I don't know what it was about this book that didn't quite work for me, but unfortunately, it just didn't. The writing was great, with an immediacy to it that I really liked. The plot was simple but well constructed. The characters were interesting and the world building was good. For some reason however, the sum of these parts didn't connect with me, but I am quite sure that there are many people who will eat this book up - I just wish I was one of them!
I received a free copy of this book from the publisher in exchange for a fair and honest review.

Incredible as always with Chloe Gong !

I really loved the "These violent Delights" serie and I was so excited to finally discover her new adult one.
And I loved it ! Chloe is kind of Shhakespeare retailling queen at this point. All is extremely well done in this book. The characters and storyline are impressive to me and I'm even more impress by the atmosphere which is depaint here and all this universe.

A hit for sure !

This is the first Gong book that I have really embraced and enjoyed every second and perhaps that's due to the target audience change, I'm unsure - But I was very much into this!

The action in this was spot on, I loved the sarcasm and wit of the characters and we gots all the fire in this one! I enjoyed the romance element and we got a bit of a 'Whoa there Nelly!' at the end! I'm confident I'd jump feet first into book two and I look forward to seeing how the st

I felt like this was just lacking in everything. The world building, the characters, the politics, magic and the plot all just missed any depth - and that's even with all the massive amounts of info dumping that Chloe Gong provides to try and set up this city.

I read a lot of fantasy, and it's really, really obvious when an author just doesn't spend time finessing their world. Immortal Longings just felt a bit amateurish in execution, with clunky dialogue and prose. The games that are promised in the summary failed to invite any kind of tension to the plot, and the romance just wasn't interesting or developed.

Disappointing, but you can tell Gong has promise with big ideas and an epic imagination. She just needs time to develop her craft.

DNF at 45%
The characters barely have any personality, the info dump is insane. I have no idea what's happening and I don't care

Immortal Longings by Chloe Gong is positively a gem! While it took me few pages to get into this new world since I got the hang of it, I could not put it down. It kept me glued to the pages. I was eagerly turning page after page, desperately wanting to know what happens next.

Chloe Gong once again proved that she is a master storyteller, seamlessly weaving a tale of bloodbath, ancient rivalries, power struggle, and the timeless struggle between mortality and immortality.

Calla Tuoleimi (23 years old), a princess who murdered her whole family and then went into hiding? Oh boy. Have you read Nevernight by Jay Kristoff and loved Mia Corvere? Then you should read this book and fall in love with Calla. Those heroines are not the same, naturally, but I think they could be great friends or even greater enemies. Anton Makusa (25 years old), an exiled aristocrat, truly grew on me. Yeah, he is another one of my bookish boyfriends now.

Their relationship may seem a bit instalovey but once I read A Conversation with Chloe Gong I fully understand why it is written like that and I love this turbulent relationship. I crave drama as long as it is in books and not in my life. They try to kill each other very aggressively on their first meeting and then these maniacs become unexpected allies, which makes you wonder if or more likely when they are either going to tear each other apart just for them to eventually end up having sex 🤭. It´s safe to say that this book made me very happy! ❤️🔥

And while I am allergic to cats, I once again found myself caring about that fluffy ball called Mao Mao. I was worried for a bit.

The only thing that could be improved is the talk about consent, but I understand that the characters simply live in a world where taking over another body has become a norm and they are not too bothered by it.

Overall, Chloe Gong has once again crafted a compelling narrative that lingers in your mind long after you've turned the final page and makes you crave the sequel ASAP. The ending… wow. It absolutely left me wanting more. This book is a must-read for anyone who enjoys deadly games and morally grey characters, who cross over into villain territory.

Inspired by Shakespeare’s Antony and Cleopatra, Immortal Longings is the first book in an adult fantasy trilogy where two characters, Calla and Anton, enter a deadly game set in a walled city with 90s noir vibes and where people have the ability to swap bodies. I liked the concept, but I was quite underwhelmed by the rushed romance and the fact that the game gets relegated to the background as the book progresses. That said, the ending leaves things in a very interesting place for the sequels.

This was not what I expected and I really enjoyed it from start to finish. Modern with a Hunger Games feel. The twists I didn't see coming and I was fully invested in the characters.
The magic aspect of people being able to "jump" into other bodies was such a fascinating idea, the fact that the persons Qi is what makes the person the person not what they look like on the outside as bodies are literally able to be changed like clothing by those with the jumping gene.
The world building was also done really well, the oppression by nobility was truly felt and there was also the religious aspects as well making this more than just a standard fight for your life game of survival.
Look forward to seeing what happens with the next book after that crazy ending. Need to know what happens next!

I really struggled to engage with this book and didn't feel like picking it back up after pausing. It took me weeks to make progress, and my motivation stemmed more from the desire to complete it than any genuine enjoyment. The plot lacked originality, resembling a typical Hunger Games-style setup with a monarchy twist. However, it failed to offer a unique perspective or critical commentary on classism and oppression, making it feel unoriginal and uninspired. The abundance of characters and convoluted plotlines made it exhausting to follow, and the shallow characterization left me uninterested in any of their fates. The inner monologues lacked depth and personality, serving as mere conduits for more unnecessary info dumping.

Moreover, the attempt to create mystery around the characters fell flat. Instead of intriguing me, the lack of substantial information only increased my confusion and detachment. The absence of clear character motivations for their involvement in the games left me uninvested in them. Overall, the book lacked excitement, depth, and originality, resulting in a painfully dull reading experience.

I was so disappointed by this book. I had such high hopes, as I adored the These Violent Delights duology and they where both five star reads for me. However, this book was just not it, There was too much information within this book, that I definitely felt could have been chopped down a LOT. The plot wasn't gripping for me, and I felt completely detached from the characters.

This book is my first encounter with the talent of Chloe Gong, and I can say that it won't be the last time I reach for this author's prose. I really appreciate the unrestrained imagination that allowed the author to create such a fundamentally diverse world. We've seen something similar before - like the Takeshi Kovacs series: body swapping, etc., but in this novel, everything has a completely different flavor. It's not just about the subgenre, but more about the philosophy itself. In Ms. Gong's book, everything seems more flexible, with a nuance that's hard to grasp at first, but over time, its full scale resonates.

I have no intention of spoiling or summarizing the plot, as I dislike doing that. Each reader should decide for themselves whether the publisher's description and the cover (which I really like, being a professional graphic designer myself) are enough to immerse themselves in the world created by Chloe Gong.

The book, like any debut, has its flaws, of course. The author's style is still evolving and taking shape, but it already has that special something that makes it hard to put the story down.

The action scenes, descriptions, plot, magic, romance, and Asian vibe made me read it in almost one go.

I personally recommend it to anyone who wants to try something a bit different, but with an edge.

While my overall enjoyment led me to award this book with 4 stars, I do recognize that it certainly has some issues and won't appeal to everyone.

What made me enjoy it so much was the magic and the atmosphere. The magic allows a gifted person to jump into the body of another. It was very simple in concept, yet it eventually became more complex. It added quite a bit of tense atmosphere as we follow Calla walking through the city, knowing anyone could be an enemy. And the city itself made for a great setting. It is this monster of a city with an overflowing population that made people squeeze in more living space wherever possible, joining buildings and blocking out the sunlight. The people are hungry and poor to such an extent they try to get hurt or killed by the game competitors to receive compensation.

The story itself was good enough. It certainly had some surprising moments, but also the game was more of a background that allowed for characters to collide.

The three main characters were morally grey and strongly goal-oriented and ruthless, which made it fun to follow their actions, but I also didn't get very attached to them.

The romance line wasn't very convincing or interesting. It's supposed to be a big part of the book and it just wasn't. I don't care for romance much, so I was fine with not getting it. The relationship might have not been really fleshed out, but it still worked well enough for the plot.

I think this book would appeal to people who enjoy world-building and ruthless characters. I wouldn't recommend it to those who are looking for a good romance story.

I received an ARC for free, and I am leaving this review voluntarily.

⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

"They trained her for war. And she rose up to wage it on them."

I really enjoyed this book. I won't lie it took me quite a while to get into it and I almost DNF'd it but I pushed on and by chapter 12 I was invested. I'd say that's where it starts picking up...

The book started off with quite a slow pacing and I was quite confused at the beginning, however it definitely picked up by about 30% and the pacing definitely sped up.

This book had a very strong Hunger Games vibe to it, however i liked that the games did not occur in one arena and rather that the players ran freely around the city of San Er.

I really liked Calla as the FMC, I found her to be quite a strong likeable character. I enjoyed her relationship with Anton, however I did find the romance element a little weird and it felt like it was kind of just thrown in.

The ending is what sealed the 4 star rating of this book for me. I did not see it coming until the second last chapter where I had some theories.

Overall I'm glad I pushed through because I really enjoyed the book and I'm very excited to find out what happens next.

Thank you Netgalley, Hodder and Stoughton and Chloe Gong for an e-arc of this book in exchange for an honest review.

This book has more minuses than pluses and that's not something I like to say.

First of all, I'm a huge fan of Chloe Gong and I was incredibly excited for her latest release. Her style in the adult fantasy genre? Sign me up!
Now, I'm not saying this book was bad, but it definitely didn't meet my expectations. The worldbuilding was a mess and however common info dumps may be for new fantasy books, this one felt too heavy. Expanding on the world was not balanced with the movement of the plot, the character-driven plot-lines and the relationship development. Maybe it felt like that because the characters didn't strike me as anything too special or out of the ordinary, enough, to capture my attention and keep it on the book.
You may notice that it's been a long time since I've had the ARC and the date of me posting the review. I tried giving the book a secon chance and it still felt incredibly heavy with unnecessary info dumps. While I'm used to Chloe Gong giving a slower paced introduction, this felt like a lullaby that you'd use on your baby to fall asleep.
The game was an interesting part because it crazily reminded me of The Hunger Games, both as in vibes but also as in plot purpose. And it definitely didn't do what it wanted. It was incredibly bland and needed some spark to make the game part spectacular and memorable. It wasn't either of those.
The body jumping was a weird concept and it definitely needed either a good concious rewrite or a scrapping of the idea because it brought forward and simultaniously ignored so many things! Complete disregard of consent, using other people's bodies for intimate acts (that qualifies as sexual assault but I don't see any attention brought to it) and even jumping into children's bodies. I... am speechless.

This book needs a rewrite, another editor and less side influence from other authors and their mediocre work.

Thank you to Netgalley and Hodder & Stoughton for the e-ARC in exchange for an honest review.


first of all, this is really late as i've been busy with work lately, but oh well, better late than never right?


when chloe first announced this book back in 2021, i was immediately excited because "inspired by the kowloon walled city & wong kar wai aesthetic" were both big YESSS for me.


if you've watched the 2016 HIT tvb drama 'a fist within four walls', an action/martial arts drama also based in the kowloon walled city (please watch it!!! it is SO GOOD so action packed and full of multi-dimensional characters & phenomenal acting), that drama was what i imagined in my head when i was reading about San-Er. the setting of San-Er was immediately clear as a picture in my head and in that aspect, the author did do a good job painting a setting that was easy to imagine.


there's something about chloe gong's writing that is just so riveting - it's not necessarily the most skillful writing, but it pulls you in and grips you at once, and refuses to let you look away.


however, the story still bears some of the flaws that readers have begun to learn to expect from chloe's writing, like the lack of well crafted world building (especially in an urban fantasy setting where everything has to be built in a way that is believable and feels real to the audience), and solid character backstories and motivations.


calla's backstory, in particular, felt very shallow and it was very difficult as a reader to believe that was the sole motivation for her to murder the royal family, much less that murdering the king was the only 'solution' she could think of to bring a stop to king kasa's regime. if more effort had been put into building a more solid and whole backstory for calla, then her sheer determination to spill blood would have been more believable and even easier to root for.


that was my biggest problem with this book, that everything felt too convenient and tropey as if merely constructed to push certain tropes instead of building a proper, well rounded story, which should have been the focus.


this setting, and sypnosis, if given the time and thought, could have been a well crafted story in the likes of Jade City, an example of an urban fantasy actually executed perfectly (though not to compare the two because they are completely different stories and settings despite sharing similar sub-genres and themes)


still, i had a good time reading this book and am looking forward to the sequel despite my criticisms. hoping to see chloe grow as an author and take the time to improve on her craft and give us a better written sequel (i've noticed her second books tend to be better than the first probably because she does not need to do much world building, where most of her flaws come from, and can just dive into the story). 3.25 stars from me!

I really enjoyed this book! The world building was well done and the magic/ body jumping was very intriguing! It took me a little longer to read than her other novels but I still really liked this story!

I really need book 2 right now because this book was amazing and the cliffhanger left me speechless.
The tension between Calla and Anton can be literally cut with a knife and I love how they get to be from enemies to allies to something more 😏.
The idea of the book is similar to The Hunger Games, but you actually have to choose to enter the games and be selected (and you can also decide to retire, gladly you don’t really have to die 😅), but when Calla and Anton decide to enter they are both sure they are gonna win and the other is both an obstacle and an opportunity to reach the king and kill him.
I kept imagining this book as a movie and it would be such a mess (but also epic) because people can jump into new bodies whenever they want and they just keep the eyes (imagine how many actors). But Calla is absolutely determined not to jump due to her past. She is a very strong heroine I have been immediately able to empathize with, but the character that really got to me is Anton. He is fierce, he is loyal and he is also the bad guy and I found him absolutely irresistible!

I was really excited when I heard that Chloe Gong was going to release her first adult novel. I really liekd the Secret Shanghai duology, and Foul Lady Fortune was one of my favourite books last year.
And at the beginning I was sure I was going to love this one! I got this wonderfull feeling that you only get when you start an amazing book. But then. The book just didn't deliver. I can't even really pin down what it was. The premise of the plot is really interesting and the setting is absolutely amazing. But somehow it still managed to be utterly unengaging and I didn't manage to find a connection to the characters at all. Such a shame.
I give this one 3.5/5
PS: I read Last Violent Call right after this and liked it a lot more

I’m honestly so gutted this didn’t work for me, Iv been waiting for a book that sparks my interest from Chloe Gong and a hunger games feel had me so excited but this was just so slow paced and lacking in energy that I became bored very quickly, making it hard to engage with the characters and the plot.
World building was ok, I loved the city vibe and the whole concept of jumping is really cool. The writing style is sophisticated and at times beautiful but it just didn’t make up for the lack of feeling in the story.
If you’re looking for a strong competition plot I wouldn’t say you’ve found it here but if you’re after morally grey characters you’ll have your fill of them in this story, not one character is sickly sweet they all have flaws and are strong willed.
As always, many thanks for providing me with an arc, sorry it wasn’t love this time round.

I didn’t really want to rate this book because all I can say is that unfortunately this did not work for me and took me weeks to try and get into.

For a book about deadly games there wasn’t much action really at all. Also how did I just find out this was supposed to be influenced by the story of Antony and cleopatra because I didn’t feel that at all. Chloe’s a talented writer but unfortunately this story was not for me.