This book throws alot of world important terms and names at you right away. The glossary is helpful but it would also help to provide a little more exposition to help the reader ease into the world. Main character makes a seemingly abrupt decision that could use more reflection or character work before acting. Just feels like everything could be more fleshed out. However, big positives that dragons were introduced right away along with other magical creatures which is a huge plus. This isn't one of those books that teases dragons on the cover or title and then barely any dragons.

First of all, dragons !
I loved how dragons tied in to this book. The plot was also absolutely brilliant throughout this.
The characters had amazing stories and developed through the full book

In a world where humans have been forced underground due to ferocious dragons. They live on different levels, that are ruled by a tyrannical Shah enforcing slave labour and if you speak out you will get shunned.

There are dangerous adventures, magic doors, and various mythical creatures.

Will the heroine win the day?

***This story really has some potential, however it needs a lot of editing.

Not my thing at all. Massive religious vibes which kind of overshadowed the whole plot. The dragons ruling over humans trope has potential but has kind of already been done a lot better by other authors.
Really couldn’t buy into this story or the characters.

This could have been so much better, though without the made up words littered throughout the story.

It did feel at times I was being preached too which took away some of the enjoyment.

Overall though a reasonable start to the series

Personally, I think this book uses too many diacritics making it hard to know how to pronounce a lot of the words. With so many clearly made up names for places and every day objects like sun and moon, it makes it hard to get into and follow. Even more so when the author makes up a word for dragons (ebrens), but then winds up going back and forth between using her made up word “ebrens” and the normal word dragons throughout the book. The storyline is actually a really good concept and could make for a really good book if it weren’t for the other issues. I probably won’t read the rest in the series.

The plot summary for this book seemed really interesting and as a whole it had a lot of potential story wise. There are elements of Tarzan and Jane with the two main characters. There was also a lot of telling rather than showing and at times the dialogue felt childish. The idea of a world where dragons rule above and humans are forced under ground is definitely an interesting concept worth exploring though.

I must admit that the description of the plot seemed very interesting but I just couldn't relate to the characters and the writing. It focuses too much on unimportant details.

I received this book in exchange for a honest review. Some of the storyline reminded me to much of Christianity which put me off a bit.i don't like books I feel like are trying to convert me.