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Legendborn

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Legendborn brings an interesting new spin on King Arthur and the round table legend.

Books that focus on secret societies always grab my attention. But by making one of the secret society with a magical connection to Arthur and his round table was a nice twist. Especially as their job is to protect the world from demons.

One of the fascinating elements is showing the racial discrimination in the different levels of society. And how Bree deals with them. It was also interesting to see the history of the African American at the School and the area.

Legendborn has great action scene with demon fights, trails and battles. By having some personal moment in those action scenes kept it interesting. It even brings more drama to those moments.

Bree is the leading lady in Legendborn, she is a complex smart young lady. I liked her as a person and felt her range of grief.

There were certain elements in the story that didn't surprise me (Romance) but other elements took me by surprised me. As I had an idea in my head what I thought was going to happen. But it didn't happen and Tracey ending was better.



My Rating for Legendborn is 4 out of 5.




Thank you to Netgalley and Simon & Schuster Children's UK for gifting me an ebook copy for review.

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With all these retellings that overflow the bookshelves recently, this one is outstanding. You may wonder why? Because you won’t find the Beast in a new light or felt bad about Cinderella’s sister, it is not a mainstream story. It’s actually a myth a lot of us (probably) forgot.

When I was little, my mom told me the story of King Arthur and his knights of the Round table. I was properly impressed by their heroism, but quickly forgot the story (probably because it doesn’t include ballrooms, big and beautiful dresses and handsome princes). This beautiful lady picked up this myth from the shelf, beat the dust out of it and presented it to us in one new and absolutely amazing light.

Bree is heartbroken. She got accepted in her dream college, the one her mom graduated from, but her mom is not happy for her. Actually, she is the exact opposite of happy, she is pissed and forbid her to go there. This is not the reason why Bree’s heart is in pieces. Few hours after their fight, her mom lost her life in a hit and run car accident. Now nobody can stop her from going to study where she wants to.

What if her mom knew something and wanted to protect her? What exactly did she know? Is there something dangerous?

Bree stubbornness and determination to find out what exactly happened to her mom that night, the night somebody took her from Bree, leads her to the exact place her mom wanted to protect her from – The Arthur’s Order.

The people in this order are called Legendborns and all of them are heirs of one of Arthur’s Knights and even of Arthur himself. With the help of a Merlin and the magic, they inherit from their ancestors, they fight the so-called Shadowborns. Shadowborns are creatures born from the dark who can open gates to our world and if they go corporal, they can be seen by Onceborns and even kill them. To go full corp, they need to ‘eat’ aether.

Sounds pretty knotty, isn’t it? Okay, let’s talk a bit about world building.

Already mentioned the Legendborns. This is a society with its ranking. On the top are the Scions. They are members of one of the knights’ Lines (or we can call it Family). They are the one who can be ‘called’ by their ancestor and when they are called, they gained their ancestor abilities. There is a ranking withing the Scions. They are thirteen and they are called backwards. This means that the highly ranked Scions are hardly even called because the low ranked ones can manage to keep the Shadowborns put.

Onceborns are ordinary people just like us. They can’t see aether and don’t have any magical powers. They are kept away from knowing about the magical world that surrounds them. There are some exceptions of course. They are called Vassals and serve the Order.




Each Scion can pick up a Vassal and then this Vassal will receive the sight for the aether and Shadowborns that are not corporal. After they have been picked they level up and become Pages.

Pages compete once a year aiming to become a Squire. Squires are bonded by Oaths to the Scion who picked them. The Scion has to be Called from their ancestor to be able to be bonded to their Squire. Once bonded, the Squire gains the same abilities as the Scion and their only purpose is to protect their Scion.

The person who has the greatest magic abilities and they are not connected to their ancestor is called Merlin. They perform the bonding Oaths that connect Scions to their Squires. They, themselves, are bonded to the First Ranked Scion – the heir of Arthur. He can sense when he is in danger because their only purpose is to protect their king.

Yup, we have one great world here. But the main thing that I liked the most (and I am grateful for the history lesson) is how the author manages to entangle the history of the enslavement of Black people in the story. Let’s put aside the fact that recently this is a really painful topic. The most important is that this is something everyone has to know. She broke the stereotype behind this kind of novels. No, her heroine’s hair is not strawberry blond, her skin is not milky white, neither her eyes are green like a forest or blue like the ocean.

Another thing that lives for me is the fact that the whole story is so grounded. We see the typical teen drama, parental worries, etc. Don’t you ever wonder how this happened so the characters from other urban fiction have never run to police or have never ended up in dean’s office or police station? Well, our heroine here ended up ‘visiting’ both.

Overall, this is a great urban fantasy and will gain lots and lots of success and fans and I am sure it will have its own fandom in a matter of time. It’s everything you want from a book – fast-paced, intriguing, characters you will love and these plot twists, especially the last one! Oh my gosh, the last one will leave you speechless.

If you need a reason to read this book, here are three:
► Urban fantasy
► Magic involved
► Retelling of a myth

A huge thanks to Simon and Schuster and the author Tracy Deonn for sending me an ARC of this novel via NetGalley in exchange for my honest review. All thoughts are mine!

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The way this book is constructed and executed deserves so much praise. It manages to find the balance between a comfortable, enjoyable read, and one that keeps you on your toes, waiting for the next thing to happen. From the very first page it is highly emotive and descriptive, and the characters you are introduced to allow you to feel a whole range of emotions. Highly recommended.

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Characters - 7/10
I had to think about this review for a while. Although I did enjoy Legendborn (a lot) I felt that there were a few hiccups here and there. The first being the characters. I had no gripes with our main three, Bree, Nick, and Sel.

Bree's grief was so real and tangible that I felt everything alongside her. Her search for answers, her ancestors and her place at UNC-Chapel Hill really drive the story and I loved that. She's also a Black woman in America that deals with so many microaggressions (and aggression aggressions) that just keep proving that the USA is a horrible place.

Nick and Sel were two sides of the same coin, with a shared childhood and waaaay too much baggage between them. Sel is my favourite though, and I definitely ship him with Bree.

My only complaint is about the secondary characters. There were way too much of them to keep track of, and their voices were not distinct enough. William was by far my favourite, but the rest was pretty forgettable. The LGBTQ+ rep was on point though and I cannot wait to read more.

Atmosphere - 8/10
This book made me sad, but in a good way. I've just finished six years at my university, and Legendborn is set at a university campus. It made me nostalgic for all the walks across campus, seeing friends, dorm life, parties, all those fun things.

I do however wish we could have leaned more into the university setting. The campus is used in a great way at the end of the book, and we explore a lot of the history of the campus (the known and the unknown). Now I have no idea how American universities work or look, so a bit more worldbuilding in that sense would have been great. The rest was entirely on par.

Writing - 8/10
I don't know if it was simply because I had an ARC, but the writing was a bit clunky. The ARC also didn't have the proper formatting (which is no fault of the author and I did not deduct points for it) which can get really annoying, but I read around it. The writing really seemed to flow better toward the end of the book, and by the last 30% I could not put it down.

Plot - 8/10
I will admit I was confused for most of it, which once again ties into the worldbuilding. It also took me ages to get through the first 60% of the book. A lot happened, but it also felt like a lot didn't happen. I think some key moments and conversations between characters were missing. I wouldn't have minded if the book were a bit longer.

Intrigue - 9/10
I don't want to be one of those YA reviewers, but I wish Bree was older. This book is set at university, but she's only 16. The difference between 16-year-olds and university first years is a big one. Once again I'm not deducting points for this, it's just an observation. This book could have been amazing for the NA age group, it could have defined it even. I understand why she's 16, but still. One can hope and dream.

I would also like the scream about this book because it does not deserve the comparison to City of Bones. IT IS 1000000 BETTER. Seriously, stan this instead of anything written by CC.

Logic - 8/10
My last gripe with Legendborn is the magic system. It could have been more refined, and the history and hierarchy of the order could have been set out better. Things make a whole lot more sense at the end, but I still have some very pressing questions about how it all works.

Enjoyment - 9/10
Overall I really enjoyed this book. This is a promising start to a series I will definitely commit to, and I cannot wait for book 2.

CAWPILE = 8.1/10
Stars = 4

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Thank you, NetGalley and the publisher for the chance to read this book.

DNF @ 30%

This is definitely a “me not you” situation, I see why people love this novel but unfortunately, I'm not clicking with it at the moment. I’m not a massive fan of long books, and I didn’t realise “Legendborn” was 500+ pages. I’m also not a fan of love triangles.

I really liked the concept and the Arthurian inspiration and I may come back to this one at a later date, but for now, I’m marking it as DNF.

Overall, I’d recommend this to people that adore slow burn diverse YA fantasy.

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Wow, this sent me back. So much of this reminds me of a new-age Shadowhunters, Vampire Academy, or The Guneviere Deception all smushed together. While Shadowhunters has a space in my heart as a childhood favourite, but I wasn't a fan of Vampire Academy despite it being a favourite of many of my friends. Unfortunately, I think that's mostly the case here, this is a great book (especially the ending!) and it tackles America's sordid history and colonialism with its Arthurian inspiration that gives this text more depth.

audiobook narrator

The narration was really well done and made the story easier to follow than the written text, so I would recommend the audiobook over the physical copy (but the only problem with this is that the big cast of characters might get lost a bit).

Character

Bree was interesting to follow, and I wish we saw more of her friend Alice, as I felt I never got a real grip on her. Nick was boring, and we all know Sel is Endgame here. (again, reminded me a lot of Vampire Academy/The Infernal Devices with the romantic set up).

Sel is erratic at first, his actions hard to follow along with his logic, but he becomes the most interesting character by the second half of the novel.

Otherwise, all the other characters blended into one big mush to me.


Plot

At the beginning (when I was still reading this physically), I really struggled to follow the story. This might've been because it played with memory, and from a first-person perspective, it makes sense that it was confusing. However, I don't think that's all. The author takes real leaps with the characters to allow Bree into her universities secret Arthurian society. Nick's sympathy for her wasn't enough for me to believe he'd give up his determination to stay away from his role within the society. At the beginning, the characters acted in unrealistic, convenient ways to allow the plot to happen, or conflict was needed.

However, as the plot went on and the set-up was established, this factor of the novel became less prominent, but the sloppy set up made it hard for me to trust the author.

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Thank you to Netgalley, Simon & Schuster and Tracy Deonn for my arc of Legendborn in exchange for an honest review.

Star rating: ⭐️ ⭐️

When Bree's mother dies in a terrible car accident her world is thrown upside down. Pair that with starting early college and Bree is beginning to feel like she might go off the rails. Especially when she witnesses a magic attack on her first day of school.

Things get kind of complicated from there on out. I ended up DNFing this book at 22% I just couldn't grasp what was going on. I have a bit of a pet hate when it comes to main characters who intentionally ignore/refuse to answer things I find it incredibly rude and frustrating and that's not something which is exclusive to this book. Continued evasiveness is a guaranteed way to get me to DNF. Sadly that's what happens for a lot of this book, people text or call Bree and it literally quotes her thoughts as 'ignore'.

This book has amazing reviews though so I wanted to continue despite not liking this aspect of the main characters personality. But sadly it continued not to work for me. The magic system is very complicated and confusing but also overexplained, the plot is pickled with tropes and I just didn't feel like it was bringing anything new to the table beyond the amazing reps which is the only reason it's getting 2*. It felt a bit like The Mortal Instruments but without any good explanations for what was going on or why the 'chosen one' main character was able to do amazing stuff 2 days after even finding out that demons exist. Also we have both instalove and a love triangle going on.

So a let down for me overall partially due to character traits and partially due to the lack of world building and the confusing plot. Sorry this wasn't for me this time!

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Legendborn is a fresh take on Arthurian mythology infusing our world, woven together with excellent characters and an exploration of how race plays a part in both exclusive magic societies and magic itself. While it had a few bumps here and there, it was overall an excellent read for numerous reasons.

Bree is everything you could want in a protagonist, and practically leaps off the page. She holds the story well with a clear and distinct voice, meshing well with the rest of the book. It's very clearly her book, from start to finish, and it's very clear how much Tracy Deonn loves her. Her character journey through the book as she figures out her heritage and her place in the world of the Legendborn world is compelling and immersive, as well as her growth as she adapts. The ending of the book, with her character climax, had me practically cheering for her, and I can't wait to see what she gets up to next.

The side characters are excellently done, with a large cast of supporting characters who, while not as detailed as Bree for obvious reasons, are still very well written. I would definitely have loved seeing more of them, and I hope we see them in the next book, but I'm not disappointed that we didn't see so much of them. Aside from Bree, Nick and Selwyn are the two principal characters, and the dynamic between the three of them is masterfully done. Nick is written in such a way that you cannot help liking him; I would compare him to a Golden Retriever, but he's far too regal for that. Selwyn is particularly interesting as a foil for Bree, and I thought their dynamic was well balanced and served to highlight both their differences and similarities.

Tracy Deonn did an absolutely fantastic job with the magic in the world of Legendborn. The distinction between aether and root, more specifically in how they draw from energy, was a really interesting look at how impactful race can be, especially on worldbuilding. There is a further explanation of her approach to the magic, which I feel was really valuable, because no matter how detailed a single book is, there's always going to be more nuance. Unfortunately, the sheer complexity of the world was the main hinderance for me, as I found the introduction to the Legendborn a little bit confusing at the beginning; I would have benefitted from a short 'dramatis personae' style list at the beginning to explain the ranks. This was, however, a fairly minor complaint, and I look forward to seeing the world expand in the sequel.

Tropes are used really well throughout the story, enhancing the story without making it feel trope-logged. Tracy Deonn clearly put a lot of attention into overturning the setup of classic tropes and reclaiming them in ways they haven't been. Bree coming into her powers and her place in the world, as well as the mythological elements and even hints at a love triangle, are incorporated into the story seamlessly in ways that build the story up. The plot arc is a familiar one in fantasy but again, Deonn puts a special spin on it that makes it feel like a well made millefeuille pastry.

An explosive start to what's shaping up be a strong fantasy series, Legendborn is packed with potential and compelling in every way. It's obvious that this is Tracy Deonn's universe and we're along for the highly enjoyable ride, and I cannot wait to see what's in store for the sequel. If you haven't yet picked this up, you absolutely should.

Thank you to the publisher for providing me with a review copy in exchange for an honest review.

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If Legendborn becomes the big new thing in YA, I'd be pretty happy with that. With a strong, capable (and sometimes conflicted) heroine that Black girls everywhere can look up to, a mythology that doesn't shy away from the unsavoury implications of its past, and epic monsters and magic, Legendborn was a really enjoyable novel, for both young adults and adults alike.
I rated it 4 stars only because the cynical adult in me cringed at the romance scenes and hinted-at love triangle. But everything else was stellar, and it is truly great to see such a diverse novel make such big waves. I desperately look forward to the next instalment, after the revelations of this book.

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Not only did Legendborn instantly pique my interest with that gorgeously eye catching cover, but the promise of Arthurian legend set in a modern, academic setting left me eager to throw myself into the story. I liked the mix of myth and magic and what surprised me most of all was seeing Welsh, my language, a language that I'm fluent in, printed on the pages of a new anticipated novel. As much as I loved it, I still felt that it was a little clunky in its usage at times and the location of a Welsh legend set in America just felt a little strange. However, it did seem as if the author had done her research and I did love the references to Arthur and the origins of the myths. I did enjoy the story overall and the big cast of characters. I really loved reading about Bree, our protagonist, and discovering the underground magical worlds alongside her.

I did feel that the story was a little dragged out in places but as the ending neared I was completely sucked in and read on late into the night. I loved the big twist at the end

Legendborn was a fun read that kept me wanting to read on and uncover the secrets and dangers waiting on every corner. I'll definitely want to read the next book especially after that cliffhanger ending!

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One book I have been really looking forward to reading this autumn is Legendborn by Tracy Deonn, so I was very excited to finally have the time to pick it up and get stuck into this intriguing King Arthur-inspired fantasy back at the start of October. While reading, I came across so many things I wanted to say about this book, so this review is both a long one and one that has been a long time coming! I hope you enjoy it!

Synopsis
After her mother dies in an accident, 16-year-old Bree can't wait to escape her childhood memories by attending a residential Early College programme with her best friend, Alice. However, on her first night there, Bree witnesses a magical attack by a creature that feeds off of human energy and discovers a group of 'Legendborn' students whose job it is to defend humans from these attacks.

Discovering that Bree has witnessed an attack and now knows far more than she should, a mysterious teenage 'Merlin' attempts to erase her memories. However, this not only fails but also unlocks a new memory for Bree - there was a Merlin present at the hospital the night her mother died. Now knowing that there is more to her mother's death then anyone let on, she will do anything to find out what really happened - including joining the Legendborn initiates in their preparations for a magical war. However, as tensions rise and her magic develops, Bree must decide how much she is willing to sacrifice for the truth - and whether she should fight alongside the Legendborn, or destroy them.

Review
One of the most important things for me when reading such a protagonist-reliant fantasy novel is that I actually like and am rooting for the hero, and Tracy Deonn certainly achieves that with Bree. I absolutely adored her - she is strong, independent, intelligent, and, most importantly, unapologetically herself. She also doesn't dumb herself down for others, which makes her such a great female character for young women, in particular, to look up to. When reading, I was on her side all the way, and I loved how realistically Deonn explored the complexity of her character.

I also really enjoyed the plot of this book and wanted to keep finding out what happened next as it was so engaging and compelling. This is aided by debut author Deonn achieving something that even well-established authors find challenging (at least, according to their tweets!) - writing action really well. All of the action and fight scenes are well-plotted and slick, making these sections of the book, in particular, an absolute joy to read.

Something else I loved about this book is the way Deonn explored racism, white supremacy and colonialism through Bree's perspective, incorporating these issues seamlessly into the different magic systems she has devised. The scenes where Bree learnt about Rootcraft and how it borrows, rather than steals, from a person's ancestors were particularly special because of how it drew on the history of Black Americans. I, therefore, can't wait for more Black YA readers to read this book and to find themselves and this history represented so well within a fantasy novel, as representation within mainstream fantasy books is often very limited.
However, whilst I loved how these magic systems gave a real depth to Deonn's world-building, I found that having such in-depth information about multiple magic systems in this book made sections of it quite dense and hard to read. This added to issues I already felt existed with the pacing, with the start of the novel in particular feeling rushed as the speed at which Bree accepted all of the magic around her and also started a relationship with Nick felt unrealistic for her character. This odd pacing also made it harder to feel invested in their relationship (I was rooting more for Bree and Sel if I'm honest!). However, while these pacing issues did affect my enjoyment of 'Legendborn', I do appreciate that, for this book, it was more important to cover the nuances of both magic systems than focus on the pacing. Now that so much has been established, I also think that the next books in the series will be much easier and more evenly-paced reads, so can’t wait to get reading the following books.

Despite these qualms, I still enjoyed reading this book and found it to be really refreshing, both because of how deeply and sensitively Deonn writes about the nuances of being a young black woman in the US and because of how nice it was to read something that used a different source material to other YA fantasy retellings. I would highly recommend reading 'Legendborn' for these reasons alone, and think the series will only get stronger from here.

Rating: 3/5

This book was kindly gifted to me in the form of an e-ARC in exchange for an honest review. My thanks go to Simon &Schuster Children's UK and NetGalley for providing me with a copy.

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A video review was the only way to truly convey all my emotions (https://youtu.be/zJnSFoGNasQ) but trust me when I say this book is going to take over the world, City of Bones meets Cursed. And Damon Salvatore as a magic wielding merlin.

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**I was provided with an ARC through netgalley in exchange for an honest review**

A mind-blowing debut and my favourite read of the year so far - trust me when I say you need this Urban Fantasy, Arthurian retelling in your life!!

Legendborn follows Bree Matthews, who after her mother’s death seizes the opportunity to escape her grief-stricken home by attending an early college programme in Carolina. However, on her first night there she witnesses a magical encounter which sparks a memory from the night her mother died. Determined to find out more she jumps into the world of the Legendborn and the Order of the Round Table - a secret society of demon fighting descendants of King Arthur and his knights, who she believes are somehow linked to her mother's death.

Fast paced and action packed this book honestly felt like going on a whole new adventure with an old friend. A couple of pages in and I knew Legendborn was going to be a new all-time favourite. Many have stated that it feels like The Mortal Instruments series and I do agree, but I’ve got to say Tracy Deonn is giving Cassie Clare a run for her money. It also gave me vibes of Rick Riordan’s Magnus Chase trilogy.

With a writing style that instantly hooks you in, Deonn has created a magnificently immersive and expansive magic system and world. Though the details took a couple of chapters to come to terms with, the unique take on the Legend of King Arthur was woven into the story so intricately and interestingly and fit so well into the urban setting. The incorporation of Black history and the history of the actual university of the setting in the narrative was just brilliant. I also loved how multifaceted the magic itself was, from the use of the vibrant aether by the Legendborn to the intricate practice of Rootcraft (an interpretation of rootwork / hoodoo) – it is immediately evident just how much thought and time went into the details of the story.

Bree is a strong-minded and awesome protagonist. We see her struggle and deal with her grief, trauma and mental health - her need to find a connection to her mother driving her actions. These themes are represented extremely well and realistically and I loved seeing how she developed throughout the book. The social commentary on racism, colonialism, and privilege was another massive strength, addressed on account of the Black history and culture that is such a principal part of the story.

The supporting cast of characters were a fantastic and diverse bunch – each well-rounded with unique personalities and arcs and I found myself falling in love with so many of them. And the various character relationships were great. Coming back to the theme of mental health it was wonderful to see that Bree had a healthy support system through both her family and friends.

The primary romance was also really wholesome and despite being ‘insta-lovey’ – one of my most hated tropes – I enjoyed this part of the story a lot. Though personally I didn’t exactly see the relationship as insta-love for reasons that are kind of spoilery… There is also a hinted love triangle element which may not be some people’s cup of tea but I didn’t mind it one bit. You won’t find me siding with either of the love interests because I have come to love them both. Such is Deonn’s power!

This is a book you’ll fly through despite the 500 page length and then immediately want to pick up again and again as you await the sequel. My heart is swelling with all the love that I have for it and I feel like there is so much more I want to say but I’ll stop here and just say go and read Legendborn now!! I honestly can’t recommend it enough!
Final Rating - 5/5 Stars

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Legendborn is 100% the reason why I choose to never DNF a book. I'm not going to lie, this was so hard to get into, I found the opening chapters trite and full of high school/College cliche's, honestly I struggled to bring myself to pick it back up. However the payoff for pushing through this opening section was nothing short of huge and I'm glad I carried on. The world building does start off a little clumsy, there is just so much information to absorb with regard to magic, the concept of legendborn and onceborn, and then every branch and facet of the Order, vassells, pages, scions.... you get the picture. However, it does click into place and I became utterly swept up in it all. The mythology is very well thought out and researched, I adored the addition of the Welsh, leading back to the original land of King Arthur. So often the other members of the round table get forgotten in retellings, but each line is considered and every Page must chose a path, I found this to be a really refreshing and compelling take on the myth. I loved the Buffy vibe with many of the creatures and the way they are fought too. Once past the opening, the school setting pretty much falls away and we are in a wonderful world of old magic, imposing buildings and impressive grounds, much of the action takes place at night, adding to the atmospheric feel.

Bree is such an amazingly complex character, whilst she could easily have been whiny and full of self pity, her ability to recognise the changes in herself from before and after her devastating loss is astute, she rarely holds back when it comes to challenging the bigoted colonial and very white Legendborn Order, yet in a parallel to what we see in the real world, she finds herself often coming to the attention of the police and faculty heads, when her white counterparts get to walk away.  Her time with Patricia is some of the most compelling of the book, especially with her help in identifying and summarising the two magic systems in play. The way the second is discovered is pretty heartbreaking but it fits in significantly with the way that race is put forward. As Bree finds herself able to discover more about her own history and magic, the history of a school and secret society built on slavery is well woven into the pages and mirrors both the magics and the way they are formed and wielded. Selwyn sadly is a walking YA cliche, however his character as a Merlin is brilliantly brought into the 21st century. Nick as a love interest really fell flat.  William is really the only other character with depth and I think that is because he was written with great humour and I wish that Alice had more time to shine as her banter with Bree was brilliant.

I did struggle with the short time period in which everything occurs, whilst the writing reflects a feeling of a large passing of time, there are occasions when I was reminded that only a night or a few days had passed, which pulled me away from the story a bit and pulled the believability of some relationships to the limit. But ultimately this is a great story that really pulled me in with its creativity and amazing protagonist, the final battle is brilliantly written and left me with my heart pounding and just in awe at how the pieces slotted together. Now that the groundwork has been laid, I just know that the next in the series will hit the ground running and I am totally here for it!

4.5 rounded up

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I think we as society has this kind of romantic idea of a magical secret society. That dying for a cause is nobel and a secret organization protecting us is good. That it would be cool too suddenly discover magic existed all along and you can have a greater purpose. Especially if it has a cool orgin (like a legend we know), we are taught to see the magical fantasy society as an almost wishfurfillment, Royality doesn't get questioned, in fact if the main character somehow belongs that means it's awesome . That despite their flaws, there has to be some goodness and necessity behind it.

Legendborn is not that kind of book. Legendborn takes a part everything you know about the tropes and idea and questions them. Legendborn realizes nothing exist in a vaccuum and it's silly to think that as long as something exists outside of our world, it would be exempt of any bases and white supremecy. Because would magic only belong to one culture? How would it look like for different cultures? How influences white supremecy and colonialism the use of magic? In fact, it points out there is a reason why maybe we see secret society the way we see them, how the darker parts of history would more likely interwine with magic than be isolated from it. This book is really a look how the past effects the present and how it's silly to say racism is a thing of the past. The worldbuilding in this book is complext and long and not easy to understand, but that's for a reason. The details are just amazing and it's worth the intential confusion.,

Bree in this book is the shining star. She is self aware, goaldriven, grieving , lonely and angry, but mostly a teenager. She is smart and sees things it would be easier to ignore, but she can't do that. My favourite part of this book are the breathers inbetween where we remember she has a best friend who worries and a dad who loves her, that she doesn't just exist to drive the plot. Bree's introduction to a magical world isn't filled with wonder, but with wary. Even her sweet romance with gentleman Nick, has this lingering unease with how involved he is in the fucked up Order. It's such a more nuanced look at what you normally get. Between every sweet person willing to help her and cool magic, there is this feeling of wrongness lingering. Especially as she discovers her mom had magic too, but a different kind that was used between Black people and their ancestors that seems to work different from the Orders magic. Everything feels like a red flag made beautiful.

This book was a bit more dense to read, but so clever it deserves every star.

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I really enjoyed this book. I thought the characters, the use of King Arthur and Merlin mythology, blended with a modern world was so refreshing and fun.
I loved Bree’s character. She is passionate and fiery, and she strived all the way to the end. She had a brilliant and unique dynamic with every character, making everyone stand out.
The way she navigated through this crazy part of her new world was relatable and enjoyable to read.
The only thing that distracted me from the plot, was how everything seemed to be introduced all at once, and did come across as quite overwhelming. I felt I had to learn the new terminology and the rules of the world immediately and I would have preferred a slightly gentler introduction to everything, only to help the reader grasp the world.
However, I enjoyed this book and I think it is one everyone will enjoy.

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This is the best King Arthur retelling I have ever read. I loved it so much.

I don’t know how to describe how much I loved this book and how much this book made me feel about heritage and history and what it means to be a person of colour. I was a mess of emotions by the end of the book and haven’t been able to stop thinking about it since I finished it.

I loved the fresh twist on the King Arthur legend and I have read a few different retellings but this one is my favourite! I loved that it is set in our world but that is also a hidden world that most people can’t see or know anything about but still has such wonderful world building. Meshing our world and the hidden world together and showing how they are separate and how that is navigated by the characters.

There was a lot of important discussions that were incorporated into the story and I felt them deep in my soul. Discussions of how the history of Black people are erased and changed to suit those who colonised their countries, how it can mean that they don’t always know their own histories and heritage because they might not even have accurate history of their ancestors. But it doesn’t just show how they were oppressed but it also celebrates how despite all this they resisted in every way they could and thrived and were able to keep their culture as much as they could. It’s a celebration of how incredible they are and I loved reading that so much.

There is also discussions of racism and white privilege and how they have a step up and so much more opportunities because the family they were born in. It was often difficult to read the scenes where the racism that Bree had to deal with because it felt so real and how they didn’t even acknowledge their privilege. I am so glad to see these discussions in the book and how Bree had to navigate this on top of everything else but also that by the time she was a teenager she had seen it so often.

Can we also discuss how the world building shows how white people not only colonised and enslaved Black people but also colonised their magic?! Because that was incredible to read about. How they have their own magic system and borrow the magic rather than take like the those of the Order. I really loved how Bree learnt Rootmagic too alongside learning about the magic from the order because that is the magic of her ancestors and a heritage lost to her because for various reasons her mum didn’t teach it to her.

I really loved Bree, she was incredible complex character and I related to her a lot. She has had to deal with so much already and struggling to come to term with the death of the mum. She has an incredible friend who is there for her but also calls her out when she is slipping because she cares so much for Bree. Everyone deserves a friend like Alice and I hope we see more of her in the next book. I loved that Bree made her own choices and didn’t let others dictate her life. She knows what she wants and she goes for it. I also liked that she knew when she needed help too so she was pretty self-aware.

I liked all the characters too and how they all had their own storylines woven into the story so we got to see glimpses of that and how it affected each other. Nick and Selwyn were really interesting characters too though I wish we had gotten to see more of them outside their interactions with Bree and the love triangle I am hoping is not coming.

The end has an epic battle which had me on the edge of my seat and fearing for the life of all my favourite characters and it was just such a great scene. Plus we get some plot twists that left me reeling because while I had some idea of what it could be, I was not expecting what was revealed and I don’t think I’m still over it. By the end I was just dying for the sequel because I absolutely need to know what will happen next. One of my favourite reads this year!

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Legendborn, as well as being an exciting new take on Arthurian legend, is an insightful look into grief, trauma, and American history of chattel slavery; tackled delicately but emphasized powerfully throughout the novel. Legendborn is a gift to teen and young adult audiences, and Deonn will be an author whose work I pick up without hesitation.

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This book tackled so many important topics such as grief, trauma, colonization, slavery, etc. I just love it especially when a fantasy book talks about important issues because we don't see that often in fantasy. It had amazing world-building and despite it having the stereotypical YA tropes that we commonly see, it was nice to see a black girl experiencing these things. I would definitely recommend this to people!

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(4.5/5 stars) Deonn has an amazing writing style that really draws the reader in, making this book easily bingeable - it definitely felt shorter than 500+ pages!

The action sequences were particularly strong, with palpable adrenaline rushes, amazing punchiness and speed. 'Legendborn' seesaws between clunky info-dumps (e.g. when explaining some Arthurian elements) and absolutely incredible exposition, especially near the end. (Good God the last 10% of the book was a rollercoaster!) I got literal chills of revelation from some of the plot twists. I'm also pleased that I'd not anticipated the antagonist at all!

The world-building was rich, with a fascinating magic system - or systems? All I'm going to say is READ THIS BOOK! The Author's Notes are also worth reading for some extra trivia on how Deonn came up with the magic system, though it's easily understandable just within the narrative itself. I especially loved how the magic's logic interwove so seamlessly with cultural history. It was really interesting how lineages and intergenerational transmission were approached and valued in two very different ways, and it left me feeling hopeful.

There was excellent social commentary on explicit and implicit anti-Blackness, USA systems rooted in colonial violence, survival and resistance. The social commentary (also touching upon society's treatment of grief) tied in very well to the plotline and worldbuilding, and the inseparability of these very real issues with the mythical elements really ground the story firmly in our world. 'Legendborn' is probably the most 'real' and utterly believable urban fantasy I've ever read. It obviously helps that the cast is diverse in ethnicity, with several queer characters too.

The romance, while cute, is a tad insta-lovey, and I'm confused if there is or isn't a love triangle. For once though I'm not bothered by the love triangle - shocking, I know - and actually feel a lot of chemistry there. (I mean there's also the whole enemies-to-grudging-neutral element going for it too. Gives it that extra zing.) On the topic of love in general, I also adored seeing another case of helpful, loving parental figures in YA.

Overall, an engrossing, exciting and insightful debut and I'm looking forward to the sequel!

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