this book was a tough read for me. I did not know as much as I thought so I had problems understanding some of the terms. The basic story was good and I wonder if this could really happen. Rory was a great character. The story flowed well and i think people will enjoy the book.

I really enjoyed the use of AI for this novel, it had a great overall feel to it and worked with the description that I hoped for. The characters felt like they belonged in the world and it was a enjoyable read with them. I was hooked from the first page and enjoyed everything going on.

Right away I see I’m not qualified to review the plot in this book in the money game to follow the lingo, but the story moves along fairly briskly and the writing feels fresh. I speed read for the gist of what’s happening, and it seems a fast, readable, good story. Every now and then I slowed down, getting pulled into the story and stayed with it until I’d hit bumpy passages burgeoning with bunches of adjectives and start skimming. Cutting about half the adjectives would be a great improvement. And there’s too much interior monologue for my taste. No need to tell us every detail and motive. Basically good storytelling.