"We loved the concept and feminist power/revenge angle. It reminded me of Promising Young Woman – a story of women taking revenge and reclaiming the narrative over abusers. The opening – seeing Madison perform her rehearsed ad – felt very authentic and relatable!" (Feedback from the W&A Working-Class Writers' Prize)

"A strength of this entry is the excellent characterisation, for example, on page one we have an immediate sense of who Madison is and what she values. The topic of online treatment of women is very relevant."

"Jessica’s chapter felt very different from Madison’s, confirming you are skilled at characterisation. Again, chapter two builds on the tension Madison experienced, but this time it’s done via a real-life situation." (Feedback from the Ascent Novel Prize)