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I enjoyed the book and there was ultimately nothing that made me want to DNF. However, it felt very surface level. I felt like every time I turned to a new chapter I did not know what the next scene would be. I wish there was more build up to Zoe and Josh getting together. They got together at like 50% and it was kinda boring just waiting for the project to be finished. I also wished there was more highlighting the code Zoe was writing. We learned a lot of her passion for photography, but I wanted something more. I'm annoyed that Zoe made the big gesture like she could have decided she didn't want to make a certain choice, but that did not mean that she had to forgive Josh for something without seeing if he was willing to change.

Overall it was okay, I probably won't be continuing past this book, but this book was fine.

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Our story begins with Josh finding his ex Zoe on his ranch. Josh has no idea that zoe will be staying with him and that she's helping out his family with the website for their ranch. Zoe grew up with josh and his family since she didn't have a good family life at home. They are both dealing with some trauma from their childhoods.

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im undone. we are all undone. this book undid us. in all the best romance book kind of ways. this was spot in hit all the right romance spot reads.
i wish i could give it more stars a few times during this book. just brilliant.
it has that gorgeous chemistry thing woven between true heart. its got grumpy. its got determined. its got witty banter. its got all the tender moments and push, pull or angst over where this could possibly end up moments! i love a good book where you genuinely need it to be all right in the end lol. it shows the author has done it. they have made you care.
the book gives us Zoe and Josh. Zoes is a smart lass. shes a got the skills when it comes to web design and thats what steers her to Josh's ranch. but he isnt pleased to see her.not after before when she crushed his young heart. but his sister has bought Zoe here because their ranch needs help, especially their online presence. but did she consult Josh first, did she heck.
so now what can he do but work with her,together,close. hes a professional and he DOES know their sites needs serious help.
but when they are once again spinning round each other they cant deny what they both feel .oh they will try. but this isn't just a crush or teenage first love and we move on. this is more, this is facing those smiles, those looks to each other and the feelings in the still moments.
plus Zoe has come here with her own set of rules. she doesn't do THIS. this being everything that Josh represents and lives by.
she worked so hard to leave that part of her behind and left part of her heart in doing so. she cant do that all again, she wont. but as we know from Josh. putting these two together shows Zoe more than she dared to believe. more than she wanted to dare to believe in. there shared moments are moving, moving her heart and moving here resolves.
so who will bend. will they break. can they figure this out to have a possibility of how it was always meant to be. love.
now i was rooting from this pair almost before i even read of their first interaction. and when they did meet, well, i was done for in my need for this pair to just have a happy ever after. yes i said it i wanted their happy ever after.

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Josh Cafferty jamás imaginó que volvería a ver a Zoe Wilson, la mujer que rompió su corazón adolescente y desapareció de su vida sin mirar atrás. Ahora, años después, aparece de nuevo en su rancho con una maleta en la mano, invitada por su hermana para rediseñar la página web del negocio familiar. Zoe, brillante, testaruda y todavía igual de hermosa, asegura que todo será estrictamente profesional… pero la tensión entre ellos crepita más fuerte que una tormenta eléctrica en el desierto.

Zoe tiene un solo objetivo: centrarse en su trabajo y evitar cualquier conexión emocional. El problema es que Josh, con su mandíbula cincelada, su actitud de vaquero huraño y su inesperada dulzura, despierta sentimientos que creía enterrados. Y aunque jura que los cowboys no son lo suyo, y que el rancho es solo una parada temporal antes de seguir adelante con su carrera, cada día junto a él hace que cuestionarse marcharse sea más difícil.

Mientras viejas heridas resurgen y nuevas oportunidades nacen, ambos deberán decidir si pueden superar el pasado y apostar por algo más grande que ellos: una segunda oportunidad.



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Amé que tanto la Zoe del pasado como la del presente, a pesar de amar a Josh, siempre priorizó sus sueños y entendiera que el amor no lo puede todo, especialmente cuando una de las partes no está dando su 100% en la relación y tiene otras prioridades.
Me hubiera gustado ver un poco más de arrepentimiento y sufrimiento por parte de Josh al darse cuenta de que estaba siendo un necio y que convertir el rancho en el centro absoluto de su vida fue un error que le costó al amor de su vida.




Thanks to NetGalley, the publisher and the author for the ARC in exchange for an honest.

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After finishing this book, I came to a conclusion: Josh and Zoey should have stayed exes!
I understand that Josh was under a lot of pressure to save the ranch, but many of the conflicts between them could have been resolved with an honest, direct conversation which would have spared us a lot of drama (and quite a few pages!).

The premise had potential and the writing is engaging, but the story became overly dramatic and somewhat repetitive. The final conflict, in particular, felt unnecessary and forced!

Still, for readers who enjoy romances full of emotional ups and downs, this might be an appealing read.

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I’m in love .
Undone is a small town cowboy second Chance romance.
I loved both of the main characters and their storyline.
Josh and Zoe had a summer fling as teenagers until they went their separate ways. Years later Zoe turns up on the ranch to help with the ranches website.
Along the way Zoe and Josh reignite their connection.
This such a cute romance book that it will give you all the feels.
The storyline, plot, Character development, and the authors writing style were all *chefs kiss* to me .
I’ve never read a book by Mary Sue Jackson before but now I’m an avid fan! I can’t wait for the next book !

Tropes-
Small town
second Chance
Cowboy
Sisters Bestfriend

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