Currently is an uncorrected arc, so it definitely has mistakes that need to be corrected.

The plot just kinda seems all over the place and it takes a really long time to get to the actual main point.

Some of the banter between the characters was a bit off. It has a lot of potential, just needs some work.

It was okay. For going in thinking it as a smut book, it held to the promise and gave a lot of spice and fun times.

The plot was a little strange, and I thought some of the comments were strange. Maybe even more juvenile than I'd imagine for college-aged men. And Vivian came off a little odd. There also wasn't much lead up and flirting/banter.

If you don't take it too seriously and overthink the plot and odd lines, it's just a fun and spicy book.

I just didn’t love the dialogue. I think if that had been a little better I would have liked the entirety of the story more.

It's currently an uncorrected arc, so there are multiple mistyped words like came instead of game. And other small errors. I imagine a lot of that will be corrected before release.

I think a 3 star is a fair rating and it was a good time.