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I really went back and forth with how to rate this, mainly because the first half of the book feels like a completely different book than the second half!
If I had to summarize my feelings on this book into a single thought it would be this: It's 2021, aren't we sick of pitting women against other women? Because when you boil down the main conflicts in this story, it starts with slut-shaming and ends with "the evil ex" trope.
While the start of the story has some problematic elements, the relationship between Mia and Luke is absolutely adorable and makes up for it! I loved the notes on the windows, the bar, the friendship-dates; I devoured the first third of the book in one sitting and was already texting friends that they needed to stay tuned and potentially pre-order it! I had such high hopes!
[I don't know if it counts as the "surprise baby" trope if the baby in question is actually a teenager, but heads up, this is a single-dad romance! Sadly, the author took the path of "evil ex" with the mother, and it was so unsatisfying how it wasn't resolved. Also, Mia just isn't like any other woman and of course, cures him of his player-like ways.
This book starts off strong, so if you want to start it to catch all of the adorable-ness, I fully support that! Then just ask someone who's read it so you can get the summary of how it ends. I think this either needed to be two separate books telling two separate stories or dramatically edited down. There were so many repetitive stereotypes, and for two people in their 30's they definitely didn't act like it. I wish I could love the whole book as much as I loved the beginning!

In Mr. Right Across the Street we meet Mia, a single, independent, webpage designer and Luke, a hot, sexy, young bar owner that knows how to charm the ladies. This whirlwind romance novel focuses on the classic “Good Girl” falling for the “Bad Boy.” As you dive deep into the characters' lives. Mr. Right Across the Street is a real treat that is full of delight, bar hopping, snarky comments, with a bit of British charm that will leave your thirsty and wanting more. This romance novel is full of surprises that will leave you wondering, if or could these two characters ever get along. One has dropped a lot of dead weight from previous relationships, and the other has baggage that is clearly a mile long. See what happens when their worlds collide. You will find yourself turning pages and wanting to know where this story goes!!!

I really wanted to like this book because so fat all the One More Chapter books I've read I have enjoyed. Unfortunately, this one just didn't hook me like the others.
Premise: Mia moves to Manchester, where she has no friends, no social life. She's a green haired nerd who wears Converse and leggings. One day, she spies a hunky man in the building across from her working out in his window. She later comes to find that he's a bartender/owner of the bar below the apartment. She writes him off as a ladies man and falls in with a group of women that have either slept with him or are dying to. But Luke can't help but be enamored by her. He wants to get to know her better and they agree to be just friends. Mia refuses to give him her phone number so he resorts to writing messages to her and posting them in his window and this is how they communicate.
It was a cute idea, but neither character was very likable. Also, Mia had so many trust issues that I wondered why she wasn't in therapy. Also, are nipple rings back in? Just asking...
I wanted to quit reading but I pressed on, wondering if it was me or the book. Was I not enjoying it because of everything going on in the country now? Or was this book really that bad? I kept at it, but I admit that I did a lo of speed reading just to finish it.

This book made my chest ACHE! Oh my gosh. Throughout the whole book I kept getting Beach Read by Emily Henry vibes since it was a romance that touched on deeper issues and conflicts than just your usual miscommunications.
Mia and Luke were so so sweet to read about! This twist with the woman next door and Grace totally took me by surprise but ended up being such a great part of the story. I appreciated how mature both main characters were and that they each actually took responsibility for their crap and were willing to talk it out with each other. There’s nothing worse than a romance whee the main conflict could be easily solved with a conversation between the love interests.
Definitely will be recommending this book after pub day!!!

Thank you Netgalley for the chance to review this early copy!
I unfortunately, did not finish this book. I got 60% through and just couldn't do it anymore, which makes me sad because the book sounded and looked so cute.
The pacing was veryyyyyy slow. I had to push myself through and was just waiting for something to happen and this book just felt way too long. I also thought it was repetitive. Especially regarding how they were just friends, how Luke is a womanizer and Mia can't risk it, and how Mia isn't like other girls. It just kept repeating those things over and over. I didn't sense the romance at all and quite frankly, I think Mia was very arrogant and unlikable. Luke was a good character, and I didn't mind his parts but Mia was AWFUL.
I really wish I could get through this book but I just find myself dreading having to get back into it.

3.5 Stars
Mia is a website developer that moves into an apartment complex in Manchester in the hopes of starting over and thriving on her own. Away from her family, she believes this is the perfect opportunity to be more independent. She wants to make new friends and create a new support bubble away from her stalker ex-boyfriend.
Quickly, she realizes two things: the guy in the apartment right across from her that she ''can't help but watch'' working out in the morning, is also the owner of the trendy bar that services the buildings around her.
Luke is going through some major changes of his own. He is no longer a mere bartender and is now a business owner. After closing the deal on the bar he worked on for years, he realizes that managing books is a lot more complicated than creating trendy cocktails and being friendly with the clientele. He doesn't have a lot of room in his life for relationships and is pretty casual about his hook-ups - until Mia walks in.
Sure, Mr. Right Accross the Street suffers a bit from the ''I'M NOT LIKE OTHER GIRLS'' trope, and that can be quite annoying. But, overall, if you're able to overlook this, their story is actually very cute.
Both Luke and Mia have reservations about becoming involved and they develop a friendship first, which creates lovely tension and mutual pinning. I thought the main conflict was obvious, and therefore I didn't need the suspense leading to it, but, if you can overlook a few clichés Mr. Right Accross the Street can be a perfectly fine and sweet read.

Funny, witty and just utterly adorable! It was a lovely heartwarming read with an incredible main character!

Fantastic read. I have been completely unable to put this one down. I cannot wait to read more by this author.
Full review to follow on publication.

Thank you NetGalley, HarperCollins Uk, One More Chapter and Kathryn Freeman for gifting me an advance copy of this book in exchange for my honest review!
When Mia made the move to the big city, she knew it would be a tough transition. A few weeks in and she’s not only bored, she’s starting to feel lonely. As a computer programmer she spends her days at her desk in front of her computer. The silver lining? The first row view to the hot guy lifting weights every morning across the street. A solo night to the bar downstairs (literally) and she soon meets the mystery neighbor. He owns the bar beneath his apartment and he has quite the fanclub. Too bad it seems to be a females only club. Mia has no interest in being played and besides, this move was supposed to be the start of the new her. That didn’t include fallings for the player across the street.
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This was a light and flirty read packed with witty banter and sexy chemistry! Mia and Luke have an easy back and forth that was fun to read and easy to like. This was very low angst which makes it a great palate cleanser after reading something heavier or if you're in a book slump. This is a slow burn romance and the pace was a little on the slow side, but the romance is sweet and you won’t finish the book disappointed!

Kathryn has done it again. At this point I don't think she's capable of writing a bad story. This one had me fully captivated and at the edge of my seat especially when Luke dropped that huge bomb. Another well crafted storyline by the author.

This is the story of Mia, who has been burned by past relationships and Luke, who appears to be a player. Mia meets the Luke while he is tending bar. He asks her out but she declines. She won't give out her phone number because her ex was harassing her. How can a guy make any progress without a number? Well he leaves notes in his window for her, of course. A unique take on a meet-cute. This is a comical journey to finding love. I really needed an easy relaxing read and this was perfect.
Thanks to netgalley and One More Chapter for the arc.

This book has such a great premise, a hot guy who writes notes in his windows to the girl who lives across from him and takes her out to show her around her new city. Those parts of the story were really fun and I wish there had been more of them. I really enjoyed the way Luke wooed Mia. I really enjoyed Luke altogether. He was a sweet and decent hero who was not afraid to change when he had feelings for Mia. Mia, on the other hand, I never warmed up to. For a character who claimed more than one to hate stereotypes she was pretty quick to label everyone she came across. I grew weary with the lazy characterizations at first, Luke was just a player, her neighbor was an overweight slob (the ways she describes him were off putting to me and not excused by the fact they become friends) and other women are crammed into tight dresses with long nails just to illustrate how different and better Mia is for not putting so much emphasis on her appearance. Mia is also untrusting to a pretty severe level despite Luke being remarkably upfront with her about his feelings. I never saw the appeal other than how supposed unlike all other women she is. I still got caught up in the story and wanted Luke to get his HEA even if it included Mia. Gotta love a man who dotes on his pet rabbit.
I received a copy of this book in exchange for an honest review.

This book was really sweet. There were some things about it that I could have lived without but over all it was cute!
Mia moves to Manchester away from her family and friends and the life she knew to start afresh. One month in and the loneliness from not having met anyone besides her pensioner neighbour is stifling. Not even her daily entertainment of watching her neighbour work out shirtless manages to quell the loneliness she feels.

Mia moves to Manchester away from her family and friends and the life she knew to start afresh. One month in and the loneliness from not having met anyone besides her pensioner neighbour is stifling. Not even her daily entertainment of watching her neighbour work out shirtless manages to quell the loneliness she feels.
This book started off great! I am such a fan of Kathryn's writing. She has a knack for telling a story and creating intriguing characters who essentially go through a period of growth. The chemistry between Mia and the main male character was fantastic to read about.
The only two things I did not enjoy is that the "she-is-not-like-other-girls" trope was so heavily emphasised in this story. It became a bit annoying towards the end. Secondly, I felt the story dragged on too long towards the end mainly due to Mia's insecurity. It felt like a vicious cycle that just would not break! And to top it all off they never truly talked about what was bothering her. It grated me!
So cute story, adorable premise but I must admit I enjoyed her previous book so much more.

DNF at 51%.
Argh! I usually like Kathryn Freeman's books but I just could not like this one. Mia Abbott moves to Manchester, she works from home and is kind of lonely in a new city so she becomes a little bit obsessed with the people who live in the flats opposite, particularly the sexy guy who likes to work out every morning in front of his window. Sexy guy is local bartender turned owner, Luke Doyle. He's cruised through life having friends with benefits type relationships and very little commitment as befits a bartender. But recently things have changed, he's bought the bar he works at and he's starting to want more from life, like the girl with the green hair who walks into his bar alone.
Mia annoyed me, she got all bent out of shape about Luke's love life based on gossip from girl's she'd only just met in a bar. She got rabidly jealous because another woman was trying to attract him. She ignored the fact that he was chatting her up and asked her out. Then she did it again. And again. Yawn.
There was an interesting story in there about Mia helping Luke to pull the bar out of the red when he finds out that someone has been skimming the business for years but it was buried under tweenage angst and I lost interest.
I received a free copy of this book from the publisher via NetGalley in return for an honest review.

3.5 stars.
Mr. Right Across the Street was a cute premise that didn’t totally deliver.
Mia is new to Manchester and hasn’t met many people yet. But what she has discovered while working from home is there is a very attractive man who works out on a strict schedule. Every day. Across the street. Where she can see him from her desk and window.
She eventually meets him when she leaves her hibernation and ventures to the local bar, where Mr. Right is the owner and bartender, Luke. Luke is immediately smitten but Mia is gun shy after hearing about Luke’s rakish ways (look, I’ve been watching the Bridgertons, ok!?). He realizes she lives across from him the next morning and thus begins their communication using notes left on their windows.
Isn’t that adorable?
But here’s where it kind of falls apart.
Mia has had some bad relationships and is reluctant to try something with a manwhore like Luke. So they try friendship instead, although Luke is terrible about hiding his feelings for Mia.
Mia…is what’s wrong with this book. She is so insecure. I have a hard time believing she is an adult when so many of her actions are immature and reminiscent of a teenager. She was so hard on Luke, never once looking at anything from his point of view, nor giving him a chance to talk to her. Mia was constantly running away. And the whole “you’re a cool kid, I’m a nerd and the two shall never be together” schtick was so judgmental. And this when she claimed she didn’t like to stereotype…she constantly did.
Luke deserved better. He was romantic, vulnerable, and loyal.
Side characters were a worthwhile addition, and overall I enjoyed myself. I just felt it could have been just that bit more.

Thank you to One More Chapter, author Kathryn Freeman, and NetGalley for allowing me to read this book in return for an honest review. All thoughts and opinions are my own.
4.75 stars
This was such a cute contemporary romance about two people who find love with the person who lives across the street. This is my fourth book that I have read by this author. I am always impressed by how well this author is able to create a compelling story. Things I liked about the book:
1.) Mia was written well. I enjoyed how she was not just willing to settle into a relationship with a guy she finds attractive. She is willing to stand up for herself and be forthright about how she feels. I did not feel she was judging Luke for the like style he is living and does not seek to change him.
2.) Mia's family and friends were so supportive and willing to ask the hard questions to help Mia make the right decisions.
3.) Grace was a wonderful character. You could feel the love surrounding this young woman.
4.) Luke was willing to do the work to become not only the friend Mia needed, but later on the man she could love. He was very understanding and was not put off by Mia friend zoning him in the beginning.
Things I did not like about this book:
1.) The length of the book was a little too long.
2.) Peter (Mia's stalker ex). He really did not serve any main plot point. He could have been left out.
Overall, this was a very enjoyable contemporary romance! I look forward to her next book!

I loved The New Guy and have kept hoping for that same magic that the author shared with us in that first book would show up again. Mr Right has done it. I loved learning about Luke and watching what we expected him to be change and shift just like it did for Mia. I felt like I was part of that growth process for her. I liked Mia's family and all of Luke's friends and the neighborhood so much. Between the atmosphere of the neighborhood and bar and all of the community, this book was just fun.

Mia has just moved in a new city, her apartment has a great view where the guy across the street puts in a great show in his home gym.
When she decides to go to the bar downstairs in order to meet new people, she didn't expect to see the guy across the street work there.
Luke is a player, he is always with a different woman but doesn't really date. When Mia comes along he is very intrigued by her presence and attitude.
Mia doesn't want to start a relationship with him, especially will all the women that are around. Luke doesn't give up. He is very persistent and he will do his best to convince Mia to give him a chance.
I really enjoyed their non dates, dates, they had a lot of cute moments together. It was a great way to showed her how much he was interested which he didn't hide.
I would have preferred if there wasn't so much attention to his previous relationships, the women were always close by and that gave me as well as Mia a pause.
*I received an ARC from the publisher through Netgalley.

Moving to Manchester was supposed to give Mia the time ad space she needed to get past a horrible relationship. When she notices the hot guy who lives opposite she tells herself she is not interested, not at all, even when he is working out in full view of her office window. Ans especially when he starts leaving notes in his window for her….
Luke is a new business owner who has more than enough o his plate, women included. He has no time for an actual girlfriend, until he meets Mia and realises what he may have been missing. However he has secrets and the more time he is spending with Mia, the more difficult it is to tell her about his past.
I found this to be a sweet quick read.