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This book was cute, it wasn’t necessarily the epic fantasy I was hoping for when I initially read the blurb but it was still an interesting story. I think it has potential to be a very intriguing world, but I was a a little let down by the world building in this one. The prologue was fun, but then were thrown into a modern setting which kind of confused me a little bit, it was a lot of back and forth. I did enjoy the friendship between Nat and Anya, I always love seeing amazing bonds in books, and Ryn seems like he’s super interesting I just wish we got more of a story about him and what happened in those years since leaving the fae world. Again, I think it could potentially be a cool and interesting world, but this specific book was not exactly my favorite one of the year.

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Unfortunately this book was not for me. I can see why it would appeal to others I just want not the target audience. The author did have a valiant effort with world building but ultimately it was a little too confusing for me.

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Based on the summary, I thought I would be devouring this book. I think I need to come back to it another time when I’m in a different mood. Soft dnf for now.

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This is a must-read book I don't want to give any spoilers, but you won't regret getting this book, you won't put it down till you're done reading the whole this.

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So pretend that this book doesn't feel like a middle school rough draft with endless grammatical mistakes, misspellings, and weird phrasing. The prologue is an emotional, dramatic start that then becomes a tired romance between a baker and a perfect, blue collar "man". Neither main character is particularly unique or giving main character energy. When the action starts, we finally see hints of Anya having a personality, but her best friend Nat is honestly the only character with any oomph. From there, the world building and entanglement of the mortal and fae realms is underdeveloped. The ending was unsurprising, cliched, and left me with the feeling very little had happened in the story itself. I don't see myself picking up the sequel.

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DNF. The premise of this book really grabbed my attention but when I started reading it I just couldn't empathize with the characters or be intrigued by the story. I try multiple times to read it but it's just not for me.

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This synopsis presents an intriguing premise that blends elements of romance, fantasy, and adventure, creating an engaging foundation for a captivating story.

In the writing Anya's transition from a hardworking baker to a business owner, paired with the mysterious appearance of Ryn, the fallen prince, offers an enticing setup for both character development and tension. The slow-burn romance between Anya and Ryn, mixed with Ryn’s personal struggle to reclaim his kingdom, creates a compelling emotional core for the plot.

The concept of Ryn being a banished prince with wings cut off is a strong visual and symbolic detail, evoking both vulnerability and resilience. The idea of Anya and Ryn navigating the dangerous landscape of love, fate, and power provides ample opportunities for rich storytelling. Additionally, the dynamic between the two women, Anya and Natasha, hints at strong female friendships, which can add an extra layer of depth and intrigue to the plot.

That said, while the synopsis offers an engaging premise, there are some aspects that could use further exploration. For example, the connection between Anya’s bakery life and Ryn’s royal background feels a bit jarring at first, though it could be a central point of tension or discovery within the narrative. The stakes of the royal conflict and the target on Ryn’s life are established but not fully detailed, which leaves room for more insight into the world-building and political intrigue of the Kingdom of Mairene.

Overall, this synopsis promises an exciting and emotional journey with the potential for romance, action, and self-discovery. The writing with a bit more world-building and character exploration, it could be an incredibly rich and rewarding read.

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Im giving this book 4⭐

This book is a great start to the Thread of Fate series! With rich world-building, intriguing magic, and a gripping storyline, it pulls you in right away. The main character’s journey is compelling, filled with secrets, destiny, and plenty of twists. Some pacing issues slow things down at times, but the emotional depth and immersive setting make up for it. A solid fantasy read that leaves you excited for the next book!

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DNF.

The book sounded like it was going to be a great read but it ended up DNF. There was way too many errors that it was too hard to ignore them to be able to focus on the book. If it was the random misspelling here or there, a lack of detail in a scene or something that could be doable it would be a different story.

This book simply was a hot mess and needs a lot of work and then maybe republished and try again.

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The Forgotten Prince by Akira Varma is an engaging fantasy novel that blends adventure, magic, and royal intrigue. The story follows a young prince who discovers his hidden heritage and must navigate a treacherous path to reclaim his kingdom. Varma’s world-building is immersive, and the plot is filled with action, mystery, and complex characters. With themes of identity, destiny, and power, The Forgotten Prince is an exciting read for fans of epic fantasy and coming-of-age tales.

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I had to DNF this book at 50%, it was not for me. It felt so cheesy and I just couldn’t warm to any of the characters at all. The writing style was relatively childish in my opinion and I just couldn’t push myself any further unfortunately. Thank you to the publisher and NetGallery for a chance to read this in exchange for an honest review.

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This was an alright story that read more like a novella.

It left out a lot of information for the purpose (I believe) of intriguing and capturing your interest enough to continue on. But I never really felt captivated by the story. I imagine book 2 will have a lot more fantasy aspects, but this one was more of a building cozy romance, which isn't my favorite.

Thank you to Netgalley for a copy of this book. My thoughts are entirely my own.

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A quick novella, it didn't blow me away but it wasn't awful either. I did like the concept, and thought this could be expanded and I would likely enjoy a full story with more details.

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I was so disappointed in this book. It didn’t seemed finished at all. It’s like a bunch of ideas were thrown onto a page and they called it good. So many things were confusing and I’m just like what did I read?! It doesn’t seem like this was edited at all and it still needs a lot of work!

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I thought this was very good and I will have to add this to the shop shelves. Thank you for the chance for us to review.

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I was able to read this because NetGalley provided with an arc. I loved this romantasy. Great Read. I would read more by this author.

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Thank u netgally for providing an eARC.

The grammars in this book where to much. And i think the editing could have done better. but i loved the way this book has been written. It was an easy to read book and had some great tropes. I think this book is a great start of the series and shows that the autor has a creative mind and has great potential for the future.

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2 stars rating. A bit boring at times, lacking plot, but still a cute and enjoyable experience overall.

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The Forgotten Prince by Akira Varma offers readers a captivating blend of fae lore, romance, and action, creating an exciting adventure in a vividly imagined world. At the heart of the story is a mysterious, enchanting plot that keeps readers engaged from start to finish.

The story itself is well-constructed, following a traditional yet enjoyable fantasy arc. The combination of romance and fae intrigue gives it a refreshing twist, setting it apart from other stories in the genre. The world-building is detailed and immersive, allowing readers to easily get lost in the setting. The pacing is well-done, balancing moments of action with quieter, more emotional scenes.

The main female character (MFC) adds complexity to the plot, though she can be a little frustrating at times. Her development feels a bit uneven—there are moments where her choices may seem irritating or inconsistent, which can pull readers out of the narrative. However, as the story progresses, she grows, and her strengths become more apparent. The romantic subplot is woven nicely into the action, providing both tension and payoff in key moments.

One drawback is the noticeable number of spelling and grammar mistakes throughout the book. While these errors can be distracting, they do not significantly detract from the overall enjoyment of the story. The action scenes and romantic moments are engaging enough to keep readers hooked, even if the technical aspects of the writing could use polishing.

Overall, The Forgotten Prince is a strong entry in the fae fantasy genre. While the book has its flaws—primarily in the character development of the MFC and occasional spelling/grammar issues—it remains an enjoyable read for fans of fantasy romance. The world-building and plot are its biggest strengths, making it a worthwhile pick for anyone looking for a fast-paced, magical adventure.

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A wonderful read that hit just the spot!

Not on the long side, but equally as satisfying, it was truly a treat and sweet beyond belief - with just enough spice to get you going, even when it's behind closed doors. There's mystery and suspense, and the whole "touch her and you die" trope which, let's be honest, is the kryptonite for all us romantasy girlies.

Also, we see the female lead's BFF go on a rescue journey with the male lead, arguing because they disagree on some things but still united because they both love Anya so much. I pity any foe they come across, they make a good team and Aleryn's PISSED!

For those of you not into the "insta-soulmate" trope, this might not be for you. But if you're like me, and dream of the one true love that was fated to be yours and knows it the minute he sees you -then dive right in. You're gonna love this story!

P.S.: Bring us more Theo in the next book, please, the grump is to die for!

***I was given an ARC from the publisher via NetGalley in exchange for an honest review. The opinion stated in this review is solely mine, and no compensation was given or taken to alter it.***

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