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The Workaholism Cult

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I really hate to rate this story this way, so I will start with the good: the story is imaginative, and I loved the concept behind the cult taking over the company. The author has a gift for descriptions, and it was never hard to picture what was meant to be portrayed. I could tell English was not the author's first language. For that, I highly commend them for crafting a story in a language not their own.
While I do comment the author for attempting an English novel, their "voice" ultimately was a huge distraction. English speakers don't typically talk the way the characters do, and although the descriptions were wonderful, there was still an underlying "foreign" quality to them. For the next point, I could completely overlook where the story takes place, but based on character names and surnames, it seems to me the author meant for it to take place in an American or European country. With that said, the company culture is not something that one would experience in the aforementioned countries (but *would* in say, China or Japan). I found the main character somewhat insufferable in that regard. His cohort, Azazel Diabolos is a little "on the nose" as far as names go, and the constant attraction the MC has for him gets tiresome - there would be paragraphs of description every single time the MC was in the same room as Azazel.
I think overall, this story could have benefitted greatly from a good solid round of professional edits. I find it hard to believe that an editor went through this manuscript. There were several typos, errors, and grammatical mistakes.
I think the author should submit this to an editor and get it really polished up, because I think there is a great story here, buried under the rubble.

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A gripping and chilling tale that delves into the dark side of corporate culture. This novel follows the life of Sam, a disillusioned and unhappy employee who lands a seemingly perfect job at a major corporation, only to discover a sinister secret lurking beneath the surface. Nathaniel's storytelling is masterful, weaving a narrative that is both suspenseful and thought-provoking.

The author's ability to blend elements of psychological horror and the supernatural into a corporate setting is remarkable. As Sam is pursued by his own co-workers and confronts a dark, malevolent force, readers are drawn into a world of fear and intrigue. The Workaholism Cult is a great read for those who enjoy suspenseful thrillers with a supernatural twist, as it keeps you on the edge of your seat until the very end.

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Hey there, thriller junkies and spooky story fans! Are you ready to dive into the hair-raising, spine-tingling world of The Workaholism Cult by Jou Nathaniel? This book is like a rollercoaster ride of terror and corporate craziness that you won't wanna miss!

Meet Sam, the poster child for terrible jobs and workplace woes. But guess what? His life takes a wild turn when he lands a gig at a big corporation, thinking it's the job of his dreams. Well, turns out it's more like a nightmare! Sam's co-workers are acting weirder than a three-dollar bill, and there's some freaky supernatural stuff going on that'll give you major goosebumps.

If you're into stories that make your heart race and your imagination run wild, The Workaholism Cult is your golden ticket. It's like a scary movie and a corporate thriller rolled into one epic book. So, grab it, but don't read it in the dark!

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This book brought back memories of my job five years ago. It was tough, and my colleagues were much more skilled than I was.

The main character, Sam, is peculiar but interesting. His mind is conflicted throughout the story. Although the beginning of the narrative is a bit sluggish, it gains momentum when the role of another main character becomes prominent, throwing Sam into chaos.

In my view, this book is rich in dark fantasy and action, featuring ghosts, monsters, and mystery as its main elements. The author aims to expand the story's universe. I'm looking forward to learning more about Sam and Azazel in future installments.

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Very boring, did not feel at any point like a horror novel and I started to think I was reading the wrong thing at some points. Only good thing I can say about the whole experience is at least it didn't take long.

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