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The best wrong move begins with Oliva being rejected on national television by her boyfriend Rex. Olivia decides to take trip away from everyone to recover from the aftermath of the very public breakup. On her first day of her vacation, she meets Dominick while she's trying to get into her rental place. With oliva's luck, her now ex-boyfriend is also on vacation and of course is renting the place next to hers. I enjoy the dyanmics of the characters. The book felt very long and the story probably could have ended sooner than it did.

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Thank you NetGalley & Lily Parker for the ARC.

First of all, helllooooo Dom, that man is hot!!!
I liked the story, the characters and also the side characters a lot. I knew the little juju/rex thingy when juju said Christmas but it still was well written, although I would have loved for the girls to have this conversation face to face rather than by text but again, small details.

I also really loved that it wasn't easy for Olivia just because she was dating Quinton's brother.

I feel like the chapters could be longer, sometimes we were switching chapters but the story continued right where the last one ended. For the length of the book, I think you could easily make it work with like 35 or so chapters.

Overall, good story, good writing, loveable MMC & FMC.
4 Stars.

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This book, brimming with classic rom-com tropes, is a delightful whirlwind of chemistry, charm, and irresistible tension between Olivia and Dom It’s the kind of story that leaves you laughing, swooning, and fully invested in their journey to love, all set against the dreamy backdrop of Hawaii’s tropical heat. With its perfect blend of humor, spice, and heart, it’s impossible not to root for these characters to find their happily ever after. I enjoyed it.

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It was a real page-turner that I devoured in one sitting. While I'm not keen on books referencing TikTok, this one was only mentioned once at the beginning. I was drawn to Dom's character and the mystery surrounding him. The friends and side characters were great, but I felt we only scratched the surface of their stories. I'd have loved to see more scenes with them, especially exploring Olivia's friendships with the wives of Dom's friends. More Cliff scenes would have been fantastic too. On a separate note, I had to look up what a kaftan was, but that's a minor detail. All in all, I loved this book and can't recommend it enough.

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