Caolinn Hughes is an award winning poet – and this is her debut novel; published in the UK by the independent publisher Oneworld Publications (remarkably winners of the Booker Prize in 2015 and 2016). My thanks to them for this ARC Via NetGalley.
The book is narrated in the first person by Gael Foess – over a 10 year period from 2002 (when Gael is 12) to 2011. It chronicles her life in Dublin, London and New York over that time and her interactions with her immediate family (her father Jarleth – an investment banker, her mother Sive an orchestral conductor and her enigmatic and ethereal slightly younger brother Guthrie). It is set against a background of the fallout of the economic crisis of 2008 (including the fall of the Celtic Tiger and the Occupy movement in New York) and of the New York modern art scene.
Gael is a compelling and memorable female protagonist. We first meet her in an opening set piece trying to set up a business of persuading school girls to break their hymens and then buy supplies of blood “virginity” capsules from he, an act which leads to her and (by association) Guthrie being expelled from their school.
Guthrie suffers from a particular form of Somatic Delusional Disorder whereby he believes he suffers from epilepsy and, to the frustration of his driven, careerist father, reins in his life ambitions as a result of self-induced fits. Sive is equally driven in her career but she and Jarleth (never married and in an open relationship) split in 2008, Jarleth moving to London where he is followed by Gael who goes to college there and forms a relationship with her roommate Harper and Sive losing her orchestral position. Guthrie at a young age becomes the single father of twins.
Gael’s early virginity pills scam sets the pattern for her life. She is a self-willed force of nature, someone who does not so much break the rules as simply and casually change the rules to suit her and her ends and whose sheer self-believe enables her to deceive those around her who she views simply as means to those end.
Those ends, at least as she sees them, are reacting against the money-driven, single-mindedness of her father and furthering the careers of her mother (she attempts to get her orchestral roles and to have some of her compositions played by major authors) and the fortunes of her brother (travelling to New York to sell paintings he draws immediately after his ecstatic fits and hype him as a major international modern artist).
However Gael seems to be suffering from her own delusions. Her efforts are not fully appreciated by either her mother or brother. I was reminded somewhat of Jane Austen’s Emma – a feisty, opinionated and manipulative – while still attractive – character whose efforts to assist others are so often counterproductive.
Further it seemed clear to this observer that much of her apparent reaction against Jarleth is actually a acceptance of his beliefs – for example that money can solve all problems (he tells her the Parable of the Talents when she is young – and clearly takes it as a literal exhortation to use your natural gifts or start in life to make money) and later reminds her
“You were only twelve” Jarleth says, “maybe younger when I told you to memorise a maxim about the art of business. Do you recall it. I told you: commit it to memory and return to it later to see if it pans out.” Gael looked at her father’s loosened tie the way she had done as a child when she needed the special focus he demands of you. “Business is the art of extracting money from another man’s pocked without reverting to violence”
I felt the strongest parts of the book were three set pieces when Gael comes up against institutional male power: London Business School interviewer (after she has blagged her way to an unlikely MBA interview); US Customs official (trying to explain the paintings she is carrying are not imported goods, as well as her lack of a flight home); policeman (after she is arrested at the Occupy protests for fighting with Harper – all three confrontations ending surprisingly even.
In the Acknowledgements Hughes says that “Gilles Deleuze and Felix Guattari’s concept of the orchid and the wasp inspired this book.
I found some details of this concept on the internet, for example under https://groundcondition.files.wordpre...
“How could movements of deterritorialization and processes of reterritorialization not be relative, always connected, caught up in one another? The orchid deterritorializes by forming an image, a tracing a wasp; but the wasp reterritorializes on that image. The wasp is nevertheless deterritorialized, becoming a piece in the orchid’s reproductive apparatus. But it reterritorializes the orchid by transporting its pollen. Wasp and orchid, as heterogeneous elements, form a rhizome …………. A becoming-wasp of the orchid and a becoming-orchid of the wasp.”
My interpretation is that Gael and Jarleth form this orchid-wasp interaction.
Gael simultaneously reacts against her father’s values and moves away from him, but uses his ideas to achieve her own values and further circles back to him (in both London and New York she moves there after Jarleth – the first knowingly the second unknowingly) – and clearly Gael undergoes something of a becoming-Jarleth (although it is less clear that Jarleth in any way has a becoming-Gael).
Explaining her ageing and dementia suffering Father’s increasingly difficult behaviour, Sive tells Gael
"People get locked into one mode …… related to how they were, or what their profession was, but tangentially. If someone was a social butterfly, they might get stuck in that loop, where you can’t get off the subject of arrival and departure and what’s to eat and drink and where are the napkins, or others maybe their thought-rut will be dirtier, darker. And it’s a horrible shock for people who knew them. It makes sense an actuary’s default state would be one of suspicion "
It is perhaps as an actuary then that my default state with any debut novel which comes with such high praise, is one of suspicion that the book can be as good as the hype.
However there is no doubt that Caolinn Hughes is an exceptional talent and has produced a remarkable protagonist.