This book is a standalone belonging to the same world as "Daughter of the moon goddess" and I was intrigued by its being a standalone and by the very captivating plot, with at the center the relationship between the protagonist - who certainly knows what she wants and doesn't let herself be distracted in order to redeem herself - and the god of war. Reading, however, actually turned out to be quite disappointing: I found the book very repetitive, especially after the 40% mark - constant dialogues and slightly anti-climactic revelations didn't allow me to enjoy reading. Even the main reveal was actually a disappointment: partly because I can't stand that type of trope, but also due to the fact that at the beginning the relationship between the two seemed a bit fast, but then the male protagonist had redeemed himself, and I thought: "ah, here, a bit of character". Well, nothing, he's the usual good-natured guy, and he only has the name of God. I didn't find it memorable, in fact I found it a copy-paste of the main duology.

An absolutely incredible standalone, it was so nice to be back in the world of the Celestial Kingdom!
Immortal has all of Sue Lynn Tan’s beautiful prose with new, complex characters that are hugely relatable.
Wonderfully written, Tan’s imagination continues to impress. Her work has become my go-to comfort reads that I come back to time and time again.

Immortal is the latest fantasy book from Sue Lynn Tan, author of the Daughter of the Moon Goddess series. In this standalone novel, we follow a young ruler’s struggle to end a war, work with deities and save her kingdom. Just like Daughter of the Moon Goddess, it is a beautifully written story about mortals and immortals.

I really love reading standalone fantasy novels, so I was very excited when I saw that Sue Lynn Tan was writing Immortal. This novel is like a dark fairytale or folktale, and it would be easy to believe that it was a real piece of mythology that had been lost to time.

I love how ambitious the story is, there is so much worldbuilding that brings the kingdom of Tianxia and the Immortal Realm to life. The complex relationship between different nations and their reluctant alliances make for an interesting political landscape. Also, the way that the setting is described was just beautiful. Lynn Tan has a wonderful way of creating ethereal landscapes. I’m just sad that I can’t visit them in reality.

The romance in this book is probably what will attract most readers, and I’m happy to say that they won’t be disappointed. There are high stakes, pining and a rivals/enemies to lovers dynamic. I also appreciated that, despite the clear power imbalance, Liyen holds her own against the powerful God. She is a capable and intelligent main character who is dedicated to her country. Together, they have great banter and throughout the book they also seem to gain a greater understanding of each other.

I would recommend going into this book with little to no information so that you can enjoy all of the plots twists yourself. Whilst the start may be a little slow, let yourself get swept into the world and enjoy all of the political intrigue and romantic tension.

Thank you to NetGalley and the author for providing me with a copy of Immortal. I absolutely loved reading this book and would 100% recommend it. I loved the story and the twists throughout that I wasn't expecting. The characters were excellent and there was so much effort put into each character that they felt like real people and were all so distinct. I loved the unravelling layers that the plot has and the worldbuilding which was beautifully written. If you read Daughter of the Moon Goddess by this author you should definitely pick this one up as well. This has been one of my favourites so far this year.

Another riveting story from Tan. We follow Liyen as she has recently come into power and is vying for the freedom of her people. She must navigate court politics in both the immortal & mortal realms to get the best outcome for her people.

Zhangwei, The God of War, watches over her before she can swear fealty to Queen Caihong (or negotiate her people's freedom). Tension brews between the two and there might be more to the God of War than Liyen initially thought.

The world is full of vivid imagery and amazing writing as Tan's previous duology. Certain chapters and locations really stick out and provide amazing visuals due to her fantastic writing style. The story is full of quite a few twists, some of which I definitely didn't expect, it's sure to keep readers immersed.

Our two main characters relationship is further complicated by trust issues which is written well compared to other novels that deal with these themes. Without going into spoiler territory, the conflicts between the two are well written and have a believable resolution.

I really enjoyed this one and it further cements Tan as a talent to watch out for.

Thanks to Netgalley & Harpercollins for this arc.

First of all a big thank you to Harper-Collins, Harper Fiction for letting me review one of the most anticipated books .

When i had read Daughter Of The Moon Goddess i fell back in love with fantasy books all over again so you can Imagine i was very excited
to get to review immortal.

I was not expecting so much romance from me being a huge romance lover this is what kept my eyes drawn to the pages of the book there was so much suspense around every character and OH MY GOSH !! The plot twists were crazy and I loved them so much . the book had my jaw dropping so much .

I thought that Sue Writing was beautifully, flowed so well, she really made me feel like I was in the book on this wild adventure .
The slow burn romance was chef kisses as the youngsters say . perfect enemies to lovers . i fell in love with the mythology you can tell sue done her work on this .

I know this is a very hyped book for this year so i am not giving anything away as i know so many will want to enjoy this adventure .

do you need to ask 5 giant stars

3.5⭐️

This was a really easy read for me.

The world-building was simple yet beautifully crafted. While it wasn’t overly complicated, the author did a fantastic job of creating a vivid and immersive setting that allowed me to easily visualise the world without feeling overwhelmed by excessive detail.

One of the most exciting aspects of the book for me was the plot. The twists and turns were all unexpected, keeping me on the edge of my seat throughout the story. I found myself continually surprised by the directions the plot took, which kept the momentum going.

Another thing I loved about Immortal was that it was a standalone. In a genre that often leads to long-running series, it was so refreshing to have a complete and satisfying story within just one book. It allowed the plot to feel self-contained, and everything was wrapped up nicely by the end. I didn’t feel the need for any more, and the conclusion was both satisfying and well-earned. There was a sense of closure that I really appreciated, and it left me feeling content with the story without needing to anticipate a sequel.

Overall, Immortal was a quick, enjoyable, and satisfying read. The blend of simple yet effective world-building, rich character development, and unexpected plot twists made it an enjoyable fantasy novel. And the fact that it’s a standalone with a neatly tied-up ending was the cherry on top. While it wasn’t perfect, I thoroughly enjoyed it and would recommend it to anyone looking for a complete, satisfying fantasy read.

I absolutely loved Daughter of the Moon Goddess and hearing that this amazing author is gonna give adult fantasy a try? Yes please!

Unfortunately for me it turned out to be a huge disappointment. Sue Lynn Tans amazing writing did not save this one unfortunately for me, I had a very hard time finishing it because I just did not want to read it anymore. It’s all the things I dislike and more, the world building was understandably not very present since we of course know the celestial kingdom already. But the story was riddled with cliches and the most predictable plot twists in the bad sense. I absolutely despised both MCs, Liyen is extremely childish, rude, a hypocrite and just very unlikeable for me, especially for what is supposed to be an adult character. Her hate was pointless and forced for the sake of hate and god, insta love again? I guess it’s more complicated than just that but it did not save the offense to be honest. I did not like anything about the romance, both were horrible people and both were hypocrites and annoying. The only character I tolerated was Chengyin but hey, he appeared now and then more as a plot device. I would have liked a more in depth exploration of the platonic relationships, the non platonic relationships and give them time for me to actually figure it’s love and for any betrayals and harm to actually hurt instead of me just feeling happy they got what they deserved.

It’s an absolute cliche of forced most popular tropes and a waste of Sue Lynn Tans skills. I feel like this could have been so great, instead it’s been closed in a box of insta love, enemies to lovers, a petulant “I’m different” Mc, non sensical hate and no explored enough feelings towards the other characters for me to give a shit about what was happening.

I’m very disappointed sadly, but I guess it wasn’t for me in the end.

It’s no secret that i absolutely adore Sue Lynn Tan’s writing, it’s lyrical and absolutely visually stunning. You just picture yourself stood there with the characters in these beautiful worlds she’s weaved.

I’m ecstatic that Tan’s first foray into the Adult Genre has not disappointed and that beautiful writing just continues to flow. Character growth is such a strength for this author, and both Liyen and Zhangwei have wonderful storylines. Disconnected but then entwined in such a gorgeous way, with the development of their relationship and the truth behind it feeling like such a natural step and not forced.

Liyen is the lady of Tianxia, inheriting the throne after the death of her grandfather, yet feeling like she hasn't earned the title. Her goal is to free her kingdom from the immortals who only think of themselves, desperate to stop being anyone's toy. So, an alliance is needed. Could she gain the favor from the God of War? And could she do it without having her heart stolen by him?

You see, the love story is one that I always seek in books.

"Touch her again and you die."

This is the first book I've read from Sue Lynn Tan and now I'm hitting myself over the head for not having picked up her work sooner. I had a blast reading Immortal! What an absolutely stunning and addictive fantasy romance from Sue Lynn Tan. The world building and magic of this world is so interesting, but more than that I fell in love with Liyen and the God of War, Zhangwei. The hostility and intrigue between them at the star that slowly turns into allyship (with mistrust) and then slowly into appreciation, wonder, and then love. Zhangwei was ready to always lay his life down or give everything up for Liyen. The longing between them was indescribably delicious.

I loved the twists and turns of their relationship - the back and forth of "will they, when will they, won't they?" I wish we had even more time with them especially in Part 3 of this book. I think this book could have benefited from being a duology. So many large reveals occurred in the second half of this book that would have been amazing to see explored in further depth. Regardless, I loved the flow of this relationship. Liyen and Zhangwei have become a new favourite couple. The God of War is unmatched in terms of being "down bad" for your significant other.

In terms of pacing, I do feel that Part 2 and 3 felt a bit rushed in comparison to Part 1. The main conflict was wrapped up a bit too quick for my taste - which is why I would have loved if this was a duology instead of a standalone. Otherwise, this was such a fun fantasy romance that I ate up in a couple days! I will absolutely be checking out more of Sue Lynn Tan's works.

Thank you so much Harper Voyager for the opportunity to read and review!

When I picked up *Immortal* by Sue Lynn Tan, I wasn’t entirely prepared for how deeply it would resonate with me. From the intricate world-building to the emotionally charged characters, this book was an absolute triumph. It’s one of those rare finds where every element—from romance to political intrigue—comes together seamlessly, leaving me utterly captivated.

First, let’s talk about Liyen. What a *force* of a protagonist. Her journey from a poisoned and hesitant heir to a fierce and determined ruler felt personal to me. I followed her struggles, rooted for her triumphs, and admired her sheer grit to protect her people, even when everything seemed impossible. She is bold, sharp-tongued, and unapologetically herself, and I couldn’t help but cheer for her every step of the way.

And then there’s Zhangwei, the misunderstood God of War. Initially, I saw him as cold and ruthless, but as his layers peeled back, I fell in love with the depth of his character. His devotion to Liyen—his willingness to fight for her happiness, even at the expense of his own—was breathtaking. Their chemistry? Electric. The banter, the tension, the yearning—it’s the very definition of a slow burn done right. I couldn’t stop turning the pages, desperate to see where their story would go next.

The romance is undeniably at the heart of this story, but the world-building left me just as entranced. Sue Lynn Tan paints a lush, vivid picture of the Mortal and Immortal realms, steeped in Chinese mythology that felt both rich and immersive. The interplay of forbidden magic and political intrigue added a layer of complexity that kept me hooked. Every twist and turn surprised me, and I was constantly questioning who to trust and where my sympathies should lie.

For me, one of the most striking aspects of *Immortal* was its exploration of trust, duty, and the gray areas in war and politics. There were no clear heroes or villains—just flawed individuals fighting for what they believed in. That moral ambiguity made the stakes feel so much higher and left me reflecting long after I turned the final page.

If I’m being honest, the beginning did feel a little slow. I wasn’t immediately drawn in, but as the story unfolded, I found myself completely engrossed. By the time I hit the 10% mark, I couldn’t put it down. The plot twists were jaw-dropping, the stakes were higher than I expected, and the ending left me both satisfied and longing for more.

Sue Lynn Tan’s writing is nothing short of magical. Her prose is poetic without being overdone, and the dialogue feels authentic and emotionally charged. Every interaction between Liyen and Zhangwei crackles with tension, and even the quieter moments held so much weight. I felt fully immersed in this world, and I didn’t want to leave.

**Final Thoughts:**
Reading *Immortal* was an unforgettable experience. The story is a masterful blend of romance, action, and political intrigue that swept me off my feet. If you love enemies-to-lovers dynamics, richly detailed worlds, and strong heroines, this book is an absolute must-read. Sue Lynn Tan has earned a permanent spot on my bookshelf, and I can’t wait to explore her other works.

*Immortal* is not just a book—it’s an experience. If you’re considering picking it up, I can’t recommend it enough. I promise, you won’t regret it.

Beautifully captivating! I loved being back in the lush DOTMG world. This book had me hooked with its forbidden magic and political intrigue. I really loved the characters too, Liyen was headstrong and clever which I love in a female lead, and I loved the dynamic between her and Zhangwei. Yet another brilliant read from Sue Lynn Tan.

I really loved this book, I thought the writing was beautiful and the story captivating, the action & romance had me hooked and on the edge of my seat, but the political side of the story gives it balance , it’s just fantastic reading

I really enjoyed this.
Sue Lynn Tan's writing is easily digestible however without fail can transport you to another world. I loved the characters in this and the twists and turns that the story took!
I could happily read more books from this world!
Well paced and thoroughly enjoyable!

This is a DNF 5% in. I already tried reading Daughter of the Moon Goddess by this author and also DNFed it, and this one feels very disjointed, just like her debut did. I don't like her writing style, I don't think it flows very well and reads overall very clunky. I also felt like things were moving very quickly from the start, which I usually don't mind, but adding my other issues, it was making me want to sleep, just like the other one did, so I just don't think this author is for me.

Sue Lynn Tan weaves a stunning world of magic, mythology, and emotion in Immortal. Serving as a sequel to Daughter of the Moon Goddess, the book picks up seamlessly where the first left off.
The story follows Xingyin as she faces new challenges that test her courage, loyalty, and the bonds of love.
Tan paints vivid pictures of the immortal realms, from dazzling palaces to enchanted landscapes, immersing readers in a rich and magical setting.
The character development is exceptional. Xingyin remains a complex and relatable heroine. The relationships, particularly those with Liwei and other returning and new characters, are deeply layered and full of emotional tension.
Some parts of the story can feel slow due to the extensive descriptions. However, these moments also enhance the epic scope of the narrative, allowing readers to fully appreciate the beauty and depth of the world Tan has created.
Immortal is a worthy sequel that expands on the world and characters introduced in Daughter of the Moon Goddess. It’s a captivating read for fans of mythology, fantasy.

Immortal is a classic Enemies to Lovers standalone set in the beautiful Celestial Kingdom world.

Overall I enjoyed this book, I thought the writing was beautiful and the story captivating, but the pace was all over the place and this made it really difficult for me to read through. It starts off fast, and then slows, and picks up again, and carries on like this going up & down throughout the book. I found the political parts where it slowed down a little dull and sluggish to read. However, the faster paced action & romance packed chapters had me hooked.

Sue Lynn Tan really is a stunning writer, with beautiful world building full of sensory details.
I really loved the tension between Liyen & The God of War, and despite her physical weaknesses I found Liyens character strong and inspiring, her passion for her Kingdoms freedom and the safety of her people truly heroic.

A brand new Romantasy with immortal Gods, plenty of suspense and intrigue, action and romance that will take your breath away. A young woman who has been sickly for most of her life, finds herself thrust into the role of leader after her Grandfather dies. The Immortal God of War seems like the easiest person to blame, so when she finds herself invited to the land of the Immortals to re pledge her people to them, she takes the opportunity to spy on him. What she did not expect was to find herself falling for him. Things however are not so simple, or as they seem, and fate takes her back home again, to her people. Danger is all around as the race that the Immortals banished are after her, and they will stop at nothing to get what they want, The God of War may be her best all in this fight. Their attraction is palpable and all consuming. This story is fantastical, well written and chock full of magic, creatures of legend and characters you will love and hate. I enjoyed it immensely and could not put it down. I think I have found a new must read author!

Thank you so much to NetGalley and harper Voyager UK for an ARC copy in exchange for an honest review.

I was so excited to return to the Immortal world Sue Lynn Tan had created with new faces and was not disappointed! I loved the God of War's personality, I loved how our perception of him was slowly changed as we got to know him. The twists and turns kept me guessing and while I had my own theories I really wasn't sure where we were going with the story. The revelations at the end were a surprise and wonderful and I am just a little disappointed it's a stand alone