Yes yes yes yes!!!!!

Honestly, I was a little nervous going into this book despite loving the synopsis to this book. I think because I've heard this book be described with a Hunger Games sort of vibe, that was where the apprehension was. With certain sci-fi or dystopian-ess books, I often struggle to get into the writing or understand the world, but with this book, I did not have that issue.

Right from the beginning I was immersed with these characters and what their motive was for winning the competition. I just really enjoyed everything there was to offer from this book. The prose was incredibly beautiful and at times really hit me in my emotions. I can not wait to see where Chloe Gong will go next with this series, I am seriosuly invested in it.

Also super excited to hear Chloe talk about her books in person on her UK tour soon, so excited!

I am slightly disappointed with this one. This was my first Chloe Gong read - yes, I still haven't read These Violent Delights, I'm slacking I know - but the hype led me to believe this was going to be amazing. The thing is, it was, but just partially.

The plot was defenitely there, the story made sense, the worldbuilding was great and very different to every other fantasy story, the stakes couldn't be higher... we had everything for this to be amazing. Except the characters.

Having finished the book, I still don't know who these people really are. I feel like they were portrayed as too cold and guarded for the reader to be drawn in and connect with them; and we didn't get much on their backstories either. I mean, I have questions:

Why has Anton been risking his life for Otta all this time? How can he have anything with Calla if he can't let Otta go? Where did that never-ending love even come from? Why couldn't Calla win and just give Anton the money? Why weren't we shown anything about what the Crescents were doing? How did Anton manage that one jump? Why does Calla still have yellow yes? How has Calla survived these past years? What is the relationship between August and Galipei like? What is life at the palace like for them? I could go on, but I'm gonna stop.

Basically, the story had all the typical tropes but they were done in a way that felt fresh and new. I could 100% get behind the story but, unfortunately, it doesn't matter how high the stakes are if you don't care one bit about the characters. I mean, even Galipei was such a lost opportunity. He could have been like Fenrys in Throne of Glass but instead he was just there.

3.5 stars all for the plot.

★★★☆☆

i liked the concept, like hunger games but a different font. but this definitely had its flaws here and there

beware spoilers; just highlighting a few things i didn’t like
- too many info dumps
- you can almost tell it’s written by someone who’s chronically online. i forgot a lot but using buzz words like “unhinged”; even though it technically is a very normal word but using it in this day and age just makes me cringe i can’t help it
- the betrayal ?? the character was so irrelevant, the ambush was way too confusing, nothing made sense 😭✋🏼

overall i quite enjoyed reading it, but it’s definitely not my favorite. knowing it’s a trilogy, perhaps chloe is just stretching the story too thin. i hope the next installments are better

thank you to Hodder & Stoughton for the e-arc!

When a book makes you crazily jump and scream in hotel room and loose your sanity you know the book is awesome, jaw breaking and just so perfectly stabby stabby.

You know it's a amazing book if it's by Chloe, like you know it.

Now continueing towards the actual review here is how I felt, now the book is an adult sci-fi fantasy retelling off Anthony and Cleopatra. The book starts off with an introduction to the kingdom of Talin and it's twin cities San-er. We meet Calla and Anton (my wife and husband /real) who are taking part in the annual games hosted by the monarch, though they reach star with different motives to win they soon end up collaborating to reach the top together.

In terms of pace of the book, the start may seem slow because of the world building and just getting a grasp of the world and understanding how things work but after that is a smooth sail forward. The world building is also perfect for the story line of the book. The poor condition of the cities and rural areas plus the old wars really helps the story and making it feel more real and gruesome.

Now for the characters, Calla is just sooooooooooooooooooo………. , I m buying her a ring but will probably not show my face cause I am scared of my wifey okay, like ily but from a safe distance. So stopping my gay panic and continuing forward, her character is strong. Apart from the stabby elements, her actions, dialogues and story just add so much more to the character. I can't say more about it cause then I'll be spoiling it so yes she is AMAZING.

Now Anton, I would steal Calla from her but sadly he knows how to fight and it's also scary, less scary then Calla though. He is like a big ferocious bear who also a big softy.

Now their relationship just felt a little flat and rushed, maybe in the course of next two books it will develop but as a first installment it does feel like it appeared out of now where.

Now lastly, I loved the jumping element. The way Chloe described it and just the same thing is still amazing. I want to describe mood but I feel it's better for you to experience

Now this is for Miss Chloe so if you are not her you can still read it cause of after finishing you'll say the same.

WHAT WAS THE ENDING LIKE UMMMMMMMMMM. AND THE PLOT TWISTS LIKE EXCUSE ME LIKE I JUST LOST MY MIND OVER AND OVER LIKE THAT'S NOT EVEN HKKJHXKVHHZDVKZSHHFV

Anyways thank you for writing this book 🖤🖤🖤

I’m going to start this review by talking about the magic system which I thought was interesting. In Immortal Longings, people can jump bodies, however not everyone has this magic skill. In a world where there are games to the deatg until there is one victor, this skill was definitely useful.

I enjoyed seeing Calla and Anton’s relationshio grow, as they became allies in the games, there was definitely some slow burn there!

Everyone who enters the games has their reasons, mostly because winning will help them financially. Calla has a different motive. To kill who is on the throne.

I thought the entire book was really interesting, and I was intrigued to see what would happen next, especially as there were some really tense moment!

The book starts off with action that lasts the entire book, though it did take me a while to get into the book, as I found the start a little slow - but the book definitely picks up!

Overall I enjoyed Important Longings, and it being the first Chloe Going book I’ve read, I am looking forward to reading her other works! I am giving Immortal Longings 3.75 stars out of 5.

Many thanks to Netgalley for the ARC!

This is a very different book than what we are used to from Chloe Gong, after the success of the These Violent Delights series.
The world where the story is dark and gritty and makes you feel like the characters have no safe place in it.
The story was enjoyable although I felt there was an issue about halfway of the book with the pacing.
The main characters were well-crafted and worth rooting for, and it was interesting to see their personal development and relationship.
Overall, it was a fun book to read with some cool action scenes and I'm looking forward to read it's sequel.

Chloe Gong's latest tale follows three perspectives on a single task, each taking a different path, a kind of journey that is exactly her style.

But I'm not sure to be mine anymore!

I find it reminiscent of Foul Lady Fortune in many ways but set in a different world, the story is somehow closed, so I don't think like to read the next book, but one thing I'm sure of it is:

If you liked her other books, you will love this!

"too sensible to believe that a kingdom could change so wholly by merely swapping one mortal man for another."

Thank you so much Hodder & Stoughton and NetGalley for ARC, I have given my honest review.

Thank you to the Netgalley and the publishers for this lovely arc! I did not enjoy reading it, in fact Gong's writing was a chore to read. Despite trying her best to sound New Adult, the book was still written like a YA. I found the writing incohesive, heavy handed and to be honest a complete miss. It's so unfortunate since I had a few hopes. Chloe needs to seriously consider joining a writing class and learn the art of subtle writing - show don't tell. I was earnest but I'm left deflated.

This is a DNF for me I just couldn’t get into the story. Maybe I will come back to it or maybe this book is not for me but I know Chloe Gong is a revered author and I feel bad to just DNF it. I will give it a 3 star rating because I do love the cover a lot and I want to get into this story.

I am absolutely obsessed with everything that Chloe Gong writes. Her characters, the world building, the story??? Everything is so welf-crafted and created with love. I NEED the next book NOW

throughout the book, i felt so absorbed in this new fantasy world. i really liked august, he's my favorite character. :) i'll be editing this review and adding more later!

1 Star ⭐️

Thank you Netgalley and publisher for the e-arc for an honest opinion.

Please take in mind it’s my opinion, and everyone is allowed to have one.

I DNFed this half way through! It just wasn’t it for me, it was quite boring. Too much info dumping and nothing really going on. Don’t think Chloe is it for me, I only liked Foul Lady Fortune of her.

Anyway! This maybe might be your book, it just wasn’t for me!

This is the first time in a while I’ve stayed up late because I simply had to finish a book. The fast pacing, high stakes, and twisty ending of this book kept me gripped right from the start, exactly what I wanted from a retelling of Anthony and Cleopatra with The Hunger Games vibes. Its magic system was so completely unique and unlike anything I had ever read before, which really fed into the worldbuilding and intrigue around the games.

Out of our three narrators, Calla was definitely the most interesting to read about with her murky past and unapologetic ambitions. With all the rampant body swapping, I expected more discussion around themes of gender and identity, but I really loved how this was handled in terms of Calla’s relationship to her sense of self. Case in point:

“Calla is a woman in the same way that the sky is blue. She understands that it’s the easiest identifier to slap on, and she doesn’t mind it, but in actuality, the sky is an incomprehensible void, and Calla, too, feels closer to a nebulous, inexact entity. Before she is anything else, Calla is just… Calla.”

Unfortunately I wasn’t quite as invested in Anton as I was the other narrators, which made it difficult for me to buy into the fast-moving chemistry of the main relationship. This—alongside the somewhat one-note theme of poverty and how this was largely seen through the eyes of the rich—is the only thing that made this book narrowly miss out on a five-star review from me. But overall, I had an absolute blast with this book and I can’t wait to see what the sequel has in store.

If you know me then you know I'm a sucker for Gong's These Violent Delights series, so I was soo hyped to try her first foray into adult fantasy and, while I enjoyed Immortal Longings as a whole, there were parts that fell a little flat for me, namely the romance. Now Gong's romance between Juliette and Roma was one that I adored with my whole heart, she made you feel it, every excruciating detail whether they loved or hated each other, but it made that series what it was. In this book, I just didn't feel it at all. The romance felt rushed and if I'm being honest, had I not already known that there was going to be a romantic aspect between these characters, I would have felt it came way out from left field. The characters felt pushed together in an unnatural way which, with the amount of pages in this book and the amount of page time our MC's get together, simply shouldn't have happened.

The characters themselves I loved. Especially Calla, Princess Calla Tuoleimi who lives a life in hiding after murdering her parents. She believes that the monarchy is causing the downfall of her city, believes life would be better without it, and she enters the competition with the intention to end it once and for all. She's a character surrounded by mystery, while you get a deep dive into her past you feel like she might be hiding something else, something big, something that could change her fate. She's feisty, incredibly capable in a fight and, despite the cold and unforgiving exterior she shows, deep down wants whats best for her city and the people who reside in it.

Anton Makusa is an aristocrat who was exiled from the palace. He, similarly to Calla has no love for the monarchy, though for vastly different reasons, reasons that come to light part way through the story. He also enters the competition with a singular plan in mind, one that wavers when he meets Calla and they form an alliance, well as close to an alliance as you can get with someone who will have to kill you to win. He's strong, not just in his fighting ability, but in his ability to body hop, a power given to certain members of the city, and one that assures his anonymity for as long as possible. And the final MC and POV character is August, the next in line for the throne. He's the character we spend the least time with, but also the one we have the hardest time guessing his motives. Does he want whats best for the city, or does he simply want power?

The twin cities of San-Er themselves almost become like characters in the story. Gong brings these noir like cities to life, making them living, breathing entities with the ability to crown and crush alike. The cities tower over their citizens, bringing relief from the weather, but also bringing their own unique sets of living style and circumstances. Overcrowded and underfunded, only those in positions of powers have the ability to live in any kind of luxury, any one else takes what they can get. It's the perfect mixture of modern and historical and Gong shows how easy it is for modern conveniences to wash over any historical influences there might have been before. But the city is really brought to life through the games. Enter at your own peril, but there are always people desperate enough to risk their lives for the kind of reward granted, and Gong uses this to show, not just the danger from the other competitors, but the danger of the city too.

The magic system was unique and one that seriously creeped me out in parts. The lack of, and acceptance of the lack of body autonomy was something I'm not sure I could cope with. In the cities certain people have the ability to jump between bodies, temporarily, or sometimes permanently taking over a host. Through the games people jump to protect their own bodies from harm, ensuring that an innocent will die instead of them, and the ease with which it was done, the ease with which it was accepted, seen as the norm, the complete lack of morals just added a danger and depth to these already mortally grey characters and the world they inhabit. If you do have any triggers to do with body autonomy in any way I would give this one a miss, the blase way in which it is talked about and used could certainly be triggering, as well as the complete lack of care for those put into harms way through it.

The storyline itself moved at a fairly speedy pace, once the games took off there was plenty of action and intrigue to whet your appetite, and Gong throw's in some well places plot twists that managed to keep my on my toes. But all I could think of when I finished it was that nothing really happened. Obviously at the end, we had our big plot twist and in fact the last portion of the book left me with more questions than answers, but the build up to it just seemed a little pointless other than to introduce us to the characters which are going to become the main players in the next book. I'm not saying it was all like that, there were parts of the story that I'm sure will be pivotal to the plot in the second book, but in general, it seemed like a lot of unnecessary build up for a very quick, but still sizeable pay off.

Despite the issues I had with this one I still enjoyed it, mainly because I'm a sucker for a well written character and world, both of which we get in this book. As well as that the ending, having never read Anthony and Cleopatra, the Shakespeare work this story was based around, definitely left me shook and desperate to get my hands on the next book.

Immortal Longing is Chloe Gong's adult fantasy debut inspired by Shakespeare's Antony and Cleopatra and the historical Kowloon Walled City.
The palace of the Talin's kingdom hosts deadly games each year within its capital twin cities San-Er. The winner can get unimaginable riches to change their lives. The games are open to anyone, but those who can jump between bodies, have an advantage. Thousands of people watch the games live on the streets or their TVs at home. This year, there are eighty-eight participants, including Calla Tuolemi, the princess of Er, who massacred her family five years ago and is considered dead. Her only goal in the games is to kill the king of San-Er, Kassa. Calla is a badass heroine, who knows how to fight, is confident in her abilities and goes after what she believes in. Another participant is Anton Makusa, an exiled aristocrat in hiding who wants to win the money to save his beloved, who is in a coma. He also happens to be the best jumper in the twin cities. Anton has the ability to switch bodies in a blink of an eye and knows what he's doing and how to get what he wants efficiently. When they realize they can achieve their goals faster by cooperating, they form a strong partnership, and by spending more time together, their feelings for each other grow too. They gain popularity among the viewers because what can be more exciting than star-crossed lovers fighting in the games?

With so many jumpers in the games, it's difficult to keep track of who the enemies are. The only way to identify the participants is through their numbered bracelets. The fights in the games can be brutal, and any small mistake or hesitation can lead to certain death. Adding to the drama is a hidden society targeting the participants...But one thing is for sure. There can be only one winner at the end of the games. The question is: Who will it be?

I have to say, it's an incredible read, no part drags too much, and I felt very invested in the story. The story is fast-paced and action-packed. You never know what will happen next, and the POV changes all the time - we are not only switching between the main characters but also between side characters from time to time. So while it can get a bit confusing, it also adds to the quick narrative of the book, and you feel like you jump between bodies with the characters. Worldbuilding is fascinating as well - this image of two cities merged into one creates the impression of a post-apocalyptic metropolis with a population exceeding the city's capacity; not enough food; limited healthcare (even though bodies can heal themselves); electronic gadgets scattered about; and pervasive surveillance of every citizen. The element of jumping ability heightens the excitement of the story.

The end left me with my mouth hanging open. I haven't seen THAT coming. So when is the second book coming out?

P.S.: If you loved Hunger Games, this has the same vibe!


Thank you Netgalley and Hodder & Stoughton for granting me access to this e-ARC in exchange for my honest review.

Unfortunately a DNF. The writing style felt too detached for me to gel with the characters, and I couldn’t quite get to grips with the setting or context

I think this book will be popular but it didn't do it for me. There was a lot of information cramped in and I struggled keeping the characters in order. I struggle for infodumping. The body swapping had some pretty dark implications too and well... no. Still a very impressive book to add to Chole Gongs achievements.

Immortal Longings is the first book in the fantasy series Flesh and False Gods, which represents the adult debut of Chloe Gong. A novel that dips its toes into the science fantasy terrain, a loose retelling of the Anthony and Cleopatra story in the context of mortal games, similar to a Battle Royale; a mix of violence with politics and romance.

We are venturing into the twin cities of Sa-er, a metropolis that captures well the essence of urban Asia with a touch of cyberpunk elements; each year a set of deadly games is hosted there by the palace and the winner gets unimaginable riches, an opportunity to climb into a better life.
This year, all is different, as among the participants there is Princess Calla Touleimi, who was in hiding for five years, after performing the massacre that ended with her parents and the palace of Er; she's decided to win the games so she can get access to King Kasa and finish what she started. Things won't be easy, especially when Anton Markusa enters the equation: an exiled aristocrat, in debt to keep alive her childhood love, and one of the best jumpers out of bodies; however, an unexpected alliance is formed between Calla and Anton, which ends becoming a relationship between two of the possible winners of the games.

Adding spice to the situation, there is Prince August, who is helping Calla to win, with the hope she will get rid of King Kasa, using this confusion to put himself on the throne.
But when it is clear that most probably Calla and Anton will become the final pair of survivors, Calla will be between the sword and the wall, having to choose between her love or the kingdom.

With this premise, we have an engaging story, which I found really enjoyable while reading, despite I found Gong had a tendency to overexpose, introducing too much information in places where the pace suffers. And it's a little bit sour, because there are many details I loved about the world she created that I couldn't enjoy more due to this.
Said that, I think the execution of the fight scenes is quite flawless, because instead of long combats with dialogue and forced dramatism, most of them end up becoming a fast and violent act, which ends with the death of one of the combatants.

Romance is a key piece of the plot, and Gong manages to create a parallelism between the story she's loosely retelling and the relationship that appears between Calla and Anton; a little bit spicy, but certainly well crafted and achieving that idea of an obsessive relationship.

Despite it being a book with certain flaws, Immortal Longings was a good read, as it delivered what I expected from the blurb. I have the curiosity to see how the series evolves in the next books.

I support women’s rights but most importantly I support women’s wrongs…
… especially when the woman is Calla Tuoleimi, the woman who massacred her parents and covered the palace in blood. And especially when she enters into a set of games where competitors fight to death.

Immortal Longings by Chloe Gong - ⭐⭐⭐. 💫

I think Gong’s strength lies in her descriptions, the way they differ according to which characters and the way even the most steadfast characters will have a sense of tenderness in their descriptions. This strength is even more apparent in this book where there are more action scenes. These scenes were a gift for a person who usually skims over people fighting but these were also windows into the character’s personality, especially for Calla. However, I think this strength falters a bit in worldbuilding. Though I was first in love with it, it soon became info-dumpy, large seas of information that were difficult to wade through. A similar thing happened with the body-switching part of the book.

I also think the romance was rushed a bit but once established, I found it to be amazing! It’s similar to the romance in The Beautiful Ones by Silvia Moreno - Garcia. Every single moment seems to be stolen time before the relationship’s eventual demise. However, at the same time - Anton’s other love interest (August’s half/step-sister), was just brought into the plot whenever convenient and never really explained well, even though she’s established as this kind of character that’s forever looming over August. This is also why I thought the romance was a bit unbelievable because if Anton loved her so much that he entered the games to pay for her hospital bills, why would he ever like Calla? Gong does try to explain this discrepancy but I never truly buy the explanation.

But I still think this was a good and fun read. Read if you like: The Hunger Games, The Beautiful Ones, any Chloe Gong book, Evermore (the song) and also This Love by Taylor Swift.

Thank you @netgalley and @hodderbooks @hodderscape for providing me with a copy of the book before its release in exchange for an honest review.

An electrifying retelling of Antony and Cleopatra, with hints of The Hunger Games and Battle Royale.