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I need a cold shower after reading this 🔥
I'm a total sucker for retellings and this was just perfect.
Love the story, the humor, the characters and the spice.
A Carolina Reaper chili is nothing compared to the spice level of this book and I'm totally here for it.
Will definitely read the second book in this series...I need to know what happens next and I'm looking forward to reading more about this couple.
Thanks to Netgalley for providing me with an ARC. My opinion and thoughts are my own and I'm leaving this review voluntarily.

⭐️⭐️⭐️ stars
🌶️🌶️🌶️🌶️ spice
I came for the Hades and Persephone retelling, but I stayed for the spice. Damn, it was steamy and there’s a lot of it. Absolutely top tier spiciness, I could not get enough.
The plot and world building definitely took a back seat in favour of all the smut. The universe is not overly complex like your typical fantasy read, and there’s not a whole lot of descriptive scenery, but I did like how it was almost an office romance with fantasy intertwined and the gods glamouring themselves in the human realm was a very cool concept.
FMC and MMC have that “can’t keep our hands off each other or spend a second apart” kind of energy, and I’m here for it because it led to consecutive chapters full of spice. Persephone was highly frustrating at times though, it was giving me flashbacks from Iron Flame - just ask the damn questions even if you don’t want to know the answers!!
Oh, and if my ladies in the shadow daddy bat boy fan club are looking for your fix - this is it. You’re welcome.
Overall, a nice, super easy read and also seems like in the rest of the series we’ll get more character development and world building. I want more Mellie! I mean…a dark and mysterious badass female character who knocks someone out after having sex with them? My kinda woman.
Will definitely be reading the rest of the series after being left on that cliffhanger!
<b>Tropes:</b>
🤍 Enemies (ish) to lovers
🤍 Fated mates
🤍 Miscommunication
🤍 Forbidden office romance (boss and employee)
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While I don’t typically read books in a modern setting, I quite enjoyed this one. The spice was well written and at no point did I find myself cringing.
The plot was… okay. There was some conflict that could have been resolved pretty easily, and it was around 60% into the book. After that the plot was gone and it was pretty much just spice, which is fine if you like that.
I thought Helios and Mellie would be more prominent characters, but they were just kind of there for Persephone to have someone to talk to who wasn’t Hades.

The Maiden & the Unseen
This book drew me in immediately. Hades & Persephone, sign me up.
However, there were a lot of aspects that were just not for me. The insta lust and miscommunication is something I don't really enjoy, there was more smut than plot in this book. However, if you are in search of a smutty fantasy, then this is perfect for you. I found myself taken out of the story everytime a smut scene happened, and the smut scenes were a little too fast, let's say.
I want to thank the publishers for the arc, my tastes have just changed too much for me to enjoy the book.

This was spicy, super super spicy. Like can't keep their hands to themselves spicy and throwing you on my desk spicy.
I absolutely loved this book. Gods living in disguise in a modern day human world, fighting fate, destiny and cruses. The sexual tension and spice was so so so good. Top tier smut!
I would highly recommend reading this book for any fans of Greek mythology who want a twist on the classic tale. I want to read more of these.

This wasn't quite for me unfortunately. Quite lacking in plot development and characterisation, whilst plot points that were included were repetitive and drawn out.
Thanks to the author, publisher and Netgalley for provision of this book in exchange for an unbiased review.

Listen.. not all Hades x Persephone retellings need to be written. But here we are.
This wasn't bad by any means, there were parts of it that I really enjoyed, and at the end of the day I'm likely to pick up the sequel. That said, there wasn't all that much plot development, which is frustrating in a 400+ page book. The conflict was repetitive and drawn out, the characters - who are supposedly adults - talk like they're in high school, and HxP spent so much time naked that the rest of their relationship was basically nonexistent.

So, I picked up this book with anticipation, and it didn't disappoint! The collaboration between Jeanette Rose and Alexis Rune brought a unique flavour to the story.
Characters? They were a delightful bunch! I loved the nuances in their personalities and how they evolved throughout the tale. Each character had a distinct voice, making them easy to root for or, in some cases, against.
Plot? It was a rollercoaster of emotions. The narrative weaved together elements of fantasy and romance seamlessly. I appreciated the unpredictable twists that kept me engaged and eager to see what would happen next.
Writing style? The prose was enchanting. Both authors brought their A-game, creating a vivid and immersive world. The descriptions painted a clear picture, and the dialogue added more authenticity to the characters.
Romance element? Ah, the romance was beautifully done! The chemistry between the main characters was palpable, and the slow-burn aspect added depth to their connection. It wasn't just about the physical; an emotional resonance pulled at the heartstrings.
Ending? It tied up nicely. While some loose ends were left for interpretation, the conclusion felt satisfying, offering a sense of closure without sacrificing the magic of the unknown.
In summary, "The Maiden and the Unseen" was a delightful read, blending fantasy and romance with engaging characters and an enchanting plot.

I love Greek mythology, particularly the story of Hades and Persephone, so this book was very appealing to me! There's a lot of sexual content in this (which I didn't expect there to be so much of), and the minimal plot relies a lot on miscommunication. All in all, it wasn't my cup of tea, which is a shame since I was looking so forward to this.

Another hades and Persephone retelling with a ton of smut. I am a sucker for retellings of any kind so I knew I had to read this one! Fated mates as well. Love! If you’re looking for a book that’s mostly smut with a sprinkle of plot this is for you. This is Greek gods in a contemporary setting. The communication and such is very much gen Z like. Be warned it does have a cliff hanger!

Thank you to the publisher and NetGalley for letting me access this book!
This one started off okay, but relied too heavily on miscommunication tropes and characters who acted impulsively and made nonsensical decisions that kept the plot from progressing basically at all. In the end, I didn’t really like this because it felt like watching love is blind or the bachelor without the fun.

I love Greek mythology retellings and I’m particularly fond of the story of Hades & Persephone particularly in a modern light.
I enjoyed reading this for the romance and the spice but the miscommunication trope was quite annoying. The side characters aren’t very developed so the whole book hinges on H & P who are frankly juvenile and annoying when they aren’t having sex. They are very insecure and paranoid about everything. I realise I hate miscommunication tropes - especially when it is drawn out to this extent. I also don’t understand how Hades is “bound” by his fate but still does the one thing he was determined not to do (which didn’t make sense in the first place). My favourite characters were Hekate and Mellie and you see them for all of 5 mins.
There are a number of plot holes and then the cliff hangar ending doesn’t help matters. I can’t help but compare this to other H&P retellings like Scarlet St Clair’s A Touch of Darkness and this sadly falls short.
2.25Stars

To Whom This May Concern:
The couple in this book is Hades and Persephone Prosperina. This is a rendition of the Greek mythology of Hades and Persephone. What I liked about this rendition of the two characters are the shadows and powers that both of the characters have. When Hades was still courting Persephone, there was more passion than after they were a couple.
In this book, the plot was about 60% of the book. However, this book lacks true development in the plot. There are 78 short chapters with dual point of views. The chapters are too short and I was getting whiplash from bouncing between the two main characters. Also, the side characters were more interesting than the two main characters.
The “romance” scenes were drawn out and redundant. I love a good slow burn, but it was not even a slow burn. Every 2 chapters, there was a steamy scenes but they were so short that they were not even realistic. Hades would touch Persephone and she would combust into his arms. It lacked dialogue, passion, and quality. I will never judge on the amount of romance scenes in a book, but more the quality of the scenes.
The ending of the book did leave with a cliff hanger, which I can infer that there could possibly be an additional book.
With that being said, I give the book a 1 out of 5.
With thanks.
Disclaimer: I did get this book for free through Netgalley. However, I did not get paid for a skewed review. This is an honest review with no intentions to sway readers.

"The Maiden & The Unseen" presents a modern twist on the classic tale of Hades and Persephone, placing them in the present world with jobs and responsibilities. Unfortunately, the execution of this concept falls short, resulting in a lackluster narrative that struggles to engage and captivate.
The premise of the gods living among mortals in contemporary society, complete with jobs like being a social media manager, has potential for humor and relevance. However, the novel fails to fully exploit this premise, and the narrative feels disjointed and poorly paced. The transition from the mythic realm to the modern world lacks the seamless integration needed to make the story compelling.
The characterization of Hades as the "Glorified Babysitter" and Persephone as the "Social Media Manager" attempts a humorous approach, but it often feels forced and lacks the depth needed to make the characters resonate. The gods, instead of being vibrant and dynamic, come across as one-dimensional and stereotypical, diminishing the impact of their interactions and conflicts.
The writing style, while serviceable, does not elevate the narrative. The humor occasionally falls flat, and the attempts at modernizing the gods' roles result in an uninspired and predictable storyline. The lack of nuance in the character relationships, particularly between Hades and Persephone, robs the narrative of emotional depth.
The concept of fate and destiny as central themes holds potential for intrigue, but the execution feels formulaic and fails to deliver a fresh perspective on the timeless myth. The threads of destiny that bind the characters lack the complexity needed to make the struggle against fate truly compelling.
The novel's attempt to infuse humor into the mythic narrative may resonate with some readers, but for those seeking a more nuanced and engaging retelling of the Hades and Persephone myth, "The Maiden & The Unseen" may leave them wanting. The lack of depth in both plot and character development hinders the novel from reaching its full potential.

I really liked this book! Definitely would recommend. I liked the world building and related with the mfc! I liked her personality. The ending was just the right amount of cliffhanger without making you need a second book like yesterday.

The Maiden and The Unseen- 2⭐️ 4🌶️
Dual POV
Hades and Persephone
Fantasy realism/New York setting
Grumpy/sunshine
Fated mates
Insta lust
Secrets
Miscommunication
Cliffhanger
I’m starting to think that hades and Persephone retelling an are really hard to make all that different from one another because of the basis of their story. This one being more spice than plot was really not good. The spicy scenes were cringeworthy and too frequent to allow any amount of plot to happen. I was so bored.
The characters were one note and very immature. The only funny thing was Hades inner monologue/self depreciating humor when he had to deal with things that annoyed him.
With some companies, product and separate author character references, I hope the author was legally allowed to use them. It was a lot of pop culture referencing.
Thank you NetGalley and Rose and Star Publishing for an advanced ereader copy of this book in exchange for an honest review.

I ended up DNFing this book. It just was not for me.
Thank you to NetGalley and the publisher for providing an e-ARC copy of this book, in exchange for this honest review.

The Maiden & the Unseen was a quick and fun Hades and Persephone retelling.
I have read a few Hades & Persephone retellings and they all have similar themes and characters which is a nice comfort.
I loved many of the secondary characters and thought they brought a lot to the story.
I did have some ick moments while reading which brought down my star rating. While I am fairly new to the subgenre of spicy smut romance, I have read a few. I enjoyed the amount of romance and spice even if I did question it.
I was constantly asking myself why decisions were being made by the main characters and I couldn’t always understand their motivations for those actions.
But overall it was entertaining and does what it is meant to do.
Rating: 3 stars

I was looking forward to this story, and there were things that I liked about it, but it just never fully connected for me. I couldn't connect with the characters and the story just wasn't really for me. I am sure there are lots of people who would enjoy this book, it just wasn't really for me. I ended up DNFing about half-way through.

Hades and Persephone retellings are some of my favorites, but this one left me a teensy bit dissapointed. It wasn't bad per se, there was quite a bit I enjoyed, but there were areas where it just fell flat for me.
The idea of gods living among humans and going about their daily business was such an exciting premise. The first part of the book delivered on that. The second part, however, felt as if everything around Hades and Persephone disappeared apart from their pure lust for eachother. The supporting characters disappeared, the plot dissapeared and we were left with steamy scenes, secrets and bickering. Look, I, like most gals, enjoy my smut a whole lot, but I like it with some plot on the side please.