why. (Okay, also who, but then it just turns into the 5 W's.) While Ivy does show traits of the 'Chosen One'/hidden identity tropes, it doesn't feel rehashed or stale. At times though, she felt more like a plot vessel than a person - some of her actions felt contrived to extend the mystery and tension, for example (view spoiler) felt out of character, as she's typically impulsive and inquisitive to a fault. This wasn't a big issue though, and most of the time Ivy reads like a realistic person.

Whole stars should go to the school (Halls of Ivy), the magic system and the secondary characters Rebecca and Fyn. The names of the professors, shops, textbooks and spells were all so quirky and I loved it! (Similar wacky vibes to 'Harry Potter', as I've already mentioned.) I particularly liked the glanageries, which are little enchanted bottles that hold a miniature scene inside, sprung from the imagination of their owners. Glanageries may sound whimsical and cute, but rest assured, they can be very dangerous and play an integral role in this book's plotline. Rebecca was my favourite character - everyone needs a friend like her (and she was the real MVP in the ballroom scene) - and Fyn Greeley is just adorkable. To paraphrase Nina Zenik, Fyn's sweeter than mint meringues! (You know a budding romance is cute when you literally put down the book to smile at their exchanges.)

Throughout the book, the antagonist hovers like a storm cloud on the horizon - their motives are kept in the shadows for most of the book, but their unexplained, uninvited presence is enough to feel unsettling. However, during the actual confrontation, I did feel like the villain's monologues came off a little cartoonish. That being said, the spell used by the antagonist was certainly twisted (view spoiler) - and I definitely took them seriously after that.

I think there's definitely more to the story (along with certain authority figures that I don't quite trust), and I'm really looking forward to the sequel! There's a major question that I felt went unanswered by the Big Reveal™ (re: Ivy and the Forgotten Room) and I really hope that gets addressed in 'The Girl with the Whispering Shadow'.

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Ivy is 16 years old.
She's a kitchen maid.
She also loses her job and her house.
She feels awful, because she already feels like she's not destined to be anything else but a maid. She wishes to attend "Halls of Ivy" which is a prestigious magic school. The school is for royal people and for those who have magical blood coursing through their veins. but something weird and magical happens where she can attend the school and that's where things start to get interesting and magical. Questionable things start happening within the walls of the magic school. Almost like Ivy is supposed to know about these things. One man comes across her dreams overnight and she wants to know who he is and why she has magical powers. I really enjoyed Night's attention to detail in the book. She describes everything so smoothly and vividly. I enjoyed learning about the scrivenerist's and their ability to have photographic memory so they can sketch. This resonates perfectly with Ivy, as she herself loves to sketch. I also enjoyed a few of the characters in the book as well, such as Rebecca and Humboldt. They added a cool aspect to the book. The magical creatures were also a plus. I will agree though, just like most people have stated, the book has major Harry Potter vibes and that's not necessarily a bad thing to me anyway.

Overall I really enjoyed this book. I would consider it a middle grade book so it's good for the age group of 8-13 year olds. I love the magical journey this book took me on. It's reminds me of my childhood, and me getting lost in a different world. I think my fave characters was the evil queen and her cloaked brood. I believe I'm a major villain supporter. I wouldn't mind seeing a book about her life prior to being the evil queen.

Thank you to Netgalley and the publisher for a copy of the book in exchange for an honest review.

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Thank you, NetGalley and the publisher for my free digital copy in exchange for an honest review.

I really adored the whimsical wordplay and world-building of the first book in this middle grade fantasy series! Even the delightful illustrations with each new chapter helped you feel like you were stepping into the pages of a fairytale storybook. It was like if Alice in Wonderland met Harry Potter.

If you like...
1️. a fearless female heroine
2️. a creative, magical realm
3. inventive concepts & creatures
4. colorful, memorable characters
5. descriptive, imaginative language
...then this story might just be for you or your kids!

Be prepared to enter into a fascinating world filled with sqwinches, scaldrons, hairies, glanageries, potions, magic schools, special stones, powerful forces, mysterious happenings, and a dark queen... a place where the pen (or should I say quill) is mightier than the sword, where people called scrivenists record history and perform magic, where royals channel their magical gifts through the use of unique gemstones, and where we meet a young girl named Ivy Lovely, who is destined for more than she ever thought possible.

This is a story I wish was written when I was growing up, and though I don't have kids yet, it's just the kind of story I would love reading to them. Bonus? Even as an adult I enjoyed the heck out of this tale because it still speaks to the young at heart.

So even though the story might feel best suited to a younger audience and the plot is occasionally predictable, overall, this is a fun, fantasy romp that illustrates how life is about the journey, rather than just the destination. And getting immersed in this fantastic world for a little while was the perfect escape that I needed.

I already know I want to read the second book The Girl with the Whispering Shadow. And on top of that, I discovered that the author's third book in the series -- The Words of the Wandering -- is now available for pre-order and coming out May 30th, 2020!

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