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A Half Flower

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A Half Flower by Mira Kanehl is the first in a magical realism series. Fantasy mixed with historical fiction and set in Hawaii. I found the exploits of the revolutionist French surgeon and some of the fantasy aspects disturbing. I didn't enjoy the novel and dnf.
In all fairness, I'm not the right audience for this novel.
Thank you to the author and publisher for the opportunity to read it.

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I really wanted to like this book, however, I found the plot confusing and the characters didn’t have the depth I would have liked them to have. A shame, as it showed early promise, however, this wasn’t a great read for me.

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This was a rare DNF for me around 1/2 way through - simultaneously far too detailed and far too vague. The prose has far too many descriptive words in it. Rarely is there a simple sentence such as “he sat on a chair” or “he ran down the street”. Because of this, I struggled to follow what was going on.

After some opening chapters in France (could all be deleted, add nothing unless there’s a point later), we begin the story proper in Hawaii. There are lots of Hawaiian terms flying around with far too little explanation or time to digest them. I got completely lost. As part of this, there’s all the Hawaiian mythology, theology and worldview. As it’s not something I know anything about, I lost track of all the terms - is this word a goddess or a practice or a belief or a … you get the idea.

There’s clearly a story to be told with this material and our author has clearly spent a good deal of time researching it. However, we’re not there yet. I’d honestly strip this story back to very simple sentences then build the detail in from there.

I received an advance review copy for free, and I am leaving this review voluntarily.

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I received this from Netgalley.com.

Good book, be prepared to spend some time with it. All encompassing, incredible characters neatly woven with historical figures and facts of 1800's Hawaii.

4☆

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This book did not engage me for some reason. I did not enjoy the writer's style., and I did not think the characters were developed as well as they could have been. Having said that, it is certainly an original book, to be sure, and that is always a plus IMO. So, not a bad book, just not my cup of tea. Thanks to NetGalley and the publisher for giving me the opportunity to read this book.

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A surprising novel where i went in expecting one thing and got something else. Definitely one of those novels where you can’t really talk about it without spoiling so i will say to those who like this style of weird abstract concepts with dense prose you’ll like this a lot. it’s what i like but my tastes are not typical of others.

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Even though many themes of this book were thought provoking and highly interesting (concepts of religion, society), this novel was not for me. I could not relate at all to the characters . Too many elements of fantasy surprised and disturbed me as this was not mentioned in the blurb. This is not the kind of story I enjoy. If I had known I would not have read the book. Hence a 3* review for me.
I received a digital copy of this novel from NetGalley and I am leaving voluntarily an honest review.

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Mirà Kanehl has a great writing style, it had that concept that I was looking for in a historical fiction element perfectly. It was a strong start to the Naupaka series, and left me wanting to read more in this world. I loved the cover and thought everything worked with what I was hoping for. I loved the use of Hawai'i and thought it worked well in this time-period.

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