Thank you NetGalley for this ARC in exchange for my honest review.

This book was just simply not it...like at all. I'm very sorry as I know that authors work hard at perfecting books and take a lot of pride in what they write, BUT this book was so dull and so boring. I was waiting and waiting (cue Spongebob "4 hours later") for anything exciting or interesting to happen and it just never came.

This book has a long way to go in editing before full publishing, if you ask me.

The authors intention was good but the story just fell flat for me. I feel like some of the storyline was above me and the characters were underdeveloped. I tried really hard to get into this book and love it because the description caught my attention. This book being considered a legal thriller was a bit off the mark due to lack of thrills.

I thought the plot was fun although a bit weird. However I ended up feeling more confused by storytelling than anything towards the end. It could use a little more clarity.

Thanks to Roland Media Distribution for allowing me to read this book and submit a review.

“Some people smile with their eyes; Death shrugged with them.”
In this darkly hilarious mystery romp, Death enters the story as a character, and makes appearances at staggered intervals in the story.

Next enters the protagonist, Aldair George. Aldair is an enigma – and not just because his last name and first name sound as if they should be reversed. Following a stellar academic stint at Yale Law School, his real-life legal career has sputtered before it ever had the chance to fall flat. Barely able to pay the rent for his sparsely furnished office, Aldair not only doesn’t take on felony cases; he never sees the light of a courtroom, handling exclusively out-of-state traffic cases in which all of his clients are guilty.
Then, in the span of two days, he experiences a lapse of good judgment and actually answers two calls placed to his cell phone. The first is from a lead-footed college student who irrationally insists on going to trial on a speeding charge. The other call is from his old law school buddy, who has built an impressive career with a powerful, national firm but who has just been charged with murder and who, incredibly, insists that Aldair take his case.

The law firm, seemingly all powerful and all-knowing, pushes buttons and pulls strings on the book’s many characters (including Aldair), all of whom seem to be connected to one or more of the others. The author peppers his plot narrative with chess analogies and philosophical ruminations on the role of law in society, everyday human relations, and everything else in between.

Readers who favor a more deliberate, procedural pace are likely to get a case of literary motion sickness from the helter skelter turns of both action and logic. Readers who are highly caffeinated and who thrive on intense (and hurried) detail analysis will get their fix.

The author balances out the story’s darkness with ironic humor, the latter generated largely from Aldair’s self-effacing, hopeless-but-not serious world view and from his interaction with his unfailingly loyal and gorgeous girlfriend who sticks close by his side throughout (and who possesses no small amount of skill in the martial arts). The Traffic Lawyer has plenty of heart, even if some of its dots are not always clearly connected.

This book was quite interesting and had so much suspense and action. Unfortunately I lost interest towards the end. I found the whole DNA and godfather portion to be confusing. Killing Paul just because of his eyes was ridiculous especially since color contacts exist and basically who was really able to tell. Why did Tara get away with what she did made no sense to me. I am glad they included Julie murder at the end since it became important to me after I found out Lanie was her sister. 3.75/4 stars

This book had me HOOKED so early on. First of all, beginning with a chapter from Death's perspective was the perfect way to rope me into the book. Dispersing those chapters throughout the book was equally fascinating. I loved the main character (which may end up being an unpopular opinion), because he was finally an attorney who was not doing some incredibly exciting work and was taking the easy way out of practicing law. My only reason for giving four stars (which would've been 4.5 stars if that was allowed) is because there were arguably too many plot lines going on. I was simply getting confused by the second half of the book because the book is constantly shifting to different issues. Overall, the book is incredibly well written and an outstanding first book for this author. I'm very excited to see what else is to come!

this was an ok book, it needed something to fix some of the things. I could see where this was going on thought it could have improved. I would be interested in reading more from Norval Ecir.

I really could not get through this book, there was so much about it that was just unlikeable. It definitely needs work before publishing.

3⭐
Spice Rating - NIL

WOW, I'm a bit confused. Actually, very confused. I don't know whether it was the plot or the writing, but the execution was not up to par.
I have no complaints about the plot <spoiler>(except for the shapeshifting embryos part, which seemed a bit out of place in a crime thriller)</spoiler>, it was a good plot but the implementation and pacing left a lot to be desired in the book. As we say, a great idea should be backed by even greater execution.

The characters were lackluster. The cross connections, revelations and plot twists left my head spinning as there were no rhyme or reason to them. The dialogues seemed a bit mechanical and Lainey's character in general was not my favorite.

Overall, I feel that with a little bit more refinement, the story could have been made much more captivating, believable and engaging. I do have good expectations from the author moving forward.

I received a complimentary copy of this book. Opinions expressed in this review are completely my own.
<i>Thank you to Netgalley, the Author and the Publisher for providing an ARC of this book in exchange for an honest review.</i>

This was an ARC that I had received from the author (Norval Ecir), the publisher (Roland Media Distribution) and the fine folks at NetGalley in return for an honest review.

To be 100% honest, upon finishing this book, I found that the author had started out with good intentions and a good premise but then tried to bring so many tangents together that the book ended up a giant cluster. I wish the action was not only in the first half of the book but also more in the second half, i found that we got so much backstory towards the end. the twists kept coming in the last half which i found a little bit unrealistic. the story is also a little complicated (which is not bad), but makes it slightly difficult to follow what exactly is going on.

This is supposed to be a legal thriller, but it was dull and uninspired. The characters were rather 2D and I could not relate what I was reading to anything due to lack of description. As though they were merely words on a page. The premise of The Traffic Lawyer is not an original one - once a hotshot Yale Law student, Aldair George is now a washed-up small town traffic lawyer who feels compelled to defend his best friend from Yale Law against a murder charge, while battling an evil, corporate monolith. The book maintains a frantic pace which retains the reader’s attention but the plot is unnecessarily complicated (ie: the introduction of genetic engineering, a chimera character, cold war relations between the United States and the Soviet Union and the result of an unplanned pregnancy). Unfortunately, some of the many twists are unrealistic and unconvincing.

On a five star scale, this story is so twisted and confusing that I would be generous if I gave this book two and a half stars. This is apparently the author's first book and at times, it shows.

As with all my literary ramblings, this is just my five cents worth.

This novel has an interesting storyline that develops nicely. The lead character starts out as someone who hs "decided" to occupy the bottom, least-demanding rung, in his profession....even though he is Ivy League educated. There are hints of a secret in his past, yet the momentum of the storyiine keeps the reader interested while at the same time, wondering at his professional choice. This is a kind of mystery within a mystery and is well done. Recommended......

I pushed myself all the way to the halfway point. I really tried. I feel bad DNFing an ARC, but this was a lot of words for nothing.

Yeah some people died in this thriller and there’s a mystery in there somewhere. But it didn’t flow well and was not intriguing. The writing was very choppy, not in the sense that the chapters were short, I don’t mind short chapters, just the sentence structures and phrasing.

Yes I was only halfway through, but there were already so many plot holes I have no idea how they could possibly wrap it up in the second half.
The plot keeps going on random side quests that I feel add nothing to the story.

Since it's a few months until this comes out I was thinking I would maybe try to finish the last half of it eventually, but I've read some other spoiler reviews on other sites and I don't think the second half of this book will be for me.

I wanted to look up the author to see what else they had, because maybe this was just a fluke in their repertoire. Unfortunately, I think this is their first work? So that led me to look up the publisher...and well...that explained a lot about this book. Here's what the publisher has on their front page:

"Important books and media. Presented fearlessly.
Unwoke and unconservative
Great books and media should challenge us. Their ideas should be dangerous, groundbreaking, uplifting, and even upsetting.
At Roland Media Distribution, we present ideas in their pure, unfiltered form. Neither woke shrieking nor conservative handwringing stops us from bringing forward the ideas and stories that matter."

Do with that information what you will.

Thank you NetGalley for the opportunity to read this. I am always grateful for the opportunity to read and review ARCs.
While this is not a glowing review, I believe honest reviews are important and should be shared.

idk if i can be as mean here as i was in my goodreads review. i hated this book. it was so transphobic and also what the fuck was that plot about russian magic shapeshifting embryo babies. it came out of nowhere. also the line-level writing is just bad. and misogynistic. if you want a detailed look at why i hated this - gr review linked. also can u please upload a cover of this book to gr - it looks so ugly without one.

This is supposed to be a legal thriller, but it was dull and uninspired. The characters were rather 2D and I could not relate what I was reading to anything due to lack of description. As though they were merely words on a page. It got to the point where I did not want to pick up my kindle to read on.

This book needs a lot of work before it is published.

A good idea, but not presented well. The characters felt contrived, and the author tried too hard to create a story that should have been allowed to play itself out.

I liked the premise of the book, the blurb is what got me intrigued. The content of book and the pace definitely kept me intrigued but I think some of the turns were unnecessarily confusing but it did tie up well in the end, and not in a way I could have guessed.
One small bug bear for me was the small trans (apologies if that's not the correct term I'm unsure) representation. I understand why it's there now I've read the whole book, but in the moment I found it highly unrealistic that Vina would allow Aldair to use the wrong pronouns after he's not spoken to her or visited her in many years. I liked that Death's chapters were short and there weren't many, it added to the mystery and ominous nature of the character. It also made it even harder to guess who Death is. The play on morality was quite interesting too, in regards to being a good lawyer, why the law works for some and not others, and why Aldair knows so much about law but is merely a traffic lawyer.
Overall, an alright book that kept me on my toes and that I had to think about to keep up with it. If you enjoy fast paced mystery books, this is for you

The premise of The Traffic Lawyer is not an original one - once a hotshot Yale Law student, Aldair George is now a washed-up small town traffic lawyer who feels compelled to defend his best friend from Yale Law against a murder charge, while battling an evil, corporate monolith. The book maintains a frantic pace which retains the reader’s attention but the plot is unnecessarily complicated and some of the many twists are unrealistic and unconvincing.

I really enjoyed this book and found the main characters engaging. The plot is a bit twisted and can be hard to follow at times but it is worth it.
Couple of out there moments in the storyline which may have been a bit hard to believe.
I hope there will be more adventures from the Traffic Lawyer

thank you netgalley for letting me read this book! i really enjoyed the start of the book and the character of aldair and i think this could become a great series with aldair becoming a sort of poirot. I wish the action was not only in the first half of the book but also more in the second half, i found that we got so much backstory towards the end. the twists kept coming in the last half which i found a little bit unrealistic. the story is also a little complicated (which is not bad), but makes it slightly difficult to follow what exactly is going on.

overall: i enjoyed the setting and the book and i give it 3.0 stars, but the story itself is too complicated for me.

I am 90% finished with this book and I plan on finishing it tonight so I am going to write my review now. I am a fairly intelligent older woman with a college degree. I was a nurse for over thirty years. But this book is over my head! I have hung in there with the storyline and the characters but some of it just doesn’t make sense. It is a book review so I will not be telling a lot about the story but I will say that the main story is about two or three lawyers who graduated from Yale Law School. Two of them were at the top of their class. One became a corporate lawyer and the other decided to just represent people from out of state and their speeding tickets. The traffic lawyer is Aldair. The corporate lawyer is Rick. Rick is accused of killing a wealthy man. And there the story goes a little awry. Just as I thought, ok, I got this and it’s a little bit interesting but wait, where did this other person come from and where did this side storyline come from?? Just a little weird/strange. Thank you to NetGalley and the publisher for allowing me to read an advance copy for my honest review.