First things...that cover is beautiful! This had a unique fantasy world based loosely around the lore of the lost city of Atlantis with water fae and other elemental fae. I enjoyed the character development, the romance, fated mates trope, discovery of hidden magic, and secrets. And the last 10% of the book had me on edge...so good! Overall s fantastic story and I can't wait for more.

This book is probably the most disappointing read I have had in a while. The cover is absolutely gorgeous, and from the description it sounded right up my alley. I really think the fact that I was invested enough to finish is what brought this up from a one star though.

The first thing that stood out to me is that the writing style was very choppy. This was a dialogue-heavy book, which normally I don't mind, but it felt like the story was just "'Dialogue.' Action." over and over.

Sometimes, there is a book where the characters just do not click with me. They don't do what I would expect them to do, and not in a fun plot twist way. You guessed it, this book falls into that category. There was some insane behavior and actions that some of the characters got away with and the MCs were just like, "Oh, we can't do anything." Just really rubbed me the wrong way.

Speaking of rubbing me the wrong way! This book had some actually insane lines! I was uncomfortable every thirty pages. For example (no spoilers), when the MC was told that her "breasts were dangling flesh ornaments with tips that did nothing for him." I'm sorry, what? The romance was SO fast, and some of the things they said to each other made me cringe hard. Do not get me started on the webbed feet, I ignored that part in my mind.

Despite all of this, I definitely could have gotten behind this book if the plot had been a little more fleshed out. There were two main concerns plot wise, the first being that nothing went wrong until the the end. Other than the beginning conflict, the MC figured out everything in this new world without issue. I would get that feeling in my gut when something is about to go wrong, but then absolutely nothing would happen. When I was younger I used to wish for a book with everything going as planned, but now I realize I want some drama!! However, this changed to the other end of the spectrum at the end of the book. Not only did everything go wrong, it went wrong to unrealistic amounts. You're telling me that the characters that lived in this world for a thousand years wouldn't have known that big plot twist? The last issue I had with this book is I was advertised a girl working through her grief. Instead, I was being told how sad she was every couple of pages, and then about halfway through even that stopped.

I never critique books harshly, but I think my frustration with this one is I was so excited. I might be judging too harshly, but I really am so disappointed.

I loved this book! It's well-written, enjoyable, and a great read. S.T. Fernandez did a great job of writing a story that sends you into the depths of the sea and creates such a unique world there. It captured my attention, and made me not want to put it down until I was finished! I would highly recommend it!

This was such an adventure! The Veiled Heir is a cool mix of fae/elf fantasy with a sprinkle of mermaids - given the setting in an aquatic realm, and I thought it was so fascinating to read. I really liked the worldbuilding and thought the dynamics between the different elf races! Was a solid read overall!

3.5 ⭐️ rounded up to 4.

My main critique of this book is that it felt slow at the start and that made me take a while to get into it.

The setting of Atlantis and the world building is incredible! As someone who loves the ocean, I always enjoy books that take place in the water - a lot of fae books have more forest/mountain settings.

Overall a solid start to the series and I’m looking forward to where it goes next!

I ended up absolutely loving this book and recommend it to anyone looking for a fun fantasy fae read. It took a little in the beginning to get into it and get to a point where I didn't want to put it down. But as we followed Asherah's story into her secret family it started to get where I binged the book in a day or 2. I will say I'm so mad at the ending (not really) but it was such a cliffhanger and I can't wait until the next book.

Thanks to netgalley and Azalea Press for the early eARC in exchange for my honest review.

This story line almost felt like it should be for a younger crowd, but the spicy scenes suggest otherwise? I was hooked enough to want to find out what happens in the end, but didn't even get that because it ends on a massive cliffhanger! This book just wasn't for me.

I think I either need to take a break from NetGalley books, lower my expectations for these kinds of books, stop trusting reviews, or all of the above because this book was not a good time. I had such high hopes for this book. I've been looking for mermaid stories, and it's so hard to find any that aren't middle grade level. However, this was turning out to be just like any other romantasy book with an unsuspecting FMC who is suddenly thrust into the hidden world of fae and has an uber-masculine love interest. There was potential with the world-building and the overall plot, but honestly it was just boring. The pacing was already weird, and based on the few negative reviews out there, it was just going to get worse.

I think the two things that really solidified it for me that I was not going to enjoy this book was the name of the other faerie kingdoms and the character of Aurelio. First of all, the Air Fae's kingdom is called Airelandia and the Earth kingdom is called Earthos. That has to be the most uninspired and uncreative names I've ever heard. There was not more than a second of thought that went into those names, which seems so weird since all the other character and place names seemed pretty unique and interesting. I don't know why the author decided to phone those names in. Second of all, the author created the most stereotypical gay male characters, that even as a straight female, I felt hate-crimed. The FMC meets her stylist is a gay man whose first words are "...or else that rigid wench with the unstyled hair and bland manicure will rip away what is rightfully hers". On it's own, this one quote isn't bad, but every sentence out of his mouth is this same "sassy" and "flamboyant" vibe. Eventually, the FMC even calls them her "two fashionable guardian angels". Of course I didn't finish the book, so I don't know if they were given any other personality traits, but this was too much.

I tried so hard to give this book it's fair shot, but once I got to the 20% mark, I was just dreading picking up this book. I could see some people liking this book, and there definitely are people who have liked this based on the reviews, but maybe I'm finally just sick of the romantasy genre.

I’m giving this 4.25 ⭐️
3🌶️
1 💧

Thank you to NetGalley for the ARC in exchange for an honest review.


I’m so upset. SEETHING.
BECAUSE I NEED THE NEXT BOOK. That was one brutal cliffhanger that I did NOT see coming !!!


Plot: I was hooked in the start, it did hit a bit of a lull in the middle, but once I got to about 55% it picked up for me and literally could not stop reading. I canceled all plans and ignored all responsibilities. The concept of elemental Fae in Atlantis - SO cool and unique. The development of the MFC coming into her new role - very cool process throughout the book. Lots of scheming and plotting and mystery.

World building: NO INFO DUMP. THANK YOU. It was so well done ! And again, so unique.

MFC- I enjoyed Ash. She was truly a strong female character. Made some dumb decisions here and there that I couldn’t quite forgive lol

MMC- I had a pull to him, he had me swooning. It wasn’t until the end that I went full *sell my left kidney* to have a man as sweet as him UGH. His piece at the end with the MFC nearly tore me apart.

Side characters: The antagonist is so easily hateable. I want nothing but horrible things for her. The rest were so SO lovely !! And added so much to the story.

Spice/Romance: It was a steamy one for sure. Weird language used at times 😅 but not over-used where I had to put the book down lol. The romance is a bit insta-love but the book still had a slow burn feel. The things that come out in terms of the love confession - rip my heart out and step on it why don’t you ????



Honestly if you liked the second book from ACOTAR - read this book. That’s all I have to say.

✨️💚✨️Book Review✨️💚✨️

Book: The Veiled Heir
Author: ST Fernandez
Rating: 5 stars 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟

"You are a dream I never want to wake up from," he whispered against my skin.

Let's start with: if ST Fernandez writes it ... I'm going to read it.

I absolutely loved this spicy romantasy Atlantis wild ride of a book so so so much.

I am most definitely now a "drae bae" and will never go back.

My favourite part of this whole book was the found family aspect for the people Asherah ends up with around her. I love every single one of those characters.

I also really enjoyed Asherah and how strong and brave she handled her whole situation with what happens at the beginning.

You get:
• Romantasy
• Fated Mates
• Spicy
• Dual POV
• Secret Identity
• Atlantis
• Found Family

Pick up this book on July 23rd and prepare to be thrown into a spicy underwater, war brewing, goddess filled, magic and saucy (spicy romance book lovers) characters masterpiece.

"You are my path. You have my heart. You have my soul. And love is such an inadequate word for how I feel about you, but you have it, too, nonetheless."

I Enjoyed the story and the romance. The world building was really different and interesting. And, wow the cliff hanger. Looking forward to book two.

I had high hopes for this as I love mermaids but I unfortunately I was more bored than anything. Its written as if its intended for a middle grader but then there are terms like 'cock pocket' so that has me thinking its aimed at a more mature audience but I just felt like I was reading a teen drama.

This was so much fun! A very unique fantasy, with a world and lore that I’ve never read before. The introduction of water fae (and other elemental fae) was so unique! The world building and political intrigue was really great. The romance between the two main characters seemed (a tad) rushed but overall was entertaining. Would definitely recommend if you love fantasy that’s relatively easy to follow with good characters!

Oh gosh where do I begin? This is like an avatar meets fae meets romance book! I absolutely loved this book. I’m still gathering my thoughts and wrapping my head around it because omg!

It was lovely. It made me laugh, it made my heart hurt, it gave me the feels I needed while I even kicked my feet too. I loved Ash and wanted to support her and Drae so much. I can’t wait to see where this book/ series heads. I’ll definitely be supporting and keeping an eye on this author! For sure recommending as well!

I’ll be posting a review on my Instagram with the upcoming days as well as good reads. Once I finish that I’ll be updating this post here with links to them. Along with updating this because wow just wow.

Did it have moments where I could tell what would happen? Sure. BUT it didn’t make it any less of a fun and great read. I still enjoyed myself and found myself wanting more and wanting to see what happened next. It was easy to read while still being engaging and just mwah. I loved it. I hope there are some character art designs or something in a preorder package or future benefit because I would love to see some visuals for these characters *especially* drae.

Also the cliffhanger? Omg I was shocked. My heart sank, I screamed, I couldn’t believe it. I need the next book asap please and thank you! Haha. I seriously can’t wait to see where this goes… I’ll definitely be looking forward to it.

I’m newer in terms of Fae fantasy books and haven’t read many water fae specifically, so this was still very refreshing to me and explained it well from a basic level but not so basic that someone who is familiar with this genre would get bored. It had enough romance for me to enjoy it still and lean into the idea of adventure which I hope and believe the next books will have with the fantasy adventure aspects!

The cover is also GORGEOUS. Bravo all around!.

This book had me on the edge of my seat. It was very interesting. Definitely a good start to a series. The cliffhanger at the end of the book left me wanting more. I didn't want to stop reading!

This isn’t my normal read but wow have I been missing out
I really really enjoyed it I loved the under water fae such a unique story.
I was truly mesmerised by the whole book the characters the places it was so creative and my imagination was going wild.
Love it completely

I love romantasy and I love fae and atlantis. So I actually enjoyed reading this book. I loved the charcters, the setting and the plot!

I loved every part of this book. It's packed with beauty, emotion, humor, action, and more. Following Ash's journey was a delight, especially with its unique twist on fae stories. The characters are beautifully written and relatable. This is the perfect beach read!

"The Veiled Heir" introduces Asherah Delmar, whose life turns upside down when her mother is murdered, revealing Asherah as the heir to Atlantis. Fleeing from assassins, she discovers a hidden world of Water Fae and must embrace her new powers while navigating political intrigue and a passionate romance with Draevyn Eliron, Commander of the Guardians. With rebels and council members opposing her, Asherah must fight for the future of humanity.

From beginning to end, this book captivated me. It's filled with emotion, humor, and excitement, making it a truly engaging read. I especially enjoyed the rich world-building and the intricate political plot. While the romance adds spice, the story itself is compelling and promises more to come in the series.

Thank you to NetGalley for an ARC of this book. "The Veiled Heir" by S. T. Fernandez shows promise with its intriguing premise but ultimately falls short in several key areas. The novel begins with a rushed start that left me grappling to keep up, lacking the gradual immersion necessary for a fantasy setting. The absence of adequate world-building further hindered my ability to fully engage with the story, as crucial details about the setting and its dynamics were glossed over or dumped in awkwardly.

One of the book's notable challenges is the overwhelming amount of character dialogue, which often felt excessive and contributed to a choppy, disjointed reading experience. This issue, coupled with a storyline that didn’t feel particularly original and leaned heavily towards a young adult demographic, resulted in a narrative that felt underdeveloped.

While attempts were made to introduce the reader to a new world, the execution felt more like sporadic info-dumping rather than cohesive world-building. This approach failed to provide a solid foundation for the story's events and left many elements feeling disconnected and arbitrary.

Moreover, the main character's quick acceptance of life-altering revelations and her inexplicable knowledge about a supposedly unfamiliar world were difficult to reconcile. This lack of natural progression in character development and world discovery detracted from the overall believability of the narrative.

In summary, "The Veiled Heir" may appeal to readers seeking a less demanding fantasy read, perhaps those new to the genre or looking for lighter fare. However, for those who appreciate a richly developed and immersive fantasy world with well-rounded characters, this novel may not satisfy expectations. It’s clear that while there are elements of potential within Fernandez's storytelling, the execution falls short of delivering a truly engaging and cohesive narrative.

Whoa. That was a 'wet' book. HE HE.

I really enjoyed the growth the MC had in this book. Forced circumstances but they learned and overcame many difficult situations.

The author did an amazing job of getting me to LOATHE one specific character..... I am still angry about this person. PERIOD.

I am looking forward to the next book.... talk about a freaking cliffhanger.