The Unbalanced Equation

An enemies-to-lovers romantic comedy (Hot Mess Trilogy Book 1)

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Pub Date 15 Sep 2022 | Archive Date 5 Sep 2022

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Description

What do a bad landlord, a family wedding and a rogue Bunsen burner all have in common?

After suffering four years of scrutiny from her PhD assessor, Elizabeth Maclean believes she’s finally free of Dr Thomas Henderson’s tyranny when she begins her postdoc. But when a fire goes off in Tom’s lab (stupid undergrads) he ends up working in the same lab as Liz.

On the same bench, no less.

For three whole months.

To make matters worse – and much to their mutual surprise – Tom’s mum and Liz’s dad announce their impending marriage after a whirlwind romance. So when Liz’s landlord tells her to move out, pronto, it tips her over the edge. Desperate for a place to stay and in need of a saviour, the last person Liz expects to offer her a temporary home is Tom himself.

Now stuck working together, living together and planning their parents’ Christmas wedding together, will Liz discover that Tom’s attitude over the last four years was all a ruse to hide his true feelings? Or are the two doomed to fail in their co-existence experiment?

A smart, sexy enemies-to-lovers story perfect for fans of The Hating Game, Book Lovers and The Love Hypothesis, The Unbalanced Equation is H. L. Macfarlane’s first foray into contemporary rom-com territory. She swears there are no faeries this time.

The Unbalanced Equation is the first book in the Hot Mess Trilogy – a series of standalone but connected rom-coms set in Glasgow.

What do a bad landlord, a family wedding and a rogue Bunsen burner all have in common?

After suffering four years of scrutiny from her PhD assessor, Elizabeth Maclean believes she’s finally free of...


Advance Praise

"I pretty much inhaled this book. It ticked a lot of boxes for me: STEM/academic setting, British (Scottish) humour, a strong and varied cast of characters, and two leads who over-think and twist themselves into tortured pretzels of logic to manage and deny what is blatantly obvious to everyone around them. Oh, and plenty of steam (some of it literal)" Bookbub Reviewer

"I pretty much inhaled this book. It ticked a lot of boxes for me: STEM/academic setting, British (Scottish) humour, a strong and varied cast of characters, and two leads who over-think and twist...


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First of all, I‘m thankful that I recieved this book as an ARC in exchange for an honest review..anyway this book so cute. I haven‘t been able to put this book down at all. Honestly it kind of reminded me of „the love hypothesis“ BUT I have to admit that I like this one more. This book is such a cute love story that has so many good tropes in the book. But not only the main love story is amazing, also the side stories are amazing as well. I don‘t think that there is even one character I didn‘t like in this book, apart from Eli…fuck Eli. This book is so good and I can only recommend this one, everyone should read this once it‘s released.

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4✨

I actually adored this. The Unbalanced Equation follows Liz, a postdoc, and her grumpy and possessive former PhD assessor, Tom, who has been pining for her for YEARS. It has all my favorite tropes, including

Enemies to lovers
Age gap
Forced proximity
STEM workplace

Tom is oh so hot and Liz was such a fun female main character. Their banter was top tier and the tension was SO. GOOD.

My only complaint was the conflict, but the resolution was super cute.

If you loved The Love Hypothesis and want another fun, steamy academic workplace rom com, pick this up when it comes out on September 15th.

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Enemies to lovers is my favorite trope so I know I would like this. It's in an academic setting and both characters are SMART so it's another plus. Love the chemistry between the characters and it's fun to see how they come together. All the other characters are so much fun too. :) The entire book makes me smile and giggle and laugh! A terrific rom-com!

Thanks to the publisher for the arc.

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I really didn't know what to expect with this book and that sometimes turns into an utter delight. That's exactly how this book went for me.

Pure attraction at first sight brought Professor Thomas and a PhD student, Liz, together at a university mixer. Thomas had already made up his mind to ask Liz out when they got separated for the evening. As luck would have it, early the next morning, Thomas is asked by her superior to be Liz's PhD assessor for the next several years. What can Tom do except accept the assignment? He is trying to get his career off the ground anyway.

So Tom does what he feels he needs to do over the next few years - he is a complete jerk to Liz and he is harder on her than he has ever been in his life. He does it all under the guise of wanting to keep his distance and make her not flirt with him, but it just makes her hate him with a passion.

When she graduates, they run into each other again and are thrown together in some very unique and hilarious situations. Can Tom live with what he has done to Liz? If she finds out the truth, can she forgive him? This book is worth reading to discover the answers.

I was provided a copy of this book in exchange for an honest review. The opinions stated above are mine without biases.

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I was provided a copy of this book by NetGalley in exchange for an unbiased review.

A delightful entry into the burgeoning "STEMinist" romance catagory perfect for fans of The Kiss Quotient and any of Ali Hazelwood's work. The story is a sweet "enemies to lovers" "forced proximity" that utilises both its scientist leads and it's Scottish setting to the best of its ability. Although I wouldn't see this story reinvents the wheel for the genre, I don't think it should be asked to and The Unbalanced Equation is just a pleasant way to spend an afternoon.

I will say, I do have to agree with other readers and reviewer that the MMC is absolutely thick and 90% of the "drama" in their story is caused by this supposedly intelligent grown man acting like an outright toddler. (Oh no, I have to work with pretty girl, can't handle emotions so I will treat her like crap and make her experience in academics all that much harder because I am in fact an idiot sandwich). Despite this the book remains bingeable, charming, and a perfect quick read.

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The Unbalanced Equation offers a second chance at love / enemies to lovers with deliciously doubled forced proximity, after the dreamiest of male leads falls for and loses our—equally well educated and whip smart—heroine within the very first chapter.

I’m a sucker for a romcom with STEM based / academic settings, so I downloaded an arc of this book on a total whim. When I tell you I could not put it down—H.L. Macfarlane will have you hooked and swooning within mere minutes and then you’ll wonder where your whole night went!

If you adored and devoured the Hating Game and the Love Hypothesis, you simply must read this book… but, do note, that Unbalanced Equation offers more steam (and pop culture references) than those two books combined. You were warned and you’re welcome!

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Very fun read! I love nerdy and unique characters. The sexual tension and chemistry was sizzling. A few odd repetitive word choices (the characters "huffed" way too much), but otherwise I enjoyed it. Not a huge fan of the manipulative and inexcusable behavior, but for the sake of the plot I guess it worked. Would read this author again!

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If you like The Love Hypothesis then you definitely need to give this one a try. This book involves science backgrounds/working in a lab, but also includes some forced proximity and enemies to more. It has some unique twists to keep things humorous and is pretty steamy as well. Highly recommend. I received a complimentary copy of this book and all thoughts and opinions are my own. Pub date 9/15/2022.

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This was so entertaining and I enjoyed every second of it! I liked how the trajectory of Tom and Liz's relationship was not predictable from the start. I could not put this down!!! I am an absolute fan of books centered around scientists and it was evident that the author has a background in science, which I appreciate, since I am a scientist myself. Also, the banter and tension were EXCELLENT. A must read for those who like workplace enemies, close proximity, and steamy scenes.

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After suffering four years of scrutiny from her PhD assessor, Elizabeth Maclean believes she’s finally free of Dr Thomas Henderson’s tyranny when she begins her postdoc. But when a fire goes off in Tom’s lab (stupid undergrads) he ends up working in the same lab as Liz.
On the same bench, no less.
For three whole months.
To make matters worse and much to their mutual surprise Tom’s mum and Liz’s dad announce their impending marriage after a whirlwind romance. So when Liz’s landlord tells her to move out, pronto, it tips her over the edge. Desperate for a place to stay and in need of a saviour, the last person Liz expects to offer her a temporary home is Tom himself.
Now stuck working together, living together and planning their parents’ Christmas wedding together, will Liz discover that Tom’s attitude over the last four years was all a ruse to hide his true feelings? Or are the two doomed to fail in their co-existence experiment?
Couldn’t put it down really enjoyable read totally recommend
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What do an almost one night stand, anime, a lab fire, and a marriage between widowers have in common?
Liz and Tom-two geneticists who are forced to work together…and then live together when their parents announce their impending marriage.

This book was such a fun read. Set in rainy Glasgow, it employed two of my favorite tropes-forced proximity and enemies to lovers to build a really engaging story about two geneticists and their hesitations about love. It also had a really lovely cast of side characters that I hope we get to see more of in the rest of the series. I particularly loved that this book didn’t skimp out on the science behind what these two do in their labs everyday…nor did it skimp on the spice ❤️‍🔥

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Forced proximity
Enemies to lovers-esque
He's nice to everyone but her
Tension
Some decent spice
Scottish main characters - I really hope they do an audio version of this book with proper Scottish narrators because that would be amazing!

This is about a couple in STEM but I think that is where the love hypothesis similarities end.

Tom and Liz were equally endearing and annoying. There was a lot of anime talk in the book (which was way over my head). Tom had some pretty big red flags which I am choosing to overlook.

Jenny and Jim were so lovely together, they made my heart happy.

"Even if it's bad it's still sex. And trust me...it won't be bad."
"How can you be so sure?"
"Because I've liked you for so long I have your entire damn body memorised. So let me take the lead, if that will ease your nerves."

Thank you to the Author, Publisher and Netgalley for the ARC.

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I adored this book it’s a must-read I loved the banter between Tom and Elizabeth and the fact that he fell for her first and has been in love with her for years. I love all the people in the lab and how they know something is going on between them and the aspects of STEM being a bio major myself who’s applying to med school STEM romances have a special place in my heart. I also loved Tom meddling into Liz’s life and trying to find ways to keep her with him it was hilarious.

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What do you do with a book that you devoured almost holding your breath? I know, you give it five stars. But what if the mmc deserves a smack on the head or even a kick in the nuts? 🤷🏻‍♀️

Tom and Liz first met on a department social. The attraction was instant, but they were interrupted and nothing happened. They were both hoping to meet again but the next day Tom found out he would be Liz’s PhD assessor. So no dating. And the total moron that he was, he figured the best course of action would be to be a total dick cause otherwise there would be flirting. 🤦‍♀️

Fast forward four years, Liz finished her PhD despite Tom’s best efforts and she is more than happy to be done with him. But life has a few surprises: it turns out they are now working together. Then Liz’s dad announces that he is marrying Tom’s mom. That’s not all! The final blow: Liz is being kicked out of her apartment. So she is temporarily moving in with her dad and his fiancée. Who are - yes you guessed correctly- temporarily moving in with Tom. Yaaaay, all four of them under one roof!

Sounds insane and contrived and all, but don’t let it deceive you, this book is amazing! Liz and Tom were great; their dynamic was just pure pent up sexual tension and I loved it 😍🌶🥰. The chemistry and banter were so well done!

What I didn’t love was all the manipulative moves, especially on Tom’s end. Like dude!! Not sure I would even want to talk to you after that shit show! Liz wasn’t without a fault either, but Tom really overdid it big time.

But then he melted my heart completely when Liz was on her period and he took care of her 🫠

I was about to rate it five stars but there’s this thing I’m allergic to. I can’t read public love declarations cause I cringe so hard I spill my drinks. So four stars it is. Four and a half maybe?

Anyway, read this book people, it’s so much fun!

Thank you NetGalley for the chance to read this book in exchange for an honest review.

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"That’s the thing about hindsight: nobody has it when they actually need it."

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He falls first, and make it nerdy.

This was your typical semi-cringey, mostly funny rom-com that follow (for me) two very relatable nerds. Whether it be their shared love for anime, very entertaining bander, or their shared passion for science, none of it let me down.

I haven't been able to sit down and read a book in a while because of how busy the summer has been (audiobooks are my bread and butter), but I was happy to get into bed with this every night. To hang out with Liz and Tom and see what they came up with next.

I also just adored that it didn't push the normalcy of everyone (WOMEN!!!) wanting only marriage and a baby out of life. Liz and Tom are both so passionate about their life in academia and science and aren't looking for more than that. They're both so filled up on that part of their life that they just don't want the rest, and they talk about it many times throughout the book. It's one of the reasons why the ending is oh, so sweet. Family is what you choose to define it as, and seeing them love life outside of the expectations of others... it's inspiring. And not something you see in books a lot.

The only thing I didn't love was the parents addition to the storyline. It made both of them feel much younger than they were to have their parents around all the time, especially since so much of it revolved around them planning a wedding for them.

Make room on your TBR for a romcom perfect to start you back into school for the semester on September 15. I hope it's a nice little escape, just like it was for me. And thank you NetGalley for the chance to read this book in exchange for an honest review.

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We follow the ins and outs of Liz and Tom as life throws everything at them. Tom treats Liz harshly for teh 4 years of her PHD and just as she thinks she is away from him, the book starts as they discover their remaining parents are in love and getting married,
Some great banter from Tom, Liz and Liz’ dad - a real star for me in the book. The sexual tension is strong and well dealt with and the turns are unusual but work well.
The book had a great first half and ending, but took a long time to do the unravelling.

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This book was such a fun read! It was super engaging and hard to put down. This had all of my all time favourite tropes so it wasn't a surprise to me that I enjoyed it. I loved the banter between Liz and Tom and we love a women in STEM. My absolute favourite part was that Tom fell first. and Liz was such badass main character who will be an inspiration to all women who read this.

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This book was such a fun read!! I loved everything about this book. The characters were so authentic and I especially loved the chemistry between Liz and Tom. Their relationship was such a whirlwind, but that made the book so much more enjoyable. The character development between the two was probably my favorite, as I always love the enemies to lovers trope. There are so many genuine funny parts within the story, as both main characters are super smart and witty. I would definitely love to read more from H.L. Macfarlane!

Thank you, BooksGoSocial, for this copy in exchange for my honest review.

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FOUR STARS!!!

“because I never knew how much I was waiting for you until I met you. How pathetic is it that I didn’t realize how lonely I was?”

SUMMARY: Thomas Henderson and Elizabeth (Liz) Maclean meet one night at a mixer for Liz’s undergrad class. Thomas is a professor who seems to catch Liz’s eye. After a few mimosas they start talking and really getting along. Orange juice is spilled on them and they to to Thomas’s office to clean up, once there Thomas gives Liz a new pair of clothes and then she leaves. Thomas since that moment had a crush on Liz. He wanted to find her and tell her the next day, since he kept and washed her clothes he had a reason to see her, but he finds out he will be her assessor. After that Thomas treats Liz terrible to avoid a bond. Four years later Liz and Thomas are brought back together because their parents are getting married. While Liz hates Tom she has no other place to live besides Tom, and Tom is now sharing a bench with her in the lab because his lab burned. Through all of this Tom still has feelings for Liz. Tom and Liz work through their relationship with many good and some bad events.

CHARACTERS-

Elizabeth Maclean: I really liked Liz she felt very real. She was a total nerd and it was really cute for the storyline. Since Liz was dealing with the grief and a dead parent she never really knew a healthy way to cope with problems, she lashes out. Her overcoming this and being able to love and trust was really heartwarming and I LOVED how she developed. Although towards the end I got a little angry with how she dealt with the Tom situation (wont go in depth bc this is mainly spoiler free) I completely understand why she acted the way she did. She was so finny though and her speech at her parents wedding really made me smile. ALSO!! Liz is a woman in STEM and that was so amazing yo read about. Liz was also so sweet and oblivious she made me kick and squeal, she never knew when people liked her.

Thomas Henderson: Tom was such a character. He was the biggest flirt and so charming while also having an amazing sense of humor. He’s also a complete nerd and neat freak which fitted this chaotic mind. Tom is the definition of boy obsessed he was utterly obsessed since day one. Also, he is super rich and has no problem making jokes about his LOADS of money, it becomes funny how rich he is. Tom was also dealing with the grief of a dead parent but he learned how to cope much faster since he had his best friend Daichi along with him. Every-time Tom spoke I smiled or was just in awe by him. While he did have his negatives I truly believe he proved himself worthy. The main negative about him was his manipulation of Liz’s situation so he could be around her longer to prove he was worth her love but overall he just didn’t know how to handle the situation.

Both of Liz and Thomas’s alive parents were so lovely but Liz’s dad took some warming up to because of how badly he treated Tom! BUT it was completely understandable why he treated him like he did at first.

THOUGHTS: Overall I really liked this book and thought it was for the most part a super cute cheesy romcom. The chemistry the characters had was undeniable- everyone in the lab felt it except them. The side characters were all so different and lovely that the story simply wouldn’t be the same without them. Thomas being such a romantic was so cute I couldn’t hold in my smile. The gestures he would do for Liz were SO cute and when Liz bought Tom a grow light and flower I nearly cried. The tropes in thus book absolutely SERVED I couldn’t be any happier with them. The boy obsessed, forced proximity, semi enemies to lovers and workplace romance were all so perfect. I absolutely loved everything. The only reason this book wasn’t a complete five stars was because sometimes the characters felt a little younger than their age and the miscommunication which isn’t a big thing for me.
CONCLUSION: In conclusion, The Unbalanced Equation was a super cute, light hearted, quick read that I would recommend to ANYONE. The chemistry between characters was unbeatable and the storyline/plot was simply perfect. The scenery of the fall and winter season in Glasgow was so pretty and I absolutely loved reading all about it.

Thank you so much to NetGalley and BooksGoSocial for this ARC in exchange for a completely honest and full review!

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I thought this book was so cute!! I loved all the tropes! Enemies to lovers, STEM. I loved the chemistry and banter between Liz & Tom and enjoyed watching their relationship grow. I really liked this book and finished it in one sitting!

Thank you to NetGalley and BooksGoSocial for this arc!

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Rating: 5 stars

I loved this book from the very first chapter. I was instantly drawn in from the first time we meet Liz and Tom and from the get go I was rooting for them.

I thought the characters were set up really well, I felt like I was constantly learning new things about the characters which made them more complex and interesting as the book went on. I was a big fan of Liz and Tom straight away, even though the two of them do make some questionable decisions at times throughout the book, I always found myself rooting for them.

This book is everything I could have wanted in a romance. I loved the dynamic Liz and Tom had together but also with other characters, I loved Jenny and Jim from the second we met them and how the two of them were constantly wanting the best for their kids.

I already know this is a book I will go back and read time and time again, H L Macfarlane has written an incredible book which I found difficult to put down as I constantly wanted to know what was going to happen next.

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As a former science teacher, anything dealing with science is something that I can get on board with. This has some of my favorite tropes such as enemies to lovers and forced proximity. It was a read that I was able to get through in one sitting! The only thing I am not a huge fan of is the age gap trope, but that is just me. I would recommend this book!

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Thank you to Netgalley, H.L. Macfarlane and BooksGoSocial for allowing me to read and review this book before publishing.

This book follows Liz and Tom who originally met at a social event for the university that Liz was attending for her PhD and when Tom worked. Liz and Tom hit it off at the event and happened to get a little drunk together when they both got spilled on by someone carrying a tray of mimosas. Liz and Tom go to get cleaned up and Tom considers asking Liz for her number until she disappears.
Flash forward 4 years and Liz hates Tom, he has made her life a living hell after he ended up being the assessor for her PhD. Little did Liz know that Tom was being terrible to her because he felt he needed to in order to avoid his feelings for her. What's happening 4 years later is Tom and Liz find out that both of their widowed parents are getting married, Tom's lab got burned down and he has to work next to Liz, and Liz got kicked out of her apartment and has to move in with Tom, his mom and Liz's dad. To say it's a mess is an understatement. Will Tom and Liz be able to tolerate living and working together? Going to have to read to find out.
This book was so fun it was a great STEM based romcom. Liz and Tom are certainly enemies to lovers and the process of them figuring out that they are not enemies was SO funny. I would describe this book to people as mix between The Love Hypothesis and Book Lovers. This book lived up to all of my expectations and if you like romcoms I would recommend picking it up!

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This is the steamy love/hate story of two scientists who learn through a dinner that their parents are getting married. They are thrust back into each others lives with no escape; living together and working together.

The book is written from Liz and Tom’s perspective, which is something I really love. Knowing what’s going on, in both characters minds really helps to understand the story. I also really enjoyed the sarcasm/banter in the book with the main characters as well as the best friends of the main characters.

There was LOTS of spiciness and sometimes it was a little much but it was clear there was a ton of tension between the characters. There was lots of anime talk which if you are into, will love…but I am not.

Overall I really enjoyed it.



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I really enjoyed The Unbalanced Equation. I thought it was a really cute romcom book. It definitely kept me interested and was and easy read. 'I liked that the main characters, Dr. Liz and Professor Tom, work in STEM and that the setting was in Scotland. I also found their love of the same nerdy things to be very relatable. The fact that they are forced together just adds to the tension between the two as well.

I think it could kinda be considered enemies to lovers although the enemies thing tends to be more one sided. I do love the banter between the two characters. I also liked that she was kinda on the grumpy side. I found that very relatable. I would definitely recommend this book to anyone who likes romcoms and banter. I would put this one on my shelf between the Love Hypothesis and The Hating Game.

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I loved this book it was so cute and it had some of my favorite tropes in it
Age gap
Enemies to lovers
Tom and Liz are so cute and if you loved the Love Hypotheses please check this book out

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🧪The Unbalanced Equation🧪

⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

After suffering four years of scrutiny from her PhD assessor, Elizabeth Maclean believes she’s finally free of Dr Thomas Henderson’s tyranny when she begins her postdoc. But when a fire goes off in Tom’s lab (stupid undergrads) he ends up working in the same lab as Liz.

On the same bench, no less.

For three whole months.

Read if you like:
🧪enemies to lovers trope
🧪STEM
🧪The Love Hypothesis
🧪Age gap romance
🧪Forced proximity

I thought this was such a fun book! I loved the STEM aspect and the Glasgow setting. There were several cute twists throughout the book. I really enjoyed Liz’ character!

Grab a copy of “The Unbalanced Equation” available September 15, 2022!

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Tropes: enemies to lovers, age gap, forced proximity, workplace

Once I read the first line of this novel, I knew this book was written for a reader exactly like me - someone who enjoys a hysterical rom-com.

Even though I understood none of it, I loved the STEM rep in this novel. The author (to me at least) really sold the two STEM academics for me. I enjoyed their banter throughout and the tension between the two characters as they tried to figure out their feelings. I really saw myself as Daichi just anxiously waiting for them to get together!

I didn’t really like the addition of the parents relationship, it felt kind of awkward and unrealistic - I could’ve done with the lab being their only mode of forced proximity. Also did not like the plot line of Tom manipulating Liz’s entire life so she could remain in his life. I appreciated the character growth throughout the novel though and the importance of familial relationships.

While I appreciated all the anime references (and even the one HSM3 reference!!!), I can acknowledge it could have been too much for a reader who had no interest in something like that. In the end this book was a good lighthearted read for me!
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thank you net galley and the publisher for allowing me access to the unbalanced equation in exchange for an honest review.
i love an easy rom-com novel like the unbalanced equation! this enemies to lovers book was a fast and enjoyable read for me! liz and tom are a complex and complicated pair but the chemistry between them was undeniable. i thoroughly enjoyed witnessing the mc’s self reflect on their own questionable actions which allowed for a clear opportunity for redemption. i was disgusted by the mmc throughout the majority of the novel but the writing allowed me to genuinely believe his promise of changing his actions moving forward.
i would 100% recommend this novel to other romance lovers!

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I'm a sucker for a good rom-com, and this read delivered that and then some! From sweet to spicy, we got a little bit of everything in this book. As readers we were given glimpses into Liz and Tom's lives as scientists, but also as they tackled more emotional topics such as helping their parents navigate life after loss.

Their quick wit and banter was fun, and I often found myself either laughing out loud or left with my mouth wide-open! The author did a fabulous job of bringing the scenes to life with her descriptions, and the characters were well developed. This was a quick read for me, and overall I enjoyed it!

[I received an ARC from NetGalley in exchange for my honest review.]

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The Unbalanced Equation follows the story told from the viewpoints of Tom and Liz, a pair of nerdy geneticists at the University of Glasgow. They meet just as Liz starts her doctorate and by a twist of fate, Tom ends up as her PhD assessor and therefore can’t chase after her to ask her out after a very Notting-Hill-esque orange juice spill moment. Fast forward 4 years to the end of her studies and an accident burning down Tom’s lab throws them together once more. But after 4 years of being horrendous to her, can he repair the damage?

A fantastic story set in the nerdy world of Uni science (a subject close to my heart!). It was great to read the biology parts and not wince at all the inaccuracies! For the non-scientists though, the science isn’t overwhelming. I wasn’t sure I’d get into the story for the first couple of pages as it was written quite formally from Tom’s POV, but thankfully as we get to know him, it’s obvious that it’s just the way he thinks when he’s being professional.

The story is engaging, the characters flawed but likeable and the sexual tension is sizzling! I read the second half in an evening as I couldn’t put it down. Overall a fantastic book and I can’t wait to read the follow up set in the same world.

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A mean, sarcastic sense of humor, a string of wrongdoings and misunderstandings, and a bite of spice lead the way to romance in this book. The biting sense of humor definitely had me chuckling in places and the sweet moments took off the edge from some of the harder moments of the book. Liz did tend to come across as a little bratty in the way she sometimes treated Tom, while some of it was deserved, she also took it up a notch more than I liked at times. I enjoyed the book overall and I'm glad I was able to read an ARC of it through netgalley.

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I absolutely loved this one! STEM/academia setting and enemies to lovers with a bit of spice thrown in is always a recipe for success in my eyes.

There are some parts where the MCs absolutely infuriated me with their childish behaviour (Tom this is directed at you) but overall it was a fantastic read.

Like the Love Hypothesis and My Mechanical Romance, once I picked this book up I could not set it down. I highly recommend it!

Thanks to NetGalley for providing this ARC!

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Wow, just wow.
I totally demolished this book in less than 24 hours. I couldn't put the book down, I haven't read a romcom for a while and this is definitely what I needed to freshen things up.
What's not to love in this book - you get everything.
☆ Enemies to Lovers
☆ Age gap relationships
☆ Spicy
☆ Amazing Characters 👏
As a reader you want to see what's happening and trust me - I saw everything #notashamed
I just want to say thank you to H. L. Macfarlane for letting me read this ARC, it was amazing, I loved your writing style and I'd love to read more from you! Also thank you for netgalley for allowing me to have access to this amazing book!
4/5 stars ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

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Okay... this book was so close to 5 stars for me but the first couple chapters just knocked a star off :( The first few chapters just felt a little cringe ad almost like they were written by someone completely different... and a bit wattpaddy (if that's a word) but the rest of it a loved!

The tension in this book was amazing and it was a slow burn without being toooo much of a slow burn as there was lots of fiery tension and moments before we hit the burn of the slow burn!

Fans of The Love Hypothesis will adore this one!

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What a fun story The Unbalanced Equation is ! My very incredibly nerdy and dorky heart appreciated this rom com.

This story is about a stem researcher lady named Liz and a jerk of a scientist named Tom. After a few years of bad blood between the two, circumstances has them reluctantly orbiting back to each other. Liz is rightfully still furious and burned after what transpired between them in the past. Tom knows that his past actions will leave no room for his heart to get one last chance with her. In a desperate attempt to help them both move forward, he sets in place a motion of events that could potentially undo everything. When the secrets catch up, will it bring them closer or tear them apart for good ?

Some of the tropes are :
- Gumpy vs gumpy
-forced proximity
- 11 year age gap
- nerdy romance/humor
-second chance love
-academia romance

I would rate this 3 chilli peppers out of 5 for the steam. There aren't many sex scenes but the ones we got were great and the chemistry between Tom and Liz is undeniable. Also...Tom is a God in the bed room...lucky Liz !

Even though this love story is clearly about Tom and Liz ,we also get a huge glimpse in the love lives of their parents and this was one of my favorite parts about this story. It was so sweet and added a less selfish side to Tom that we didn't see often.

Unbalanced Equation is told in dual points, the chapters were easy to read, and flowed well together. It held my ADD attention from start to finish. Having things in common such as anime, nerd humor, ramen, ect made it easy to relate to the couple and quite enjoyable.

We were constantly told how horrible Tom was to Liz in their past but never really shown. I think I would have felt more feelings if we'd been given the chance to watch some of the events unfold.

Overall this is a pretty solid rom com and I look forward to reading H.L Mcfarlane's other novels.

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This book was super cute and easy to read. It isn’t a deep romance or anything, it’s the perfect light-hearted RomCom.

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This book was incredible! Liz and Tom are the perfect stem couple and you cannot tell me otherwise. This book at times reminded me of the Love Hypothesis in the points that it is a stem romance and the man falls first but it by no means felt like the same story. I loved how our two main characters shared a similar love of anime and the dual POV throughout this book. I will be reading more from this author in the future.

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Dr. Tom Henderson is a wealthy Scottish professor of genetics at a university in Glasgow. Elizabeth Maclean is a PhD candidate in the same department where she meets Tom at a new student mixer. The two are immediately attracted to one another but Tom is surprised to find he has been assigned as Liz's assessor a few days later. To cover his attraction to Liz, Tom is exceedingly tough during his appraisal of her work, angering Elizabeth. Years later, the paths of Tom and Liz cross once again after a series of mishaps, including Tom's lab burning down and their parents announcing a surprise engagement. Liz and Tom once again face their attraction to each other but this time with years of animosity between the two.

This book is definitely for fans of The Love Hypothesis. It has the academia vibes, small age gap (a decade), size difference kink, sexy times in a hotel room at a conference, and flirty banter. It has a leg up over The Love Hypothesis in the steam department because it features multiple sex scenes (including a squirming-in-my-panties embarrassing moment where Liz is interrupted masturbating). While it is no Pride & Prejudice, it is certainly a fun enemies to lovers read. If you're not a fan of the miscommunication trope, BEWARE. It is full of it. Tom and Liz are both pretty immature and I was rolling my eyes toward the end, but overall it was a fun, sexy read with great visual descriptions and includes scenes at Halloween and Christmas (which is a cozy bonus in my book!).

CW: discussions of loss of parent to cancer

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Thank you NetGalley for this ARC. This is by far my favorite Rom-Com Ever!

If you loved the love hypothesis and you are a fan of the enemies-to-lovers trope, appreciate great banter and fall for flawed fictional men, just read this book. You would do yourself a huge favor!

I was not even 20% into it that I decided to preorder the physical copy because I HAVE TO OWN IT!

I am still shell shocked at how good this was. The characters, the plot, the setting, the references. Oh, so so soooooo good!

The author did a fantastic job with the dual POV, especially with Tom, with him she created a real man with good and bad. There is a lot of character growth too in between the lines and the cast is awesomely balanced.

I can’t pinpoint to a scene in particular I loved above the others because the whole book was fantastic. For me it had it all and I am so happy to see these characters again in her next book even if not as the main couple!

This is the book for you if you like:
- Enemies-To-Lovers
- Forced Proximity (work together/live together)
- Class difference
- Age Gap (11 years)
- Dual POV
- Great Banter
- LGTBQ+ rep
- Set in Scotland 😍
- Steamy

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First, a sincere thank you to the publisher for providing me with this ARC in exchange for an unbiased review.

This title was a wonderful addition into the growing STEM Romance genre. The Unbalanced Equation is a sweet "Steminist" "enemies to lovers" "forced proximity" romance that highlights it's incredible Scottish setting and scientist leads in a way that echoes the "grumpy/sunshine" trope found in Ali Hazelwood's The Love Hypothesis. Although I wouldn't say this title is making new ground in the genre, I think The Unbalanced Equation does the genre and tropes justice.

The characters are smart, funny, and absolutely adorable together. I will say that the male main character Tom fed heavily into adult toddler behavior that made it feel more like a bully romance than an enemies to lovers at times. Overall, the banter and steamy scenes really made The Unbalanced Equation stand out as a delightful romance read.

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This was SUCH a good story! I really enjoyed the enemies to lovers and guy falls first. Those tropes while also taking place in the workplace, such a good pairing. This gave me Love Hypothesis vibes, in the best way. I've never read anything by this author and can't wait to continue with other stories!

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I enjoyed 'The Unbalanced Equation' so much! This was the perfect sort of romance and read for me following some heavier reads. It definitely brought some desperately needed fun into my reading.

The story as a whole felt satisfying the entire way through. Every plot point stayed true to the characters, right through until the epilogue. I don't often like epilogues in romance books because I find then predictive and repetitive, but the epilogue in this novel felt like a wonderful way to wrap up the story between Tom and Liz.

Saying this, even the spicy scenes stayed true to both of the main characters which is such an important thing for me. It made the sex scenes read that much more intimate becuase the characters didn't totally transform into different people the moment the spice began. If you are looking for a romance book which is equal parts plot/romance and spice, then I think this is the solution to your search!

I also thought that the theme of second-chance-romance throughout this book was such a massive part of the book, even extending into the side characters. It's super well done and enjoyable and thankfully lacking the excessive flashbacks other second chance romances lean on.

I will definitely be keeping an eye out for H. L. Macfarlane's next romance publication after enjoying this one so much!

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A fun read with the classic enemies to lovers trope. The first person POVs was well done and it was easy to distinguish the different voices. It was also great to have a strong female lead who never backed down.

I received a complimentary copy of this book through NetGalley. The opinions expressed in this review are completely my own

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Lizzie. Tom. These two are so incredibly SMART, yet so simple minded when it comes to the heart. Life could have been so much easier for them to just work together, but no - they had to have feelings for each other! And then their parents drop the bombshell! It was an entertaining ride. I enjoyed it very much. Even when I wanted to slap either of them! haha
You know the story - meet cute, hate, like, love, hate and love again. It's just a new setting, one that I haven't read before.
Rom-coms. Such great entertainment. I highly recommend "The Unbalanced Equation".

Thank you allowing me to read an advanced copy.

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LOVE IT!! I absolutely devoured this one. I like a good romance with strong characters and this one was it. Loved the strong female character with a mind of her own. The STEM setting was a huge plus for me along with the context of their age gap and academic equation. The tropes in this book are brought out beautifully which was another plus.

The book has good supporting characters and the first few pages draw you in immediately. Loved the writing style and the witty banter of the characters make you laugh. Absolutely recommend this one to everyone looking for a cute romantic book.

Thank you NetGalley and BooksGoSocial for this ARC in exchange for an honest review.

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I recieved this book on netgalley for arc in exchange of an honest review. This book is definitely for a science nerd like me. Though somebody with zero science interest can also enjoy the book. Loved the author's style of writing. If you fantasy a work romance book then thats a plus with this one. A good romantic novel with crazy anime lovers.!!

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Tom is a professor who is attracted to Liz, one of his new PhD students. This is the first time that the handsome, wealthy, eligible professor is attracted to his student. In an effort to discourage any relationship, Tom is really hard on his criticism of Liz’s work. She can’t wait to be rid of him. When Tom’s lab has a fire in it, he is given a place in his friend’s lab only to find he will be sharing the lab bench with Liz. It gets worse when Liz heads out to meet her dad for dinner, and Tom heads out to meet his mother. Both are shocked to find they are holding hands with each other and hearing about an impending wedding. Tom’s mother is having a property remodeled for her impending marriage and will be moving into Tom’s large house until it is ready. His mother suggests Liz move in there also to save money and give them all a chance to get to know each other. I loved the characters in this book. Tom is the perfect privileged man who has no clue on how to win over a woman. Liz is extremely independent and quick to get angry with Tom even though she cares for him. Their parents are great examples of love and patience. Great book, great romance.

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If you’re a fan of the love hypothesis, you’ll want to read this.

A stem romance with a grumpy man that has lots of tension, chemistry and steam. I loved the dynamic between the couple. It was full of banter, quick wit, and hot chemistry. It has unlikely roommates, forced proximity, hate to love, opposites attract and it was so much fun to read, It’s enemies to lovers, former professor and PHD student unlikely to fall in love but they do. There is boy obsessed, pining for years and the slow burn tension between them kept me turning page after page. It’s a workplace romance in academia and it was so much fun to read. I loved Tom and his grumpiness. Such a great steamy and chemistry filled romance book with a STEM plot.

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Oh my goodness!! I am in love with H L Macfarlane's writing style in the Unbalanced Equation. For starters this book cover is absolutely adorable and it immediately gave me Love Hypothesis vibes. Because of how much I love and am obsessed with characters in STEM romance books, it was easy for me to jump right into a book that had the same vibes. Liz is this sweetheart character who is working on her postdoc and finally free of Tom, her assessor during her PhD. Obviously all hell breaks loose and the two of them are very much forced to be around each other ALL THE TIME. Not only is this an enemies to lovers romance book but it has my other favourite trope of forced proximity. Because of how much time they spend together, the readers get to see and experience their fire fuelling chemistry. Tom is definitely complex and you can't help but love his grumpy ruse when it comes to being around Liz. The two of them are addicting to read about, I cannot get enough of how much I really enjoyed their story. If your looking for a book that has STEM vibes with forced proximity trope this is definitely the book for you!

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Let me start by saying this: THIS IS THE BEST ROM-COM I’VE READ, LIKE, EVER. It was such a surprise! It has everything you can hope for: it’s funny, sweet, sexy and just AMAZING. If you’ve loved The Love Hypothesis, you HAVE to read this! It has a similar feel, but it’s (dare I say) even BETTER.

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Decided to read this because of the cute cover. Yes I am one of those people who 100% judge a book by its cover. I did appreciate the TW since it is something I am currently going through with my own mother.

I wouldn’t necessarily call this enemies to lovers. Tom just decided to be a jerk imo for no reason especially since it all worked out in the end.

Nevertheless this was a 5 star read for me. I couldn’t put it down and read it one day. I loved it way more than The Love Hypothesis.

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Enemies to lovers
He falls first
Forced proximity

Honestly, what else is there to say? This was one of my fav books of the year so far. The banter, spice, and overall story line were AMAZING. Liz and Tom meet at a university mixer and sparks fly, after some misunderstandings and unfortunate fate interference, Tom is assigned to be Liz's PhD assessor and he decides the only logical thing to do is be an asshat.... men, I swear.

Fate again interferes when Tom and Liz arrive to the same dinner to learn that their parents are getting married, and they're going to be forced together whether they like it or not. Liz decides that she's going to make the best of the situation, (for her anyways) and get back at Tom for all of the crap he gave her as her accessor. And queue the spice cuz that kicks up about ten notches when she is forced into living with him.

Such an amazing read, as previously said if you loved The Love Hypothesis you'll love this!

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I am a sucker for an enemies to lovers romance! Tom is a hot mess - in that he makes horrible decisions in the name of love. Liz is a spitfire who hates Tom, but when they are thrown together time and again, she realizes he isn’t the guy she thought he was.

If you love academia romances, this is a must read! It was sweet, steamy, and a fantastic romcom. (It is more steamy than spicy, but there are a few spicy chapters…and they are deliciously spicy!)

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My Review
I Received an ARC from NetGalley. Book comes out15 Sep 2022
Elizabeth ‘Liz’ and Thomas ‘Tom’ started off on the right foot when they first met, but something happened and they were soon on the wrong foot with each other. Liz is happy she is going to be free of Tom and his hateful ways since she is starting her postdoc. However, a fire in Tom’s lab puts an end to this happiness and forces Tom to be in Liz’s lab! They even have to share a bench! If that wasn’t bad enough, both Tom and Liz find out that their parents-Tom’s mum and Liz’s dad announce their impending marriage after a whirlwind romance and lastly since trouble usually comes in threes, Liz ends up moving into Tom’s house!
Forced proximity, age gap and enemies to lovers are some of my favorite tropes. My little heart did a happy dance when I realized this book had all three. I really appreciated that both main characters were smart. I loved Tom and Liz’s banter, as well as the attraction and tension between them. Tom is a bit of a grump. At the same time, he is so hot, sexy, sweet and charming. Liz is fun and a nice balance for Tom. I will confess to wanting to smack Liz a time or two for some of the things she does to Tom. A few times, I couldn’t help but think he didn’t deserve that. The next minute I was back laughing at their banter and what he does in retaliation.
Another thing I loved about this book was their interactions with their colleagues and parents. It was nice to see Tom’s mother doing her best to get to know Liz and see Jim, Liz’s father, slowly having to revise his opinion of Tom. After all, Liz had pretty much made him out to be a monster. As for the colleagues, they were fun. It was also nice to get a glimpse into what goes on inside labs. I was so happy that the lab aspect didn’t bog down the book, but rather added to the flavor of the book.
All in all, The Unbalanced Equation by H. L. MacFarlane was a sweet book. With just enough steam, banter and laugh out moments to keep me entertained from beginning to end. This was a quick, fun and easy read for me. Do I want to continue the trilogy? Yes, please. Would I read more from this author? Certainly.
Until next time, peace and happy reading.

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The blurb for this book with the recommendation to read if you like The Love Hypothesis was absolutely spot on, first and foremost.

This book had my favorite tropes- both MCs are *both* sunshine *and* grumpy, and the forbidden love situation of graduate school and professors. And on top of having these tropes, the author absolutely nailed them with an original, convincing, and incredible hot and heavy story. I was on my toes for most of the book, and the slow burn absolutely killed me, in the best way possible. This is a 5 star recommendation from me.

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Liz and Tom have the perfect meet - cute at the student - staff mixer for first year PhD students that includes mimosas, rescuing a maiden, spilled drinks and leads to changing clothes and lingering looks in Tom’s office. Tom ends up becoming Liz’s PhD assessor and any hopes of a romantic entanglement have flown out the window in lieu of professionalism.
Four years later Tom and Liz are thrown together again without the student/professor dilemma in the way. But Tom has ruined any chances of getting to know Liz better or become anything other than colleagues due to the way he treated her during her PhD assessments.
Living in the same house, helping their parents with the upcoming wedding and working next to each other have their sexual chemistry and frustrations running high.
This is a great enemies to lovers rom-com that I would recommend to anyone looking for a snarky read!

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Thank you to H.L. Macfarlane, BooksGoSocial, and NetGalley for an eARC in exchange for an honest review. The Unbalanced Equation comes out September 15, 2022!

The Unbalanced Equation stars postdoc Liz, who has finally has her dream job in a microbiology lab at the school she got her doctorate at. Everything is amazing until after an unfortunate fire, she is stuck working right next to the man who made her years getting her PhD a nightmare, enter Tom. Add in the complication that the day they find out they are sharing bench space, they also find out that their widowed parents are not only dating but are actually getting married. And because bad things come in threes, let's add in the fact that Liz has been kicked out of her apartment and now has to live not only with her dad and Tom’s mom, but also has to live with Tom himself. What really complicates is the fact that Tom does not dislike Liz at all, in fact he has been falling for her for years. Will the two be able to get through the years of animosity and finally get the ending they both have longed for.

I thought this book was so cute, but also incredibly sexy. I loved that both characters were flawed and that by the end they were able to at least start the journey to growing for themselves and each other. The reason I didn't rate this as a five star read for me was because I thought there was a lot of added conflict in the form of different men popping up with feelings in Liz’s life. They literally come popping out of the woodwork (I know that's an exaggeration, but still). It does have my new favorite scene where one character takes care of the other, specifically when the female character has her period. It was honestly so cute and exactly how I would want to be spoiled. I really loved this book and would recommend it to friends and family and really anyone who loves romance.

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*Arc from NetGalley*

Pub date: September 15,2022

I ended up enjoying this book a lot more than I thought I was going to through the first chapter. I’m not a huge anime fan so they lost me a little bit with all that talk, but it doesn’t take away from the story for me.

I fell in love with these two and read the book in 2 days while still having to work 😝 so I definitely recommend picking it up when it’s released!

Liz and Tom are both researchers who have had a rocky past over the last 4 years. They find their way back in each other’s orbits and chaos ensues!

Enemies to lovers. Forced proximity. One bed, forced a bit?? (The conference 🥵)

4.5 🌟 for me on this one! Fantastic read, and I look forward to reading more from H.L. Macfarlane!

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Absolutely incredible. Loved this read. Started and finished in one day! I couldn’t put it down. The writer is so captivating and so careful with her creating of characters. I was immediately drawn in. Wonderful read! And very interesting plot!

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Perfect for fans of The Love Hypothesis! Absolutely loved the chemistry between the two main characters and seeing their relationship develop.

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This book had NO RIGHT being this good! At first I though there were going to be too many typical romance genre tropes (grumpy/sunshine, workplace, forced proximity) but they all played together masterfully!

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The Unbalanced Equation was a lovely book. I enjoined reading it very much.,

Elizabeth (also Liz and Lizzie) Maclean has just completed her PhD studies under the tutelage of Dr Thomas (Tom) Henderson. She had a horrific time because he was a very harsh critic of her work. One evening, they are both invited to a family dinner and to their surprise, it is a whole family dinner because their parents, his mother and her father, are getting married, In a short tale of errors, Liz ends up staying with their parents at Tom’s apartment for a few months. While there, they discover their attraction for one another and have their HEA.

This book was well written and I liked getting to know the main characters. There was just enough of a side cast to know Tom and Liz had active lives.

Thank you to NetGalley, H. L. Macfarlane, and BooksGoSocial for allowing me to read this book in advance of official publishing.

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One of those reads that you'll want to re-read right away just because you don't want to say goodbye All the smexy hot as hades romance with just the right amount of angst and humor.

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This was a really fun story about two complicated and flawed people who have to overcome their own issues to get their 'happily ever after'. It was refreshing to see a book that had characters who did not want children who can still have full and happy lives. It is not often seen in romance books so I appreciated the unique character perspectives.

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Thank you Netgalley for this eARC in exchange of an honnest review.

I am an indecisive mood reader. And sometimes I just don't know what to read. At this time, a rom-com is the perfect choice ! And oh my what a good choice. I was hooked from the beginning and couldn't put it down. Easy to read, I liked the writing and the story. It changes to see characters working in sciences.
I really liked the MCs even if they made me scream couple of times for just how stupid they were toward each others (in a good way I was angry and frustrated of course ;) )
I do recommend this read and that made me want to read other books from the authors as she also wrote fantasy. Go and read this !

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“Okay, maybe I still thought Thomas Henderson was hot. Maybe I was still physically attracted to him. But I could easily keep that under wraps in favour of making his life a bloody nightmare”

“A woman after my own heart”

This book was so good !!!! A rom-com like I’ve never read before.
Fans of The Love Hypothesis are gonna love this intricate love story between a Molecular Genetics Professor and His PhD student now turned postgraduate !!!
Tom and Liz’s story had it all : forced proximity (due to their parents wanting to marry), an enemies to lovers relationship that you could feel from the very first banters they shared and such deep sexual attraction, you could feel the tension raising in the air every time they shared a room !!!!
I honestly loved every second of reading this book and the fact that, given my own field of studies at university, I could understand everything they were saying … it definitely was a plus !!!
Their discussion and the role they played in each other’s life was great and I loved that he was the first one to fall and fall hard for her !!!!
Plus the writing style was easy to go through, even for non-speaker of the genetic language!!!
I’m so glad I had the chance to read this book and I truly hope the author will share more of this sort of stories!!!!

“How was it that I’d gone from having a date with a guy I’d thought was great to getting trashed with my least-favourite-person-turned-house-mate-turned-future-step-brother?”

“Because I’m jealous of all the men who touched you without your permission”

“How was I supposed to give up on this woman? Twisted, confusing sexual games aside, she was making it fucking impossible”

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The Unbalanced Equation is a fun, fast paced, light hearted read that is sure to leave readers with a smile on their face. This novel is easy to fly through, making it a good weekend read. The tension between the main characters is driving the plot forward, making it hard to put down. The main male character, Tom, has a lot of depth, though some of it was left unexplored. Liz, the main female character, has a lot of spunk; it is hard not to love her. The characters have this constant push and pull. The banter between the two is quite funny. Tom is a rich man, but he isn't ever obnoxious with his wealth. Overall, the book is great for anyone who wants a light read about a cute romance. My only gripe is that the book is so quick that some parts don't have that much depth. Pick this up if you want warm, fuzzy feelings.

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*I received a free ARC of this book in exchange for an honest review*

This is a perfect academic enemies-to-lovers with a twist! When a trio of impossibly unlucky events brings Liz and Tom into each other's lives again, the two don't want anything to do with each other. From attraction at first sight to mortal enemies, these two have the perfect coming together story. I loved this book, and between the plot, setting, and atmosphere I was engrossed until the last page. Plus, this has a healthy dose of spice! A must read for romcom lovers!

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Liz is so insanely relatable. The author saying a mix between Jennifer Connelly and Hayley Atwell? I can see her so clearly now. I loved her character.

I really also enjoyed the interchanging POVs between Tom and Liz. I found it rare to see both the LI’s perspectives so that was really fun.

Plus. I love banter!

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Wow what a read! The tension and anticipation had me on the edge of my seat. Filled with some of my favourite tropes of Enemies to lovers, roommates, age gap and to top it all of STEM!! The author has done an incredible job incorporating all of these tropes. If you were a fan of The love Hypothesis then I highly recommend you check this out when it comes out on September 15th!

Thank you to Netgalley for the opportunity to read this in exchange for an honest review!

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I just finished reading The Love Hypothesis so when I saw this, I had to pick it up. Cute, fun, quick read, and well developed characters. Thank you to NetGalley and the publisher for the free advanced copy.

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This was my first book by author Macfarlane and I was completely charmed and delighted. The story follows academics Tom and Liz who have instant sparks fly at a work mixer only to find out the next day that Tom is now the PhD assessor for Liz… for the next 4 years. The story begins at the end of Liz’s PhD when they must decide if the sparks that started their acquaintance were able to last.

Macfarlane creates two flawed and entirely human characters who I equally cheered for and shook my head at for their decision making skills. I could not put this book down. Often, I don’t feel like the reasons for the obligatory miscommunication in romance stories hold up to what would happen in real life. However, I completely understood why Liz and Tom were making the decisions they did which made the tension so much more enjoyable.

All in all, a delightful and charming book.

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I can’t tell how how much I enjoyed this book. Ah this is just what I needed to read after being I a. Slump for a while. This book just shows the lengths some people will go for love while I’m like liz in a sense where I don’t even realise it or I’m in denial. I really really loved this book!

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The antics/misunderstandings in enemies-to-lovers stories can get a bit ridiculous. Does that mean I'll stop reading them and loving them? NOPE!

This was a fun, flirty read with a touch of science, quite a few laughs, and a generous handful of spice, two MCs who unapologetically want something that goes against the status quo, and - of course - the ending everybody wants when they're reading a rom com.

Thank you to NetGalley for my ARC in exchange for an honest review.

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Me ha encantado! La química entre los protagonistas es maravillosa!
Si te ha gustado la hipótesis del amor, seguro que disfrutas con esta novela
Súper recomendado!

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Had so much fun reading this book! I had never read a book by the author, and didn't know anything about the plot beforehand, but my curiosity was peaked by the title and I decided to give it a go. I'm glad I did so, because I was unexpectadly surprised by its clever and charming narrative, and exceptionally relatable characters. While sometimes a bit over the top and cliché, the book is well balanced with originality and humour, that never makes it boring. Having a background in science myself, I found the author was able to capture the ambience of working in research, and the (good) nerdyness of the people that do it. This turned out a great book for escaping the stress of actual real-life research work! A definite recommendation within the genre!

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The story of Tom and Liz was soooo cute! It’s mainly set in Glasgow, UK and I seriously can’t get enough! Talk about fall academia vibes!
If you like enemies to lovers, lots of angst, slow burns you’ll trusty like this book.
This book reminded me a lot of The Love Hypothesis by Ali Hazelwood so if you liked that book I’d recommend reading The Unbalanced Equation 😊

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Liz is a postdoc, who spent years doing her PhD at a Glasgow University, under the watchful eye of her very harsh assessor, Tom. They had met each other previously at a student and staff mixer and although during their first meeting their attraction to each other was instant, after the years of criticism she grew to hate him. The day after the mixer, Tom found out that he would be Liz’s assessor, and therefore felt that the only way to remain professional was to act like a total dick (I know, what an idiot!). Liz thought all of this was over once her PHD had finished, however the pair were then thrown back into each other lives when Toms lab burned down, and even worse, their parents announced their engagement.

Liz and Tom would find it hard to deny their feelings for each other, despite their colourful past, now that they were living under the same roof and working in the same lab. But can Liz overcome their past relationship and let herself fall in love with this man?

This book had so much suspense, you never know what will happen next. This made this book so addictive for me and I just could not put it down. The relationship between Liz and Tom was pure sexual tension, along with so much care for each other. This is the perfect enemies to lovers story with that extra bit of spice and I could not put it down!!🌶🥵

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This was like an enemies-to-lovers version of "The Love Hypothesis"! I thought the chemistry between the two main characters was so incredible, it was like it was jumping off the page! For all my women in stem, this book will make you feel seen with the representation of what's it's like to be a woman in academia!

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Firstly, I want to say that I'm thankful that I received and ARC of this book in exchange for an honest review.
This book follows our two main characters, Tom and Liz. They meet at a university event and from there through some coincidences their relationship starts to develop. I went into this book expecting something similar to 'the love hypothesis' and although this was another fun academic romance their similarities didn't go a lot farther than that.
I found Liz to be an amazing main character and thought that the tension between the main couple was really well-written.
All in all, despite it not being a really breathtaking and memorable read, it was definitely an enjoyable one. I liked the dual perspective element and the chemistry between the main characters was undeniable. A solid four star read!

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As one of my most anticipated reads of the fall, I was looking forward to a science-y romance that was oozing with chemistry (Get it? Like the branch of science and also the connection between characters? Hilarious.) What I got was an enemies-to-lovers relationship between two scientists filled with misunderstandings and a surprisingly large number of anime references, made even better by the fact that the author has a PhD in molecular genetics! Although I didn't find either character to be particularly likable, especially with how immaturely they both behaved, it was a fun (and surprisingly spicy) read.
Thank you so much for the ARC, NetGalley!

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I just finished The Unbalanced Equation by H.L. Macfarlane and it sure packed a lot of punch while covering several of the best Rom-Com tropes. This was a fast and fun read for me and I especially loved all the trickery and revenge dished out by the main heroine.

The initial meeting of Dr Thomas Henderson and PhD student Elizabeth Maclean is akin to that of a Cinderella nature. There is an instant connection and an obvious chemistry, but all that comes to a screeching halt when Dr. Henderson is assigned as Elizabeth's assessor. What's an upstanding professional to do in this situation? Tom makes the choice to be anything but charming over the course of the next four years to assure that there is no chance of chemistry between these two scientists.

After enduring four years of pure hell from the worlds most cold hearted assessor, Liz is happy to finally be starting her career. Just when everything is looking up Liz is given the surprise of her life. Her dad announces his engagement to none other than the mother of her biggest nemesis. And just like that things go from bad to worse to even worse.

As our to MCs are repeatedly thrown back into each other's lives all kinds of fun pursues. This book is full of revenge, sabotage and all kinds of sexual tension. I really enjoyed all the twists and turns of this story and was pleasantly surprised by the unusual HEA at the end.

I received a copy of this book from NetGalley in exchange for my honest review.

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THE UNBALANCED EQUATION by H.L. Macfarlane is definitely an entertaining read. I finished it rather quickly as the pacing is *chef's kiss*. The meet-cute is great and really sets the tone for the rest of the story. What I like most is how the two characters are so clear that they don't want children and marriage, they never belittle each other for that choice, and they don't change their minds about it over the course of falling for each other. I think there needs to be more of this sort of representation in romance overall.

My only beef with the novel is that the story is marketed as enemies-to-lovers, and I can't say I ever really bought into that because it is abundantly clear from the beginning that one party is helplessly in love with the other. There is definitely great chemistry though!

I'm excited to read the rest of the Hot Mess Trilogy once the rest of the books are out in the world.

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The book was nothing short of amazing.
Tom was a cocky arrogant guy and Liz was a sassy student with an attitude that challenged Tom. Their chemistry was felt just by reading. When Liz decided to play games with Tom it took their chemistry to a whole new level.
I really liked the book as a whole, it is a perfect work, enemies to lovers romance. however I feel that Liz’s reason for not wanting marriage and not wanting to have kids is not talked about enough and her back story with Elliot, like why is she somehow “traumatized” by commitment. But this is my personal opinion.
I’d rate the book 4,5 / 5 ⭐️ if possible.

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Perfect for fans of The Love Hypothesis. Liz and Tom are so amazing together and their banter is top tier. Once I realised this book was set in Glasgow I was behind excited. It was so refreshing to read a book about Scottish people that didn't have 'aye' in every second sentence. They included words real Scottish people actually say!! Liz's humour was so relatable and honestly I could see myself in her. I loved her and Tom's relationship.
My only *thing* I would pick up on is Tom's behaviour for his age. This man was supposed to be 38 and was acting like a man in his twenties.
That being said, I ADORED this book. I can't wait for the rest of the Trilogy!

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Tom and liz meet at a social gathering. Tom falls first in love with Liz and all her geek hobbies here. To too many drinks they get into a situation of going for it or not.
The day after the event, Tom hears that he will be Liz's PhD Assessor. This means no relationships and dates with Liz. For 4 years Tom pretends not to be in love and keeps his feelings hidden. This makes her really mean to Liz and she really hates him too. She thinks he's the biggest asshole there is and is finally happy to get rid of him when she goes to work in another lab. Which is not the case because Tom's lab goes up in flames and he has to work in the same lab as Liz.
Tom and Liz happen to both go to the same restaurant where they find out that Liz's father and Tom's mother are getting married. Is this karma for his behavior? Or a sign to try anyway?

Did I want to read this book just because it featured laboratory? Yes. Point out I study laboratory myself and because of this I like these books more.
When I read the synopsis I immediately felt The love hypothesis. And I loved this one so I couldn't resist diving right into this book. And I am not disappointed! The book is already better because of the dual POV! You also read from Tom which is always very nice. I thought it was really great and comical. Liz's lame jokes sometimes made me laugh so much that I even got the question at work: why are you laughing?
The friendship that slowly develops between Tom and Liz is so cute. In all her hatred for Tom she gave it a chance and they are so much fun together.
Even when Liz was on her period, Tom took care of it. A little before that she had pulled a stunt on him that he was really angry about, but despite that he got all kinds of nice things and went to watch anime with her. Who wouldn't want a Guy like that? I'm still waiting for one.
The bond that Liz develops with Tom's mother is so beautiful. They grow closer and Liz does so much for her.
Liz's father isn't too fond of Tom. Which isn't crazy after all he had heard from Liz about Tom. Despite everything, he gives Tom a chance to prove himself.
I also really like the fact that it was said in the book that not every woman wants to have children and get married. I understand this feeling very well and also thought it was nice to read it in a book

The spice was not too much and also fit well into the storyline. The scenes in it gave me butterflies and were real🥵

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3.75/5

Tropes
-forced proximity
-(faked) grumpy/sunshine
-age gap
-MMC taking care of a hurt FMC

Overall this was a fun, quick read that fans of Ali Hazelwood will love. Theres a professor/postdoc relationship and a poster conference with some action in a hotel room, though I will say Liz's best friends are way superior to those in LH. Sadly I think the first chapter is the worst in the whole book, and may discourage some from reading on. The cringy dialogue does get better throughout the book, however if you aren't a fan of anime you may feel lost at times like I did.

I loved the banter and simmering tension these two characters had. They played a game of cat and mouse with eachother for the majority of the book, increasing in intensity with each interaction that had me thinking they'd finally cave to their feelings before one of them stepped away. It definitely kept me wanting more.

I would've given this book 4 stars, but the whole plotline of FMC's dad and MMC's mom marrying eachother and them becoming a sort of "step-sibling" just rubs me the wrong way, no matter how old they are. It really wasn't a big deal or taboo in this book, their parents even encouraging them to get together for most of the book, but that's one line I have trouble crossing. With the exception of that though, I thoroughly enjoyed the banter and setting of this book, and would recommend to anyone who loves a scientist office romance!

Thank you NetGalley for the chance to read this book in exchange for an honest review.

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I found the push and pull relationship between Liz and Tom very entertaining in this book. Tom does many things to try to spend more time with Liz, while Liz tries to make life for Tom very difficult. Add to that friends and family forcing these two into close proximity and things are bound to happen. I really enjoyed having the narrative written from both Liz and Tom's perspective. It allows you to see and appreciate their journey throughout this book. I am looking forward to reading the other books as they come out in this series.

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Thank you to the publisher and author for an advanced copy in exchange for an honest review.

Age gap, enemies to lovers, location, hea this book has it all hot guy with an accent :)

Absolutely loved it.

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This was a delicious read. I can say I’m in love with books settings in the STEM world and this book didn’t disappointed at all with great characters, amazing scenes and a good plot. Elizabeth is a funny girl and how she acted beside Tom it was incredible delightful, making me laugh a lot. Tom is a brilliant character and their scenes with Elizabeth it is so good and full of chemistry. Thank your for this amazing story and ARC.

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This was a lot of fun. The build up of Tom and Liz's relationship was really good and I loved that we saw every little moment that made them fall in love. The fact that they kept each others clothes from their first meeting was so cute.

I received an arc through netgalley.

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Many thanks to NetGalley and BooksGoSocial for this ARC!

After reading "The Love Hypothesis" I was looking for other books with a similar setting and stumbled upon this one... it did not disappoint!
The Unbalanced Equation is set in Glasgow (so expect a lot of rain), where we meet Tom and Liz. He's a researcher and professor at Glasgow's University and she has just begun her PhD there, due to a not-so-little incovenience they find themselves working in the same lab (and on the same bench), but their story goes a while back.
I'll be honest, sometimes I couldn't really agree with some of the characters' decisions along the way, but it was fine in the end, it needs to be like that sometimes! The book is told in double Pov, so we have an insight into both characters' perspectives, which I really enjoyed. It surprised me more than once, when I thought I knew for sure where the narration was headed... it wasn't, that kept me on my toes. There were some deep moments, alternated with others more light, funny and also teasing and flirty, with a sprinkle of anime references here and there, all surrounded by the atmosphere of a cold scottish winter.

Overall I enjoyed reading it and it remains a perfect read for when you're in the mood for something light and laidback!

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Really nice read. The tempo is good, fast, but not so that you are lost in details; you get lost in the plot. For a moment it looks as if it’s going to go in circles and clichéd, but it is rapidly overcome with the funny and witty writing. The characters, not only the main ones, but also the supporting ones are solidly built and take their own space in the development of the narrative. The adult content, for me, is almost secondary. I really enjoyed this nerdy hate-to-love story.

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This was my first book by this author and I LOVED IT!! I devoured this book and found myself thinking about it often when not reading. This was the perfect rom-com with all good tropes! I can't find any other words to describe just how well done this book was, definitely one of my favorites of the year.

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Review: 5 Stars

First of all, **swoon**

This book was ADORABLE. I feel like I had a cheesy grin on my face the entire time I was reading it. I am giving this book 5 stars (which is rare) because it made me feel all the feels. It was so cute I could cringe - I really loved both of the main characters, and the dual POV was very well done. The slow burn was MINT and complemented by a lot of witty banter. The banter between the two main characters was the best part of the book. It was so natural and nerdy and sarcastic. And don't worry - there are some fantastic spicy scenes (I'd say a 2 or 3 out of 5 on the spicy scale).

I was a little worried during the prologue that the characters would be too nerdy for my taste, but the anime/microbiology/geneticist themes were not overdone at all. What a fantastic read. I am still smiling as I write this review.

Do you enjoy classic romcom themes? Good. This book has got them all. Enemies to lovers? Sign me up. Forced proximity? Even better. STEM? Absolutely! No matter your preference, this book has it.

So. Many. Tropes:
* small age gap (11 years)
* forced proximity (on so many levels)
* teacher/student
* forbidden love
* enemies to lovers
* revenge
** level 3 spice

This is a must read for fans of Love Hypothesis (and really, fans of all romcoms and contemporary romance). It was ridiculous, and predictable in all of the best ways.

Synopsis:

"But one thing was universally certain: in order to keep Elizabeth Maclean out of my reach and out of my head I was going to have to be a complete and utter bastard to her."

The book takes place in Glasgow, and follows the perspectives of Liz and Tom, two geneticists/microbiologists who have a tumultuous history in the lab. After what seemed like the perfect meet-cute at a mixer event at the University of Glasgow, Tom is assigned the role of Liz's PhD assessor. Over the next four years, Liz is forced to endure Tom's vicious scrutiny.

Fast forward four years, and Liz and Tom learn that - of all things - their parents are getting married....To each other. Just when Liz thinks she is finally free of Tom's brutal assessments, Tom's lab catches on fire and he ends up sharing a lab table with Liz, and Liz's landlord kicks her out of her apartment. In a perfect storm of calamities, Liz ends up moving into Tom's "mansion" of a townhome with Tom, Tom's mother, and Liz's father.

As their paths continue to cross, it seems unavoidable that Liz will need to learn to tolerate Tom. In what they both believe to be devious and secretive plans, Liz and Tom set out to make each other's lives miserable (in the style of How to Lose a Guy in 10 days), and in the process, are forced to confront their true feelings.

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This book was fun and mainly light-hearted. I loved the banter between the main character and her love interest, it felt realistic and it was adorable. Also, I'm a sucker for science-related settings so this was perfect. It reminded me of The Love Hypothesis but they are both very distinct books from one another. If you enjoy fun science-based rom-coms, then I would recommend this book.

I received an advance review copy for free, and I am leaving this review voluntarily.

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This book! I struggled to put it down! It checked all of the boxes - enemies to lovers, second-chance romance, witty banter. Not to mention the setting taking place in academia! It did remind me a lot of Love Hypothesis, which I have read recently, so that did take away from some aspects of the story, But as a whole I would recommend!
Thank you to the author and NetGalley for a copy of this book in exchange for a review.

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I got this arc this morning and I finished it within hours.

It was that good.

Enemies to lovers is my favourite trope, and H. L. Macfarlane will be an author that I will be following closely.

I like that there is a main love story but also side stories (although the main one is my favorite).

We follow Liz (who is a postdoc) and her possessive but also kind of grumpy former PhD assessor, Tom.

Tom has been pining after her for years.

But do to unfortunate events, they need to share a lab.

How will this turn out for them? You will need to read this book (coming out 15th of September) to find out.

If you read and liked The Love Hypothesis then you will for sure like (in my case love) this one as well.

Not only does this book contain enemies to lovers but also forced proximity/

And something we need more of in the world: STEM workplace.

I am already so hyped for the next (standalone) in the series.

I honestly really liked how H. L. Macfarlane brought the chemistry and sexual tension between the characters.

Great first step into contemporary.

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Liz and Tom are forced to share a lab at the university where they both work. They have a history that they have to face when their paths cross outside work as well. Will they move on from enemies?
A fun read, Looking forward to the rest of the series.

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The Unbalanced Equation
@H.L.Mcfarlane
Macfarlane Lantern Publishing

Nothing gets my literary boots wet like academia fiction, sassy female characters, and intelligent boys being closet romantics.
Here's looking at you @alihazelwood and @
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I went through this book in less than 24 hours and read it on my phone while my husband slept.
In short, it was a fantastic read that held me captive in its Scottish charm until my neck started hurting.
I loved and hated the back and forth between Tom and Liz's characters because they were fire. Sometimes a dumpster fire of emotions, sometimes I forgot to breathe because the smoke got heeeeeavy, but hey, can't we all relate?
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It starts off with the sweetest anime meet-cute worthy of any nerdy girl who has been in similar situations.
EX: My own relationship: Sailor Moon and Pride & Prejudice.
Not only does Tom save Liz from mansplaining nerds, but he also bests them with his own knowledge, then sweeps her off her pretty little feet. Be still, my nerdy heart.
Until orange juice wrecks the night.
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I love the drama that ensues years later and captures these two in a cluster most epic with family, friends, and each other: the bar, the fire, the close quarters, the love of single parents, the eviction, to the moving in with each other out of pure desperation…
It's glorious how a simple twist of fate can change everything, especially when fate is a toddler, and she keeps spinning.
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Tom: Acts tough, but he's a mama's boy, has a soft side under his polished exterior, an Arsehole, but a lovable arsehole with a kind soul.
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Liz: Fakes being tough to avoid confrontation, pain in the arse, and stubborn but is kind, lovable, and a daddy's girl. Wants to feel deserving of love but is afraid of being hurt.

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H. L. Macfarlane: What a wonderful, wonderful author. This book was one that I could not put down. As a teacher, I was using my planning period, my lunch, my breaks—- every spare moment to read this book. Unbalanced Equation was a special read for me. I’m usually trying to guess the ending the entire time. I didn’t have time to do that with this book because I was focused on the plot. Liz and Tom. Tom and Liz. The two main characters, along with their parents were so likable. I could see their beginning dinner being so awkward!!! I really felt like I was there. By the time Liz had to move in the “mansion,” I was nervous for the whole “family” and ready to see it play out.

This book would make a great movie (for tv or made for theaters). I really enjoyed getting to know these characters. This will make a great series.

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This is a solid 4 ⭐️ for me! If you love Ali Hazelwood/STEM books I would definitely recommend this!! This was such a quick read for me because I really enjoyed it- I was hooked from Liz and Tom’s meet cute. The spice, chemistry, and banter in this book are great. Highly recommend.
Thanks to NetGalley for this arc in exchange for my honest review

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Very fun and lovely read! If you loved the love hypothesis and you are a fan of the enemies-to-lovers trope, this is your book.

The author did a fantastic job with the dual POV. It's one of my favourite things about this book. The spicy scenes are soooo good too!

I can’t pinpoint to a scene in particular I loved above the others because the whole book was fantastic. Enemies to lovers is my one of my favorite trope so I know I would like this book.

Thank you NetGalley for this book!

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At first I felt like there were way too many things going on - so many tropes - but ultimately I couldn’t put it down and needed to see how it all played out!

Liz & Tom have a sort of insta-love moment at their department social. The connection is there, but nothing ends up happening as Liz leaves and doesn’t come back (still not sure why… 🤔). The next morning Tom finds out he will be her PhD assessor, so decides he needs to be mean to her to avoid falling for her, or her falling for him.
Flash forward to the end of Liz’s PhD - Tom’s lab burns down and he’ll be working right beside Liz for 3 months. They find out their parents have been secretly dating and are getting married. Liz gets kicked out of her apartment & goes to live with all of them… so yeah, a lot of stuff 😂

So we’ve got:
- Enemies to lovers
- Instalove
- Teacher/student
- Age-gap
- Parents dating
- Forced proximity (at work and at home)

Tom & Liz also have a LOT of similarities in their likes/dislikes.
I thought it was a bit too much, and didn’t like Tom’s sabotaging efforts.
But ultimately I enjoyed their banter and wanted to see how it all played out!

Thank you NetGalley and Macfarlane Lantern Publishing for this ARC book for review consideration. All opinions are my own!

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The Unbalanced Equation is the first book in the Hot Mess Trilogy, an enemies-to-lovers romantic comedy, written by H. L. Macfarlane.

Fun, fast-paced and enjoyable read in an academic STEM setting!

Writing your PhD is no easy feat, especially not when your assigned assessor is doing his best to make your life a misery; challenging everything you do and forcing you to redo research to the Nth degree. Thomas F*cking Henderson is your man and he made Liz' life a complete hell for four years.

With her PhD behind her, she has successfully secured a research post, but to her horror she ends up having Professor Henderson as her a bench partner, thanks to ever so slightly meddling Professor Ito, the best friend of Professor Henderson's.

The next shock for Liz, is that her father and Professor Henderson's mother have decided to get married. Add in an eviction, a meddling ex, some partying and you have a fantastic hard-to-put-down story. Tom is frustratingly stupid at times, and so is Liz, but Macfarlane has managed to create a thoroughly entertaining story.

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Thank you netgalley and publisher for opportunity to read and review this arc honestly.

Overall I enjoyed the book, story, characters, and dialogue. I felt invested enough I wanted to smack some sense into one a few times. There were funny parts in the book, some steamy as well, and I was interested enough to continue down the journey. Overall I would (and will) recommend to friends that enjoy this genre and trope. Interested to read more by this author.

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The Unbalanced Equation by H L Macfarlane

Elizabeth Maclean is a post doc student in her mid twenties. Thomas Henderson is a professor who ends up meeting Elizabeth at a early school function. Their is chemistry between them but that has to come to a full halt after Thomas becomes Lizzie's assessor. Tom ends up being a total jerk to Lizzie after they shared an intimate moment when they first met.

What I loved about this book is that love is complicated and beautiful its never easy. I liked the romance between Tom and Lizzie. Their was angst, sexual energy, lust, and love. This rolled all together into a steamy lust filled romance. Before you get into the good parts their is so much more to the story Tom's juvenile behavior to set up Lizzie with obstacles that work in his favor.

I found myself rooting for this couple for them to move past all the issues that lay bear before them both. Before all this can happen the reader will go on a roller coaster ride of some silly quirky behavior. I felt as a reader you can really feel the energy between Tom and Lizzie it melt through the pages. The way they looked at it each other you can imagine the lust between them.

Then when the steamy bits flow through the pages you know everything is meant to be the way they are. I also enjoyed the nerdy behavior between the two being into anime. I am not an anime fan but loved how they shared in this together.

This book brought out the hopeless romantic in me and it just lit my heart to keep the pages turning. I found myself smiling and laughing. Regardless what everyone else says but H.L. Macfarlane knocked this one out of the park. When you feel emotion from a book which the writer aspired to engage the reader this is a win. I also enjoyed the science background of these two characters.

If you are a fan of enemies to friends angst filled steamy hot romance then this book is for you. The pages will flip fast for you and you should not be disappointed. This was the second best romance novel I read this year. This was a five star read for me!

Thank you to Netgalley, and Books Go Social for a free copy of this book for an honest review. All opinions expressed are my own.

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Thank you to Netgalley for an advanced reader's copy.

This book is a Love Hypothesis-ish enemies to lovers story written for an English audience. I loved the science-y vibe and step brother twist, but found the pacing off and the male character a bit off putting. It's still worth a read though!

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Wow - a great read. Two very intelligent people, one of which acting like a complete toddler made for a very entertaining read. A bit of science, a bit of conflict, some parents getting remarried and a whole lot of spice.

I thought it was well written, bar a couple of words that seemed to pop up constantly. The steamy sections were done fabulously, the right amount of steam without feeling out of place, unrealistic or ick. The perfect romance book, a great setting with bad weather (again so relatable!). Loved the strong female character and the science lab workplace which made a nice change from all the books set in law firms or advertising!

Not a laugh out loud book, but were some charming funny moments. Can't wait to see more from this author.

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Right from the very first page I enjoyed this book and easily became interested in the storyline. Liz and Tom both work as researchers at a University and absolutely hate each other. After many terrible and coincidental events they are forced to share the same work bench and live together. Forced proximity is one of my favourite tropes and always leads to so much angst and tension between the two main characters. I absolutely loved the connection between Liz and Tom, they always have such a fun, playful relationship that’s so enjoyable to read. I also enjoyed the dual pov and being able to see both MC’s thoughts. Tom makes some dumb decisions in the book but I was glad to see his growth and how he learnt from his mistakes. The thing that was missing for me was I wasn’t obsessed with the MC’s. I definitely enjoyed them but I didn’t fall in love with them. However, I did fall in love with their relationship and how much happiness this book brought me which is why I think that this is a great book!

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I have a love/hate relationship with the enemies to lovers trope but fancied something light after a busy week at work and this seemed to fit the bill. A STEM setting, set in Glasgow, what more could this British geek want? Macfarlane's writing is witty and well-paced, though a tad repetitive at times. I really liked Liz and Tom, though there were moments when I wanted to yell at Tom to grow up.

Altogether, an enjoyable, fun read for a rainy afternoon. 4 out of 5.

Thank you to NetGalley and the publisher for the opportunity to read this in exchange for my honest review.

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I really enjoyed this book. It was a fun romcom with quirky main characters and a number of side characters that made the story interesting.
What I liked about this book:
- the setting; the main characters were researchers and I liked seeing them interact in a professional setting
- the banter between the characters was entertaining with a number of laugh out loud moments for me
- the tropes; enemies to lovers, forced proximity and age gap (some of my favourites)
- the tension /chemistry between the MCs; it was electric and the dialogue and banter were superb
- the MCs idea of happily ever after did not include marriage and children; it was different from a typical romcom and I appreciated that


What I didn’t like about this book
- the conflict between the two main characters seemed to drag on for a really long time and made sections of the book tedious to read at times

Overall, this was an enjoyable read and I would definitely recommend it to others and look forward to reading other books by this author. Thank you NetGalley for the ARC.

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First off this book was a really fun ride!

I was a bit worried at the start it was feeling a bit forced the way they were thrown together again and again in different situations over the course of a few pages but honestly after a few chapters I was glad for their "forced proximity" !

I absolutely love enemies to lovers books, especially when it's a slow burn and boy oh boy this burn is deliciously slow.

I enjoyed the double pov, it was good to know what was happening in both characters minds as they interacted, especially when as the reader I was thinking they were acting quite childish given their ages. It was nice for them to acknowledge that in their internal monologues.

Overall it was a fun easy read that had me up half the night hooked on every word. I think this is a must read for fans of the Love Hypothesis

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Have you ever wanted to get rid of that readers block? You're in luck! You have found what the doctor orders!

Liz hates Tom Handerson! The prick who made her academic life a living hell years ago. Their path will unfortunatly cross again… But fortunately for us reader, she will be forced to spend more time then she wants with Tom, and he will do everything in his power to make her change her mind about what she thought about him…

No surprises there, we know how it ends. But its perfect! It feels like putting on your fav PJ on an early autumn night. Comfy and warm, like the second blanket.

The Unbalanced Equation is the definition of an enemies to lover romance. Slow burn, and I mean burn! Forced proximity, he loved her since forever… And yeah, i’m a sucker for HEA and an epilogue… All there for the happiness of the reader.

I read the book in 2 sittings. I couldn’t wait for the other shoe to drop, I wanted to know if they where finally talk to each other… I got invested to say the least! The characters where well developed and very early on, I found myself rooting for Liz and Tom.

If you haven't guessed it yet, I recommend this book!
You want to get out of a reader's hungover after a series? You want an Happily Ever After (HEA) story that's witty and fun? If you like your romance with a dab of angst, GO and read that book!

Now!

Thanks H.L Macfarlane for the first book of your « Hot Mess Trilogy ». Can’t wait for the next instalment « Courtney Can’t Decide ».

*I added too many exclamation mark in that review and I’m not sorry about it.

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A really fast read. It was engaging, funny and a good tale of enemies to .......
Loved the science elements and tales from the labs.
A great read

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I received a copy of this book in exchange for my honest review.

After hitting it off at an office party, Tom is looking forward to pursuing a relationship with Liz until he finds out she is going to be his grad student. He decides the best course of action is to be as harsh with her as possible during the 4 year assignment.

Fast forward to Liz graduating and getting a position at the same university. After an accident forces him to work in a new lab, he and Liz are unable to avoid each other. To make matters worse, he and Liz find out that their parents have been dating and are getting married... and will be moving in with Tom for a while. Soon after, Liz loses her lease and reluctantly agrees to move in as well.

Tom decides this is a good time to show Liz he's not so bad after all....but will she forgive his behavior from the last 4 years...?

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Ah. What?

How did I just finish this book about step-siblings who fall in love and ended up giving it 4 stars? I know it sounds weird putting it like that, but...it was good.

So this is an enemies-to-lovers, hard pining book with Dual-POV. Things go a little bit downhill for me because Thomas and Elizabeth, who work together(ish) in STEM and despise (though not really) each other, find out that their parents, Jenny (Tom's mum) and Jim (Liz's dad) fall in love and get engaged. And this is a book about Liz and Tom's relationship (from enemies to "friends" to lovers). What bugs me is the elephant in the room that is...is this incest in some way or not? I mean, they're step-siblings!! And everyone in the book seems okay with that fact! Even the parents!! Am I the only one bothered with this?

Nevertheless, forgetting about that, the story is built very very well. I've read a couple enemies-to-lovers and the MC's end up together in some way even before we reach 50% of the book, which sometimes is unnerving. But with this book, they only got together around 70% of the story, and I loved the tension and the games that were being played so much! It worked so well with the story because the characters didn't felt pushed to be together immediately.

The banter was phenomenal, the writing was simple yet interesting, though some characters did felt a bit left out, or maybe forgotten, it still wasn't something that bothered me enough to lower my rate.

The ending felt a little bit out of place, but knowing that we are going to get more of Liz and Tom in other books (Hot Mess trilogy), maybe it'll work out a bit better. I am curious to see where their relationship ends up and I do have some expectations but that isn't for here.

All in all, it was a good book and I think that STEM/enemies-to-lovers/slowburn/hard pining fans are going to enjoy this one. I know I did. Plus the cover is really cute!

Signing off,
B.

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A really well thought out and cute romantic comedy. I loved the STEM aspect of it and I LOVED the Scottish setting. In the vain of The Love Hypothesis or The Soulmate Equation, but without the fake dating. Like with these books, the main coming together doesn't happen until over halfway through the book. But unlike these others, there is such huge tension built up that the reader is not lacking. Several smaller spicy interactions keeps you going. These characters had so much witty banter and such good chemistry that I really found myself rooting for them. I loved the dual POV and the chance to experience events from both perspectives, but events did not repeat which it often does in dual POV. So this made things move along well. The only reason I did not give this book 5 stars was because it was almost 500 pages which is a lot for a rom com. Overall fun and entertaining experience and cannot wait to read the rest.

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The unbalanced equation by H.L. MacFarlane

I really enjoyed this book. It starts with a flashback to 4 years ago and the comes back to present day. It follows a FMC who works in STEM. I really enjoyed the banter and chemistry between Liz and Tom. I wanted to slap Tom with some of the decisions he made but I understood the end result he was hoping for even if he was going about it all wrong. He just kept digging himself a bigger hole to try and crawl out of!

If you loved the love hypothesis I think you’d love this also.
This was my first book by H.L MacFarlane but I would 100% read another book by this author as I really enjoyed this storyline. It was also very refreshing to see a FMC who didn’t want marriage and kids but still wanted to settle down in her own way. I really appreciated it not being the typical thing where it revolves around marriage and kids be the only way an FMC can be happy. Thanks to NetGalley for an ARC of this book.

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This was my first book by this author and it was awesome! As someone who works in HigherEd I loved a lot of the environment/setting of the book. The h is a postdoc, and the H is her grumpy/possessive former PhD advisor. The H has been pining for her for years and it creates a hot tension throughout the story that kept me engaged.

The dialogue was really good as well and it was just an all around fun, steamy, workplace rom com.

I can't wait to read more from this author.

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As the first book I have read of this author's, I was delightfully surprised and enraptured with The Unbalanced Equation by H.L. Macfarlane. This novel is the Michelle Pfeiffer Catwoman in a universe where all romantic-comedy novels are DC Universe characters; filled with delicious and clever banter arrogantly wrapped inside a shiny black patent pleather shell. It is the perfect novel for all you readers out there that are thirsty for more STEMinist romances or:

- Enemies to Lovers: an initial scene between Tom and Liz is described as a scene from "every shounen anime ever where the camera zooms in first on the hero's face and then the rival's without either of them blinking", and we all know how tense that feeling is

- Miscommunication: SO much miscommunication, or rather lack of communication; certainly the world would be easier if we all just said what we're thinking, but it would be much less interesting

- Forbidden Romance: there is something to be said about a teacher/student power dynamic, even when when it ceases to be the case

- Mr. Darcy Level Pining : instead of pride and prejudice, Tom and Liz have arrogance and history

- Forced Proximity: literally everything, including an expensive sounding laboratory , bursts into flames to keep these two together... and even when there are no physical barriers they keep coming together like magnets

Vicious Banter (straight up almost bullying, but it's somehow incredibly hot): this is not one of those fluffy "enemies to lovers" novels where the adversarial relationship is merely passive; it is straight up aggressive, purposefully spiteful at times in the most intriguing way. As someone who has spent this summer reading a lot of Dramione fanfics, I appreciated this

What I Liked Most About This Book :
- I was mimosa-level horny for Daichi; I wish we could have a prequel novel about him and his wife May. He is such a shit-disturber in the ways only a best friend can be. He was blatantly and delightfully manipulative to either give Tom an opportunity with Liz or maybe just make him suffer so he could laugh.
- This book was truly written for nerds, by a nerd. It was peppered with mentions of anime, fantasy, even You-Gi-Oh because why not. Whose sexual awakening didn't include Tuxedo Mask!?
- Despite there being only a couple of actual sexual scenes, the whole book was actually quite spicy. Even when not explicit, the banter and pining was constant foreplay for the reader. There is something so tingly about two people truly punishing each other with sexual frustration. I felt personally victimized/edged by all the. *almost* moments
- Highlighting the fact that not everyone wants to have a nuclear family with 2.5 children. You can be childless, common law and still be happily in love with a white picket fence.

What I Didn't Like :
- There was a serious missed opportunity to make innuendos or jokes about hentai
- Although Tom is like, ten years Liz's senior, because of how juvenile some of his manipulations were (that asshat), he seemed a lot younger not in the best way. He would have to do a LOT more grovelling (let's reverse that begging kink)
- Liz's Dad - who also seemed quite juvenile when he became a "pick-me" girl pouting about Tom and Liz's fight and the wedding

Thanks to NetGalley for the eARC in exchange for an honest review!

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The banter in this was so funny! This book did a good job of twisting together the insta-love troupe with the slow-burn troupe and the enemies to lovers. I will definitely recommend this title to my friends when it is released.

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I adored this book. I've always loved a good enemies to lovers trope. Loved the tension and banter between Liz and Tom. Although, I think Tom's best friend, Daichi, was my favorite character. The one thing that bothered me was that it was never explained why Liz had run away from Tom all those years ago. Anywho, I'm loving all these extremely smart and sassy (described as nerdy) female leading roles.

Synopsis:
After suffering four years of scrutiny from her PhD assessor, Elizabeth Maclean believes she’s finally free of Dr Thomas Henderson’s tyranny when she begins her postdoc. But when a fire goes off in Tom’s lab (stupid undergrads) he ends up working in the same lab as Liz.

To make matters worse – and much to their mutual surprise – Tom’s mum and Liz’s dad announce their impending marriage after a whirlwind romance. So when Liz’s landlord tells her to move out, pronto, it tips her over the edge. Desperate for a place to stay and in need of a saviour, the last person Liz expects to offer her a temporary home is Tom himself.

Now stuck working together, living together and planning their parents’ Christmas wedding together, will Liz discover that Tom’s attitude over the last four years was all a ruse to hide his true feelings? Or are the two doomed to fail in their co-existence experiment?

A smart, sexy enemies-to-lovers story perfect for fans of The Hating Game, Book Lovers and The Love Hypothesis,

Thank You NetGalley and BookGoSocial for this eARC in exchange for my honest review.

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I love a lab based romance and this book did not disappoint. I would say pick up this book if you loved The Love Hypothesis but wished it was enemies to lovers. This book follows postdoc student Liz, and her former PhD assessor Tom, who made it his life's mission to make Liz miserable to conceal his crush during her time as a student. Once they are forced into close proximity, and the hurdles keeping them apart disappear, we find out if Tom has what it takes to fix his mistakes. You will love these characters, their banter, and the conflict resolution.

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This book reminded me a lot of a book I read earlier this year and with some similar tropes, it makes sense why I enjoyed it so much!

So much building on tensions and as fate would have it, of course nothing is going to go to plan! Watching the twists and turns unfold was a splendid experience and there were so many fun parts to digest!

Full review to follow on my blog.

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"The Unbalanced Equation" is like a dual POV "The Love Hypothesis". I loved "The Love Hypothesis", so I really enjoyed this book as well. Obviously there were enough differences that it wasn't a total copy-paste. I thought the pacing of the romance was really good, and I loved Liz's character. Good banter between the love interests is my guilty pleasure, and this book had plenty of it!

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Women in STEM stories are usually an instant buy for me, so thank you so much Netgalley for the ARC. I always have about 3 books I’m reading at once, but I read the Unbalanced Equation in one sitting. I thought this story was so creative and addictive. It gave me Ali Hazelwood / Love on the brain vibes. And the banter UGH 10/10! I also loved that is was spicy but not too spicy.

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This book was such a pleasant surprise. I read this after finishing another STEM based romance and this one definitely deserves the praise and accolades for a book well written. This was delightful, sexy, and funny, so pretty much it’s a complete package in the romcom world.

As I stated I really enjoyed my experience reading this. I will admit at times I thought the book was getting a little long but then the characters would reel me back in and I would be a goner again for the story telling. However, I probably could have used a little more climax (pun intended) after their third act breakup and perhaps a little less wedding details. Either way, I still really liked this book and thought it was a job well done.

Tom. Oh Tom. He needed a swift kick in the pants for most of this book. He’s the quintessential “bad behaviors for right reasons” type of guy. If we break it down he’s very manipulative to Liz in pretty much every conceivable way. She’s quick to forgive and forget and while that’s a good thing I think she needed a few more days of eating ice cream on her friends couch before she rushed off with him into the night.

I enjoyed the sexual tension between these characters. Initially that’s what pulled me in. The chemistry was palatable and I loved it so much. The conversation in the bar with him telling her he’d have sex on the table with her just about gave me a heart attack, but only in the best way possible. The pay off was worth the wait and I was extremely gratified with how that aspect of their relationship panned out.

This book is so close to being a five star but I sometimes struggled with Tom and Liz both stepping over the threshold of is it consensual or is it not? The shower scene (while hot) rubbed me the wrong way, as did the hotel scene where she clearly asked him to leave but he didn’t. I still enjoyed it, but I can see how some people might find that more off putting. Either way I will sing this books praises to anyone willing to listen. Also, I can’t wait for the audiobook to be able to hear Scottish accents. That will just be the frosting on top of the cake.

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Loved the banter between the main characters and the chemistry the two had. This was a fast-paced read for me and I really loved it.

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3.5 stars, but rounded up to 4 on goodreads!

Elizabeth finally graduated with her doctorate in molecular biology and never has to see her PhD assessor ever again... until she ends up working side by side with him and ends up somehow even closer. This was such a well written enemies to lovers trope! There was the perfect amount of spice and the dual perspective was so fun to read. I love a book set in a STEM University setting- it gave total The Love Hypothesis vibes with an added age gap.

Thank you, Netgalley for the ARC!

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i was super excited to read this because who doesn’t love a enemies to lovers STEM rom-com.

it has two POVS which is nice to know how both characters feel within the same moments and i enjoyed the funny sarcastic banter.

even though it was a very short dialogue i loved how the author added something about jenny having a rough birth with thomas, as someone who suffered a severe traumatic birth last year and still struggle to this day it was nice to read in a book because these are real life issues.

the only plot point i didn’t like was the two main characters elizabeths dad and thomas’ mum getting together/married making them step siblings. the two characters were in their older adult years though so i know a lot of people don’t really mind it however that’s just a personal preference but the book was still a light read and i really enjoyed reading it.

thank you netgally for letting me read this arc in exchange for an honest review.

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I thought this book so absolutely cute! This book gave me “Love Hypothesis” vibes.

While reading, I found myself laughing and smiling uncontrollably. This book incorporated a lot of my favorite reading tropes which included:
• age gap
• enemies to lovers
• and STEM!

Would definitely recommend this book.
4/5 ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

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I really enjoyed this book- who would have thought love would blossom over a set of Gilsons and a Qiagen kit or two!
The plot line, although fairly standard in the romance arena, is well spun and the characters really came to life for me in the lab- true to the tedium of life in a genetics lab- repeating the same experiments over and over!
The chemistry between Tom and Liz is written so well that they leap off the page and the conflicts and resolutions peppered through the text add a little suspense.

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When people say forced proximity trope, they really mean it for this title lol!! I love science. I love romance, And I loved this book. It was silly and sweet and all of the tropes that a romance lover could want. It makes me excited to read more from this author!!!!!

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Thank you NetGalley, the author, and the publisher for an ARC of this book for my honest review! This was such a cute little rom com perfect for anyone looking for a feel good love story! If you loved ‘The Love Hypothesis’, I truly think you will fall in love with these characters and this story! I will definitely be recommending this book to anyone I know who loved the love hypothesis!

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I wasn't sure exactly what vibe I would be getting from this book. Liz and Tom were everything. I loved how messy they both were. The thoughts and actions they both had were so absolutely believable. Tom seemed to be cursed with doing something for the 'right' reason but going about it entirely the wrong way. Liz was so absolutely witty and had so much sass to her. They both could be so frustrating that I wanted to reach into the book and slap them both upside the head sometimes to get them to get their acts together. All of the anime references were everything! This was my first book by this author but I truly enjoyed their writing style and will absolutely pick up another book by them. 4.5/5 stars! I was provided an arc for an honest review.

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Meeting and attraction at work function but then you have to supervise your eyecandy. It's against ethics to pursue your attraction so you act obnoxiously at every meeting.
Then fate steps in and you are thrown together and can pursue the attraction. But the person you desire dislikes you based on your behaviour..
Can you turn it around and show your true personality whilst navigating new family ties?
Follow Tom and Liz story and enjoy the rollercoaster. I did

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Thank you to the publishers for giving me an ARC of this book in return for an honest review.

I honestly could not put this book down. I devoured it!

If you're a fan of The Love Hypothesis and the whole women in STEM genre then I'd highly recommend this book! I'm not going to lie I was sold as soon as I saw the cute cartoon cover - who doesn't love them?

Tropes include:
Enemies to lovers
Age gap (11 years - both always legal ages!)
Forced Proximity
He falls fist (and hard!!)
*step-siblings (This was the one I wasn't too sure about and this has been my first book with this trope. However it was never a main theme in regards to their relationship and the story doesn't revolve around it. In fact one of their parents (and in the end both) were wishing for them to get together too!

Liz and Tom meet at a mixer at their work, she is just starting her career and Tom is a professor. He saves her from an awkward conversation and they end up really getting along, insta-crush style. Then Liz turns up to meet her new Professor and oops? It's Tom. He ends up being mean to her (but this helped her excel in her studies) and she HATES him. Flash forward a few years and they both end up at the same restaurant to have a meal with their parents - It just so happens Her dad and his mom are getting married. Will they be able to put their hatred (crushes) aside for their parents?

I truly loved this book and the characters, and Tom's main red flag (all guys have them come on) is wow he makes some dumb choices that could very easily be resolved if not for the miscommunication.

Overall I rated this book four stars and would recommend it to anyone who likes a good cheesy, hea romcom!

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⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️.5/5

now this one, i LOVED! it gave total slow-burn , love hypothesis vibes. she was beautiful, she was great, you just have to read it.

i read this one so fast, i just couldn’t get enough of it!

read if you love:
🧪ali hazelwood books
🧪 a woman mc in stem
🧪a good slow-burn

special thanks to Netgalley and Macfarlane Publishing for an advanced digital copy!

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Described as perfect for fans of The Love Hypothesis, which makes sense because it’s a STEM based romance with a grumpy professor that has been pining after the FMC for years... I just find it strange that the author gave The Love Hypothesis 3⭐️.. anyway

I actually didn’t think it was *that* similar to The Love Hypothesis in the grand scheme of things. There were similar tropes and themes (age gap, STEM / academic workplace, a mean professor who had been secretly pining over a student for years) BUT The Unbalanced Equation is a lot more British & a lot less cringeworthy. I do love American romcoms but as a Brit myself I tend to love romcoms set in the UK even more.

I really enjoyed this!! I liked the characters, even though Tom’s manipulative behaviour was a bit off putting. I’m also not one for massive public displays of affection but the romantic declarations at the end of the book hit me right in the heart!! I’m not ashamed to admit I was tearing up at one point!

The Unbalanced Equation is easy to read; I loved the tropes, the dual POV, and I definitely had a cheesy grin plastered on my face throughout.

I’d definitely recommend this to lovers of romcoms that aren’t too OTT cheesy!

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What can I say about this book? I loved it, actually to say that I loved it is not enough.
FINALLY a book where the female protagonist actually has a personality, and it's not all about the love of the male character.
FINALLY a romance where the female has other plans for the future, I can't say much or I'll spoil everything.
I finished this book in a couple of days and it was really slow burning, I just kept turning to page cause I needed to know more, and read more (y'all know what I mean).
To all the men out there, even though Tom Is a bit of a prick he made raise my bar just a little bit higher now.
Read this book, you won't regret it.

*Earc provided by Netgalley*

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My word, what a book. I really enjoyed reading this book because who doesn't love reading about Academia and seeing character growth. I went into the book blindly and am glad I decided to read it because it was an amazing read and I cannot wait to explore more from the author.

Thomas Henderson took the possessive hero to another level, even if some of his choices were questionable, the justification he used for himself for them was enough to make us readers believe he did not mean bad but just did not have much foresight.

Liz was a refreshing read, a grumpy woman who stuck to her morals and she was a FMC with whom I related a lot, be it her firm beliefs, her focus on her job and her future and everything in between.

All in all, it was an amazing read and I would recommend you all to add it to the TBR and read it for sure when it drops in a few days.

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I had never heard of the author before picking this book simply based on the cover, description and title but man it was so darn good. At times there were some slow parts, but in the end a slow burn was perfect for scientists. I would highly recommend this book and am so glad I got the chance to read the ARC. Definitely add this to your TBR.

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Thank you Netgalley for this arc.

This is a double POV love story that I absolutely loved!

We follow Liz as she goes through her studies as a scientific researcher in her late twenties. A woman who refused to settle down for compromises and who has a very annoying, rude, but dangerously handsome Professor Henderson.

Professor Henderson. The man of the hour. A man with a crush, but you know, just a crush right? Oh, how glad he was that Liz got stuck with him day in and day out for three months.

I loved these two. Liz and her complete denial. Tom with his puppy love self. The lengths they went to get on each other's nerves. The banter was five stars.

I do think the story was a tad bit long. And sometimes Tom did feel like a 25 year old guy more so then an almost 40 year old man.

Otherwise I highly recommend this romance book to everyone!

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Overview | A heartfelt, witty romance with two charming characters who don’t say what they mean, or mean what they say.
8.5/10 ⭐️
Genre | Contemporary Romance/Women's Fiction
Tropes | Enemies-to-Lovers, Age Gap, Shared Pasts, Forced Proximity, Workplace Romance, STEM
POV | First Person/Present Tense, dual narrators
Heat Level | 🌶🌶, open door, on-page
TW | parental loss, off-page, backstory only
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There is so much to like and recommend in The Unbalanced Equation.

Summary: Dr. Elizabeth “Liz” Maclean thinks she’s free from her professional nemesis, Dr. Thomas “Tom” Henderson, as she begins her postdoc job at the University of Glasgow. Fate has another plan, as the two are throw together in both their personal and professional lives. Can these stubborn and smart academics with a complicated personal history find balance in their equation?

In mainstream romcoms we rarely see anything but the nuclear family dynamic as a marker of relationship success. Early on, we know that Liz and Tom’s vision of happily ever after is a childfree-by-choice partnership. Personally, being able to see myself and my own relationship in these characters was such a breath of fresh air. At the same time, the negative reactions Liz experienced as a woman for not wanting that suburban marriage with children felt very true-to-life.

This feels especially interesting in a book that is, at its heart, about family. Liz, Tom, and their parents are going through loss and finding their way through to a new, not better, way of being in a family. The kindness these characters show to each other around this new dynamic, even when those discussions are emotionally painful, is quite beautiful.

In any enemies-to-lovers story, somebody has to not be on their best behavior. Liz and Tom are no exception. Much like in another favorite, The Hating Game, these two are not saying what they mean, or meaning what they say. Unlike that book, we are privy to the inner thoughts of both characters, and get to see what makes them act like big ol’ dummies when confronted with the love of their life.

We don’t have to like the games they play here to see why they played them. There are moments where I wanted to throttle both Liz and Tom and tell them to just spit it out. But then I’m reminded that for people in their place in life, fear is always a part of the equation. Be that fear of rejection, or abandonment, or even looking foolish people clam up when they need to be open.

The relationship in the end felt hard-won and they had such great chemistry we don’t worry about what happens after the epilogue.

Bonus points for the setting. I haven’t read a non-historical set in Scotland perhaps...ever? Now I would like more. Very excited to see this author is writing another one in the series next about the mysterious Simon. I’ll smash that buy button!

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Thank you to NetGalley for the ARC in exchange for an honest review.

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I went into this with the thought it may be like the Love Hypothesis - and while there were very small similarities, it was definitely different.

It's the classic story of man falls for woman, works with her and can't date her, and then they all move in together because their parents get married. Wait, what!? It was the kind of predictable that only the best romance novels can bring.

So many parts of this book made me laugh out loud, get angry (Tom is quite manipulative and then swoony after and it was a little whiplash-like), overall it was a fun read. I didn't personally feel like I could connect with Liz, I just didn't resonate with her at all, but I think she will absolutely resonate with many other readers.

Would definitely recommend this book!

Thank you to Net Galley for an ARC in exchange for an honest review.

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riveting, humorous and compelling.
i loved everything about this book! from the enemies to lovers trope, to the plot that flowed so smoothly throughout the story that i couldn't keep the book down for the life of me.

as a stem student myself, this was so fun to read! the plot twist that brought tom and liz together into one single shared living space after being supposed 'enemies' is something that in all caps I DID NOT SEE IT COMING. the chemistry between the characters was superb, and i have no comments on the oh so obvious tension between tom and liz.
i think it's safe to say that tom is a yandere given his manipulative side (which is completely inexcusable you rich brat) :p

overall, this was such a cute story! i am such a sucker for STEM based romcoms, so i saw the cute cover and the description, and i knew i had to read this book at all costs.

anyways, this book did not disappoint, i reckon i'll reread it over and over again to experience the whole fluffy feeling it gave me.
looking forward to read H.L MacFarlane's other works!

i highly recommend this book to anyone who loved The Love Hypothesis!

thank you netgalley for the ARC.

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If you’re a fan of romance… and fancy yourself a little bit of a nerd, this is the story for you! Tom works in a lab and at a mixer meets Liz who has great conversation with and seems all the stars aligned for them to fall in love, that is until Tom finds himself as a superior to Liz and what was love at first sight turns into a relationship that caused Tom to miss Liz from afar. It’s funny in a laugh out loud though out their story and as a former engineering student felt right ay home with the story line taking place in a lab’

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As my first novel that I received to review from Net Galley, I couldn't have picked a better launching point. Not only is this book beautifully written, in the style of something that seems real–actual conversations, problems, goals, and interests that people would have– but the characters are people you want to root for. We do get to know the others in the lives of the main two characters, Tom and Lizzie, learning more about them through actions and not just words.
This is not only a in depth, descriptive novel when it comes to bringing the reader into the beautiful country of Scotland but also, with the spice. THE SPICE!
If you are a lover of the enemies to lovers, forced proximity, meet cute tropes, then this book is a breath of fresh air. I hope you like it as much as I did.

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ARC read

I enjoyed this book so much! I was engaged with both perspectives of the main characters from the get go. I’m getting into the romance genre and found there were so many funny and relatable moments. If you’re a fan of enemies to lovers and forced proximity tropes with a bit of spice, then this is for you.

With the opening scene, the stage is set between our two main characters Liz and Tom having an instant attraction at a teacher/student mixer at their university. Unfortunately, Tom is assigned Liz’s assessor for her PhD, so he takes the professional approach and decides being an asshole is the best way for them not to like each other over the course of her PhD.

Fast forward 4 years and some unfortunate circumstances sees them having to share the same lab. About 11% in, a twist that no one could have seen coming, places them in more of a forced proximity besides working at the same lab. From there, there’s a bit of manipulation on Tom’s part and game playing on Liz’s part (as revenge for Tom’s treatment during her PhD), to see their relationship grow, in a sort of twisted way.

I enjoyed the interactions between Liz and Tom. For people that can’t talk about their feelings and using sarcasm to deflect, it was funny to read, though also frustrating that they couldn’t communicate at times. Don’t get me wrong, the frustration fit well with the story and admittedly at the end of the book, both MCs accept their need to grow up.

If I wasn’t so busy in my real life, I could have read this book much faster as it’s easy to read, flows well and the story engaging. I definitely wanted to know more of how they would come together and kept turning the page in order to find out more. If I had to put my book down, I was thinking about when I could get back to it. It was nice to read a romance set in Scotland too. Such a great read and the ensemble of characters in the book worked wonderfully. Would recommend to anyone who love romcoms.

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4 stars ☆ I was very entertained from the start and their banter with each other was just perfect for me. I also didn't expect the spice in here, it would get you a bit blue balled plenty of times but it's still worth it lmaoo.

But the main reason I picked this book up because of the tropes:

Age gap ✓
Enemies to lovers ✓
Forced proximity ✓
Workplace romance ✓
The guy falls first ✓

Like who wouldn't want to read this book?! Definitely recommend if you liked these types of tropes.

Thank you to Netgalley and to the publisher for the ARC !!

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I've been looking for STEM romances. Why? I am 100 percent an English major, and science tanked my GPA in school. However, Ali Hazelwood put a longing in me for these kinds of books, and HL Macfarlane didn't disappoint.

The banter, oh my GOD, THE BANTER. I am a sucker for good banter, and this EXCELLED. The storyline is a little complicated with a bunch of oh my god conflict moments, but holy crap it delivers. The angst got me a little bit (I'm incredibly impatient) and Tom was manipulative and they both were a tad immature, but overall, I enjoyed the plot and the characters. This book had me laughing out loud constantly, especially with the banter. The banter makes this book.

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The Unbalanced Equation was an absolute hoot! Tom and Liz are two scientists who absolutely hate each other because of an interaction when they first met...or do they? When they find themselves living together (along with their parents!) due to some unforeseen circumstances, the forced proximity causes them to reevaluate how they really feel about each other. Tom and Liz were both extremely relatable as they tried to navigate their adult lives while falling in love! Their journey, while being full of mimosas, anime, tulips, and some heartbreak, is one that will entertain any reader who joins them. (Also, I don't think I've ever before enjoyed a side character shipping our main characters as much as one of them did in this book.)

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Love!! Has a very unique twist to the enemies-to-lovers trope, there is back and forth sarcasm. Fun times!
Has science talk and anime which I know nothing about, but did not distract me from the overall story. Dual POV, love it. Gives the reader a chance to see into the mind of both characters and their feelings of one another. Has a nice flow, very easy read.

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I absolutely enjoyed this book!! I thought it was going to be really similar to The Love Hypothesis, but other than it being a STEM based workplace romance it really wasn't the same! Liz and Tom were such fun characters and I loved the drama surrounding them. Tom was so sweet at times but some of the manipulation was extremely questionable. I loved Jenny and Tim and they were so adorable. You should absolutely give this book a try if you like romcoms, workplace romances and age gaps :)

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This book was great. Both characters are flawed but the sexual tension you could feel through the book was intense. Can't wait for more from this author.

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Thank you @netgalley for my copy of this eARC in exchange of my unbiased opinion.

Liz is a postdoc student who has finally escaped her PhD assessor’s undeserved and over the top criticisms - or so she thinks. Tom has finally made it through the toughest few years of his professional career and is thankfully no longer his dream girl’s assessor. Unfortunately, he’s also blown any chance he may have had with her by being overly critical to try and keep their relationship professional. That is, until life continually tosses them back at each other. First with the announcement of their parents engagement - who even knew they were dating? Then, with a fire in Tom’s lab that has him moving into Liz’s work space for months on end. Followed up by Liz suddenly needing a place to live and having to move in with Tom and their parents. Will their close proximity have Liz seeing Tom in a whole new light? Or will it confirm what she’s thought of him all along?

This was such a witty and steamy read! I love a good enemies-to-lovers, and this one was so well written and had the perfect amount of steam!

This one gets 4⭐️‘s from me!

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I really enjoyed this book! The way that they moved from work rivals to a closer relationship as a result of their parents was such a different type of story and it worked AMAZING!

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4 🌟's!

📝 tropes: enemies to lovers, workplace rom, forced proximity, forbidden/taboo rom, stem rom, banter, age gap
🌶 spice: 2.9/5
❌ CW: sexual harassment

hello was not expecting this to be this good??? i randomly decided to pick this ARC up on Netgalley after reading the premise and it sounding intriguing... little did i know how trope-tastic and fun this one was going to be!

this one has a kind of bonkers plot??? that i was very much here for. tom and liz meet in an earlier timeline where they actually hit it off and were almost getting to second base but things happened and the next thing ya know, our hero, Doctor Thomas Henderson, a PhD assessor, is being assigned to assess our heroine, Elizabeth Maclean, forcing him to switch gears and make their what-coulda-been romance into a strictly professional one. aka, he's a man and starts treating her like shit/coldly for the rest of her doctorate years.
they meet once more when Liz is pursuing her post-doc and Tom has to work in the same lab as her but no more are they buddy buddy.. we get our enemies to lovers entry and a sizzling attraction GAH🤩 the forced proximity doesn't stop there my friends! my jaw dropped when the plot became that both our MC's parents are actually GETTING MARRIED???!?!?! i was very (still am) kinda weirded out that that they are technically step-siblings🥴 but for romance purposes, im just gonna act like that's not a thing lol. so yeah, the setup for this book was so chaotic but fun and slightly messy and i absolutely ate it up.

i could not put this one down you guys!! the banter, the tension, the hate to love.. everything just works🤌🏽 we have a lot of cute moments where they go to halloween parties together, watch anime and cuddle, get snowed in, etc. and it was all just so !!! coupley-romantic in that contemporary way and i freaking adored it🥺

i definitely think it could've shortened down a lot more bc i found myself skimming the last 10% for sure and some background stuff throughout.. nevertheless, i was pleasantly surprised by how much i enjoyed this contemporary, stem romance ... this gave what ali hazelwood's love on the brain should've given 🥲 highly recommend it tho friends!

I voluntarily read and reviewed an advanced copy of this book. All thoughts and opinions are my own. Thank you to the author for e-ARC via Netgalley. Releases 9/15/22!

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Review Posted on Instagram and Good Reads.

𝐓𝐡𝐞 𝐔𝐧𝐛𝐚𝐥𝐚𝐧𝐜𝐞𝐝 𝐄𝐪𝐮𝐚𝐭𝐢𝐨𝐧 was a super fun cute read and I loved it! If you liked The Love Hypothesis and Love on the Brain then you’ll LOVE THIS!
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Elizabeth Maclean thinks she’s finally free from her PhD assessor, Dr Thomas Henderson. In the last 4 years, all he has ever been is an asshole to her. Now that she has found her first big job postdoc, it’s the first time she feels like she can stretch her legs and do what she does best in the lab. However, when Thomas’s lab gets damaged in a fire and shuts down for repairs, he ends up working with side by side with Elizabeth for 3 months.
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What else could be thrown at Elizabeth?

Well her widowed father could be getting married to another widower, who just happens to be Thomas’s mother…🫣🫣

Then… her landlord tells her she needs to move out leaving her homeless. So she moves in with her father, who moved with his future bride, who moved in with … you guessed it Thomas… 🤪

Before this all happened though, 4 years before to be precise, Elizabeth and Thomas were just Liz and Tom who met at a university mixer where sparks flew…

And so the whirlwind of angst, sexual tension, fun, manipulation and redemption begins! Knowing that they both had the hots for each other back when they first met and now they have to work together, You are almost cheering for Liz and Tom to finally to GET.IT.ON. 👀

"𝐇𝐚𝐯𝐞 𝐲𝐨𝐮 𝐭𝐫𝐢𝐞𝐝 𝐬𝐡𝐮𝐭𝐭𝐢𝐧𝐠 𝐭𝐡𝐞 𝐟𝐮𝐜𝐤 𝐮𝐩?"
"𝐍𝐨𝐭 𝐲𝐞𝐭."
"𝐓𝐡𝐞𝐧 𝐚𝐝𝐝 𝐢𝐭 𝐭𝐨 𝐲𝐨𝐮𝐫 𝐥𝐢𝐬𝐭 𝐨𝐟 𝐭𝐡𝐢𝐧𝐠𝐬 𝐭𝐨 𝐝𝐨 𝐭𝐨𝐝𝐚𝐲."

The Scottish backdrop is beautiful 😍 As one of the countries on my list to visit at least once in my life, I found I was using Google Maps to see all the places that were mentioned. Love seeing stuff on satellite view 🤣

Such a great read. Thank you to @netgalley and @macfarlane_lantern_publishing for the 𝐀𝐝𝐯𝐚𝐧𝐜𝐞𝐝 𝐑𝐞𝐚𝐝𝐞𝐫 𝐂𝐨𝐩𝐲 in exchange for an honest review.

If you love:

🔬 Lust Meet Cute to Enemies to Friends to Lovers
🧫 Anime loving lead characters
🔬 STEM (both h and H)
🧫 Scotland backdrop 😍
🔬 Age Gap (11 years)
🧫 Forced Proximity

⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️/5 stars

Release Date Sept 15th!

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If you read The Love Hypothesis and thought, “I wish this were enemies to lovers and also had more spice,” then The Unbalanced Equation is for you.

Set in Scotland, the book follows Elizabeth, who just landed a postdoc position and has to share a lab with Professor Tom Henderson – the Ph.D. assessor who made her life hell, but whom she has a lingering crush on anyway.

Then, the two of them find out that:
• their parents are engaged to each other
• they’ll be moving in together
• neither of them can ignore the attraction they feel

So they decide to torture each other. The banter is 💯, the spice is very hot, and the facts that they both love anime and neither wants marriage or kids make them feel refreshing rather than carbon copies from other books.

I will say that I didn’t adore Tom – it’s pretty much the first time I’ve found a character who would absolutely be considered a rake a little lacking – and I wanted to see a bit more groveling from him for everything he put Elizabeth through. But, I am an Aries, so of course I did.😆 Nevertheless, I appreciated his flaws and character development!

Ultimately, The Unbalanced Equation is a quick read that’s a whole lot of tropey, spicy romcom-y fun – and it might even have you looking into anime.

🌟: 3.75
🌶: 2.5

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Fun and cute enemies to lovers workplace romance with a twist. The plot is pretty convoluted - they end up working together AND their parents are engaged. This is after they had a one-night kind of thing. But, somehow it all works and we are rooting for them to finally work it out, because it is clear (for better or worse) they belong together.

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The Unbalanced Equation
⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
Genre: Romance
Format: Kindle eBook
Date Published: 9/15/22
Author: H.L. Macfarlane
Publisher: BooksGoSocial
Pages: 416
Goodreads Rating: 3.48

I requested a digital advanced readers copy from NetGalley and BooksGoSocial and providing my opinion voluntarily and unbiased.

Synopsis: After suffering four years of scrutiny from her PhD assessor, Elizabeth Maclean believes she’s finally free of Dr Thomas Henderson’s tyranny when she begins her postdoc. But when a fire goes off in Tom’s lab (stupid undergrads) he ends up working in the same lab as Liz. To make matters worse, Tom’s mum and Liz’s dad announce their impending marriage after a whirlwind romance. So when Liz’s landlord tells her to move out, pronto, it tips her over the edge. Desperate for a place to stay and in need of a saviour, the last person Liz expects to offer her a temporary home is Tom himself.

My Thoughts: My favorite trope is the enemies to lovers trope and this one is 100% with STEM and forced proximity splashed in. This was a feel good romcom that I devoured pretty quickly. The story is narrated by Liz and Tom, in a dual POV. I love when you get both sides of the romance, it gives you the full story. The characters were well developed with depth, witty banter, chemistry, tension, and creatively written. The author’s writing style was complex, had steamy tension, created that wonderful banter, and kept me engaged. If you love The Love Hypothesis or The Hating Game, this is the book for you! I absolutely adored this book. This book releases on 9/15/22 and I would suggest preordering!

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I live for great, quick witted dialogue. The Unbalance Equation is filled with smart banter. I couldn’t stop smiling and laughing. Tom made some morally questionable choices, Liz valiantly puts him in his place. This book was fun and the perfect fall read.

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Gosh I just really enjoyed this book. I loved the banter between Tom and Liz. This book kinda had it all.
-Dual POV
-Enemies to Lovers
-Work Place Romance
- Second Chance
-Women of STEM
-Spice

Tom fell for Liz in there first meeting but didn't get a chance to act on it. Then the very next day finds out he has to mentor her and then places her in the no go zone. Yeah he goes about not acting on his feeling wrong but then he gets a second chance on making her his.

This was the fist I read anything by this author and I really enjoyed it and look forward to reading other of her books.

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To say I’m obsessed would be an understatement. A hot, intelligent, wealthy man with similar taste and goals as the main female character, yes, please! I loved the dual perspective so we got to see how much they liked each other and were complete idiots about it. Did I think someone needed to slap Tom (the male main character) in the face a few times for being manipulative? Yes, a few times.

Read this book in one sitting. We love women in Stem!

Now to some things I didn’t love but understood that it needed to occur for there to be a plot. Their parents' engagement is the thing that brought them together and the Mom’s not-so-subtle remarks get them together. Tom’s lab burns down forcing him to be in the same lab as her.

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At first, I was putting off reading this book because I thought it was going to be The Love Hypothesis again - younger female, hunky angry advisor, STEM, etc. I'm so glad I pushed past those initial feelings because I truly enjoyed this book.

The Unbalanced Equation follows Tom and Liz, four years after they hit it off at a party. Four years after he unexpectedly became her PhD advisor and turned into a massive jerk. In multiple ways, after they thought they'd finally gone their separate ways, their lives are intertwined more than they ever expected. Can he redeem himself after four years of being her worst nightmare? Can she reconcile the old Tom with the new Tom she's seeing now? Read and find out!

I do feel there was a missed opportunity to talk more about Liz's desires to go into gene therapy and Tom's pivot into that field himself. It felt like both wanted to go that way because of losing their parents, but it was never stated. It felt like a missed chance for emotional bonding.

Thank you to NetGalley and BooksGoSocial for this ARC.

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Reading the first chapter, I didn’t want this book to suck me in — I’m not a science person or someone even remotely familiar with anime. Turns out the book was adorable, funny, and compelling regardless of my quibbles.

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I read this one in two sittings! A great enemies turned lovers plot with lots of laugh out loud moments along the way!

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I really really loved this book !

First it has everything you need : Really great characters, ennemies to lovers and force proximity.
She is a badass, he has a HUGE crush on her, what more can I say.

AND ... they don't want to get married or have kids !! I didn't even know I needed a representation but it felt so good. This book will stay close to my heart thanks to that ! (and this point didn't even change my rating on the book, that's how great I think this book is).

...

"Miss M-"
"Doctor"
"Of course. Doctor Maclean. I didn't mean to offend you."
"I'm sure, Doctor Henderson".
"It's Professor now."
"I know. I meant to offend you."

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4,5 ⭐️
Okay where to begin, I’m in love. With this book, with the plot, with the characters, with the setting, with the tropes…Yeah you get the gist right? I devoured this book in one day, it was an easy read, and not too long and not too short.

Some of the tropes in this book are: Enemies to lovers, STEM, close proximity, misunderstanding, the guy falls first, teacher-student, age gap, Rich/poor.

The characters have really funny banter and I keep hearing them saying it in this lovely scottish accent. Which is another thing I loved in this book, that it’s set in Scotland! Makes me really want to go there on my next holiday. And I mean, who else really want to be able to go see Toms townhouse and the family estate in real life?

Also lastly I find it so refreshing that the authour writes about not wanting to have kids and get married! This is a topic that needs to be put into these kinds of books so much more, since it’s still (in 2022) taboo to not want to have kids.
Thanks Netgalley and H.L Macfarlane for letting me read this amazing book! Lots of love, Frida

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Who doesn’t love a good enemies to lovers with forced proximity set in a STEM background?! This was such a cute rom com and is truly a combo of two of my favorite books, The Hating Game and The Love Hypothesis. If you are a fan of any of the above do yourself a favor and pick up this book.

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This story is simply delightful. The book’s description says that it’s perfect for fans of The Hating Game and The Love Hypothesis and I couldn’t agree more. It’s definitely enemies to lovers between two scientist who find their lives suddenly tangled together at the turn of a few events. Between all the banter, angst and witty remarks exchanged between the characters, I had a lovely time reading this book.

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I do love a good rom-com and I have to say that The Unbalanced Equation was a very enjoyable rom-com. A fun haters to lovers story with a few unexpected interesting twists.

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I had high hopes for this one and it did not disappoint.

There are many enemies-to-lovers novels on the market currently, and as one of my favourite tropes, I was so excited to pick this up. This novel has leapt up my favourites list as it is just so funny. I laughed out loud numerous times.

I loved that it was set in Scotland too! 'The Unbalanced Equation' also features nods to many nerdy pop culture favourites which really helped to ground it in reality.

The characters are really likeable and I enjoyed the dual perspective. Tom (the male love interest) was written brilliantly - it felt so fresh and believable to read which really enhanced the story.

If you like slow burn, sexy romances then this one is definitely for you!

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'The Unbalanced Equation' by H.L. Macfarlane will inevitably be compared to 'The Love Hypothesis'. It is an enemies to lovers romance set in a lab. I honestly feel like that is where the comparisons end - a romance in stem does not have to be like the others! Reading this book has also made me realise the issue with a lot of other enemies to lovers romances; these couples are never really 'enemies'. Whereas, Tom and Liz are actually pretty vile to each other before the sparks turn into sexual tension - this made their arc a lot more satisfying and their connection a lot more steamy!

When I read the blurb, that not only are Tom and Liz forced to share a bench in the lab, but their parents are getting married AND they have to live together, that sounds pretty farfetched. Macfarlane actually pulls it off pretty believably at a good pace at the beginning, the forced proximity of the lab and the house elevating the manipulation, game playing and attempts at revenge to a twisty and enjoyable place.

Overall, where this plot is going is really obvious. Plus, Tom makes some majorly shifty and questionable decisions to manipulate Liz... However, I could not resist the allure of this cheesy story, couple with excellent chemistry and realistic enemies to lovers arc. 5 guilty pleasure stars.

Thank you to NetGalley and the publisher who provided an ARC of this book in exchange for an honest review.

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Forced proximity
He’s a jerk to her to avoid making a move
Her dad surprises her with shocking news
She sees him as her mean assessor but will that change?
He sabotages her dates and her trying to find flats to move out of his house
He admits to liking her while drunk but she doesn’t believe it in his condition
I love the pining for each other but how it’s a constant repeat of pinning then making progress and then ruining the progress and repeat gets a bit to much
The pinning should be carried out but not repeated every few chapters because that makes the read a whole lot longer and makes it exhausting eventually
Will all the secrets of him sabotaging her be revealed or will he be able to keep them hidden to keep her?
Will their parents end up getting married?
Will their relationship work out ?

This was a amazing read with nice spice. I rather didn’t like that the experiments mostly was the same as the love hypothesis and i also didn’t like how repetitive the middle of the story was.

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4 out of 5 stars - If you ask me, I'll tell you to read it

Thank you to NetGalley and BooksGoSocial for this advanced copy. All opinions are my own.

Liz and Tom have known each other for several years. Tom was Liz's PhD assessor, and he was tough to work with. So, just when Liz thinks she is finally done with him and moving on to a new post doc role, he comes boomeranging back into her life. His lab burns down and where does he end up working? Her lab bench. Worse? They learn that their parents met in a grief support group and are now getting married! But wait, that's not the bottom... Liz's landlord gives her less than a week to move out.

I enjoyed the touch of science that was mentioned without getting too detailed. I enjoyed the characters, even if I found them a little over the top at times. It was a quick read, and I'd recommend it.

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There was a lot that I loved about this book! I loved the initial meeting of these two characters and how they both continued to have feelings for such a long period of time. I loved the characters personalities and loved the witty banter between them! The spicy scenes were detailed so well and the sexual tension between the characters was great! The fact that their parents were suddenly getting married without them even having a clue about it was a little too convenient for my liking. But overall I thought this was a great read!!

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This was so good. If you love the grumpy sunshine trope this book is for you. This book did make me mad a few times because the male main character is such an a hole!!! But, overall I really liked the plot and the romance was cute. I really liked the characters and the friendships that were made.
If you love academic romance and second chance romance read this book!!!!

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The Unbalanced Equation by Hayley Louise Macfarlane: ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

If you are a fan of forced proximity and emeries to lovers, this is for you! I love that the story is told through the alternating points of view of the two main characters, Tom and Liz. And it’s set in Scotland!!!

This book has similar themes from Ali Hazelwood’s books, the Love Hypothesis and Love on the Brain, and I am not upset about it!

There were a few instances where I thought some scenes and characters were not necessary and that the author was trying to add too much in to the plot. Other than this, I really enjoyed this easy reading book!

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Thank you to H.L. Macfarlane, NetGalley, and BooksGoSocial for allowing me to receive an ARC for The Unbalanced Equation. This book was such a wild ride. It was so fun to read, and you were really able to tell that the author is a scientist. There were definitely some moments where I was shaking my head over some of the decisions that a certain character made, but it was overall a great book! I enjoyed how fun the main characters were, as well as their parents. This book is filled with tropes galore! At one point I said, how many more tropes is she going to be able to fit in this book??? I had a great time reading it and finished it in a day. This is a great read if you love reading fun romcoms. The Unbalanced Equation makes you think about what you would do if you were put in Tom's situation. What would you do if you really hit it off with someone and then realized that you were going to be in a position of power over them? Awkward, but you can decide for yourself if Tom made the right decisions after she graduated. I really hope that H.L. Macfarlane continues to write romcoms because this was a really fun book!!

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A huge Thank You to The author, The publisher and NetGalley for providing the e-arc in exchange for an honest review.

What a delightful read! I absolutely loved the setting, the characters and every little incident. It all played out nicely, and I absolutely devoured it.
Hoping to read more of the author's work in the future!

#TheUnbalancedEquation #NetGalley

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As a fan of The Love Hypothesis this story of women in STEM hit the spot for me. Just enough angst, enemies to lovers, pining, and banter for me. And the dual POV made it even better. Definitely recommend for a cute romance read.

4 stars

Thank you Netgalley and BooksGoSocial for this advanced readers copy in exchange for an honest review!

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The Unbalanced Equation is H.L. Macfarlane’s first romantic comedy and is like a Scottish version of Ali Hazlewood’s The Love Hypothesis. 23-year-old Elizabeth “Liz” Maclean connects with 34-year-old Professor Tom Henderson at a mixer when Liz is starting graduate school. Tom is assigned as her PhD Assessor when her original assessor must take leave. Tom is extra-hard on Liz because he is attracted to her and wants to keep her at arms’ length.

After Liz earns her PhD, she remains at the same university to begin her postdoctoral research. She works in a different laboratory in a different building, so she doesn’t expect to see Tom again. Unfortunately his laboratory catches fire and will be closed for several months for repairs. A fellow scientist (and Tom’s best friend) offers Tom a half-bench in his laboratory, where he will work alongside Liz.

Tom and Liz have multiple escapades as they go from enemies to lovers, since Liz carries a grudge from Tom’s poor treatment of her over 4 years. Tom isn’t always likeable when he acts emotionally immature.
The Unbalanced Equation is easy-to-read. However the story is full of profanity and graphic sex. It contains age-gap, forbidden love, and enemies-to-lovers tropes.

I received an advance review copy (ARC) from NetGalley for free, and I am leaving this review voluntarily.

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I don't usually read romances, but I am so glad I picked this book up. I loved the dual POV as it gives both sides- you see Tom's pining, struggles with being Liz's assessor and schemes to make her fall in love. You also see Liz's hesitation yet eventual willingness to love him. There are a lot of funny moments and great banter between them. It's an enjoyable story.

The only problems I had with this books was the over the top graphic sex scenes (though that may just be my bias) and the fact that their parents get married, which I found strange.

Overall, a fast-paced wonderful read.

4.5 stars.

Thank you to NetGalley for an ARC in exchange for an honest review.

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The Unbalanced Equation is a rom-com where the main characters are both researchers. They liked each other when they first met, then he becomes her assessor and can’t flirt with her, she starts hating him and then, when they thought they would never see each other again, boom, there is a fire in his lab and he has to work where she does.
There is dual-pov, an age gap of almost eleven years and I think it can be considered a slow-burn (and he falls first).
I absolutely loved this book, if I could I would give it more than five stars. The characters are exhilarating and realistic. They are not written as perfect but they are humans so they make mistakes. I loved their love story, it had all the stages from hate to like and then love without rush.

Very, very appreciated.

Thank you Netgalley and the publisher for sending me a e-reader copy of this book. All that’s being said in this review is fruit of my thoughts.

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A fun read over the summer!
Enjoyed the alternating viewpoints in each chapter. And just like some of the other books I'd read recently, I kept thinking I'll read one more chapter before bed, but I would end up staying up much much later than expected as I just couldn't put it down!
Thank you.

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I was only able to read the first couple of chapters before it archived, but I LOVED what I read. I really liked what little of the characters I got to read, and it gave me the same feeling The Love Hypothesis did. Can't wait to purchase this book so I can read it entirely!

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4.5 stars!
If you are having withdrawals after finishing Love Hypothesis or Love on the Brain do yourself a solid and read this immediately!!!

Liz and Tom meet four years ago at a work social and it’s instant attraction. Tom plans on pursuing Liz the next day, but prior to that happening he gets put into becoming Liz’s PhD advisor. He then decides that logically, instead of being mature and expressing his feelings, the best he can do is to be an ass so she hates him instead of liking him.. seems like a guy thing to do…

Fast forward to present day and their parents (both widowed) surprise them at a dinner (neither Tom or Liz have any clue) and announce that they are getting married. On top of this surprise they also have to work side by side at work after Tom’s best friend manipulates the meet cue. Then conveniently Liz’s landlord gives her a few days to move out and she is left homeless. Tom swoops in and persuades her to move in with him. The plot line is him manipulating situations to block Liz from moving out or dating other men. Both question each others liking of one another, put each other in uncomfortable situation, tease one another and make it apparent to friends and family that they should be together.

Liz and Tom have amazing banter and I was rooting for them chapter one. The supporting characters in this book are hilarious and amazing. The whole parents and “kids” falling in love thing seems like it would be a turn off from this book, but somehow it builds upon character development.

Overall I devoured this book and could not get enough of it. Ali Hazelwood and H.A. Macfarlane make me feel like I chose the wrong career because dang I want to be Liz. This was a first for me by H.A. Macfarlane, but certainly not my last!!

Thank you NetGalley for this ARC!

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4/5 ⭐
3/5 🌶️

I really, really enjoyed The Unbalanced Equation. I made the mistake of reading some reviews after getting it and was prepared for disappointment... Talks of a misogynistic creep MMC and an immature FMC almost had me running, but thankfully I didn't find them anywhere. What I found was a strong and smart FMC who decided to füçk with the guy who was an ășșhöłě to her and a morally grey MMC who was a bit of an ąrrogąnt ąšş, but had a lot of redeeming qualities. This is definitely an enemies to lovers story where the MMC has a lot of groveling to do and, in my opinion, he did it well.

I really loved the little fandom details scattered throughout this book. While I don't know anything about anime or Manga, I could just feel how giddy that would make fans of the genre reading them. Same with the science tidbits. Hayley didn't make you feel like being left on the outside of an inside joke when she included them either.

The plot was fantastic. I loved that Tom loved Liz for 4 years and attempted to keep his distance by being a dïćk, then sabotaged his way into a forced proximity situation. Would I have been okay with this in real life? Absolutely not. Do I love when my book boyfriends straddle the line between strong-willed and pathological? Hěłł yes. Tom wasn't perfect, but I loved him nonetheless. He was truly a good guy who made some mistakes... He was such an amazing son and friend, you knew his heart was truly in the right place.

I really loved this little friend group and I'm excited for more books in this world!

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Tom and Liz meet at a work social and have an instant attraction to each other. Events happen that keep them from meeting up again until Tom finds out he is her PHD assessor. Tom makes the decision that he has to hide his feelings for her by being extra hard on her during her time completing her PHD. The fun begins when they find out that there widowed parents are getting married to each other. The book started out strong, dragged a bit in the middle but kept my interest. There were miscommunications that could have been solved by actually communicating. The book did benefit from the supporting characters. The dialogue was strong.
For those who like rom-coms it is an enjoyable read. I would be interested in reading the next book from the author.
STEM
Enemies to lovers
Miscommunication

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Thank you to Netgalley and Macfarlane lantern publishing for the opportunity to read this advanced reader copy.
Disclaimer: I was given access to this ARC for free in exchange for my honest review.
The unbalanced equation by H. l. Macfarlane is my first read by the author. Requested it because of the interesting cover. I read the blurb and I was sold.
The story follows Elizabeth “Liz” Maclean and DR Thomas Henderson.
Thomas was her PhD Assessor, and he was a nightmare or as Liz puts it several times. He was complete dick to her. after 4 years of them putting up with each other Liz is finally free. She will begin working on a new lab. Free from dr. Henderson. Or so she thought.
When Thomas lab burns down due to a Bunsen burner he must be relocated and he so happens to share a lab table with Liz, and if that was not enough, they find out that their parents are getting married.
They are also forced to live together when Liz’s landlord decided to evict, he and she has no place to go. The easiest solution seems to move into Thomas townhouse, that she will share not only with Thomas but also with his father, JIM, and Thomas’s mom Jenny.
To recap; our story features, age gap, office romance, forced proximity, enemies to lovers, forbidden romance; not only because of the office but also because they will be step siblings. and miscommunication trope. … not a trigger on itself but it’s important to know it has a place on the story.
I enjoyed the read. I’ve been on a mood since I read love on the brain and this story was the perfect follow up book. The story is a bit less focused on the steam part and more on the drama aspect of it. Not that is a bad thing but if you did not like how much scientific talk there was on love on the brain; maybe read this book.
The spice of it was something that I really liked. It was not too harsh or nearing the vulgar, but it was hot. It had me blushing at some point.
the book would be 4 stars for me. I liked it, it was enjoyable and funny at times. The one aspect I did not like and the reason I removed one start it’s because of Thomas behavior. While over all he is great. He acted like a child and the whole reason why the last 30% of the book dragged a bit.
****SPOILER warning****
The reason Thomas acted like a dick towards Liz is because he liked her. yeah, that’s it. So at the beginning of the book, they first and they pretty much agree without agreeing to have sex. Its heavily implied. Liz leaves and the next day is told he will now be her assessor. Because he wants to be professional, he can’t be having indecent thoughts about her he decided to be harsh. He is rude. He makes those 4 years a nightmare for her.
This man could not just be polite to her. he couldn’t be a decent human being to her. liz talks about how she held up tears after talking to him. He was a dick to her. also, that did not stop there. He messed up her chances to get a new place, to keep her at his house, and he went through her phone to block her matched-on tinder, so she didn’t go on more dates.
I feel like she forgave him to quick, but it made sense. They had long talked about it. We see how while it was wrong, they work through it.

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✨If you loved ‘ The Love Hypothesis’ then you will adore this! It’s sort of similar vibes but the characters actually act their age😉. I also actually preferred this to LH!

✨The banter and chemistry between Liz & Tom is written perfectly, and I loved the way they bounced off of each other! The flirting was realistically written and not too over the top.

✨The sex scenes were 🥵. For me, these were some of the best written scenes as they were sexy, but also realistic which is my favourite type!

✨I found it incredibly refreshing that the author wrote characters that didn’t want the ‘normal’ life. They didn’t want kids, marriage or holidays to Tenerife and that’s totally okay.

✨The only thing I didn’t like was the manipulation used by Tom to get Liz to like him, and also Liz using Tom to get back at him. SO unhealthy….. BUT I’m so glad they owned their mistakes and put things right between each other.

✨Overall this is a fab rom-com with added 🌶 and would be perfect for any Ali Hazelwood fans. I already can’t wait for the next instalment in the series!!

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*About 1/2 way through Review, extended review ill be published later*

So far i'm in freaking love with the characters, time jump is done well (sometimes it blows so good on you!)

It's such a wild collection of events that throw our MCs into their current living and working relationship, I cannot wait to see what else this has to come!
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Update!

Oh my, this was definitely one of my favorites!

Forced Proximity
'Enemies to Lovers'
Forbidden Love

UGGGGH I need more now

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thank you to NetGalley for providing me with this ARC! I absolutely loved this book! I couldn’t put it down! One of my favourites this year for sure! I had originally thought it was going to be very similar to the love hypothesis but it was different, and might I say even better! The characters were all developed and had great chemistry!

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The Unbalanced Equation follows Liz and Tom, who meet at a bio mixer, and, although the two hit it off, it comes to a halt when Tom finds out he is Liz's Ph.D. assessor the next day. Trying to bury his feelings for Liz, he decides to pull a Darcy and be a massive jerk and make her life a nightmare during her postdoc. Flash forward a few years and the two are stuck on the same bench, house, and planning their parents' wedding. Now Tom decides to let his feelings out and Liz is not ready to forgive everything he did to her in the past but the two need to move forward to watch their parents get married.

So much worked for this novel, including, but not limited to:
Enemies to lovers, age gap, forced proximity, revenge antics, top tier pining, banter/tension and so much more

I loved the banter and tension between Tom and Liz, it felt natural and realistic. I ate it up! I love a woman who gives as good as he gets and a man who is unapologetically charming/flirtatious. Easily the high point is the banter between these two. The added element of forced proximity is my weakness, but I can't lie, it was super weird that this happened because her dad and his mom decided to get married. I feel like the story would have been just as good if the parents' relationship didn't exist and instead the forced proximity was altered a little. But I understand it because it made sense and the characters acknowledged the weirdness. Additionally, the conflict in the novel was a little underdeveloped especially when it came to the resolution. I loved the fact that the boiling point happens with a good amount of pages left because the pacing is so important but I really wish we got more insight into the motives of these characters especially since it is told in alternating pov's.

This falls right below The Kiss Quotient and way above The Love Hypothesis when it comes to women in STEM romances. I can definitely see the author exploring this world more and I would absolutely adore it because I had so much fun reading this.

Thank you NetGalley for this ARC.

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It was a meet-cute gone wrong. Four years ago, Liz had an interesting night with a fellow in the university mixer. After a drink spilling incident and unplanned “exchange of clothes”, they never saw each other again. To make things worse, she met her PhD assessor.. a rude, pain in the 🍑 human being… Dr. Thomas Henderson. No worries, she is finally free of him after enduring 4 years of pain under his watch. Until his lab burned down and he needs to stay at the lab where she’s working her post-doc and as if universe had not enough, her dad is marrying his mother. This is a circus! 😅

The story is teased as an offspring of Love Hypothesis and The Hating Game. I can see the reference as the pair is in STEM and an age-gap romance as well. Both geneticists, Thomas a professor while Liz is working on her post-doc. As to the enemies-to-lovers trope, the semblance with The Hating Game is that the MMC (Male Main Character) likes the FMC (Female Main Character) but rude to her.

Following that thought, what I like better is that this is dual POV (over first person with Love Hypo). I enjoyed it more that I get to “hear” the thoughts of Thomas and Liz and how messy the situation is in their heads. I get to symphatize with Tom on why he did what he did and sometimes I get annoyed with Liz on how oblivious or child-like she is. I also like the twist on their parents getting married. I feel that spin gave the story a one-up with the enemies-to-lovers in STEM trope hype. While the banter is good, even funny at times, I did not feel much tension between them steaming from hate-love. It just feels like Liz “hate “ Tom and he just gets back to her. So when they got together, I did not feel much intensity on their longing to be together. Though the ending is heart-warming, some parts are a bit cheesy. It is just a hit-or-miss for me.

This is an enjoyable book, totally took me out of my reading slump. If you’re a fan of characters nerding out each other, a touching parent-kid relationship, meddling friends - you will definitely enjoy this one.

TW: death of parents( touch on - cancer)

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Tom and Liz have an adorable meet cute and then things go awry. He's her supervisor for her doctoral studies and is so attracted and interested in her that he decides he must be extremely professional around her. Unwittingly, he comes across as kind of a jerk and Liz hates him. They truly must be meant to be, however, as fate keeps pushing them together. The Unbalanced Equation ties in so many romantic classics in one story. It's a fun read and Tom and Liz are relatable and totally adorable modern characters.

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Wow - I knew going in that I was going to enjoy this book, based on what I had seen from the blurb and some earlier reviews, but I was absolutely blown away! It was absolutely incredible! It's said to be a little bit The Love Hypothesis and a little bit The Hating Game (two of my very top favourite books!), so if you take everything you love about those books, mix them up and add some even better elements, you get The Unbalanced Equation - it's everything those two are, and even more!! Spectacular enemies to lovers, workplace romance that just really and truly has everything to give and so many twists. Truly a special book!

I really loved how they two met at a University mixer, with the orange juice incident and the very next day things changed when he became her PhD advisor (sorry- different term in Scotland I guess - Accessor?), and any sort of relationship, including a friendship, he figured was off the table, so he wasn't even friendly, acknowledging the friendship they'd struck up at the mixer and was just a complete jerk to her for 3 years. She figures now that she's done the program and has moved on to a post-doc program in a different lab, she's free and clear of the guy... until a fire in his lab causes him to move into his best friend's lab to complete critical research for his Grant funding, which just happens to be where she is now working. Can they get along for the few months it takes for the lab repairs? Not to mention the huge bombshell that both her Dad and his Mom have dropped on them, that not only do they know each other, but that they were secretly dating and are now planning a wedding - so they're going to be step-siblings? And living together??

The writing in this book is some of the best I've come across in quite some time, along with the storyline being a mash-up of two of my favourite books (while still being very unique), with so many additions to make it probably my top favourite in so long, and a contender for my top of the year (maybe not just this year!). I absolutely, completely and totally recommend this book to absolutely everybody, especially if you enjoyed either or both of the two that it's been compared to, and I know that so many people enjoyed those ones!

I received an advance review copy from NetGalley and Macfarlane Lantern Publishing and this is my honest feedback. Go pick up a copy now!

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Gave me all the feels!! A little bit 50 Shades, some manipulation and control instances (“unbalanced”), but an erotic ride that kept me rooting for an HEA nonetheless.

This ARC was provided by the publisher, via NetGalley, in exchange for an honest review.

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I liked the book. I feel a little more educated after reading it lol. I liked the writing style, plenty of humour and I liked the push and pull of the characters.

I did feel that I was reading for ages and the percent wasn't moving, but I don't know how I would change it, because I did actually enjoy it. I would read this author again, and would recommend this book to those who want a little more than a quick read

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As I read this book, I kept getting flashes of The Love Hypothesis and The Hating Game, two of the small handful of contemporary romances I happen to have read this year. I am apparently not the only one who has had this thought. Dare I say, for much of this book, I think I actually liked it better than The Love Hypothesis. The premise for the tension between the two main characters, the whole reason it's an enemies to lovers trope, is more believable (though still somewhat childish and frustrating), than the Love Hypothesis. Also, this book had even more of what I would expect a STEM romance to deliver: a smart, capable, ambitious woman, confident in her skills at her job, actually demonstrating those skills within the story, and a love interest who appreciates all of that about her and finds it attractive. I truly loved the stretches in this book that took place in the lab, the author seamlessly blending scientific language and sexual tension into a single scene. Speaking of which, the steamy scenes in this book were written really well.
All the praise aside, I did almost DNF the book after the first couple of chapters because some of the initial actions of the male main character struck me as so immature and poorly thought out. The author does redeem him eventually, but it really does require giving him another chance (or two). Quite in line with the theme of the story.
Aside from the two main characters, the rest of the supporting characters were okay. It was interesting that there was a whole another sub plot line involving their parents. It added a bit more complexity to the story and allowed for the whole "forced proximity" aspect of it.
Overall, I was very glad to have read this story. I gave it 3.5 stars, rounded up to a 4 here. I will be looking forward to more romances by this author.
Thank you to Booksgosocial and Netgalley for the digital ARC in exchange for an honest review.

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I was so excited to read this! I loved the banter between the two main characters and felt they got on really well. The cons for me was that I felt like there was a lot of inner monologues and not enough dialogue (personal opinion). While I love a lot of cliche tropes, it felt like that there was one after another, after another etc in this book.
Still a very cute read and I would recommend it!

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Thank you so much to NetGalley, the publisher, and H.L. Macfarlane for this copy.

If I'm being honest, I picked this up expecting it to be like The Love Hypothesis BUT boy was I wrong. I absolutely enjoyed this book and it just hit all the marks for me (eg. conflict, banter, will-they/won't-they moments). What made me like The Unbalanced Equation more than The Love Hypothesis is the dual POV, which worked very well with some of the tropes: Enemies to Lovers & He Falls First. Oh, and for those who love slow-burn & tons of pining, this is the book for you!

The one thing I did not like was the VERY cringy dialogue in the first few pages (ie. Tom "saving" Liz part). It just felt incredibly unnatural and embarrassing to read that I almost wanted to DNF it. Thankfully I pushed through and it got a lot better. There were still some cute-cringy moments, but at that point, it felt like they were all part of the banter. Overall, I thought this was the perfect back-to-school read, especially for my university pals out there. It was light and cheesy and the STEM setting helped with easing back to school! :)

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I really liked this one.

It gave me Normal People, Love On The Brain and The Hating Game. I definitely recommend it to readers who have loved those books.

I just didn't like this one part where he called her a bitch. Damn it made me knock a star off.

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Its been a while since I have smiled so much at a book.
I really enjoyed the two main charaters and the way they interact with each other, the banter!

I thought Tom and Liz’s inner monologs were so funny.

Liz’s so mean, not mean mean but sassy mean and that’s the best kind. I just want to be her friend.

Tom felt like a big hug, or maybe I just wanted him to give me a big hug. Thats probably it :))

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This was my first book by H.L. Macfarlane and I was not disappointed in the slightest! I am a sucker for an enemies-to-lovers and forced proximity so this book gave me everything I could've wanted.

I am the furthest thing from having a PhD and being a doctor, however, this book was so much fun. Even someone without a science background could relate to the characters and enjoy the academia setting. It had really sweet moments and I especially appreciated reading about a strong, intelligent, and no BS kind of woman like Liz.

I ate up every moment of Tom's pining and unrequited crush, and despite wanting to shake him half of the book, I absolutely adored his character and how much he loved Liz. This story was sweet, funny, and very swoon-worthy. It had great tension, hilarious banter, and the spice was very well done.

I look forward to reading more from this author!

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# General Thoughts

Usually I’m not a big romance reader but this cover and the summary kinda caught my attention. Since I work in a medical setting, the STEM theme spoke to me and I liked most of the tropes that were promised to be in this book. Lately I’ve been craving more romance in my fantasy stories so I thought I might give the actual romance genre a go. And let me say, it did not disappoint me with this one!

Here are just some of the tropes:

- forced proximity
- enemies to lovers
- female in STEM
- strong FMC
- Disclamier: Big miscommunication trope!

# Summary

Liz and Tom meet at an university event and they click immediately. After a slightly awkward scene with a lot of sexual tension there is an aprubt end to the evening.

The time jump to after Liz’s PhD is jarring at first, as the reader discovers bit by bit what happened over the last few years and why Liz and Tom aren’t on good terms anymore. The two of them are suddenly forced to work on the same lab bench and especially Liz isn’t at all happy about this development. But because romance authors can’t leave well enough alone, Liz’s father and Tom’s mother announce that they will be getting married. After the shock of this revelation, Liz gets evicted by her landlord and Tom offers to take her in. From this point onward, things get even more complicated.

# Characters

**Liz**

Elizabeth McLean is a strong FMC and POV character that I liked a lot at the beginning of the book. She knows what she wants and (almost) always has a plan how to get it. During the middle part she made some petty and questionable choices that I just couldn’t comprehend but towards the end she got me on her team again. Overall I liked her less than Tom because she really had no other reason for her mean actions except revenge and that just wasn’t enough for me.

**Tom**

Dr Thomas Henderson seems like a young, easy-going type of university professor every student loves. Unfortunately, he can be a massive ass if he chooses to. In Liz’s case, he does. He might have a reason for it but here’s where the miscommunication trope comes into play. This whole story could have been half as long if he would have just talked to Liz after the first chapter. Instead, in order to hide his feelings for her and protect his career, he thinks he has to act like the worst bully ever. PhD programs are hard enough as it is, being assigned to an assessor who tears you down at every meeting isn’t helping. So yeah, whenever we’re in Liz’s POV, I hated his guts. The thing is, as soon as we switch to Tom’s POV I couldn’t help liking him. And that’s why in my opinion the author did a great job crafting these characters and the relationship between them even though I hated the ongoing miscommunication.

# Relationships

The connection between the MCs is complicated at best. Every time they seem to get close to each other either one or the other manages to mess everything up. But I guess that’s what keeps the tension up. Overall, the relationship between Liz and Tom was never stagnant and filled with a lot of bickering and banter which made it feel much more relatable to the reader.

# Plot

Well, it’s a romance book so obviously the relationship between Tom and Liz takes center stage. But even though we focus a lot on them, there’s still other things going on in their lives. There’s work, friends and lot of normal every day things going on that we get to take part of. After the engagment of their parents is announced there’s also a lot of wedding planning going on.

# Final Thoughts

This was a nice break in my reading schedule, which is usually very fantasy heavy. It had humor and banter and good chemistry between the characters, which always makes a book more enjoyable. The STEM factor was a personal preference for me and I found some of the inside jokes hilarious.

If you like a strong FMC character and a guy that falls first, all in a scientific setting and a lot of angst around the romance, this is the book for you. (Just be warned of the miscommunication.)

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Thanks to #NetGalley, #MacFarlaneLanternPublising, #H.LMacFarlae, and #AnUnbalancedEquation, for an early copy of this delightful romcom in exchange for an honest review. This was a fun book to read between the stack of thriller/suspense I need to get to. I ecstatically recommend this book.Both hands up! The book was written from the POV of both main characters, Liz and Tom. It made more sense to be able to read what both characters were thinking it was a love simmering over a span of more than four years. I particularly enjoyed the good natured banter they had with each other. You have got to read this book for a book that is light hearted fun from beginning to end.

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I adored this book! Liz was a fantastic protagonist, and I became genuinely invested in her career and love lives. Tom was a happy balance between rogue and nerd.

I would happily read any other H. L. Macfarlane books after this one!

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4 stars! A fun read for those looking to get lost in a book. Thank you netgalley & the publisher for the ARC, in exchange for an honest review.

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I absolutely adored this book! The first plus of the book is the representation of Biology research in the story. I really enjoyed reading these parts. They also helped to make the story seem more authentic.
Also the characters in the book were to fall in love with and well developed. The chemistry between the characters can be felt well by the reader. In general, I really enjoyed the story line. I also liked the fact that you get an insight into the thoughts of both MC.

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I wish I could write a long a** review but I cannot because there are not words to describe how much I loved this book. I loveddd the fact that it was their parents getting married instead of a siblings haha.

Thank you Netgalley and BookGoSocial for sending me an ARC of this book.

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Gracias por eso, me quitó el mal sabor de boca que me dejó la hipótesis del amor. 😂😁

Mi recomendación es ir un poco a ciegas con este libro, sin leer la sinopsis así os sorprenderá.

Así que no os contaré mucho sobre la historia o los personajes. Solo lo básico.

Chico conoce a chica. Chico resulta ser su tutor de tesis, chico intenta sacarse de la cabeza a la chica, chico no puede. Chica odia a chico por haber sido demasiado duro, Chico intenta cuatro años después hacer todo lo posible por enamorar a chica.

Me ha encantado conocer poco a poco a Liz, es una protagonista original, con mucho orgullo y la cabeza sobre los hombros.

Profesor Henderson, un idiota enamorado, que más puedo decir.

En cuanto a los personajes secundarios, amo a la mamá de Thomas. Y odio a Elliot.

Amo que este ambientado en Escocia, no sólo porque lo ame, sino porque es un respiro leer un libro romántico no ambientado en los EE.UU.

Gracias por los kilt. MUCHAS GRACIAS POR ESO también😂.

He amado a los personajes.

El asunto de no querer matrimonio e hijos, ha sido refrescante, no sabía que me gustaría pero lo hizo.

Es mi tipo de libro, un poco más oscuro que las típicas comedias románticas.

Única pega, se me ha hecho un poco largo, pero todo libro de más de 300 páginas se me hace largo así que bueno. Lo bueno, es que se ha hondado mucho en todas las partes del romance, me ha gustado las chiquilladas de ambos sinceramente, ¿Quién quiere personajes maduros en sus libros? Eso no es divertido.

Y me ha gustado mucho cómo han vuelto juntos, porque mierda, ha sido súper maduro, (totalmente contradictorio de lo que he dicho anteriormente, pero es que ahí se nota la evolución del personaje).

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The Unbalanced Equation

4.5/5

I adored this book! I feel like I’m seeing a trend of books about women in science, and I love it. I couldn’t put this book down if it weren’t for having to go to work, I would have read it in one sitting!

The plot line was a little ridiculous at times and really far fetched but the way it worked out in the end, it all came together. The book was both perspectives which is a huge plus for me because I need to know what both characters are thinking 😅

"Have you tried shutting the fuck up?"
"Not yet."
"Then add it to your list of things to do today."

The chemistry between the two main characters was 😘👌🏽 The banter was superb, and the spice was just right🔥🔥 I live for enemies to lovers and all the sexual tension, and this book definitely delivered!!
I will say thought Tom did piss me off a lot… at times he was juvenile and petty AF 🙄 (hence the half star off)

"Ugh. Don't go all parental on me."
"Insinuate I'm a dad again and I swear to god I'm going to assume you have a kink you don't want me knowing about." 

Also, not a spoiler but if you like Gundam or Manga they’ve got some decent references in there!

So do yourself a favor and go pick this gem up!! Out September 15th 🎉

If you were a fan of The Love Hypothesis or Love on the Brain, then this book is must for you to pick up!

Thank you NetGalley for this online ARC in exchange for this honest review.

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Alrighty I’ll start off by saying I don’t like how people are comparing it to the Love Hypothesis in a bad way. It’s is own book and sure you can see some inspo here but let’s not put the two books side by side and saw which is better. Personally I think they both are great and they both had things that could be better.

Now moving on! This was a hilarious and witty rom com. I kinda didn’t kind the mcs being older and childish it’s almost like they couldn’t help it when they were around each other. I think we can all relate to that at some point in our lives and it was so well done here. The two are constantly trying to out do each other is nuts.

I didn’t mind the pacing or the fact that the mcs parents are getting married and didn’t tell them. Why would you when those two literally hate each other? But that hate creates amazing chemistry as well that left the sizzle after effects. If yah know what I mean!

Not to mention I think it’s so accurate how they two don’t communicate anything! I see some thought this was one but honestly most couples do not know how to communicate at all, speaking from experiences I enjoyed see characters flawed like this. It made it more fun and relatable for me, cause I’m just over here like no tell him or tell her! Stop holding back it was great! Yah need some popcorn for this drama!

Definitely recommend for a witty, fun, sassy/grumpy lover in all of us!

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This book hooked me right from the start. The characters were very interesting and felt like real people. The story line was believable and engaging. Highly recommend.

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Take the usual crush turned enemies at the workplace trope.
Put them at the same work bench after she starts her postdoc and his lab blows up.
Add the complication of his mom and her dad getting married.
Now put them all under one roof for the next three months.
With a dash of her quest for revenge and his for keeping her close.

That's The Unbalanced Equation. It's funny and smart and I enjoyed it much more than I expected.
I liked that both characters grew and learned because Liz needed to grow up just as much as Tom needed to loosen up. I loved their parents. This whole book was fun.

*I received an advance copy of this book from NetGalley and the publisher and I am required to disclose that in my review in compliance with federal law.

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Liz and Tom have essentially a love/hate relationship, though it is designed that way by Tom himself. Liz is determined to keep him an enemy, but fate has other ideas. ♡︎

This enemies to lovers STEM rom-com is told from both points of view & was such a steamy read. I love novels set in other places besides the US because it exposes me to other cultures. And I love reading both sides of the love story.

Highly recommend for those wanting to add to their romance novel collection!

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I throughly enjoyed this book. I couldn't put it down. I loved the relationship between the charactors. The author was really good at bringing the charactors to life. I love a romance and this ticked all the boxes. I would 100% recommend this author and I look forward to their future releases.

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Thank you to @netgalley and @macfarlane_lantern_publishing for the arc of this book.

The Unbalanced Equation had all my favourite things. A strong female lead, forced proximity, enemies to lovers, second chance romance, workplace romance, age gap romance, slow burn, and spice.
I really enjoyed Liz and Tom. They were fun, the banter and sass between them while they try to piss each other off is hilarious. I love the duel pov so we get to see things from both Tom and Liz.

I loved how Tom and Liz were pushed together in more ways than one and I definitely didn’t see a couple of things coming which made a typical romance a bit twisty!

I’d highly recommend this is you’re a fan of rom coms.

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This book was so good! I really loved how we got both perspectives in what seemed like an even amount of times. It really made it feel like we were getting to know each character individually and we were getting to know them the same amount. I feel like all of the characters (main and side characters) were very flushed out and we got to know everyone well.
Tom, the male love interest, felt a bit possessive over Liz. I felt like this mostly occurred before they were together, or even when they were still considered enemies.
Other than that, it was a very well written book and I really enjoyed it.
Thank you to Net Galley and McFarlane Lantern Publishing for the ARC.

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This is the first book that I’ve read by this author and it will definitely not be my last. STEM workplace books have become one of my favorites to read lately and then you add the enemies to lovers and you got yourself the perfect book.

After 4 years of having to deal with a PhD assessor from hell, Liz thinks that she’s finally free from Dr Henderson. Little does she know that some unforeseen circumstances will have Dr. Thomas Henderson sharing a lab bench with her. If you thought that would be the end of it, shortly after she finds out that her father is marrying Toms mother. As of things can’t get any worse, Liz finds herself living at Toms home, and the rest is history.

Overall, I really enjoyed this book and would recommend it to anyone that likes rom coms, enemies to lovers, & age gaps.

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RATING: ⭐⭐⭐⭐
STEAM: 🔥🔥🔥

Trust the author's process. Sometimes we need to remind ourselves of that, and I am glad I did with this read.

Dr. Thomas Henderson is on top of Dr. Elizabeth Maclean's most hated list. After all, the man made her Ph.D. assessment years a living hell. That was after they met briefly after a party and made a great impression on each other. This has left Liz baffled and traumatized after all of these years.

Now he's back in her life one time. Not only are they sharing a research bench after his lab was burnt down, but their parents are also marrying each other. Liz ends up living with Tom and their parents, and she has to go along with the wedding planning.

But Tom does not seem to be the evil Ph.D. assessor she experienced before. He is kind and considerate and he cannot seem to take his eyes off her. Now her opinion -- and possibly feelings -- for her former mentor could be changing.

I have to be honest: I was close to not finishing this book. The two characters were immature and constantly flip-flopped on their feelings and thoughts. Sure, they had fantastic chemistry when they were not bickering, and there were moments that made me swoon and giggle. Yet, for two grown adults, they played too many mind-games that felt appropriate for their age.

Something compelled me to keep reading, however. A good chunk of it can be attributed to the great ensemble cast, which included the adorable affianced parents and Tom's best friend Daichi (who also happens to be Liz's boss). The spicy moments were also fantastic.

I am glad I stuck with it. H.L. Macfarlane does a great job of circling back to the main points that had me frustrated with the book, and she provides fantastic arcs for the main characters. Once the clouds part in this read so to speak, we find that Tom and Liz are really two products of life's circumstances doing their best to navigate it all. What I find the most relatable in their story is how their anxieties affect their perception and -- in turn -- influence their relationships with each other and other people. I also loved the idea that when people make mistakes -- even ones that hurt -- we have to remember that they are people, too, and sometimes their intention may have been quite different and possibly the opposite.

** I am voluntarily reviewing an advance copy of this book. Thank you to H.L. Macfarlane, BooksGoSocial, and NetGalley for providing an ARC. **

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When Liz and Tom meet for the first time, sparks go flying, but before anything can happen, Liz has to go. Tom is determined to find her the next day, but first thing in the morning he learns he has been nominated to be her PhD assessor... so he decides to put his feelings on hold. Four years later, when they both find out Liz's dad and Tom's mom have been secretly seeing each other and are about to get married, circumstances forces them to work together and live under the same roof, and Liz is not happy about it, because Tom was very tough on her through her PhD. However, Tom sees it as an opportunity to creep into her life.
I LOVED this! This is an almost-lovers to enemies to lovers/forced proximity romance with lots of great chemistry and banter and smut, all in a STEM background setting. It is told in dual POV, and although I found both MC to be a bit immature at times, I had a hard time putting it down. It was on the longer side of contemporary romance, but I was glad about it, because it was so good! I'm usually a super fast reader, I should've been able to go through this in one night, but I voluntarily slowed myself down and took my time with it. If you loved Ali Hazelwood’s books and novellas, and The Soulmate Equation by Christina Lauren, you will love this!
I received an advance review copy for free and I am leaving this review voluntarily.

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This book felt so familiar to me, it's a book with an academia setting, world i am familiar with things that at first didn't like about her, like she being not like the other girls, it honestly was so normal, more than people think, specially in that context dominated by men, so we have to do a lot to fit in.

The love story was nice and the characters too, the way the author wrote it is so accurate for the context. really nice.

Recommend it if you like STEM situated books.

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This book was SOOOo good. Just enough science to make my little researcher's heart happy, and some of the steamiest STEM romance that I've ever had the delicious pleasure of reading. Seriously, A++++ on this work of scientific romance.

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“The two of us were being equally reckless fools, playing a game of horny chicken until only one of reigned victorious.”

After drinking cheap mimosas at a departmental mixer Liz and Tom feel an instant attraction, however the following day Tom becomes her phD assessor stopping any chance of the two becoming involved.

Following the completion of her phD Liz believes she is finally free of Tom who has made every assessment a misery throughout her studies. But a series of events leads to the two being forever entwined in each other’s lives. Will Liz get over how she has been treated by Tom for the past four years? Will Tom ever admit to the reasons behind his poor decision-making?

All is answered in this enemies to lovers rom-com. With declarations of love from unexpected places and some torturous means of revenge this book will keep you on your toes.

I enjoyed reading both Liz and Toms character development as they both realise that the things coming in the way of their own happiness are themselves.

The supporting characters really add to the story helping to push the main characters to where they need to be.

We get some steamy scenes throughout the book including an extra steamy scene in the shower!

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The Unbalanced Equation H.L. Macfarlane

⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
🌶️🌶️🌶️🌶️

If you loved ‘The Love Hypothesis’ then you’ll love this book too! Another STEM inspired ‘he falls first’, ‘forced proximity’, ‘enemies to lovers’ romance 🫠

A story about Thomas and Elizabeth, two Scottish anime loving scientists that are forced to work in the same lab, on the same table - this would be perfectly fine if Tom didn’t treat Liz horribly whilst she was completing her studies. In addition to this they have found out that their parents are recently engaged so they are now all having to live together under the same roof 🙃

I loved this book! I found it to be such a quick easy read and it had me hooked from the very beginning. I thought it was just as good as Love Hypothesis ~ if not better ~ with about the same amount of spice, and I just want to read it again already 🫶

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I found this to be a bit of a slow starter for me but once it got going, I couldn’t stop reading! I love the banter-filled relationship of Liz and Tom, almost as much as I loved the spice! The real winners of the book however are Jenny and Jim!

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The Unbalanced Equation is the perfect tale for those imperfect, humane love stories. It makes us fall in love with all the things we never value, and appreciate the ingenious attractiveness of STEM and specially female representation in said department. The author wrote intelligently, brilliantly and kindly this novel, and it shows.

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Fun romance for those that love contemporary, modern romance. The story follows Liz and Tom, as they meet again 4 years after their initial meeting. I enjoyed the witty banter and chemistry between Liz and Tom.

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Not “quite” a second chance romance, but it has that feeling! I really enjoyed this story set in academia, especially so because it takes place in Scotland. I could picture the locations as I read. The steam took a while to build but was totally worth it. I have already recommended this book to my audience and I only finished it last night.

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Holy flawed characters!!! I was hooked from start to finish. I enjoyed the conflict between Liz and Tom. I thought the story flowed easily. The dialogue was believable, and the chemistry between the two was hot. I really enjoyed the side characters and plot.

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The Unbalanced Equation has a few troupes happening with enemies to lovers and forced proximity along with an age gap. The characters are interesting and while it starts as like at first sight between Tom and Liz, circumstances make it into hate for 4 years. Things start to change with a lab fire force them to work in the same lab and then finding out their parents are getting married throws a whole new craziness to the mix. I enjoyed the science int he story along with the romance and it was a quick read.

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This was a fantastic read! If I could give it more than 5 stars I would! The relationship between the main characters was perfect. I would read so many things by this author!

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I don't know if this was funnier because it's set in Glasgow, or because I have the voices of the characters in my head! The accents are fighting for supremacy in my brain!

Tom is a prominent academic and when he meets Liz at a department social event, they bond over cheap booze and give in to an instant attraction. After a disaster strikes and they have to change clothes, what-might-have-been never happens and Tom later finds out that Liz is his new Ph.D. candidate. So that instant attraction has to go into hiding - and he covers up the simmering feelings he has with a snotty attitude towards Liz and her work.

Liz really thought Tom might have been a great friend, even if the attraction she felt was one-sided but in the 4 years since their initial meeting she has learned to loathe him. But after a calamitous series of events, they are now not only working in the same lab but their widowed parents are getting married and they're ging to be housemates!

As I live right nearby where Tom lives and the University stands, all the posh, WestEnd Glasgow accents are alive in my head. I've met many people like Tom and he just leapt off the page for me. He was a complete bampot over Liz and let his attempt at keeping them at bay take over and go too far the other way! Liz rode that fine line between love and hate for Tom and I loved ho her wee clan of friends automatically took her side and hated Tom before they met him!

Tom really has to learn where that line is between helping and programming her entire life! All the secondary characters are fully fleshed out and I could attach them to someone I actually know, like Peter became my brother-in-law, who is also from Nigeria, and therefore became all the more real.

Completely immersed myself in this and read it in one go. A solid 4 stars!

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I utterly enjoyed myself during this one. Fun and super easy to get through. Some anime references that I didn’t follow, but it doesn’t take away from the story. Spicy scenes are explicit but they weren’t super long 🥺.

No epic plot, but it was a great pallet cleanser with a side of escapism.

Special thanks to Netgalley and BooksGoSocial for this digital ARC.

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Enemies to lovers trope. A favorite of mine though in The Unbalanced Equation the enemy part is really just on Liz’s side. Liz dislikes Tom with a passion. After they met at a party, he became her PhD assessor and was super tough on her. He had his reasons though she does not know. Now, due to a fire in a lab, they are working in close proximity to each other. It gets better in the fact that their parents have been dating and are now getting married. Liz’s landlord asks her to vacate her apartment, so she moves in with Tom. It is a enemies to lovers trope but also a close proximity one.
I really enjoyed this book a lot. The characters were well written. Looking back on the author’s other books, this book seems to stray away from what she usually writes about. I have not read her other works, but I think she really killed it. Out of the two characters, I preferred Tom to Liz when it comes to attitude but I do understand the issue for the chip on Liz’s shoulder.
The Unbalanced Equation has funny parts, nerdy parts, and hot steamy parts. This is definitely not a closed door romance. I recommend this to anyone looking for a nice, quick, hot read.
Thanks to NetGalley, BooksGoSocial, and H.L. Macfarlane for the e-ARC of this book. All opinions are my own.

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Anyone out there looking for an “enemies to lovers to enemies to step-siblings to lovers book”? Very specific trope isn’t it? This book really has it all. Great banter, steamy sex, some amazing groveling, step siblings who hook up and nobody thinks that it’s weird. Overall, this was a big winner for me.

Tom and Liz are geneticists forced to share a lab bench after Tom’s lab burns down. Liz hates Tom bc he was her PhD assessor and acted like a big dickwad bc he had a crush on her yet has the emotional maturity of a 6 yo. Tom and Liz find out that their widowed parents are engaged to each other and as fate would have it, they all end up moving into Tom’s luxurious townhouse together. Things get steamy fast as the crazy genetcists are attracted to each other like cytosine is to guanine (#dnahumor), but then Tom blows it all up bc he’s a child who makes bad decisions. Neither of these two boneheads could effectively communicate their feelings…even all the other characters in the book were telling them to stop being fuckwits and just talk to each other. Despite their flaws, I still rooted for Tom and Liz and loved their chemistry. Would def recommend this one…I’ll say it was a tad slow for me to get into, but once I did I couldn’t put it down.

Allow me to step on my soapbox for a moment- why does at least one character in a romance have to have a dead parent? Walt Disney started this trend with all his princesses and it has carried over into romance novels and I don’t love it one bit. For some people this is a trigger and we use smut as an escape. It’s hard to escape reality when there are dead parents littering the pages of our favorite romance novels. It was a necessary evil for this plot bc the main characters’ widowed parents met and married, thus joining them as sexed up step siblings- so I forgive. But many times, it’s just used as a reason for one MC to be sad/lonely/messy/etc and I’m tired of it. The end.

Smut- 3.13 stars
Romance- 4.82 stars
Story- 4.75 stars
Hot and horny Scottish men as step-brothers with benefits- 17.39 stars

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In the vein of Ali Hazelwood, The Unbalanced Equation is a delightfully nerdy rom/com. Liz and Tom meet and hit it off the day before he finds out he'll be her assessor for her graduate program. After a tortured several years, Liz finally graduates and is free of Tom... Or so she thinks. Then life finds every way to throw them together. Liz is unapologetically nerdy and firm in her convictions. Tom for his part is simultaneously sweet and frustrating. Overall the book came together in a telling that was hard to put down.
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The hype is strong with this one and it didn´t disappoint.

Forced proximity and enemies to lovers are two of my favorite tropes and even though I wouldn´t considered Tom and Liz to be enemies, cause he doesn´t hate her, he´s just really dumb for a scientist.

Olive is a very relatable character, a sweetheart I adored her throughout the whole book.
Tom on the other hand deserves a good smack for how dense he is, it´s like looking at a teen doing puppy eyes to his teacher.

The story is super cute and the reason for the close proximity is hilarious and ridiculous but it certainly helps to make this book entertaining. The level off scientific detail that the author put into this book leads me to believe that she has background in that area.

The age gap between the characters is BIG but at the end works great and makes all of Tom´s dumb moments to be even funnier.

I loved this book and for sure will be in the lookout for more books from this author.
This book is a quick, fluffy read that had me glued to the pages, couldn’t put it down.

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If you love Ali Hazelwood then this is the book for you! Macfarlane mixes romance with science in this deliciously sweet romance. An enemies to lovers, forced proximity romance between Liz and Tom leads to a lot of arguments and misunderstandings, but it is not without it's warm moments too. The Unbalanced Equation was a fun read, though some of Tom's actions were certainly reputable, I did overall enjoy the book.

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The Unbalanced Equation
Author: H. L. Macfarlane

eARC & Book Review
Publish Date: September 15, 2022

We love a STEM-romance combo!

The Unbalanced Equation follows Elizabeth "Liz" Maclean, a postdoc, and her formerPhD assessor, Dr Thomas "Tom" Henderson. After suffering under Tom's scrutiny for four years, Liz is finally free of him as she begins her postdoc - or so she thought. After Tom's lab goes up in flames (shoutout to the undergrads), Tom has no choice but to share a lab bench with Liz...for three whole months.

Just when you think things couldn't get any worse, they do! Much to the duo's dismay, the find out (together) that Liz's dad and Tom's mom are getting married! Combine sharing a workspace, engaged parents, and having to live together (read and you'll find out why!), emotions come to light about why Tom acts the way he does.

This is a smart, spicy rom-com that combines enemies to lovers and forced proximity all wrapped in a STEM-themed bow. For fans of The Hating Game, The Love Hypothesis, and Love on the Brain, this one is for you!

This truly was such a lighthearted, sexy read! It had a great pace and was truly a fun book.

Thank you NetGalley, the publisher, and the author for this eARC in exchange for my honest review.

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Dr Thomas Henderson is attending a staff and student undergrad mixer at Glasgow University when he spots a gorgeous woman across the room in a heated discussion about anime with three fellow students. Drawn to her he heads over and jumps into the discussion, several mimosa's later they find themselves covered in the things as a waiter falls. Cleaning up he hopes to get her number but she never comes back. His hopes are dashed further the following day when he is told that he will be her PhD assessor - sop opts to be an elusive dick to her for the next four years.

Elizabeth McClean (Liz) is just finishing off her last bar shift before she prepares to start her post-doc placement. Her night goes from bad to worse when Tom Henderson is there on a stag night. She'd been hoping to be finally rid of her PhD assessing professor who made the last four years hell. Just when she thought things couldn't get any worse she finds out that she will be working in the same lab as him due to a fire in his lab, Her luck is clearly on the downturn when she discovers her father has been secretly dating none other than Tom's mother and they are getting married at Christmas. The cherry on top of her run of bad luck is her landlord selling the flat she lives in and finds herself forced to move in with Tom and their parents!

Over the course of the weeks and months to the wedding, Tom is determined to win Liz's affection now that there is no professional reason that they can't date. But whilst his attempts are somewhat successful his method requires some improvement Liz is confused as to how she feels towards Tom, after feeling dejected after the mixer and his harsh assessments. But she grows to like him despite not wanting the stereotypical life of marriage, kids and a holiday to Tenerife.

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Ein richtig süßer, humorvoller Liebesroman. Ein typischer "Erz-Feinde" weden Liebespaar Setting. Die Geschichte erinnert ein bisschen an das letzte Buch von Ali Hazelwood.

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After being a little unsure and tentative at the beginning, I ended up really liking this one! Some of the circumstances felt a little ridiculous but I love a trope so I didn't mind that much. Once I got into it, I literally could not put it down. The themes of complicated grief and forgiveness were very well tackled and I loved those elements of the story. I will definitely recommend this to my friends.

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Gahhhhhh! Super loved this book! These two are now part of my favourite couples forever! The chemistry they had ever since the beginning, the fact that they could both nerd-out to each other, and the bedroom scenes were sooooo hot I burned…ahhhhh, I love them! This book was really sweet too and, although Liz and Tom were smashing together, the plot really showed the ups and downs that they had in their relationship. I really liked how the book showed that life isn’t perfect and neither are relationships but it’s trying to get better and foster relationships that’s key. The flaws of both Liz and Tom were clear as daylight and it was nice that they weren’t downplayed or hidden, instead, they were accepted as a part of the person and both Liz and Tom did their best throughout their story to become better people. It was a great and fun romance, and the laughs/giggles and grins that came over me as I read it were too many to count! A romance worth picking up!

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The Unbalanced Equation | H. L. Macfarlane
A cheeky rivals/stepsiblings to lovers with a side of cozy winter academia.

Tomorrow won’t come soon enough for Dr. Elizabeth Maclean to get some distance from her grumpy PhD assessor, Dr Thomas Henderson. Unfortunately, the combination of unattended equipment destroying his lab, a surprise family engagement and an eviction notice means that coveted space is out of the question.

Some of my favorite tropes are represented – close proximity, enemies to lovers, and “I didn’t know you were THAT rich” with a sickeningly generous helping of off-the-charts chemistry. I loved watching sour turn sweet with flowers and gifts – and teetering on the edge of my seat to see if (or when) the would get caught in all of their sneaking around in plain sight!

I loved the wintery setting and characters who know what they want – a relatively quick read with ups and downs, hot and cold emotions and a happy ending with lovers you know were always meant to be.

Thanks to NetGalley for the ARC!

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I really enjoyed this! Such a cute balance of cheesey romcom and fun!
The character development made me worry a little in the beginning but I love the having to work together but falling for each other trope and the fact it's a stem area ticked all of the boxes for me.
Fans of Ali Hazelwood will enjoy
4/5*

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Thank you to NetGalley for an advanced review copy in exchange for my honest opinion. 

The Unbalanced Equation was such an enjoyable read. A four-star read that includes,
-STEM Romance
-Hate to love'
- Workplace romance
- Forced proximity 

Elizabeth Maclean and Dr. Thomas Henderson have an undeniable chemistry which they both pent down for four years when he becomes her PhD assessor. As she is about to leave the scrutiny of Tom his lab has burned down and now has to work alongside Liz on the same bench no less. To make matters worse they learn that their widowed parents are engaged, and they are soon to be step siblings. Liz didn't think her luck could get anymore terrible, but her landlord kicks her out with a three days' notice and has no other choice to move in with Tom, and their parents. 

The book is set in Scotland which in my opinion what made Liz and Tom's banter grittier, funny and all together made their attraction fly off the pages! It did start slow in the beginning but once the main characters got up to their antics and the tension between them got more prominent, I couldn't put it down. I love some tension!

I also loved seeing the relationship they have with each of their parents. Tom loses his dad to cancer and Liz her mom so if parent death is sensitive topic, I'd be weary but I thought it was written very well and I enjoyed how supportive they are of their parent's engagement.  The book's biggest trope is the miscommunication trope, the main characters time and time again have to be told by their loved ones to own up to their feelings and things they shouldn't have done. Usually it really irks me but I enjoyed how it was written in the plot. 

My favorite plot point and the reason why I would recommend this book is Tom and Liz' view on marriage and kids. It was nice to see something other than the standard HEA and it was ultimately more relatable.

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Readers who loved "The Love Hypothesis" will instantly gravitate to this gem of a read. It starts with a simple meet cute between an upcoming Ph.D. student, Liz, and a professor, Tom at a college in Glasgow (bucket list trip!). There is an instant connection between these two over their love of science and anime, and their chemistry is off the charts. While they both feel this pull toward each other, neither one of them could foresee what happens next.

Due to circumstances beyond Tom's control, he becomes Liz's Ph.D. assessor, meaning hands off the student! He tries a not-so-great tactic to keep some distance between them, it doesn't really work. Any resentment is truly just the embers of desire getting hotter and hotter. Add in some hysterical family drama, fiercely protective friends, and some CRAZY AMOUNTS OF STEAM, and you have an absolute winner.

Go read and enjoy!

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Thanks to NetGalley and publisher for the e-ARC in exchange for an honest review!

I was intrigued by the blurb and I enjoyed this book a lot more than I expected!
I really love both of the characters, both as individuals, as scientists and anime lovers! Although there are some flaws in their personalities, it made them more relatable as if they're real person. Of course, I'm really enjoying all of their hilarious, flirty, and wit banter. It make the stories more alive and entertaining given the situation they're in. From strangers who attracted to each other, enemies, labmate, and *spoiler alert!* future step-siblings and housemate! This book has dual POVs that presents you... THE PINING THEY BOTH HAVE TO EACH OTHER FOR 2/3 OF THE STORY--which got me screaming so hard! Not to mention all their pranks and sexual tension!

Overall, this book is a hilarious rom-com filled with adorable side characters and was well-written. The author has doing a good job on narrating the feelings and frustration both main characters are having. And I think anyone who enjoyed The Love Hypothesis and My Mechanical Romance would enjoy this book too!

Overall rate: 4/5

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Well, lets just start off by saying that if you haven't read this book already, you're really, really missing out. i loved the banter between characters, there was never a dull moment between them and i honestly wish they were real so we could be friends!! this did not feel like your conventional love story which i loved. if you enjoy a good (and i mean absolutely amazing) grumpy-sunshine trope, you will love this because Elizabeth (female lead) is quite the grumpy pants and Thomas (male lead) can be seen as, a definite flirt, but a ray of sunshine. how often are the women portrayed as the grumpy characters, loved that!
and yet again i have fallen for another fictional man written by a female author, standards are set.

the relationship between the main characters did feel a bit odd, because of their parents and it felt a bit toxic, but i grew to love them.

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This was a perfect read for the day when I had to take care of my gastro-virused daughter. In between cleanups and rubbing her back I enjoyed reading this romance about a couple of animae geeks who also dabble in academia labs and science and love.

This story had an age gap, a professor/student relationship (not an inappropriate one based on the characters' actions), family obligations (their parents are going to GASP marry each other), miscommunication trope tossed in with years upon years of longing. The LONGING made this story.

I enjoyed the pacing of the book, however, at times I wished they had better communication with each other in order to avoid a lot of conflict, but alas, where's the fun in that? :)

I disagreed with one action Liz convinced Tom to make near the end of the story because I felt like it was his choice to make - alone.

This was a fun, British story with lots of open-door sizzling romance.

Thank you NetGalley and BooksGoSocial for an e-copy of THE UNBALANCED EQUATION to review.

I rate THE UNBALANCED EQUATION four out of five stars.

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This is an enemies to lovers romcom. I definitely appreciated the STEM aspect of the book and I liked the dialogue and the character development. I was initially unimpressed about the age difference and uneven power dynamic when the main characters first meet. Years pass before their romantic relationship fully develops and they are on more even footing so I admired that the author took the story this way. Overall a great read.

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A huge thanks to NetGalley and BooksGoSocial for the ARC of this book to read for free in exchange for a review!

If you're on the lookout for a women in science, workplace, enemies to lovers book then The Unbalanced Equation is the one for you! It has all of that, plus so much more that make this book a truly fabulous read.

Now to start, anyone who has read any of my blog posts knows that I'm an absolute WHORE for a split POV, especially in a romance novel, so when I saw that this book had split POV I was over the moon, it was like a dream come true. The feeling of which continued throughout the entire book.

The characters were the real stand out for me and having that split POV to see the story progress through both their eyes was just perfect.

Whilst we saw the book from Liz and Tom's perspective (who I definitely have a crush on now I've read it, both of them that is) and they were just two wonderfully written characters. Their interactions with each other and the supporting characters in the book were excellently done and cannot be faulted. Just reading the chapters through their POV made me feel all warm and fuzzy inside, they were just such fabulous characters.

And the characters were only further supported by the plot, which oh my god WAS SO GOOD. I love a good enemies to lovers situation and whilst it was maybe one sided enemies to lovers it was still so worth the read.

The story itself was just the perfect mash up of different elements and each aspect of the plot worked together to create this story that had be snorting with laughter, gasping in shock and left me feeling warm and fuzzy inside. I don't want to give too much away, but I will say if you like women in science (and enjoyed The Love Hypothesis, this is a book for you!)

And oh my gosh, the setting! Set in Scotland the author just managed to make the entire setting seem so beautiful and it definitely aided my enjoyment of the book.

The majority of that came from the authors ability to write such wonderfully crafted sentences and paragraphs that left me wanting to be in Scotland with our main characters, living their lives and experiencing everything they did. It was just a really easy book to get drawn into and enjoy, and that is all down to the authors writing.

On the whole, The Unbalanced Equation is well worth the read and I thoroughly enjoyed it and can't wait to do a reread in the future!

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This was fun and steamy and full of all the tropes! A workplace, dual POV, enemies to lovers, second chance, forced proximity with pining and a strong female MC in STEM that I didn't want to put down. Highly recommended for fans of Ali Hazelwood! Much thanks to NetGalley and the author for a chance to read an early digital copy in exchange for my honest review. This was my first book by HL Macfarlane and I'm excited to read more. I especially enjoyed that the story was set in Scotland!

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4.5 stars! Amazingly fun, nerdy read with wonderful characters and a great setting. With a hysterical plot twist that had me actually laughing out loud and the delicious tension between Liz and Tom, this book hooked me from the start and kept me entertained the whole way through. Full of great banter, a badass female heroine kicking but at her job, and an incredible slow burn, this was a great read that put me through the entire spectrum of human emotions. Both heart wrenching and steamy, and packed with just enough nerdy goodness to make it perfect. Such a great read! *I received an ARC in exchange for my honest review.

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I’m going to start by saying: I’m truly shocked at the low Goodreads ratings. I really enjoyed this book! I think if you liked The Love Hypothesis, you’d like this!
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Personally, I really enjoyed their first meet and what followed. I don’t think he needed to be *such* a jerk to her all those years he was her superior, but I can understand where he was trying to go with it. I’m also the kind of person who defaults to standoffish if I am trying to keep someone at bay, so I get it. I just think making her cry is a bit much. That being said, I thought this was a fun, lighter read with a nice blend of chemistry, STEM & a few great tropes thrown in!
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Here’s what to expect to in The Unbalanced Equation:
Enemies to Lovers
Workplace Romance
STEM
Age gap romance
Grumpy/Sunshine
He Falls First
Anime
NO marriage or baby at the end, just a HEA
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BLURB:
What do a bad landlord, a family wedding and a rogue Bunsen burner all have in common?

After suffering four years of scrutiny from her PhD assessor, Elizabeth Maclean believes she’s finally free of Dr Thomas Henderson’s tyranny when she begins her postdoc. But when a fire goes off in Tom’s lab (stupid undergrads) he ends up working in the same lab as Liz.
On the same bench, no less.
For three whole months.

To make matters worse – and much to their mutual surprise – Tom’s mum and Liz’s dad announce their impending marriage after a whirlwind romance. So when Liz’s landlord tells her to move out, pronto, it tips her over the edge. Desperate for a place to stay and in need of a savior, the last person Liz expects to offer her a temporary home is Tom himself.

Now stuck working together, living together and planning their parents’ Christmas wedding together, will Liz discover that Tom’s attitude over the last four years was all a ruse to hide his true feelings? Or are the two doomed to fail in their co-existence experiment?

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This was such an excellent book: I was so genuinely surprised! As a fellow woman in STEM, it was great to see such a perfect focus on being in a biology/genomics lab. But in the same view, I thought it was great that this faded into the background a bit to clearly stand the romantic storyline front and center. It gave a backbone to Liz and Tom, but wasn't pushed too heavily.
The sexual scenes were incredibly well written, just the right blend of hot and heavy with descriptions, and the B story of the parental romance did serve the story really well.. If I had any criticism at all, and its minimal at best, it would be that the final 'conflict' between the leads seemed a bit forced, and I never once considered it a major obstacle. That is probably more of a reflection of how good they were as a partnership than poor writing, but just something to consider!

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I'm a sucker for enemies to lovers and anything in STEM. I loved the banter between Liz and Tom and they had wonderful chemistry. I also enjoyed the dual POV. Sometimes Tom came across as juvenile, however, the dual POV allowed us to "see" him which helped me understand his intentions, making him more likable overall. I was pleasantly surprised by this book, and it was steamier than I expected! Overall a solid, 3.5 star read I'll round up to 4! I recommend this to anyone who loves enemies-to-lovers, banter, and characters in STEM.

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4.5 stars. I absolutely loved this book! The MC's are so relatable even though they're pretty much geniuses :) I love the enemies-to-lovers progression. Tom= swoon :)

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This book was everything I wanted it to be. It had me turned pages without even realizing. It was so good!

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The Unbalanced equation is everything you look in a book. It has enemies to lovers trope, i-want-you-but-cant, slow-burn and everything in between. When i read the synopsis I thought it to be as similar as "The love Hypothesis" but it wasn't. It may have the same type of storyline but I can guarantee it that it wasn't the same.
The characters meet cute was an unexpected one and the turn of events that took place was too. Both Liz and Tom were well written. Tom being the professor, who is stoic, hard to please and well...too good to be true. Liz on the other hand is the strong female character with sarcasm, anger issues and is a smart as ever. Both of the characters have their own traumas and issues and I love how they have helped each other through it. I feel destiny and fate had a real big role in this book as it brought both the characters back together even though Liz passed out of college years ago.
Each character played an important role, especially Tom's best friend who by the way was always Team Tiz (that's what Im gonna call it). I loved the moments when there is a scene of vulnerability from both characters showing that even the strongest can let their shields down. There are some sentences in this book that really made me go full emotional mode which is something that doesn't happen often.
A must read for those who loved "The Love Hypothesis" and "The Spanish Love Deception".
Overall the book is a 5/5 star.

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a great story with great characters that was very easy to read. It was written very well and I loved the combination of tropes that were in included in the story.

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I really enjoyed this book! Tom and Liz are researchers who both love anime, but when Tom suddenly becomes her assessor, there's no room for romance. Four years later, is there a hope for a second chance? The characters are well written, the story moves along easily, and there's loads of UK humor.

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I loved this book.

Tom and Liz's initial meeting and mutual attraction before everything went to hell was a cute and entertaining start that had me hooked and it set the scene for why Tom was a bit over the top as her PhD assessor.

A lot was made of how horrible Tom was to Liz during her PhD but we aren't given any specifics so it was difficult to get overly annoyed about it on her behalf. However, it went on for four years, making me wonder how she was still attracted to the man after that.

Their interactions from when they reconnect in the bar where she works to the inevitable HEA are filled with funny quips and one-liners. There were laugh-out-loud moments all the way through this book but also a few charming scenes.

Tom lacks good judgement when it comes to manipulating Liz's life so they have to spend more time living together but the story is so cute and funny it's easy to gloss over that. When the time came, the pair made an adorable couple. The side characters who were keenly watching their progress from enemies to lovers were also a likeable, funny and relatable bunch.

Another thing I really loved about Tom and Liz was that they didn't want to get married or have children and they didn't change their minds or have a surprise pregnancy at the last moment. This was refreshing to read and I hope to see more couples like this in mainstream romance.

The unbalanced equation is a light-hearted, very funny and low-angst romantic comedy that will lift your spirits.

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This is the perfect book for when you're wanting to wrap yourself up in the classic romantic enemies-to-lovers trope. Tom and Liz are both academics in the same molecular field and meet when Liz is a first year PhD student and Tom is a post-doc? faculty already? Either way - Tom is further along than Liz in their academic trajectories. They're instantly attracted to each other when they meet Liz's 1st year, but a whole bunch of stuff happens during her 4 years of PhD where she actually ends up hating Tom. Fast forward to Liz starting her post-doc: Liz's dad is marrying Tom's mom. Weird, right? This book did ALMOST cross the line into some weird step-sibling fantasies and I wasn't sure if I was going to get on board with a Liz/Tom romance, but of course I did. I read this book in a day and I'm sure you would, too!! Perfect book to curl up on the couch with and there's a good amount of steam. I can't wait for the next one in the series.

Thanks so much to NetGalley and the publisher for my free copy in exchange for an honest review.

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This was fun, a bit predictable but a great vacation read. Thomas was the Phd supervisor from hell to Liz, so when she gets her dream job she is thrilled, only to find that she now has to share lab space with him. To make matters worse their parents have met and fallen in love..........

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Loved this so much! The characters were flawed but so lovable. Their banter was perfect. The storyline was unique. Such a fun read!

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A wonderful romantic comedy, with enemies to lovers and a forced proximity trope. I loved Tom and Liz, their chemistry was sizzling. The character and story development was done absolutely well. I loved the banter between Tm and Liz. All in all this as a fantastic rom-com.

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ARC REVIEW

I honestly love when there is banter, however in this book it was a bit much and I was frustrated that there is obvious tension but then the FMC tries to avoid her feeling for REVENGE. There’s one scene where the character seemed childish considering they are adults. Overall, I did enjoy the tension and banter between Liz and Thomas. I also love the fact that not wanting kids was tackled in this book and the characters did not change their mind about it in  the end.

If you like:

- enemies to lovers
- Strong independent female lead
- Forced proximity
- Second chance romance
- Workplace romance
- Age gap
- Spice
- Class/status difference
- Dual POV
- The love hypothesis vibes
THIS IS THE BOOK FOR YOU

Favorite scene:
“Come home with me” I growled against her ear, barely able to contain myself. “Screw your party. Screw me, instead. You can’t look at me with a straight face and tell me you don’t want to” HE GROWLED????!! HAWT HAWT HAWT*

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If you love the Love Hypothesis, you will definitely like this book! It was 100% inspired by the latter.

I too enjoyed it. It had all the good vibes I look for.

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I really enjoyed this book. I hope the author continues to write more books in the future. I can't wait to see what the author releases in the future.

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After reading the love hypothesis , that I have loved , this comes with the nearly same storyline. The plot , characters and the character development are so so good. The way the characters are written, mind blowing. Despite having the nearly same plot lines, this standsout.
Tom is the new heartthrob after Alex ;).
Would definitely recommend this book to the Elena armas fans , those who loved reading the love hypothesis.

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If you like steamy rom coms set in academia, particularly STEM, then this is the book for you. Tom and Liz instantly hit it off when they first met. The relationship ended, however, before it even got started, because it turned out Tom was Liz's PhD assessor, which means no dating allowed. Despite the fact that Tom was attracted to her, or maybe more accurately because of that fact, he behaved in a manner that completely and assuredly labeled him as a jerk. In his mind, that would squash any romantic feelings between them. Well, when Liz completes her PhD program, she is more than happy to be done with him, only the universe has other plans. They ultimately end up working together and it turns out her dad is marrying Tom's mom. For the ultimate blow, Liz is kicked out of her apartment and has no other choice but to move in with her dad, who guess what, is moving in with his fiance and Tom! Recipe for disaster? One would think, but you will be surprised as these two adversaries develop a deep and true friendship which doesn't take long to blossom into something more. And talk about chemistry, these two had it sizzling strong!
Wonderful characters and an engaging storyline will keep you captivated till the end. The book definitely left me with a smile on my face and a happy feeling afterwards. The characters were interesting and well-developed with unique but realistic qualities. The story was delightfully cute and I really enjoyed it. If you're looking for a fun, quirky, and humorous read filled with witty and cheeky banter, then you definitely will want to pick this one up.
Great book!
I received a complimentary copy from Netgalley and am voluntarily leaving my review.

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I am a sucker for smart girl romances. I love when the heroine can show how brilliant she is a find a partner that respects that and enjoys it.

This book fit that bill and it was a fun read!

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I AM SO HONORED I GOT THE CHANCE TO READ THIS NOVEL. It hooked me immediately and I love how much we focused on all the side characters as well.. I really enjoyed the storyline and wow my heart melted so many times.

Tightly written, earnest, laugh-out-loud funny at several parts—one of the best romance books I've read in ages

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I loved this book! Has some of my favorite tropes of "enemies" working and living together". Two leads who are so oblivious to each other's attraction, STEM fields, university settings, lots of steam, and great secondary characters.

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⭐⭐⭐⭐
The Unbalanced Equation,H. L. Macfarlane
BooksGoSocial, September 15, 2022

Thank you NetGalley and BooksGoSocial for the ARC in exchange for an honest review.

For fans of @alihazelwood and books about women in STEM, The Unbalanced Equation hits the spot.

Elizabeth thinks she's finally free from her diabolical PhD assessor Tom, until not only does his lab have a fire -- but his mother and her father announce they are soon to be married.

A true enemies to lovers romance, where circumstances force them together both romantically and professionally.

If you dig books about chicks with brains, who doesn't, this is the perfect fix.

##TheUnbalancedEquation #NetGalley #booksgosocial @booksgosocialgroup #bookstagram #bookstagrammer #stemromance #enemiestolovers

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Fun entertaining book, like the work setting and science background . Adore grumpy sunshine trope so this was definitely made for me . If you loved the Love Hypothesis this book is for you, it has all the perfect ingredients for a good STEAM rom com.

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I really enjoyed this book. Liz and Tom were really likeable characters who I grew to like more and more as the story unfolded. Whilst I found Liz quite infuriating at times, I associated with the guard she had as a character to protect her emotions.

The story line itself was not necessary novel it was a really well written chick lit book that I would happily recommend to a friend.

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I thought this book was refreshing and sweet. I was reading another student type book at the same time as this and it definitely topped. The author was really respectful of the age dynamic between the two characters. If you shy away student/teacher and are on the edge for this book, I would say to give it a read. There’s no direct power imbalance here as our main character is not his student! There’s some miscommunication between our characters, it’s done well and not to repetitive, however as always there’s some overreacting. I would definitely recommend giving this one a read though if you like STEM romances.

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The Unbalanced Equation was a super fun read with all of my favorite things! Enemies to lovers - yes! Age gap - yes! Forced proximity - yes! Liz, a postdoc is forced to share a lab when Tom, her former PhD assessor, loses his lab to a fire. To top things off Liz’s dad and Tom’s mom announce their engagement after their own whirlwind romance. Liz and Tom keep finding themselves forced together and so many fun hijinx ensue.

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I don’t know if its just me but this book gives the love hypothesis vibes! Like low key…? A grumpy love interest? Say yes! This book is wholesome, i like it, i wont say i love it because I’m a super high expectation reader when it comes to romance! I love the characters and the storyline? *chef kiss*

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We love an academic romance! This was witty and charming and a great read. I want more right now! I’m so happy to recommend this book.

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The Unbalanced Equation by H.L. Macfarlane

⭐️⭐️⭐️.75 out of 5:

• enemies to lovers
• forced proximity
• academic rivals (sorta)
• miscommunication

This book follows Liz and Tom through their time working together in a lab. This is a very enemies to lovers trope.

Liz hates Tom and is relieved to be out of Tom’s scrutiny but because of a problem she is forced back into working with Tom. The sexual tension between Liz and Tom was *chefs kiss*

One of the things I didn’t like about this book was the amount of miscommunication it had. While later they were able to talk things through, it was frustrating when they had miscommunication throughout the majority of the book. But I liked that they were able to overcome it in the end. I really liked Liz’s character and reading her inner thoughts, they were pretty funny.

They had banter!! Which duhh we all like and the way they were together was just really cute!!!

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I absolutely loved The Unbalanced Eqaution. It was the perfect example of STEM romance, and it was in the exact specific field of gene therapy I want to go into as well, which was a happy coincidence. I loved the enemies to lovers part of it, they had such good banter, and trust me, I have high standards when it comes to banter. I also liked how Liz and Tom weren't afraid to speak their minds to each other, except when it really mattered though!
Anyways, this was a cute rom com, definitely not a typical STEM romance, and I highly recommend for fans of Ali Hazelwood, Scottish men and STEM!

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If you're a fan of The Love Hypothesis or The Hating Game, The Unbalanced Equation is for you! All the best tropes in one with a smart female lead and a hottie hiding his true feelings. This book was a fun, fast read!

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Thank you NetGalley and BooksGoSocial for a copy of the eARC in exchange for an honest review!

This book really surprised me! It’s my first read from this author and I found it very very very good! And contains all my favorite tropes:
- enemies to lovers 😈
- Age gap (he is 10 years older than her)
- Forced proximity
- Girls in STEM

The protagonists are: Liz, a postdoc, and Tom, a PHD assessor.
When they first met at a social event the spark immediately broke out, but they were interrupted by a call to Liz.
They have since become enemies because Tom believed that Liz had dumped him with an excuse and refuses to be her PHD assessor and she takes offense that he didn't ask her out.
But they can't hide the attraction they feel for each other every time they meet.
However, a succession of event will bring them closer! 🫢

Liz and Tom are a perfect match, both mischievous and bonded by incredible sexual chemistry 🌶
They also made me laugh a lot!

I recommend this book to anyone who has loved The Live Hypothesis! The plot in this case is more intricate than Ali Hazelwood's book and for this I found it very interesting!
I ABSOLUTELY LOVED IT

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I'm always a sucker for an enemies to lovers romance - and I've been loving these STEM novels I've been reading lately. This author definitely seems to have a background in - or just a major love of - science, which made this a really interesting novel. I loved the banter between our MCs and I really enjoyed watching their story unfold. All in all, definitely could see myself recommending this to fans of The Love Hypothesis - it's got a similar vibe while being in a category of it's own.

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After recently reading ‘The love hypothesis’ I was greatly anticipating this book. The Unbalanced Equation lived up to my expectations on so many levels. It has well developed characters, a story which keeps you hooked until the end and an all round good-time. As an avid romance reader and someone who has recently enjoyed exploring the backdrop of a stem storyline, this was a big hit for me.

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If you love the love hypothesis this is an amazing books for you I really enjoyed it. It was an amazing second-chance romance with a hot male main character. The booktok girls really need to get a hold on this!

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this was better than The Love Hypothesis! I really enjoyed the banter between our couple and how steamy this was! I mean that bar kiss scene, then that shower scene and our post-wedding scene was HOT. Let’s not forget how sweet Tom was especially during her shark week.. talk about swoon. Definitely recommend this STEM read!

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“I never knew how much I was waiting for you until I met you.”

This was a cute rom-com involving elements of STEM and being an anime nerd. Tom used to be Liz's PhD advisor, and now after an unfortunate lab fire are working on the same bench during Liz's post-doc. These two have always had a thing for one another, and now they have a chance to spend more time together. I liked that both of these characters were grumpy, and Liz was a boss-ass babe who worked in STEM. I was a little uncomfortable with some of the manipulation Tom pulled throughout the book, but alas they were happy in the end. It was also cool to see a couple whose end goal wasn't marriage or kids. Overall, this was fun and cute and if you are in STEM, you will enjoy all of the references to lab work!
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I loved this book! The banter was great, the chemistry was great, the tension was great, everything was great! This is a must read for fans of The Love Hypothesis and The Soulmate Equation!

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Colby Mills once felt destined for a musical career, but tragedy grounded his dreams. Now the dust has settled, he spontaneously takes a gig playing at a bar in Florida, seeking a rare break from his duties at home.

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Each character played an important role, especially Tom's best friend who by the way was always Team Tiz (that's what Im gonna call it). I loved the moments when there is a scene of vulnerability from both characters showing that even the strongest can let their shields down. There are some sentences in this book that really made me go full emotional mode which is something that doesn't happen often. Overall ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

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A good read I was able to finish in a short period of time. It reminded me a lot of The Love Hypothesis by Ali Hazelwood.

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STEM Romance- is that even a genre? After reading and enjoying “The Love Hypothesis” earlier this year I was excited to see “The Unbalanced Equation”- a similar type of Romance but this time set in Scotland.
Liz is a postdoctoral researcher and Professor Tom Henderson is her former PhD supervisor. When they end up working in the same lab and even on the same bench both are rather taken aback as they have a certain amount of at times embarrassing history.
Having met at a party 4 years earlier there was a definite attraction which could have lead to more but when Tom is suddenly assigned to assess her Dissertation and being rather nasty about it Liz grows to dislike him. Working in the same lab will not be fun for either of them.
Tom still has a crush on Liz but restrained himself whilst supervising her work- in fact he decided to go all out mean in order to throw her off the scent. She actually liked him when they first met but the Phd years have definitely soured her opinion of him.
When they are thrown together at work and then in their personal lives all hell breaks loose which leads to a humorous novel with some rather explicit descriptions in places! This is one of those will they won’t they novels and of course the reader is hoping for a happy outcome.
This was certainly a light and entertaining read and I really liked the characters too. Tom could be obtuse and in places although I thought Liz occasionally overreacted it lead to some very amusing situations.
Moreover reading the novel as a 60 something it certainly took me back to my youth and the uncertainty and excitement of romantic attractions. Despite their confidence in work situations both Tom and Liz were unsure in their own personal lives.
This was an enjoyable read and would appeal to readers of contemporary romance. If you enjoyed “The Love Hypothesis” you will no doubt love this. I’m not sure if I was the target audience being of more advanced years but it was such a fun read it didn’t matter!
Thanks to NetGalley and the publishers for my advance copy.

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Normally I am turned away from all fictional books that are science-based because being in the science field myself, most of the science is fictional in the stories and it drives me mad. This story however was a great romance read with just enough science in there to keep it well-rounded and enjoyable!

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Thanks to netgalley for the arc.

This book was cute. It took me less than two days to finish and I thoroughly enjoyed the way the two mc's fell in love and interacted with each other. I'll definitely be on the lookout for more books by the author!

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I originally checked it out because it reminded me (cover and title wise) of the Love Hypothesis by Ali Hazelwood and the blurb sounded like it as well. And what can I say, it is very similiar. But in a good way! I enjoyed The Love Hypothesis (women in STEM, yey!) and with the enemies to lovers.. what can i wish more for?
I liked both characters and their relationship. The way they acted and came together. The plot isn't new but it doesn't have to!
It's a casual read and for me, it was the perfect beach read :) I can recommend it to all Ali Hazelwood fans or rom-com STEM fans

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Thank you Netgalley and the publisher for the ARC in exchange for an honest review.
This book was one of my favorite reads this year! I'll be honest, it's been a long since I've read a REALLY GOOD enemies-to-lovers book. It was so much fun, the characters were hilarious, they had personality, they were unique. It is one of those books you will always remember details and with a smile on your face!
I'm glad the "drama" in the end wasn't too long, it was quicky resolved, and we got our HEA. Looking forward to read more romance from the author!

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I loved being introduced to Tom and Liz, a completely smart, intelligent, fun couple of scientists who tey to fight the obvious! The love of science is what caught my eye with the cover and title of this book, and the love story thrown in made it such a cute and heartwarming story. No matter how hard Liz fights the attraction and love towards Tom, things are inevitable. The fact that they both have similar losses in their past and families makes the story even more meaningful and how the two come together is extremely sweet and lovable. I love the author's acknowledgment section at the end as well and how she has so much personal connection to writing this book! I look forward to reading more by her!

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Thank you so much to NetGalley, the publisher and H.L. Macfarlane for this copy.

WE LOVE RIVALS TO LOVERS IN STEM!!

The Unbalanced Equation follows Liz, a postdoc, and Tom, her PhD professor. They met at a party and almost got together, when then Tom is assigned to be her professor and decides that nothing can happen between them. He then begins to act really rudely towards her and she starts to hate him.

Fast forward a few years later and Liz meets her worst nightmare: their parents are going to marry XD. And Tom's lab burns down and is forced to work at the same lab as Liz. And she loses her apartment and is forced to live at Tom's house. Then a lot happens

Enemies to lovers!! Forced proximity!! Romance in STEM!! Banter and pranks!!

I didn't really mind the age gap between them because they have sooo much chemistry, but it didn't feel realistic that an almost 40-year-old man acted so childlishly and immature. And also, the fact that he tried to sabotage all of Liz's dates and apartment hunt didn't really sit well with me even if he was in love with her, that's why I'm giving it 4 stars.

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I have enjoyed all of the new STEM related books that have come out recently. This one is great for fans of The Love Hypotheses.
Liz has finally getting away from the grumpy, mostly rude Professor Thomas Henderson. When a fire destroys Thomas’ lab, he goes to his best friend for workspace to work on his grant. His best friend is also Liz’s new boss. To put the icing on the cake of badness, Liz finds out that her widower father and Thomas’s widow mother are getting married.
Liz and Tom are forced together in every way possible. And their chemistry and banter is fantastic. There were a few things the characters did that I didn’t really care for, but further in the story there is some resolution to those issues.
I recommend this book for fans of forced proximity, a little age gap, guy falls first, workplace romance, and enemies to lovers tropes.
Thank you NetGalley and H. L. Macfarlane for a digital galley of this book.

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Sorry for the delay on this one! Been MIA awhile due to having knee surgery. The good news is, it allowed me to catch up on reading!
I LOVED the Unbalanced Equation By H.L Mcfarlane it is sweet and spicy and definitely 4⭐️
After suffering four years of scrutiny from her PhD assessor, Elizabeth Maclean believes she’s finally free of Dr Thomas Henderson’s tyranny when she begins her postdoc. But when a fire goes off in Tom’s lab (stupid undergrads) he ends up working in the same lab as Liz.

On the same bench, no less.

For three whole months.

Tom’s mum and Liz’s dad announce their impending marriage after a whirlwind romance. After suffering four years of scrutiny from her PhD assessor, Elizabeth Maclean believes she’s finally free of Dr Thomas Henderson’s tyranny when she begins her postdoc. But when a fire goes off in Tom’s lab (stupid undergrads) he ends up working in the same lab as Liz.

On the same bench, no less.

For three whole months.

To make matters worse – and much to their mutual surprise – Tom’s mum and Liz’s dad announce their impending marriage after a whirlwind romance. So when Liz’s landlord tells her to move out, pronto, it tips her over the edge. Desperate for a place to stay and in need of a saviour, the last person Liz expects to offer her a temporary home is Tom himself.

Now stuck working together, living together and planning their parents’ Christmas wedding together, will Liz discover that Tom’s attitude over the last four years was all a ruse to hide his true feelings? Or are the two doomed to fail in their co-existence experiment

Thanks Netgalley for the ARC

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If you loved The Love Hypothesis and want another fun, steamy academic workplace rom com, then this is it!
I'll start saying that, due to the physical appearance, the clothes and the name of the MMC, I suspect this book was originally a Tom Hiddleston fanfiction. Much like The Love Hypothesis, which was a Reylo inspired fan-fic.
While there are a few similarities to the Love Hypothesis, they are definitely not the same. I feel like this book was more about how their relationship affected everyone around them and I did not hate it.

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I'd like to thank Netgalley and BooksGoSocial for providing this ARC in exchange for an honest review.

Cute romcom. If you are a fan of The Love Hypothesis then you will really enjoy this story. This book has it all.... enemies to lovers, age gap, scientific workplace. Entertaining and enjoyable!!

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I love this book so much! Such an engaging storyline that got me hooked from the beginning till the end! A literal page turner. Highly recommend!

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This was great and had so many of my favorite rom-com tropes: enemies to lovers, age gap, and forced proximity. I also really enjoyed the STEM aspect and I think it is important to see more of that in books.

Enemies to lovers
Age gap
Forced proximity
STEM workplace

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The book was so cute. The romance was so fun and raw, you know?

When I was reading this book I had the feeling that I was in this universe where everything is possible.

I loved the sweetness that was handled and also those moments where you didn't know if everything was going to explode in your face or if they were going to continue dancing with each other hahaha

I really liked the science theme, there are so few books that are so well written around these topics without being completely forced into feminism or lack thereof.

I feel like it was a proper and balanced touch.

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I really enjoyed this book.
The plots was good and well thought out. It was a little predictable however it was a good enemies to lovers story.
It had all the tropes I enjoy and the spice was spicy! Living in Glasgow I enjoyed reading a story set in a location I love in.

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I love a good enemies to lovers trope and The Unbalanced Equation did not disappoint. Liz and Thomas were really fun characters with great chemistry.

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I am literally obsessed with stem books. I especially love if they involve some spice! This is the prefect combination! Love that the author gives you multiple point of views. If you love banter and flirting between characters you will really enjoy this one. Pretty sure everyone who reads is swooning over the male main character. This is similar to The Love Hypothesis but not enough to not enjoy them both separately. Really great read!


Stem romance
Multiple Pov's
Forced Proximity


4 stars

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This book is a hilarious read. It has a lot of tension, hilarious banter and honestly when it all comes crashing down, it just gets better.

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I really enjoyed TLH and was looking for more stem novels- this really fed my itch! Thank you for the arc!
I found myself jumping up and down when the characters looked at each other, the tension was well drawn out, plus the main character was incredible likeable.
Definitely recommend if you were/are a fan of Ali Hazlewood and you’re looking for more tension filled, science packed romance books!

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I have received this ARC from NetGalley in exchange for an honest review.

The Unbalanced Equation was pretty easy to devour. The only problem for me was finally finding the time to sit down and write the actual review. Did I have to skim through it for a little bit just to get the creative juices flowing? Yes, yes, I did, and I have zero regrets about it.

In this, you will meet Tom and Liz. At first glance, I guess you could say that they were enemies. It truly doesn't help that he ignored her email years ago or that she held a teeny tiny grudge for it either. So, when they finally cross paths, no one knew what to expect. Well, other than the mimosas that is.

Sure, they were attracted to one another but it kind of felt like right person wrong time. All the time. They just clicked and had this vibe that I couldn't help but get along with either. Yet, they would mess up by saying or doing something wrong. It completely frustrated me, but it also made them a bit more realistic.

In the wise words of Hannah Montana, nobody's perfect.

It didn't take long for sparks to finally fly between these two. Then the drama came right around the corner and smacked me. Some of it was okay and interesting, but the snark, sarcasm and banter are what I came here for. It didn't disappoint me one bit and I'm so happy with what I read.

In the end, I really enjoyed these two doing a slow awkward dance around one another. I also hope that she does go with Jerry for the kitten's name.

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Thankyou for allowing me a copy of this book. I enjoyed this, i liked the plot and the way everything played out, i liked the writing style, it was so easy to read i flew through it. And i loved Liz and Tom and their relationship. I will definately be reading more from this author.

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4/5⭐️
2.5/5🌶️
thank you netgalley and macfarlane lantern publishing for this arc! this book was released on september 15th, 2022.

this book was such a pleasant surprise. this rom com follows two nerds, liz and tom, who i found really relatable because of their love for science and anime. it did have similar vibes to the love hypothesis, so if that’s a book you enjoyed, this is definitely one to check out!! it had some tropes i really loved (forced proximity, enemies to lovers, guy falls first) that really hooked me from the beginning. my only complaint with this book was that i felt like the second half of the book dragged on a bit it terms of plot. besides that, i found the banter between liz and tom very entertaining and i definitely did not expect the spice to be what is what, so both were a nice surprise! if you’re looking for a rom-com with characters who are in STEM, this is definitely a good one to pick up!

“i never knew how much i was waiting on you until i met you”

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Enemies to lovers is ultimately my favourite romance trope and when it’s done well I fly through books! I always love the academia setting that seems to be more common nowadays as it makes the romances feel a little less cheesy and a bit more real world for me. I enjoyed the Scottish setting and did like the characters but with some of the toxicity displayed in actions I found it hard to get a grip on Tom.
Similar to the love hypothesis so if you loved that you should read this!

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First off, thank you to netgalley for providing a review copy! ☺️

I give this a solid 4 stars. While the initial circumstances of the story seem contrived, cliche and "what, really?"-ish, don't be fooled! This book shows neatly that you don't need an enticing, page-turning plot when your characters (or more like their chemistry) are good. And booooyyy are they good. Truly, the chemistry and sexual tension between the heroes is on point and sometimes plain funny or "awwww" inducing.

However, I do have to pick a bone with the MMC at times for him being a total jerk in the beginning and manipulative at points throughout. But, the sweetness is there if you stick through, and by the end, they deserve each other and a HEA.

Amazing book, and I think a must for STEM-romance fans.

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This book is a must read if you love books with enemies to lovers, age gap, forced proximity, STEM workplace, and he falls first. Tom and Liz have wonderful banter and are super cute together. I recommend this book to anyone who loves a good STEM romcom.

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i absolutely adored this book. im a sucker for romance that involves anything sciency so this book was right up my ally. it took me a little while to get into just because i constantly got distracted but once i started i couldn't stop reading. it is seriously one of the best books that ive read and i intend to buy it when it comes out for sure.

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This is a good book. The two main characters are Liz and Tom. They both are working at a university lab. There is an instant attraction. They each have trust issues but together they work them out and fall in love.

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Quick Summary: A hot for the teacher romance

My Review: The Unbalanced Equation by H.L. Macfarlane was an older man-younger woman romance. It was also a teacher-student scenario with loads of misunderstandings and oodles of twists. The characters were highly accomplished, totally imperfect, and really humorous. The conflict was minimal, and the tension was well written.

About the Story: When Ph.D student, Liz, meets a super gorgeous professor, Tom, at a gathering, the two hit it off. Their mutual attraction and shared interest all but guaranteed a match…or should I say a memorable hookup. Unfortunately, luck was not on their side, and they were unable to explore the possibilities.

Fast forward… After four years of being in close, torturous proximity, they reconnect in such a mind boggling way that all bets are off. Will they finally throw caution to the wind and go for the goal?

Special Mention: The bonus feature in this book dealt with the parents of Liz and Tom. I loved how they both found happiness after loss.

My Final Say: This book was a whole lot more than I was expecting. I thoroughly enjoyed reading it. Readers who enjoy second chance love stories, as well as loss to love stories will appreciate this double romance.

Rating: 4/5
Recommend: Yes
Audience: A

Appreciation is extended to the author, to the publisher, and to NetGalley, who provided access to this title in exchange for an honest review. The words I have shared are my own.

* A Goodreads review has been posted.

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Absolutely LOVED this story, the characters, their chemistry. Their banter and “games” were funny even if totally over-the-top.
The book is usually longer than most rom-com books, but it perfectly fit for the character development of Liz and Tom.
If you are a fan of The Hating Game and The Love Hypothesis like me, this book is for you.

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This was such a great read! I absolutely enjoyed reading Tom and Liz’s story. The way they met was your typical adorable first meet and you could tell right away that their chemistry was fire! Finding out his role in Liz’s academic career, Tom attempts to squash his feelings in an attempt to protect his own career from possibly being tarnished. In the process he becomes Liz’s worst nightmare. Years later, their lives are thrown together in the most unexpected of ways and the conflicting feelings that arise created one of the best stories I’ve read so far this year. The banter was so good, I absolutely loved their chemistry, they were perfect for each other. I love how meddlesome some of the supporting characters were and I really enjoyed the family and friends. This book really had it all and it’s an easy recommendation from me.

I voluntarily reviewed this after receiving a free copy.

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I adored this book, i was hooked from the beginning and couldn't put it down. it had all my favourite tropes;
Enemies to lovers
Age gap
Forced proximity
STEM workplace
HE FALLS FIRST
this book was giving me major Love Hypothesis vibes and it was executed very nicely. This one wasa smart, spicy rom-com that with great characters.
my favourite quote from this book:
“i never knew how much i was waiting on you until i met you”

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This book exceeded my expectations and then some, I cannot express how much I loved this book. It had everything I wanted, and more. Enemies to lovers, forced proximity, Dual POV, women in STEM, tension, playful banter and absolutely GIDDYING flirting.

Tom Henderson, a professor within the Molecular Genetics Lab at Glasgow University, first meets Elizabeth Maclean at a mixer event, and it's fair to say sparks fly almost immediately between the two of them. After a brief interaction, Tom finds out that due to staff shortages, he's to be her PHD assessor, and although he's thoroughly enamoured with Liz, he has to lock his feelings away, and become an asshole to her, in an attempt to shake off these feelings, dissuade himself from acting on his thoughts and be as professional as possible. Fast forward to the present, Tom's lab has set on fire, and he's moved to finish his grand proposal within the same lab as Liz. Much to Liz's dismay, they're stuck together, and even worse, with Liz's landlord evicting her and their parents getting married, Liz and Tom's lives become intertwined in ways neither would have expected.


Tom absolutely made me GIDDY, his sarcasm and playful flirting was something else and had me in an absolute chokehold. This man is the epitome. A gentle giant, with a heart of gold, but an absolute king in bed.

Liz on the other hand is a stubborn, hard headed, confident young woman, often to a fault. With a steely determination to get her own back on the ass of a professor who made her life miserable during her degree, I loved seeing her toy with Tom and get her own back, but also fight with her own increasing feelings for him.

"Why don't you kiss me and find out?"
"...excuse me?"
"I'd suggest fucking on the table but something tells me the rest of the bar wouldn't appreciate that"

The interactions between Liz and Tom were so intense and the slow tension was agonising but in the best way possible, the chemistry is palpable and makes you want to scream into a pillow. Their banter and witty interactions are really charming and utterly hilarious to read. This is definitely one of the best romance books I've read in a while, and I still think about these two daily.

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3.5/5⭐
2/5 🌶️

If you are looking for a nerdy STEM romcom in the same vein as The Love Hypothesis and The Hating Game this book will be perfect for you!

I wasn't a huge fan of the miscommunication because I just wanted to smack them both upside the head and make them kiss but did enjoy reading this book. I will definitely be reading the next book in the series!

STEM Romance, Dual POV, Enemies-to-Lovers, Forced Proximity, Age Gap,

Thank you to Netgalley, the publisher and H.L. Macfarlane for the e-ARC!

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I really enjoyed this book! If you’re a fan of The Love Hypothesis then you’ll absolutely adore this. It was written so well and kept me wanting more every time I had to put it down. This book definitely gave me the warm fuzzy feels and I’ll definitely be reading it again when I need a cute easy romance! 100% recommend this author to my friends.

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I was drawn to this book because it featured a women in STEM and an academic setting; a postdoc thinks she’s free of her terrible PhD advisor until a series of unfortunate events led to them working in the same lab AND becoming step siblings. But, there’s also this undeniable chemistry between the two of them. It’s got the classic enemies-to-lovers romance trope with a side of academia told from two perspectives. It was a long one (for me) at over 400 pages, and I got annoyed by both main characters at different points in the book, but I still enjoyed it. The fall-to-winter setting in Scotland made it the perfect book to read in the fall! It’s the first book in a trilogy of standalone books that are all connected, and I definitely plan to read the others! Thank you to NetGalley for my first ARC!

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This was a great enemies to lover story. I liked how we got a bit of background as to why Tom and Liz met and what transpired to cause them enemies. I liked how although both characters acted as if they disliked one another it seems as fate would test their connection and bring them together through the union of their parents. The one part I disliked was that Tom felt so out of control in their relationship that he turned to meddling when in reality a simple explanation for his behavior would have caused their romance to move quicker. Regardless I enjoyed seeing Liz stand up for herself and making sure she gave herself the best option. I also enjoyed that the side characters knew the main characters were in love and tried to push them together. Overall a fun steamy read.

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"That’s the thing about hindsight: nobody has it when they actually need it."


alkdjs chef's kiss.

This was a very addictive and entertaining read!! Liz and Tom's partnering wasn't predictable to me and I really liked that with this book. + the passion, tension and back and forth with them was really great!

It was also nice to read a book out of my element (I majored in journalism haha) to learn more about the science realm too! A great read :)

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I really enjoyed The Unbalanced Equation. I don’t know what it is about STEM romances, but they hook me in!

When Liz first met Tom, there was most definitely a spark. Something that Liz thought may stem into something more, but when she starts her PhD and discovers Tom is her mentor, and he is nothing like the man she originally met, that dream is shattered. Liz hates Tom with her entire being as throughout all four years, he made her life hell. Now she is finally free of him and about to start her postdoc, or so she thought. After a fire in Tom’s lab, he has no choice put to work in his friend’s lab, which just so happens to be the lab Liz is working in. To make matters even worse, they have to share a bench until his lab is rebuilt.

This isn’t the only thing that forces Liz and Tom to spend time together and maybe think back to the first time they met. Turns out, Liz’s Dad and Tom’s Mum are getting married, much to the surprise of both of them. When Liz’s landlord kicks her out with no warning, she is given no choice but to move into Tom’s house with both her parents. This book has a lot of forced proximity but I adored it. It’s told from both Liz and Tom’s perspective so we do see why Tom was being an asshole to Liz during her PhD. The tension between these two was perfect and I was rooting for them constantly, as were many of the side characters!

This was a fun, STEM enemies-to-lovers romance that gave me everything I needed. It was a great, quick read and the chemistry between Liz and Tom was perfect.

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Elizabeth thinks she has rid herself from Thomas. To her surprise she ends up in the same lab as him and to add to her frustration, their parents decides to get married. A romantic comedy with a close proximity and enemies to friends trope. An intelligently written rom-comedy with entertaining characters.

Disclaimer: Thank NetGalley and BooksGoSocial for this copy and I am leaving this review voluntarily.

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The Unbalanced Equation by H. L. Macfarlane is an enjoyable romance read that provides a welcome break from more intense books. The story follows the relationship between mathematician Sarah and rock star Alex, who fall in love despite their vastly different backgrounds and lifestyles.

One of the strengths of the book is its well-developed characters. Sarah and Alex are both complex and multi-dimensional, with their own strengths, weaknesses, and struggles. Macfarlane does an excellent job of exploring their individual journeys and the challenges they face as a couple, making it easy for the reader to become invested in their relationship.

Another positive aspect of the book is the unique setting of the world of academia and rock music. The author clearly has a deep knowledge and appreciation for both of these fields, and this comes through in the richly-drawn and detailed descriptions of the characters' respective worlds.

It's definitely a slow-burn, and some may find the book to be somewhat formulaic or predictable in its plot and themes. The "opposites attract" trope is a common one in romance novels, and while Macfarlane adds her own unique spin to it, some readers may find that it doesn't quite offer anything particularly new or surprising.

The Unbalanced Equation is a well-written and enjoyable romance read, with well-developed characters and a unique setting, making it a worthwhile read for fans of the genre.

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very steamy which I liked, and their was great chemistry, but both were pretty bratty, but I have read it twice!

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If you’re looking for a good enemies-to-lovers, forced proximity romance with a STEM background, look no further. I’ve given this a 3.5 stars but I’d round it up to a 4 rather than down to a 3.

I really appreciated all the character details and elements of the story arc because it really rounded out the book - they’re both huge anime nerds, they work in a genetics lab (and we actually see them talk about science woo👏🏼), there’s a delicious slow burn, an age gap (which I didn’t even realise at first😅), and both main characters don’t want marriage or children. I really appreciated seeing that in a romance book. I feel like that sentiment is growing more common so weaving it in was a great way to remind everyone that it’s okay to not want marriage and children and, spoiler alert: still be happy and fulfilled!

I’m so glad to have read an enemies to lovers where the enemies part actually made logical sense for once!! Both of the characters in this book are flawed and they make mistakes and do the wrong things. The enemies aspect felt justified instead of a superficial miscommunication to enhance the plot.

It is definitely a bit of a slow burn / drawn out tease between Tom and Liz however, and I did find some of Tom’s actions to be a bit fucking creepy so… I wasn’t in LOVE with the romance like I was hoping to be unfortunately.

The forced proximity element is usually something I enjoy but this one felt ever so slightly a little weird to me, because it’s not just them in the house. There’s a scene in particular where they’re play fighting on the sofa and… Tom’s mum walks in on them🥴. Considering that Tom is in his 30s and Liz is in her late 20s, it was just a bit odd having everyone live in the same house.

I do feel like mentioning that if you found The Love Hypothesis a bit cringey, you’ll prefer this so much more, not to mention this has got some great British humour. I don’t usually like comparing books but since they’re both enemies to lovers & STEM based, I couldn’t help but notice this difference.

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This novel features plenty of good and sleazy smut, forced proximity, age gap romance, and enemies to lovers. There were a few things I didn't like, such as Tom's excessive possessiveness, which was almost unpleasant. Liz had her "what the frick Liz" times, which caused me to squint. But in this book, it all just seems to match.

I actually laughed aloud during some sequences because of the witty banter and sass that Tom and Liz exchange. Liz and Jenny's relationship, who will soon become her stepmother, was adorable. I adored how much Jim's hatred for Tom and his crude remarks about him made me think of my own father.

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This hate to love meets second chance love story follows Liz and tom. Both aren't looking for the white picket fence dream but what to have someone by their side to share their lives with. when Liz and tom first meet sparks fly until the next day tom get word of something... Four years later things would bring Liz and tom into each other lives unexpectly and the banter fly this book is a slow book and a lot of teasing and I will say this book had me laughing out loud at times with that said i enjoyed my read of this and give it 4 stars

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Not what I was expecting at all but a good reading in the end. I love Stem books and characters of the Stem love and this book delivers that in a good way. Enjoyable plot and characters, lovely writing and structuring of the story. A quick read that it wasn´t a favorite but one I recommend nonetheless.

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I love a good rom com. This was able to break me out of a significant reading slump. As a math educator the title had me hooked and then the leads joined the party and I was sold.

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I really enjoyed following the story of Tom and Liz, especially as it took place in Glasgow.
Although there was a rather large judgement error from Tom that had red flags all over it, I did begin to thaw my contempt for his actions.
Great book to get lost in and loved the 2 love stories/plots side by side.

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I really Loved this story with relatable characters, awesome levels of steam and great, witty dialogue and lots of heart! Go read it now!

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I love romcoms! This was a quick fun read. Sorry for the late review- I read this book so quick I forgot to review it!

But I liked it!

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"The Unbalanced Equation" by H. L. Macfarlane is a thought-provoking and engaging novel that delves into the complexities of human emotions and relationships. This book is a compelling exploration of the challenges and intricacies that define our connections with others.

Macfarlane's writing style is introspective and evocative, drawing readers into the minds and hearts of the characters. The characters in the novel are multi-layered and relatable, each grappling with their own internal struggles and desires.

At the core of the narrative is a nuanced portrayal of relationships and the delicate balance between love, expectations, and personal growth. The author's ability to capture the ebb and flow of emotions adds authenticity to the story.

"The Unbalanced Equation" successfully navigates themes of identity, self-discovery, and the impact of past experiences on present choices. The exploration of these themes adds depth to the story, making it resonate on a personal level.

In conclusion, "The Unbalanced Equation" is a compelling and introspective read that invites readers to reflect on the intricacies of human connections. If you're looking for a book that delves into the complexities of emotions and relationships while sparking introspection, this novel offers a thought-provoking and resonant narrative that will leave you contemplating long after you've turned the last page.

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A very fun read! The characters were so indescribable and unique. Pacing was a little slow at first but I really enjoyed the book once I got into it and the chemistry was undeniable.

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My review of The Unbalanced Equation by H.L. Macfarlane ♡︎

The Unbalanced Equation is a STEM romantic comedy that will have you turning every page to see what happens next.

Dr. Elizabeth Maclean is excited to finally be away from her rude PhD assessor, Dr. Thomas Henderson. Or so she thinks. When a fire goes off in Tom’s lab, they end up working in the same place, even on the same bench for three months. To make things even worse, Tom’s mom and Liz’s dad tell them they are engaged and having a Christmas wedding. Then, Liz’s landlord tells her she has days to move out. Now, they are forced to be around each other by both working together and living together while helping their parents plan the wedding. Will they be able to get to the same level they had when they first met?

I am not the biggest fan of the miscommunication trope, but I do think it was well done.

Some things I loved:

🤍 forced proximity

🤍 age gap

🤍 slow sizzling burn

🤍 I thought you hated me?

🤍 the tension! And the spice!

This book is perfect for those that enjoy Ali Hazelwood’s books!

Ratings:

★︎★︎★︎★︎. ➄︎ / ➎︎

🌶️🌶️/ ➎︎

I had the opportunity to read an advanced reader’s e-proof of The Unbalanced Equation by H.L. Macfarlane courtesy of Macfarlane Lantern Publishing via NetGalley. All opinions above are my own

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This is a steamy STEM romcom. Elizabeth and Tom hate each other, but have to tolerate one another when an accident causes them to have to share a lab. Not to mention their parents are getting married. That’s a lot of coincidences! But, if you can suspend your belief, this one’s fun and quick and light hearted, and the main characters have lots of chemistry (ha, no pun intended).

I enjoyed it and am looking forward to checking out the second book in this series.

Thanks to Netgalley, Booksgosocial and HL Macfarlane for the ARC.

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Solid rom-com read
I loved the characters and loved the concept of how they start off not getting on to falling in love. The story is fast paced, funny and great!
Highly recommend

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I really really loved this book!
First it has everything you need: Really great characters, ennemies to lovers and force proximity.

She is a badass, he has a HUGE crush on her, what more can I say.
AND ... they don't want to get married or have kids !! I didn't even know I needed a representation but it felt so good. This book will stay close to my heart thanks to that! (and this point didn't even change my rating on the book, that's how great I think this book is).


"Miss M-"
"Doctor"
"Of course. Doctor Maclean. I didn't mean to offend you."
"I'm sure, Doctor Henderson".
"It's Professor now."
"I know. I meant to offend you."

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A fun enemies to lovers storywith spice and STEM, although a definitely YA feel to the story. Tom ends up being Liz's PhD Assessor which complicates what could have been a budding romance, but as life changes so do they.

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This was a fun enemies to lovers with fantastic tropes and a whole lot of chemistry. I really enjoyed this one.

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So, 'The Unbalanced Equation' – it's this rom-com that hooked me from the start. What I loved? The banter between Elizabeth and Tom is off-the-charts funny. Their dynamic, this whole enemies-to-lovers thing, keeps you on your toes, wondering if their chemistry's real or just good acting.

But hey, what I liked most? The setting! The STEM backdrop in Glasgow, that academic vibe mixed with romantic tension, it's a unique twist. And the slow-burn romance? Chef's kiss! You're so invested in Elizabeth and Tom, waiting for that 'will-they-won't-they' moment.

Now, here's the thing I wasn't crazy about – sometimes the back-and-forth between them felt a tad stretched out. I mean, it's all part of the tension, but at times, I was like, "Just kiss already!"

Overall, it's this charming, laugh-out-loud read with a quirky setting and characters you can't help but root for. If you dig enemies-to-lovers and slow-burn romances, it's a definite winner!

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“I never knew how much I was waiting for you until I met you.”

|The Unbalanced Equation|

🔬Four years ago Tom met a woman of his wildest dreams, Elizabeth Maclean. He thought they would be a perfect balance to each other. Unfortunately; those scales tipped and he became her PhD advisor the next day. Cue a$$hole tendencies to throw her, and everyone, off his feelings towards her. Now, their parents are getting married, he still has feelings for her, and she can’t stand to be within 5 feet of his presence.

🔬Liz can’t believe she’s stuck working beside Thomas Henderson in her postdoc lab. The audacity of this man in trying to pretend like he wasn’t the largest d!ck towards her the past 4 years. But she’s decided that she can use his professed feelings against him. Revenge in the form of temptation. Should be easy enough, right?

🔬Placing these two in close quarters is bound to end in a combustion, either good or bad. Can they behave till their parents wedding in a few months? Or can the chemistry between them mean something more than banter and sneaky games?

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Very much enjoyed this book. The back and forth between the two characters was easy and fun to read. I loved the two point of views.

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Sweet story and romance. I enjoyed the characters and the set up. Overall a quick happy read. Thanks to Netgalley and the publisher.

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Why isn't this book more popular? I can''t understand, because it was so fun! I would really recommend it for a friend. I look forward to read other bokks from the author. I loved it!

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