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This book was brilliant! I met the author at YALC last year in November and she was lovely!!

There is so much going on in this book in the best way!! Not only is there an island full of dangerous women and burning cities there are pirates and demi gods!! Just wonderful I won’t say anymore as not to spoil it but you should read this! The only thing I don’t love is the cover 😂😂

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Greek mythology inspired fantasy but really more fantasy than a re-telling with lots of name dropping.
I didn't really connect with Danae the mfc, and found most of the characters expected to survive on their name alone. Slow start with some nice world building which felt more in the style of a re-telling then a jarring jump to the action and pace for the rest of the book.
I enjoyed the slow beginning and I did get caught up in the action of the rest of the story, it was reasonably fun and entertaining if you just go with it.
Thanks to Netgalley and Penguin Random House for the opportunity to read the arc, all thoughts are my own and left voluntarily.

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Daughter of Chaos is a book I have heard a lot about and was really excited to delve into, especially when I saw it was connected to Greek mythology. That said, I really struggled connecting and being absorbed with it, which made it a longer and more laborious reading experience than I expected.

This is a very ambitious book, when it comes to Greek mythos there is a LOT of content and names, creatures and Gods, and I have read many retellings and adaptations, however it did feel like the author wanted to cram as much in as possible, whether it added to the story or not. The end result was a very disjointed, busy experience which felt jarring at times, name drop after name drop, with Gods and islands thrown even if it didn’t ask for it (or it were correct). I can only imagine the names that will be included in the next instalment but I would recommend making a checklist of a bingo card.
The problem with adding so much to a story is that it’s an issue of quantity over quality. I don’t mean that to be rude, it’s just you can’t possibly develop every character, provide adequate context, meaning or purpose to everyone, you also can’t provide much needed character development – Mantos is a perfect example of this, a non binary character who barely exists on the page but who apparently leaves a great impression on Danae. Hylos is another example. You are shown people and places but you don’t feel like you know them or are there. It’s more of a Greek mythos tour with no stops, you’re just whizzing by with a sometimes questionable tourguide.

The other issue with this is that it’s really distracting. I was halfway through the book almost forgetting the plot and Danae’s reason for even joining the Argonauts; her sister’s death and her missing nephew, because the beginning of the book felt so distant and like a different book with different people. The beginning of the book starts slow but intrigued me, however the moment Danae meets Jason and Heracles, the pace picks up too much while ironically feeling like it takes you nowhere, leaving with a confusing ending to take you into the next instalment.
In terms of the characters, some are historically known to be insufferable (Jason, I’m looking glaringly at you), Danae herself I struggled with, at times I liked her, at times how she got caught up in the moment was frustrating and testament to the younger age she was supposed to be. Heracles should have been a more interesting character however, like his name suggests, he was there as the big name and nothing really more. The best characters do not get nearly enough attention unfortunately, namely Mantos and Atalanta, however every character who isn’t Danae is merely a pawn, a piece of scenery, which is why you only get glimpses and wasted potential. Talking of wasted potential, you then have the romance, although I will admit that love is only ever uttered in the sense that Danae realises Hylos loves her, you don’t really get her feelings back, although from her rebound with Heracles, I would say it wasn’t particularly meaningful! The Danae/Heracles scene feels like it needs to be there for the sake of a book having a love scene but there is just no chermistry or real build up for these two – in fact Danae very much feels like an inexperienced girl and Heracles is towering, tortured man, they just don’t fit. Now Atalanta and Danae actually had the potential of something, there were moments of chemistry and intimacy there I would have liked to have seen more of, however while Danae is represented as bi, she merely admires women but wants men it seems.

I can definitely see how some people would enjoy this, it does take you to a lot of places and if you don’t look too closely into Greek mythology and look at this at surface level, you might enjoy the name drops of people you’re casually familiar with. For personally, it just felt a little dissatisfying, having a lot of potential but just not the depth or development to explore what it wishes to put on the page.

Thank you NetGalley for the copy in exchange for an honest review.

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Thank you to NetGalley and to Penguin Random House for this ARC. There are very few things that get me going like Greek mythology-influenced fantasy and so I was delighted to get my hands on Daughter of Chaos. It centres around Danae, an ordinary young woman living simple life on the island of Naxos whose life is turned upside down when her sister is raped by a god. Confronted with the careless cruelty of the immortal beings who rule her life and plagued by strange visions, Danae is driven from her home to seek answers from the Oracle of Delphi. There she learns that there is one who is destined to end the tyranny of the Olympians and set mankind free from their endless demands for sacrifice but she’s as shocked as the rest of us to find out that it’s her. Accompanied by some of my favourite ancient heroes (and also least favourite, fuck you Jason), Danae sets out on a quest for the truth that lies at the heart of her world. This take on Greek mythology is very original and I really enjoyed the first third or so of the book. Webb has a real talent for driving forward the story in a compelling way and introducing creative but consistent twists to the original stories. However, my brain is a little bit broken by four years of studying Classics at university so once Heracles, Atalanta and Hylas were introduced I found it a bit easier to see those twists coming which I think ruined a little bit of the magic for me. However, I’m excited to see where this trilogy goes, especially given the ending – after all, what is a hero’s journey without a good old fashioned katabasis? Perfect for Greek mythology nerds, fantasy nerds and absolutely ideal for those who are lucky enough to be both.

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Thank you to NetGalley and the publisher for the ARC! Rating- 3.5

This book had a great premise and I was excited to get into it, but something about it (I think the main character, Danae) was hard for me to grip onto- I enjoyed reading the story and seeing what happened, but never felt truly invested in her growth and trials. This book was good and fast-paced however, just not the one for me.

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I had mixed feelings about this book, hence why it's taken me so long to review it. I think you can definitively tell it's a debut as it's sort of a mixed bag. I love Greek Mythology retellings / Inspired stories but this one took far to many liberties, like it was quite separate from it's source material and that to me was off putting.

Thank you Michael Joseph, Penguin Random House and A S Webb for the eARC in exchange for the honest review.

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Absolutely stunning book the story is so creative and I just couldn’t put it down! Thank you NetGalley and the publisher for a copy of this book

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Sad to say I did not like this book.

The way the author bends Greek mythology to better fit the story honestly just frustrated me. I don't mind things being changed in retelling to make them more original to an extent but this felt like it lacked sense and was disrespectful to the original myths.

The queer rep also fell flat for me. Manto, a non-binary character, was given next to no personality and was only there for a handful of chapters. They felt like nothing more than a token queer character. Danae, the main character, is also apparently bisexual, this really isn't shown at all other than occasionally sharing some longing looks withs Atalanta. Danae spends the entire book ogling male side characters and eventually sleeps with one. I wouldn't be so mad about Danae eventually ending up with a man if her attraction to women was better developed. Alas she felt like another token queer.

The first 40% of the book was so slow paced it was honestly painful to get through And if you do manage to make it through that the next 60% jumps from event to event at a rapid pace but still somehow leaves you feeling like nothing is actually happening. Once you finally make it to the end, it is rushed, anti-climactic, and just generally boring.

It is safe to say I will not be picking up book 2 when it comes out.

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I gave this a second chance. I wish I hadn’t. This had so much potential but … I guess it wasn’t for me because I hated this so much.

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I’m a big fan of Greek mythology and retelling of the various myths, so was keen to read this one.

The premise really pulled me in - the gods of Ancient Greece are alive and well (and known as ‘the Twelve’) and they rule with an iron fist. Life is hard for the mortals in their kingdom - with backbreaking labour to survive, corruption of those in power (including the Twelve), and of course frequent sacrifices to maintain the gods’ favour.

This one was very slow to get started and for my interest to get piqued whilst Danae was with her family. But the story picked up as she started on her quest and encounters all the famous stories from Greek mythology and their associated heroes and villains. And these I enjoyed.

I enjoyed the commentary on the role of women in society and how they are ostracised when they do something that’s not ‘proper’ - even being raped by one of the Twelve. But overall I struggled to engage with Danae, her journey and the pacing with this one.

Thanks to NetGalley, the team at Penguin/Michael Joseph, and the author for the opportunity to read this review copy.

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I have mixed feeling about this book. I loved the premise and I'm a big fan of greek mythology in general, but I felt the delivery fell short. The pacing was off, and while I agree the need for a back story, the start of the book on Naxos dragged, but also felt rushed. I enjoyed Danae's journey with Jason, and Heracles and the rest of the Argonauts, as well as the ending, although that felt rushed as well.
However, the book did a good job of laying down the foundations for future books, and I am excited to see where the author takes the series.

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I am a big nerd when it comes to Greek mythology. Therefore, Daughter of Chaos by A. S. Webb seemed like a safe and interesting choice. Unfortunately, this attempt to reimagine Greek mythology as an epic fantasy fell short. The book revolves around Danae, a fisherman's daughter, and her quest to "cure a curse" after she had eaten a golden apple (a clear link to Aphrodite). The narrative starts strongly with a chilling glimpse into her future, effectively setting the stage for the story.

Shortly after the first chapter, Webb rewinds and describes Danae's close bond with her sister and her parents' life on the island of Naxos. Shortly after, Danae has to escape from her hometown and goes to the oracle of Delphi where she finds a mysterious group – trigger warning if you like Greek mythos. Much happens, but somehow the narrative feels stilled and gets lost in the mundane details of daily life and unnecessary/shallow dialogues. There are important themes imbued in this "adaptation"(?) such as sexual assault, the role of religion, feminism, and the exploration of sexuality. However, the themes are quietly mentioned, which lacks the punch it needs to make the story thought-provoking.

With that said, I suspect Webb wrote this book with the themes in mind and pushed it to Greek mythology due to the recent trend in "feminist retellings." This book didn't feel Greek at all. There are many basic mistakes, such as calling Athene patron of Athens and Apollo as the God of the sun. Nothing felt Greek – not the society, not the gods, not the story itself. The character development is superficial and inconsistent. I found Danae's relationship with her mother rather annoying, and at 16 years old, Danae is very childish and innocent. There are too many name-drops of mythological figures that do not add to the story. Here, Ariadne is a Maenad… please, don't. The most mythos disinformation was the banalisation of human sacrifices. Demeter is not happy? Ruin all their crops and demand a human sacrifice. What?

Overall, this book contains too many flaws to recommend, and I cannot say to whom this is aimed at. Greek mythology fans will not enjoy this book, and it has too many historical mistakes to be based on Greek mythology.

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Set in Ancient Greece, where humans are at the mercy of demanding gods, our main gal, Danae, discovers she is fated to end the gods. Driven from her home, she sets out on an epic journey which brings her into contact with heroes such as Heracles and Jason, sees her fighting monsters and discovering powers she didn't know she had as she endeavours to fulfil her fate. I really liked this story for the adventure, the rapid pace and the strong heroine. It flows easily from one adventure to the next with never a dull moment, and was a fun and engaging read.

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Thank you to NetGalley and the publisher for the opportunity to read this book in advance!

The book is set in ancient Greece, and features mythological characters. It started off well and I enjoyed following the main character's adventures, but I found myself losing the thread of why she was going on her quest. The main goal is obvious but I didn't necessarily root for her to get there, the book didn't manage to keep me engaged the whole way. It also felt a little disjointed at times. This book is not my favourite, sadly.

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Hhhmm...How to rate Daughter of Chaos? I think 3 stars as it is based on Greek myth. A star for originality and making Greek myth accessible to a wider audience. There are so many interesting tales and lessons to be learned from Greek myth. Rich stories full of action, adventure, drama, tragedy, love, cruelty and all sorts of ugliness. But, on the whole, beautiful given its enduring power and ancient roots, which should always be respected.

But, though I can accept a bit of tinkering with myths, to give more detail and depth, I don't hold with disregarding inconvenient facts and making wholesale changes to suit a made up character's narrative. Danae, the 'fictional' main character, does not belong with Jason and Argonauts and much of what transpires is not based on the source material, be warned if you were not aware. The butterfly effect of her injection to the story does change things but not in the way this book plays out. There are just too many crucial changes/mistakes to be believed, I'm afraid. No one with a passing knowledge of Greek myth would believe Apollo is the patron god of Athens. The clue is in the name and to get that so wrong, or to change it out of convenience, is just bad form. Greek myth fake news that some might believe is true to the ancient myths.

There are plenty of good and bad points to the changes made to the quest of Jason and the Argonauts, and I could list them, but let's leave it by saying this was entertaining but not as sensitive an adaptation as I might have liked.

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⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️- Such a gripping book that had me devouring the pages.

This book had me gripped from the start. It was so action packed and had my emotions going in every single direction!

I loved the take on Greek mythology, it was the names we know but with delicious twists and turns keeping me on my toes and the plot twists were phenomenal.

The world building was so much fun. It was intriguing and beautiful and really allowed me to picture the locations well. I absolutely fell in love!

The beginning of the book starts off so intense and honestly it felt like it never stopped.

I cannot wait to read more of books in this series!!

Thank you to netgalley and AS Webb for the ARC of this wonderful book!

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This is such a fantastic and ambitious debut and really did a great job of setting itself apart from other fantasy/romantasy -and even Greek myth based- books.

The book is the first in a series, but in itself is a sweeping journey, following Danae from childhood as she comes into her own power and understands her purpose. Each part of her journey is just as an interesting and engaging, the characters were fun and dynamic, and I'm fully invested in the plot.

There was also such an interesting spin on the established mythologies which was very interesting and such a fun and unique take on the genre. The only pause that I took was when it came to the main character- Danae, in this story, is her own fully formed, nuanced character, and I'm wondering if she's supposed to be the Danae that we know from the myths? If so, it's either a *very* different take on the character or it's going to be so much fun seeing how she transforms from the character in this book to the character that we know.

Really looking forward to where this series goes and how the plot and the characters evolve!

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Daughter of Chaos started off well, however, I found it slow going and struggled to get through it. It just didn't really grip me.

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Love the front cover design! Very well written and love how it’s based on Greek mythology! I’m obsessed with anything mythology based! Will be buying this for sure to read read!

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The main threads of this story are woven as Danae discovers the background of the prophecy and all of the shocking truths about her world and the Twelve. Weaving parts of Ancient Greek myth and a young woman's quest to be valued in a world where being a woman makes you property of a man in turn and being mortal means you are a Gods'. This action packed first installment was really enjoyable, I found the start a bit slow, but it's to be expected when setting up an entire fantasy world. I liked sweet relationship between Danae and her father and her protectiveness over her siblings. I wouldn't personally say she was likable and some of her motivations and actions questionable but it made her feel very human and falible, this exploration of humanity was extended to the whole cast of characters. The main thing that stood out to me was how much the motivations of characters hinged on how the Gods interacted with them and how their capricious nature just caused all kinds of unfortunate consequences. I look forward to the next part of this journey and would recommend it to anyone who likes reading flawed heros, epic journeys, twisty propecies and plucky side kicks. Forewarning, you may be gut punched several times.

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