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I was intrigued by the premise of the story as I’m a big lover of fantasy and fantasy romance. However I’m not very impressed with the quality of the writing and the plot seems to be an amalgamation of popular tropes in various other romantasy books. Our protagonist is described as tough but comes off as your typical young ingenue who is pretty and not much else. There was a lot of telling instead of showing.

Also this is a small thing but the author hits us with graphic sex immediately upon starting the book. While I’m not put off by open door scenes the timing felt strange and I don’t know what purpose it served.

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While I enjoyed the world building and magic use in this story, I can't honestly give it more than 2 stars.

With absolutely no ill-will meant, I found the similarities between this, ACOTR and TOG too great. I also didn't enjoy the POV changes and found some of the dialogue felt very.. unnatural. It also didn't leave me with an exciting ending that has me wanting a second book.

It has all the right ingredients to be an excellent book but I feel like it needed a bit more time to cook.

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This book comes out very soon and I can not wait to have the actually copy in my hands just so I en read it again and again this book was so good. I am really glad to have gotten an early copy

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Let me start off by saying I really enjoyed this book! The world-building in Kingdom of the Two Moons is nothing short of phenomenal. If you’re not a fan of heavy world-building, this may not be for you—but personally, I loved how immersive and detailed it was. You can tell the author has laid the groundwork for (hopefully!) a book two, and I am so here for it.

Melody’s journey of fearlessness and growth was a delight to read. Watching her discover more about herself as the story progressed added so much depth to the narrative. And Riven? I love him. End of.

Of course, I can’t write this review without mentioning Caryan, our moody MMC. His character is layered with mystery, and I’m eager to get to know him better if a sequel graces our shelves.

Overall, Kingdom of the Two Moons delivered on all fronts, from captivating characters to a rich, well-built world. I’ll be keeping my fingers crossed for a second book!

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Thank you to NetGalley, the publisher and the author for this arc in exchange for an honest opinion.

I'm so so sorry...Normally, I'm a huge fan of romantasy, but this book was not for me. Please be advised that this review will contain spoilers to explain the reason behind my rating. The story was hard to get into and the world-building was confusing. Still, I wanted to give this book a chance and kept reading to see where it was going.
However, I couldn't ignore the similarities it had with ACOTAR, ToG, and Crowns of Nyaxia. Don't get me wrong, I do love a shadow daddy, it's not about that. Some characters had fangs and drank blood, so they were basically vampires like in Crowns of Nyaxia, the fmc loved painting, so she was like Feyre in ACOTAR, there were Illyrians like in ACOTAR and the fmc was half-fae like Aelin in ToG. Don't get me started on the ToG similarities...Blair was pretty much Manon with her wyvern, iron teeth and nails and her coven. In the end, even her red hair turned the colour of Manon's. Also, the mmc was kept as a slave like Amarantha and Maeve did in ACOTAR & ToG.
But that wasn't the only thing that disappointed me. The romantic tension between the characters felt weird. I couldn't figure out if Melody was going to be with Riven or Caryan and I'm not a fan of love triangles (I would've been okay with the situation if this had been why choose, but it wasn't).
50% in, I still had no idea where the story was going but kept reading. I didn't like the way Riven and Blair were treated and think they deserved better. I also kept wondering why Melody was always in need of saving. It's 2025 and there are plenty of romantasy books by female authors who empower women and write strong characters, so why not this one? I really disliked how helpless she was, even though she was half-fae and discovered that she had some magic. Instead of working as a slave "for her protection" she could've been trained.
Before you accuse me of hating this book, let me tell you that there were some parts that I liked. The portal between the realms, the modern urban setting, the prophecy and politics gave a nice touch to the story – I just don't think that it was ready for publishing yet. I know it's extremely hard to write and publish a book and I respect everyone who does that, but this one needed more time and editing.
Now comes the part that made my stomach turn...The MMC actually made me sick. Usually, what I like about romantasy is the slightly morally grey MMC who would burn the world for the fmc. He's this strong warrior everyone fears who's only sweet to the woman he loves, but in this book, the MMC is not likeable at all and treats the fmc like s***. The things Caryan did and the way he treated Melody were not okay. We need to stop romanticising that! The scene where he inflicts his magic into her and marks her with runes against her will is not okay! She repeatedly told him to stop, and he ignored it. Mind you, she already has magic. Another thing is that she only became powerful because of the magic he forced onto her, which gives a wrong message. Women are already strong. They should not be so only because of the power a man gave them.
And then there's the ending that felt like the author simply stopped writing. There wasn't even a major cliffhanger that made me curious about the next book...

Okay, everyone, that's it. You have my sincerest apologies if this review hurt your feelings. That was not my intention. My intention is to always write honest reviews and this is exactly what I did here and what I'll keep doing in the future.

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Thank you so much to NetGalley, the publishers, and author for this ARC, this has been such an amazing journey!

At the beginning of the book I felt sort of lost where I stood in the story but then there was an instant hook. Twists, she's got it, turns, curves, whatever you like she's got it and more.

The story was so good I just couldn't get enough, I needed to know more, I just couldn't stay put when I realized the book was over. Another aspect I really loved was the development of each character, the way all the political/societal systems were explained to detail, it helped so much to recall things.

Kingdom of the Two Moons is definitely a MUST READ for anyone who loves romance, fantasy, and morally grey men!!!

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This book hooked me from the first chapter. This book opens on a chapter in the POV of one of our side characters, which I thought was a rather original way of doing things. This multiple POV book was the slowest of burns in terms of romance, with some reluctant fated mates. I would definitely say book 1 in this series is fantasy with a romance subplot, rather than romantasy and I loved that. The plot was gripping with an overarching prophecy that has you guessing the whole way, all types of characters (e.g. witches, demons, vampires, and elves) and magical talents. Some can see auras, others can tell when people are lying, etc. My favorite characters were the horse demons that can also turn into sports cars and wyverns. Such a unique idea. Oh, and did I mention the MMC is a shadow daddy!? That's right. If you are looking for a morally grey shadow daddy, here you go.

The only downside is that the ending left me needing book 2 right now!

Thank you so much to the publisher and NetGalley for allowing me to read this eARC!!!

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I really liked the premise and characters in this book! I thought it was well thought out and and the worldbuilding was well done. This is not easy with a new series and I enjoyed this aspect as well. It was a little slower in the beginning but picked up as the story went on. Overall a good read!

3.5/5

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I did enjoy this book, I was unsure for the first about 30% of it but then the story really started picking up. I absolutely adored Riven, Caryan I liked, I feel like we are just getting to know the guts of his character so I can not judge too hard yet and I did like Melody. Blair I am very curious about her roll in this since her character development is just starting. The world building was a little tough to follow but was unique in its own way. There were quite a few times where things got repetitive or the bantering (which i do love some good banter) went on a little too long and the same back and fourth within the same scene (example is the banter between Melody and Blair when Blair was in the cell).

Overall, I ended up liking this book, liking it enough that I will be excited when the second one is released because I do want to continue this Journey and where it will lead.

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Thank you to NetGalley for the ARC in exchange for an honest review.

I had some mixed feelings about this book. There were a lot of aspects that I really enjoyed, but then some aspects that kept me from loving it.

The positives:
-Riven and Caryan were both very compelling, and I loved their relationship. They had both experienced trauma, and leaned heavily on each other. They were both strong, flawed, and evolving characters. I wanted more of their POV - preferably from a 1st person perspective! The author did a great job building their characters and backstories, and having their histories still reflected in their current day. And, wings!
-The variety of creatures, the cast system, the magic qualities that differ was really well thought out
-The world building
-The different types of magic
-The overall story itself was very intriguing
-MMC doing bad things for good reasons
-Love morally grey men, and having 2 to root for and get to know was great!
-the FMC building relationships with "lesser fae" creatures was lovely! Really humanizes the side characters
-the FMC lookswise being a bit more relatable/common. Not the usual super curvy, ocean eyed, stunning beauty but doesn't know it. I really appreciated this.
-the lore building was incredibly well done

The areas I had trouble connecting with:
-the constant switching from 1st person to 3rd person
-there were a lot of parallels to Sarah J Maas characters -so similar that it took me out of this story and had my mind wandering. The similarities between Blair and Manon/Bryce were particularly jarring
-also a lot of similarities between worlds, types of creatures, and storylines: the hunt for magical objects, the illyrians/nefarians, wyverns, witches having silver claws and teeth, red headed woman keeping the morally grey MMC as a sex slave, FMC being from the mortal world and painting is her escape, etc
-I did not connect to Blair or Melody at all. I didn't find them to be characters you wanted to root for or see succeed
-There was not much character development
-Caryan being kept as a sex slave, then keeping slaves of his own, did not make sense with the rest of his character, along with how cruel he is to his slaves, or keeping such a cruel and shallow court
-Never quite felt like there was a "big bad"
-Blair's backstory did not make me empathize with her, likely due to her arrogance
-I just did not find myself invested in the romance, as much as I really wanted to be
-the formatting of this was really odd - but it could absolutely be due to it being an e-ARC.

Overall, I did enjoy this book, and look forward to reading the second one. The story and the world have so much potential! And, again, am so incredibly grateful for the opportunity to read this ARC!

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3,5 / 5
Thanks to NetGalley and the author for the ARC opportunity.
I found it a bit difficult to get my attention, the story didn't suck me in as much as I expected, but I was still very curious about the characters, how they would cope with the situations and difficulties they faced. It was a bit dark for my taste, I'm used to lighter romance, but this cover is beautiful, it was the first thing that caught me :)
If there is a sequel, I'm curious to see it. I wish the author continued success and good work. :)

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I got sent this ARC and I am so thankful I did! I would give this book a 3.75-4/5🌟

This book had a lot of themes that we can recognize from other books we all seem to love and gravitate towards like Throne of Glass, ACOTAR, and Fourth Wing. I can see where that might turn some people away, but this story was still interesting.

Three words to describe this book would be twists, turns, and tension. We get to see a lot of “creatures” that we like to see in our fantasy books like fae, angels, witches, elves, demons, oracles, wyvern, and more.

This book follows the FMC, Melody. Melody has been imprisoned most of her life and used as a pawn in a game she doesn’t even know about. Until one day she decides to escape only to be captured again by a fae warrior, Riven. Riven is second in command to the Dark Lord, Caryan, of the Court of the two moons. Caryan is a very dark and broody immortal angel who basically enslaves Melody again. Melody starts to unveil the truths behind her lineage and why she was brought there.

Melody starts to become enthralled with Riven, but she also has a big attraction to Caryan. Melody and Caryan’s lives are more entangled than what it seems. As she is exposed to this new magical world she stars to awaken her own powers. She is half human and half elven, and she could possibly change the prophecy of the upcoming war.

I became very interested in all the characters, but there is another FMC that we are introduced to early on named Blair. We get to kinda see Blair backstory and I am very interested to see where her story goes and how it is entangled with the others. Blair is a witch who gives off if Manon Blackbeak and Bryce Quinlan had a baby. Her comebacks are great.

I am excited to see how this story continues! Kingdom of the two moons is out MARCH 31st!

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Thank you to NetGalley and Alexandra Thomashoff for an ebook in exchange for an honest review!

Rating: 4/5 Stars

Wow, this was a great time! I did find it a bit slow and hard to grip in the beginning, but that is normal with a new series. Super enjoyed the world building and the slow burn!

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This book took me on an intense journey, and I’m still thinking about it long after turning the final page.

The world-building is immersive, with a unique magic system that took some time to grasp, but once I settled into it, I was completely hooked. The depth and complexity of the setting added to the story’s richness, making it an unforgettable read.

Melody is the only human in a fae world, making her an outsider in every way. Her journey from fear to strength is compelling, and while she’s not the typical warrior heroine, her resilience feels refreshingly real. Alongside her, we meet Blair—fierce, angry, and layered with complexity. And then there’s Riven—dark, magnetic, and impossible to ignore.

But the true standout? Caryan. Mysterious, powerful, and deeply alluring. He commands attention in every single scene. While we never get his perspective, his presence alone is enough to make him one of the most compelling MMCs I’ve read in a long time.

The ending left me wanting more, and I can’t wait for the next book! If you love high-stakes fantasy with morally grey characters, deep world-building, and a romance that keeps you hooked, Kingdom of the Two Moons is a must-read.

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I am still reeling from the experience of reading Kingdom of the Two Moons by Alexandra Thomashoff. This fantasy novel has left me spellbound, and I'm already craving the next installment.

Riven and Melody are expertly crafted characters, with a palpable tension that simmers between them. Their romance is a slow burn that builds into a passionate and sweet relationship. I couldn't get enough of their interactions, and their love story has become my favorite of the year.

The world of Kingdom of the Two Moons is richly detailed, with a unique magic system and a complex web of characters. Alexandra Thomashoff's writing is engaging, and her ability to balance action, romance, and fantasy elements is impressive!

If you're a fan of fantasy romance, or just looking for a captivating read, Kingdom of the Two Moons is an absolute must-read. With its intricate world-building, memorable characters, and swoon-worthy romance, this book will leave you breathless and eager for more.

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I don't really know where to start with this review. Kingdom of the Two Moons is addictive, frustrating, beautiful, done-before and intriguing, all at once. It felt like a crazy blend of a bunch of other books I've read before, but with gorgeous details and descriptions, two very hot and alluring love interests, and an ending that I didn't like but still made me want to know what will happen in the next book.

I wasn't a fan of the writing style with such choppy sentences, especially at the beginning of the book. It makes for such an uncomfortable reading experience. The bouncing back and forth from paralysing fear and shyness to petulant defiance and boldness also didn't work for me. I'm all for a feisty FMC but Melody gave me whiplash, and I had zero time for Blair. I didn't enjoy her sections at all. The men, however, were fantastic - I loved Riven - and I'm intrigued to see how that little love triangle works itself out.

So, yes, there were things that irked me about this book, but at the same time it was hard to put down at times and I'm definitely curious to see how this series develops. Thank you to NetGalley and Alexandra Thomashoff for allowing me to read and review this one.

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This story took awhile for me to get into. The flow of writing, in my opinion, got better as the story progressed. I enjoyed the different point of views adding depth to each character. A love triangle is not my preferred trope but it was done in a way that had me hoping for both sides to work out. As I reached the end of the story I felt myself becoming sad that the next one wouldn’t be out sooner. Overall I enjoyed the world, there was a good amount of world building, could have been more detailed. The magic was explained and I found it interesting, especially the runes. I would recommend this story. I greatly appreciated receiving the ARC through NetGalley.

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Thank you Netgalley and publishers for an early copy of this book!

Kingdom of the Two Moons is a phenomenal beginning to a romantasy series. While intertwining many common tropes and magical aspects you’ll find in many other fantasy books, there’s a certain uniqueness that kept me absolutely enthralled from page one! I’m very attached to the characters and am dying to see what happens next. The tension is to die for, and there’s not one, but TWO morally grey mmc. Swoon.

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This book took a minute to get into. With the great detail of character development and world-building, it gets a little confusing and overwhelming at first. The pace is a bit slow, but then it picks up and becomes a book that is difficult to put down. I really enjoyed the mix of fantasy with real-world elements.

Despite a slow and somewhat confusing beginning, this book's ending is a powerhouse of dark fantasy immersion. If you love morally grey MMCs, complex love triangles, and worlds similar to ACOTAR, Throne of Glass, and The Cruel Prince, this is a book that will ultimately grip you.

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This book had me giggling, kicking my feet, and wishing everyone would kiss.

Thank you to NetGalley, the publisher, and Alexandra Thomashoff for the e-ARC! I truly loved the adventure this book took me on.

I truly think BookTok is going to love this one once they get their hands on it, because it felt like reading ACOTAR for the first time again. Elves, and witches, and vampires, OH MY!!

My biggest criticism, though, was that this book definitely feels like it took the most popular aspects of the entire SJM universe (and, I think, Fourth Wing) and combined them into one story. Examples include Starfall, Melody constantly saying, "I will not be afraid," and Blair’s silver teeth, nails, and her wyvern, and more.

Additionally, switching from first to third person, regardless of being multi-POV, drove me a little nuts, but I powered through.

The obvious references to popular books didn’t bother me as much because, at the end of the day, a lot of popular books are just referencing and retelling other stories. This also felt much more adult than the SJM universe.

One of my favorite things about this book, aside from the immersive world building, is that you can see each of our main characters grappling with their trauma and decisions in a real and honest way. It adds a lot of depth to their journeys and what makes these characters so endearing and easy to root for, regardless of their actions.

ALSO, the TENSION!!! I want all four main characters to be in a quad relationship, and you can’t stop me. They’re all hot and deserve to kiss each other.

All in all, a really fun debut novel. I will definitely be purchasing this book and I can’t wait to read more

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